篇一 :雅思六分作文范例

Although we can easily acquire knowledge from modern media like television and internet,I think it is not enough to prove that the teachers will lose their position in the future. Indeed,people can absorb a lot of knowledges from television and internet.For example ,some students now can watch many teaching videos on television and internet and they do not need to get these knowledge from teacher.Some modern software can even help students to make a suitable study plan.It is obvious that students do not need to listen to the fixed content in the classroom. However,are all students have the chance to get the knowledge that they want from television and internet?Many poor students cannot afford the cost of television or internet and some elders do not know how to use these equipments.Getting various of knowledge from teacher is the best way for them.Otherwise,online learning needs time to make the courseware.The student cannot learn the new course if the courseware has not completed by the teacher. Even if television and internet can meet some needs of students but they cannot completely perform the effects of the teachers.In fact, children also need to learn the method of communication and how to become a good citizen.In this aspect,teachers play an important role during the learning process.The computer cannot completely achieve the teaching goal. To sum up, modern technologies can replace some of teachers' job. but considering other important parts in education, I do not believe this development can make teachers useless in the future.

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篇二 :雅思6分范文1

IELTs Practice I

With the pressures on today's young minds to succeed academically, some people believe that skipping class or playing hooky would make them less stressed, and suicide rates would drop immediately if school gives students the permission to skip class if they are willing to.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The pressures from parents, teachers and the society in which all members play their individual roles have been the main source of problems from which teenagers are suffering. It has always been a greatly controversial idea to suggest schools open the policy of letting students skip class if they need to. A great number of variations of viewpoints exist. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the suggestion of skipping class if necessary.

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篇三 :名师:雅思图表作文6分范文实例解析

名师:雅思图表作文6分范文实例解析

  在雅思考生中,普遍存在一种观点,认为小作文只占 1/3 的比重,而大作文占了 2/3 ,所以在复习的时候应该以大作文为重,考试的时候也应该先写大作文,而后再写小作文。但是在对考生实际考分的观察中我们发现,往往小作文写得好的同学,作文的总分相对较高。之前有个基础班的女生,把时间都花在了小作文上,大作文只写了个开头,但作文的总分居然拿到了 5 分。

  这是什么原因呢?因为大作文在短时间内提高有限,而小作文却因套路很多,句式有限,在短时间内只要认真学习,就不难提高。所以要特别提醒广大考生,尤其是时间非常仓促的考生,千万不要忽视了小作文的学习!

  以下提供的是一份 6 分的曲线图作文范文,后附考官的评语。同学们对照自己的文章,看下是否达到了 6 分的标准?

  (以下内容由朗阁教育集团海外考试研究中心提供,转载请注明出处,违者必究!)

  题目:

  WRITING TASK 1

  You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

  The graph below gives information about cinema attendancein Australia between 1990 and the present, with projections to 2010.

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篇四 :雅思6分作文

雅思6分作文

Nowadays, there are several channels to get news, such as radio, TV, newspaper and internet. I think internet is the best among these. In my essay, I am going to explain why.

Since its invention, the Internet has been keeping booming as a prospective industry. Not only because it is a combination of texts, audios and videos, but also due to its convinience. It has threatened the domination of spreading news of the traditional media, and, I would say, is about to take control.

We can find everything we want on internet – latest news, books, songs, movies, cartoons… whatever. With radio, we can merely hear. Compared with newspaper, radio and TV can provide the lastest information. For instance, it was immediately availalbe of the breaking news of the Americans’ attacking on Iraq, as well as that the Twin Towers of New York were destroyed on September 11, 2001. __ However, we just cannot carry TV 24/7.

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篇五 :雅思作文6分标准作文

Every year several languages die out. Some peoplethink that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewerlanguages in the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with thisopinion?

Languages arecomplicated and charming, representing the unique culture of some regionand country[c1] . Every year see[c2] several languages dying out, yet we can not [c3] define that a bad thing.

Let’s [c4] begin with thinking [c5] the meaning of a language. Language [c6] should provide people with the function ofdaily use. When a certain language dies out, we are sure that people who usedto use it must have found an alternative useful language. It is wise to abandona useless tool. As long as they can finish communication task[c7] successfully, it does not matter even ifit directly leads to a language dying out. People have no reason to protect anendangered language merely for the diversity’s sake. [c8] Namely, if some [c9]

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篇六 :雅思6.5分作文示例

雅思65分作文示例

Population aging, which has made it difficult for many companies to recruit eligible young employees, pushes people to rethink whether compulsory retirement has been out-of-date. In my opinion, we should abolish this regulation and create more flexible legal articles instead, to protect the benefits of both workers and employers.

One of the reasons is that mandatory retirement results in a huge waste of human resources. People differ in innate talents, physical conditions and career types, so a unified requirement for their retiring age will probably prevent them from continually contributing to the society. For example, an elder prestigious professor will be required to stop working when he reaches the age for retirement, no matter how well his body function is and how enthusiastic of him to commit to his job. It is counterproductive for him to realize potential to the utmost and achieve a sense of accomplishment, thereby causing a waste of his knowledge and intelligence.

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篇七 :雅思6分大作文考官评语

Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people’s health, more and more people are eating it.

Why are people eating fast food?

What can be done about this problem?

Unfortunately as the world goes on improving people more and more are eager to have fast foods. It’s now a kind of habit for kids and also adults to spent their leisure time at fast food restaurants. On my opinion one of the major reason of using fast foods in many countries is the shortage of time that people face with. It should be investigated properly to solve this subject.

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篇八 :雅思写作6分四大门槛

雅思写作6分四大门槛

朗阁雅思考试研究中心

雅思官方早在20xx年5月公布了20xx年全球雅思考生成绩中的第二项“Test taker performance 2011”。虽然今年的雅思考试时间早已经过半了,但是从这份报告中,我们还是可以发现全球考生A类(学术类)成绩分别为听力6、阅读5.95、写作5.5、口语5.8分,总分5.9分;而中国考生的A类(学术类)成绩分别为听力5.8、阅读5.9、写作5.2、口语5.3分,总分5.6分。其实就今年来说这样低分趋势还是有所延续的,所以总体上来说,中国考生的分数与世界平均分还是有点差距的,而且在听说读写四项中,尤其写作又是最低。很多学生都被卡在写作上,尤其是当拿到conditional offer时,更是对于写作6分感觉可望而不可及。

以上的情况还是存在的,但其实雅思写作六分没有那么难,只是同学们没有抓住关键,空有一腔热情却没有用对地方。以下朗阁雅思考试研究中心的专家将根据多年的教学经验总结出突破雅思写作6分瓶颈的要点。

其一:词汇

1. 词汇匮乏

所谓遣词造句,没有词汇就如同巧妇做无米之炊,就算做出来也是淡而乏味,不可能受到好评。如果要把饭菜做好,无良好食材,很难办;如果要把文章写好,无好词,属天方夜谭。所以,如果考生对于作文中词汇的词性转化,常见搭配,固定短语等熟悉度不够,就无法取得实质性突破。在备考写作期间,一定要积累一定量的词汇以便考时调用,这些词务必要做到熟悉,不熟悉的词汇只能算作可认知的阅读词汇。考生可按照作文常考的话题,例如:教育,科技,环境,犯罪,媒体等,收集记忆相关高频词汇,熟到任意调用。

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