篇一 :凯文老师,20xx年上海高考英语作文题目(作文解析和范文)

2015年上海高考英语作文解析,及,作文范文

 

 

II. Guided Writing  (25分)
Directions:  Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
   学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:


1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;
2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。

作文解析:

今年的英语作文题目同样重点考察了主观理由型作文的写作手法,这篇文章要求学生在三幅学校读书节宣传图片当中选出自己最喜欢的一幅,对图片进行描述并说明原因。这也是继20##年和20##年连续两年考察书信体与主观理由型文章的结合体之后出现的第三篇主观理由型文章。

整体来看,今年的作文题目似乎与往年没有什么区别,但细细分析,我们会发现今年英语作文的难度,不管是在文章内容、还是在形式上面,都有了大幅提升。因为考生需要同时兼顾三个难点:1、书信体正确的的书写格式;2、对图片内容进行细节的描述;3、找出恰当的理由(2-3点)进行论证,说理充分,同时注意论点和论据相结合,以及文章语句之间的逻辑严密性。可以说,近三年来英语作文虽然都在考察主观理由这个大的方向,但是考察的难度确实是在逐年递增。

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篇二 :20xx年上海高考英语作文范文及评析

20xx年上海高考英语作文范文及评析

又一年高考落下了帷幕。20xx年上海高考英语作文题较有新意——假设作者上周在一所小学观摩两堂绘画课,以日记的形式描写两幅小朋友的绘画作品,并谈谈从中获得的启发。其中一幅是小孩用脚蘸了颜料在画布上踩脚印,另一幅图是小孩用画笔在纸上画山水。

这不是一篇容易写的文章。同样是图片作文,今年的难度要高于20xx年的《课堂一角》。首先,提供的图片有两张,提高了对于描写的要求。高考英语作文已经不再仅仅考察学生的议论能力,它有些借鉴中文作文,要求学生夹叙夹议。在叙述中,如果只是平铺直叙那显然得不到高分。描写的关键在于捕捉事物的特征,而高考作文往往要求学生在短短几句话中描写到位,这其实是不低的要求。在笔者看来,精妙地运用几个动词是这部分制胜之道。相反,要少用形容词和副词。马克吐温曾说:“当你看到一个形容词时,杀死它。”虽然这样说不无夸张,但好的动词确实能让文章充满力量,生机勃勃。如,以下是笔者为20xx年高考作文原创的范文,请看这里的描写:

In this picture, the pupils are all beaming. They are scrambling to answer a question as if they have full confidence in themselves. The excitement and the eagerness to participate gush out of the picture.

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篇三 :20xx年上海高考英语试卷翻译和写作精析与答案

20xx年上海高考英语试卷翻译和写作精析与答案

Translation

Directions: Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets. 【翻译总体分析】五句翻译分别考察了词组搭配、名词性从句、比较级、名词词组固定搭配、让步状语从句。整体试题难度体现了良好的阶梯性,由简至难, 除第五句中如何翻译出购物狂稍有难度,其他翻译题都保持在中等难度,只要能掌握基本句式难度就不太大了。

1 我习惯睡前听点轻音乐。(accustomed)

【解析】本题主要考察词组be accustomed to doing,只要对词组掌握良好,根据语序就可以按部就班的翻译出句子。

2 将来过怎样的生活取决于你自己。(be up to)

【解析】本题考察名词性从句当中的主语从句,整体句子结构相对比较简单,正是我们平时口语当中的it’s up to you. 难点就在于正确翻译从句部分。首先从句是用what来引导,同时注意从句保持陈述语序;其次需要注意词汇的积累,过着…生活词组表达是lead/ live a … life。

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篇四 :历年上海高考英语经典范文

20xx年上海高考作文及范例

1。我最难忘的一课 2。具体说明为何难忘 3。感想

An Unforgettable Lesson

In my life I have experienced many important things. But perhaps the most unforgettable thing which is really worth mentioning is the lesson given by my Chinese teacher just after she had an accident.

One morning just before our Chinese lesson, we were told our Chinese teacher, Miss Liu, had had an accident. One of her legs was badly injured and she couldn’t come to teach us. While we were planning to visit her after school, we also thought that maybe we would be free to do whatever we wanted during our Chinese lesson, and hoped our homework load would be reduced. But to our surprise, shortly after the bell, Miss Liu, with the help of a stick, came to the door of our classroom. With great respect w all stood up and greeted her.

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篇五 :历届(20xx~20xx)上海高考英语作文范文

20##年上海卷高考英语作文范文

话题:向一个基金会申请2000元做个项目来支持贫困学生,需要包含以下的一些要点1.介绍自己 2.项目具体实施方案 3.2000元如何利用

作者:陆佳伟

  上海延安中学教师

牛津大学语言学硕士

  Dear foundation organizers:

  My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai XX High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 20## yuan worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.

  Being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students at our school. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us “doling out” the supplies so that we wouldn’t embarrass those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.

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篇六 :历届上海高考英语作文范文

20##年上海高考作文及范例 

下图是小学新生的课堂一脚,对照你当时的上课情况,作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括:

●描述图片里学生上课的场景

●比较你同时期的上课情况

●简单谈谈你的感受

  •    As is described in the picture, a group of foreign students  are raising their hands to give answers to the question in a joyful and active way. The purpose of the picture is to show us how active the class performance is in the foreign country.

    Compared with the class performance in local China,  the difference is quite obvious. We Chinese students stay quiet in class, keep taking notes and listen to what teacher is talking in a careful way.

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篇七 :凯文老师,20xx年上海高考英语作文范文

20xx年上海高考英语作文范文

II. Guided Writing

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

学校英语报正在酝酿改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:

1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;

2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。

范文:

Dear Editor,

I’m Chen Fei, a faithful reader of your newspaper, who would like to offer some

suggestions for alterations that could hopefully be applied to your following editions. The section that you can omit, in my perspective, should be Health while the added one should be the Future Career Planning.

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篇八 :近年上海市英语高考作文范文参考

近年上海市英语高考作文范文参考

20xx年高考英语作文

看图作文

For many child, learning to bike can be a fun experience, but this is not the cases with the girl in the picture, who obviously has no fun at all. For fear that she may fall off the bike, her parents are holding the handle, with her grandmother giving a hard push from behind. The three adults are dripping with sweat while the gitl is sitting on the saddle wondering who actually is learning to bike a bike. They have without doubt gone too far protecting the gitl.

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