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Who Are Teachers’ Pets, Boys or Girls?

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Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more?

Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result via the figures. Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school. As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age. While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls. In a word, there is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time. Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school. The most

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标题：大学生参加社会实践

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled College Students Should Take Part in Social Practice following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

1、 很多大学生缺乏社会实践

2、 大学生应该参加社会实践

3、 我的观点

范文:According to a survey, in recent years, many universities ignored the phenomenon that college students did not have enough chance to take part in social practice leaded to they lacked the ability to adapt to society in the future. When we asked college students whether they had engaged in social practice, most of them said no. I take it for granted that social practice can bring many benefits to college student. In the first instance, social practice can offer students adequate chance to meet various people in society. They can accumulate enough experience and use it in the future career. The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that it is a great opportunity for them put theory into practice and improve their In a word, I take the attitude that social practice is a critical thing for university students and they should also learn how to balance between study and work.

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标题：Team Work

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled Team Work. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 为什么我们要学习团队合作；

2) 你是如何在大学加强自己的团队合作能力的；

3) 学会团队合作的关键是什么。

As we all know, teamwork plays an important part in our success. However, what is teamwork? Without doubt, what is called teamwork means each person on the team should work within a group of people, which is number of people greater than one. Certainly, even if there are only two people in the group, they can be called a team. Therefore, it is an essential requirement of any employment that any potential employee is a team player.

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标题：How to Improve Your English

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

字数180字左右，给出分论点后需用举例手法论证

English is an important language to communicate with individual from other countries. Therefore, it is our obligation to improve English if we are eager to develop our ability to communicate with foreigners. My suggestions about improving English as follows.

In the first instance, you ought to read more English books in place of Chinese books. It is a wonderful ideal for you to increase vocabulary and expand vision from foreign literature. My brother was absorbed in foreign literature in university and read a large number of books about it. He can communicate with foreigners in daily life fluently even he will work in the United States next month.

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Reading阅读材料

Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rembrandt because of its style, and indeed the representation of the woman’s face is very much like that of portraits known to be by Rembrandt. But there are problems with the painting that suggest it could not be a work by Rembrandt.

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题目：Social issues of poverty in today's China.

The book I read recently,Modest proposal, makes me know that the last thing on earth I want is the existence of starveling phenomenon . Jonathan Swift uses his satiric languages to narrate the greedy modern society and desperate poverty.That I can't help myself thinking of the problem like this also exists in today's China .

As is known to all, China is a super country which means not only having vast territory or -abundant resources,what's more,having the large population.The imbalance of rich and poor leads to the apparent gap between two sides which is hard to coordinate,and as the gap widened,the rich are getting richer and richer,and vice versa.But after all,the man of wealth is the fraction of the huge Chinese people.Secondly,the economy of the east and west region has been unbalanced for a long time,western Chinese people has no opportunity to create fortune that belongs their own,or change their miserable destiny.Finally,there is old saying in China-Not worry about poverty, but rather about the uneven distribution of wealth.That’s the point making us know that the unequal distribution of income leads to the existence of numerous impecunious population.And the difficulty is how to improve it.First of all,policymakers can draw up a plan that is to providing more job opportunity for west to narrowing the gap between rich and poor.Afterwards,the government should improve the social security including health care and basic living allowance.Finally,To achieve the goal that the old have support,every individuals is the member of the society,we should built a non-profit organization for old age,raising funds for the sake of love.

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极智批改网（）是中国领先的在线学习与移动学习机构北京创新伙伴教育科技有限公司精心打造，以批改口语和作文为核心业务的智能批改平台。极智批改网作为中国领先与行业独创的智能批改平台，由中国顶级出国考试专家、专属外教团队与英语学习教授为学员及机构提供专业高效的智能批改服务。

?业务范围：

-国外考试中的作文和口语的批改，即托福，GRE，GMAT，SAT和雅思。 -国内考试的作文和口语的批改，具体为四六级，专四专八，考研等。 -留学文书的代写和深度润色。

-毕业论文的打磨及深度润色。

-求职简历的润色。

-求职口语指导以及留学签证口语辅导。

?服务对象

-有备考需要的考生，包括托福，GRE，GMAT，SAT和雅思等国外考试以及考研，四六级，专四专八等国内考试。

-各大高校英语学习同学与教学教研团队。

-各大企事业单位英文信函文书工作者。

-其他想提高自己英语作文和口语能力的英语爱好者。

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Read or do

While it's quite obvious that there are good many advantages brought by doing, virtually, thoughts of people with not much reading can't be elevated by doing in some way.

People taking actions to alter for the better surround us all the time. Significant passion in running small business, such as selling packed meal and directly delivering fresh fruits to the dormitory, is evident. And many colleges seriously love to be a part of the association activities, even have no idea of what's going on in the activity. Whereas many of them who act instead of reading more make little advancement both in their mind or knowledge, for almost everyone give their concentration on their external activities, ignoring the insight of their hearts. Nevertheless, it is of more importance to reach the mind's pinnacle, and only by this way, difficult matters in the frustrating life become nothing.

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