篇一 :雅思作文考官范文分步详解

 

雅思作文考官范文分步详解

  雅思剑桥系列的几本书在广大雅思考生的心中地位自然不言自明。尤其近来剑桥雅思系列的第10本又为大家的雅思备考指明方向。她的重要性尤其能体现在写作单项上。因为书中每套真题试题,都配有考官提供或是精挑细选的解答和参考。该书中一共给出4篇考官所写的ModelAnswer以及另外4篇不同分数档的考生范文Sample Answer。

  当然提到此,还是要提醒各位考生,在雅思写作备考中要尽快走出认为只有考官的范文才值得欣赏和学习的误区。事实上,SampleAnswer中的文章也是十分甚至是更适合考生仔细研读的,因为从中可以吸取许多常犯错误的经验,并且通过考官的评语,还可以十分直接地了解到考官对于文章的具体要求。也就是说类似的文章考生更容易接受并且模仿。

  可是对于考官自己所写的Model Answer,考生们尤其是程度并不是特别好的学生,又该如何欣赏理解呢?我们在看考官的满分作文时该如何吸收呢?应该重点针对哪些方面呢?是盲目的通通接受还是也要学会斟酌地吸收呢?对于考生们平时所遇到的这些问题,下面将具体挑出一篇来自Cambridge IELTS 8中的Test1 WritingTask2为例,一起来分析一下该如何更好地吸收Model Answer。

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篇二 :雅思大作文:考官眼中的9分范文

雅思大作文:考官眼中的9分范文

  我惊喜的发现我教了十年雅思,居然碰到了难得一见的9分文章,我给了几位前任的IELTS Examiner打了分数,都给出了9分。我们来欣赏一下:

  Globalization is a declaration of war upon all other cultures. And in culture wars, there is no exemption of civilians, there are no innocent bystanders. Why should it be expected that ancient and rooted civilizations are going to accept this peripheralisation without a struggle? The answer to that is that globalization carries an implicit promise that it will relieve poverty and offer security—perhaps the most ancient of human dreams. Because of the power of global capitalism to create wealth, it is assumed that this priority must sweep aside all other human preoccupations, including all existing institutions, interpretations and searches for meaning in the world.

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篇三 :雅思写作Task1书信考官范文(1)

 

雅思写作Task1书信考官范文(1)

  这是一篇雅思写作Task1书信考官范文,供大家参考。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平,并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。

  You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks you realised there were some problems with the job.

  Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter

  -- explain why you took the job

  -- describe the problems that you experienced

  -- suggest what could be done about them.

  Model Answer:

  Dear Mr. Adison,

  I am a part-time call-centre operator at your company, started working about 4 weeks ago. I am writing to indicate the problem I encountered during my work.

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篇四 :雅思写作满分考官范文

雅思写作满分考官范文

本文由新航道雅思整理发布  

   今天为大家准备了关于知名运动员收入高低的雅思写作满分考官范文,对于在雅思写作中遇到瓶颈的同学们参考。想要在写作上更上一层楼,需要平时在练习中要对文章机构,句式运用,词汇选择,论点的表达都要能达到满分的写作标准。

  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

  Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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篇五 :雅思写作Task1流程图考官范文(7)

 

雅思写作Task1流程图考官范文(7)

  本文为大家收集整理了雅思写作Task1流程图考官范文。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平,并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。

  The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  

  

  Sample Answer:

  The given pictorials show the life cycle of the silkworm and also shows the processes of silk cloth productions.

  The life cycle of a silkworm begins from the eggs laid by the mother worm and from these eggs the silkworm larva are generated after 10 days. The silkworm larva usually eats leaf like mulberry leaf and completes the second stage of the life cycle in 4-6 weeks. In their third stage, they create silk thread shells and remain there for another 3 to 8 days and then create an oval cocoons. The cocoon-stage lasts for around 16 days and they become moth in the final stage. With time the moths become grown-up and recycle the processes again.

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篇六 :雅思写作Task1曲线图考官范文(3)

 

雅思写作Task1曲线图考官范文(3)

  本文为大家收集整理了雅思写作Task1曲线图考官范文(3)。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平,并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。

  The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.

  Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

  


  Sample Answer:

  The given line graph and table give data on the number of overseas visitors traveling to Australia in millions of people from the year 1975 to 20## and shows the number of travellers from 6 different parts of the world.

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篇七 :雅思考官写作9分范文:国家间的经济文化交流

雅思考官写作9分范文:国家间的经济文化交流

  最新雅思考官写作9分范文:

  Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contract between countries has a positive effect; others say it could contribute to a loss of the countries identities. Do you agree or agree or disagree.

  Our world is changing but the questions seem to remain the same; is increased contact between cultures leading to cultural destruction? Well maybe it is, and, maybe it isn’t. And maybe that is a good thing, and maybe it isn’t. But what ever is happening we have to understand that we cannot control it, nor change it, but rather we have to get used to it.

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篇八 :雅思写作Task2考官范文:工作压力

 

雅思写作Task2考官范文:工作压力

  现代人用越来越多的精力来应付工作带来的压力,放松的时间却越来越少。本文是关于工作压力的一篇雅思范文,供大家参考。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平,并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。

  Many people think that nowadays people are being subjected to more and more pressure in their work, and thus are having less and less time to relax.

  What is your opinion?

  Model Answer:

  In modern society, especially in big cities, undoubtedly hard work has become a very important feature of ordinary people’s everyday life. It seems that many people are under the impression that their work is becoming more pressing and urgent, and thus they sacrifice more and more leisure time.

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