要写出一篇漂亮的命题小essay可不是那么容易，内容技巧以及格式都不可小视，尽量做到全面和细节。如果哪一点出了错误，录取官很容易认为该学生大意不注重细节，学生的形象也许就会打折扣了。一些学生的小文章没有通过，有共同的地方，也有个别原因。

优越论文网老师在这里总结出了essay写作中几大典型错误。

1、对申请学校认知不多。有的学生在选择学校和专业的时候没有仔细考虑自身的情况，甚至有的抱着非名校不读的想法，但是也没有仔细去咨询了解对方学校的情况。因此对于大多学校都会提出的问题——why choose this school，学生不能说出学校的大致情况、特点和优势，回答时敷衍了事，只说出最表层的一些东西。回答不到位就暴露出自己的态度，很难看出申请人对学校的兴趣和向往程度。

2、回答问题时没有正确审题。一些在思想上很懒惰的学生总以为各个学校问的题目差不多就可以互相借用，没有认真审题就把申请学校A的套用在学校B上；还有的学生审题不到位，在内容上出现了很多与主题或者申请不相干的部分。

3、找不到思路，不会转换。有的学生想考察学生的思维灵活度，想知道学生的专业水平或是人际交往的态度等，提出的问题都是很简单的。例如芝加哥大学：请比较苹果和橘子，这个题目就不应该只写两种水果的区别什么的，可以将两种水果拟人化，各种水果代表哪两种人等等。总之，思维不要太死板，学会转换。

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Description: Model Essay 1

Disaster Office

I knew that professor Cassidy was excellent professor from the first day I attended one of his chemistry classes. He was prompt, perfectly prepared for class and delivered a lecture that was organized, clear, and interesting. In fact, I tried to emulate his behavior in my own studies. The first time I visited his office, however, I realized that these qualities of his didn’t extend outside the classroom. To my surprise, his office environment seemed to reflect the very opposite of his classroom persona: it was a disorderly mess, and I felt as if I’d stumbled upon the aftermath of a natural disaster.

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Essay  由 introduction，main body, conclusion, reference四部分组成，下面以这篇文章为例，教你如何写作一篇符合格式的essay

全文统一用times new roman字体，小四，1.5倍行距

文章中请不要用I，WE，OUR，YOU，YOUR之类的主观性强的1，2人称，可以用被动语态或其他句型代替

1.0 Introduction (分两部分)

Allainz the biggest insurance wants to further expand its business, globally. Among all the countries India and China are two most attractive markets. Before deciding which market to involve in, a detailed market research is indispensable. This essay just gives a comprehensive study over the two markets. (第一个部分介绍essay的主要内容)

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我们的assignment通常分为两种形式，一是essay，一是report。二者在形式上有所差别，但大体相同。一篇assignment上面会对写成essay还是report格式作出明确要求。在阅读题目时，请尽量仔细。

相同点：

1、字体：Times New Roman，字号：小四，行距：1.5倍。请有写作之前就把这些格式调好，以避免写好后再调会出现一些意想不到的情况。

2、段与段之间隔行。每段不要求像中文写作那样空两格，而是直接顶格写。

区别：

Essay:

Essay的写作相对report要简单一些。通常只包括三个部分，Introduction, Main Body, Conclusion. Introduction 包括topic的背景介绍和文章要解决的主要问题。一般占总字数的10%左右。Main Body是主体部分，占总字数80%左右。如果题目中作了具体要求，就根据题目提到的几个方面来逐一讨论就可以了。有的题目没有作具体要求，就根据自己的构思来写。但要求有逻辑性。Conclusion也是占10%，在这一段里把文章中的主要观点用一到两句话概括出来。

Essay 可以不写题目，不要把小标题加粗。

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本文为原作者成功申请到MIT麻省理工学院的Essay范文，最后附上了本篇Essay范文的点评，大家要多读多体会，学习申请人的写作思路，不要生搬硬套。

MIT Essay申请范文：Raising the Bar

THIS PAST SUMMER I HAD THE opportunity to participate in a highly rigorous academic program at MIT called MITES, Minority Introduction to Engineering and Science. For six and a half weeks I lived with 68 other rising seniors and college undergrads. Though we were all warned about how hard the program would be, we were all at the top of our classes and refused to believe it- after all, who did they think we were? The frst day we sat together in a small auditorium, unaware of each other and of what lay ahead. We were told that our confdence would be shattered, our minds blown away, and our lives changed forever. Still somewhat unmoved, we were not afraid.

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优越论文网自成立来经过十年的成功经营，口碑越来越好，品牌越做越大，然而有些学生依然抱有疑问，优越论文网真的想口碑那样好吗？为解决学生的困扰，优越论文网老师在此将做一些疑问解答。

（1）你们公司资历怎么样？可靠吗？

答：您好，我们是英国的一家公司，已经成功经营十年了，靠的都是实力和信誉，我们已经帮助超过28754位留学生解决了课程作业assignment或毕业论文写作的难题，我们致力于为留学生朋友提供最专业的论文写作解决方案。

（2）你们公司课业辅导的范围有哪些呢？你们能为我服务什么呢？

答：您好，我们公司的业务范围是，

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以上服务均有辅导写作和修改润色。

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English critical essay writing

Part one: beginning paragraph

1,retrospection

Not too long time ago, early in the 1990s, prior to 1990s, sth used to be a taboo, etc

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But the traditional view or attitude is no longer holding sway in our society.

But the stereotype of sth has to be broken today.

But sth has become a thing of the past.

2,exemplification

Just look around One of my cousins/friends,etc

What best defines sth must/may be sth

If there is anything that best characterizes our era/human existence, that must be sth

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Introduction

There are 1,250,000 lone-parent families in the UK, and 19 percent of all these families have children(Millar, 1999). The quantity of single parents have almost increased two-fold since early 1970s and this growth is part of widest patterns of change in family structure. Here are so many reasons for this, for example, the rising in extramarital births, the increasing in cohabitation, the rising in the divorce, and the rising of remarriage and cohabitation after divorce. (Millar, 1999). In 2000, it may be that less than 50% of all children in the United Kingdom will have spent all their lives in a traditional two parents family with both their real parents (Kiernan & Wicks, 1990 cited Millar, 1996). The essay will analyse several of the main factors which have affected the changing of the lone mothers families in the UK. And both the troubles and fortunes that received by lone mothers. There are three main parts to explain the changing of lone parents families in Britain: the changing policy; the ascending economy; the changing sociology ( social value).

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