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标题：Team Work
字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字
满分: 100
要求：
Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled Team Work. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1) 为什么我们要学习团队合作；
2) 你是如何在大学加强自己的团队合作能力的；
3) 学会团队合作的关键是什么。
As we all know, teamwork plays an important part in our success. However, what is teamwork? Without doubt, what is called teamwork means each person on the team should work within a group of people, which is number of people greater than one. Certainly, even if there are only two people in the group, they can be called a team. Therefore, it is an essential requirement of any employment that any potential employee is a team player.
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批改网高分作文
Who Are Teachers’ Pets, Boys or Girls?
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Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more?
Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result via the figures. Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school. As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age. While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls. In a word, there is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time. Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school. The most
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标题：How to Improve Your English
字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字
满分: 100
要求：
字数180字左右，给出分论点后需用举例手法论证
English is an important language to communicate with individual from other countries. Therefore, it is our obligation to improve English if we are eager to develop our ability to communicate with foreigners. My suggestions about improving English as follows.
In the first instance, you ought to read more English books in place of Chinese books. It is a wonderful ideal for you to increase vocabulary and expand vision from foreign literature. My brother was absorbed in foreign literature in university and read a large number of books about it. He can communicate with foreigners in daily life fluently even he will work in the United States next month.
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标题：大学生参加社会实践
字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字
满分: 100
要求：
For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled College Students Should Take Part in Social Practice following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1、 很多大学生缺乏社会实践
2、 大学生应该参加社会实践
3、 我的观点
范文:According to a survey, in recent years, many universities ignored the phenomenon that college students did not have enough chance to take part in social practice leaded to they lacked the ability to adapt to society in the future. When we asked college students whether they had engaged in social practice, most of them said no. I take it for granted that social practice can bring many benefits to college student. In the first instance, social practice can offer students adequate chance to meet various people in society. They can accumulate enough experience and use it in the future career. The second thing that must be taken into consideration is that it is a great opportunity for them put theory into practice and improve their In a word, I take the attitude that social practice is a critical thing for university students and they should also learn how to balance between study and work.
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Read or do
While it's quite obvious that there are good many advantages brought by doing, virtually, thoughts of people with not much reading can't be elevated by doing in some way.
People taking actions to alter for the better surround us all the time. Significant passion in running small business, such as selling packed meal and directly delivering fresh fruits to the dormitory, is evident. And many colleges seriously love to be a part of the association activities, even have no idea of what's going on in the activity. Whereas many of them who act instead of reading more make little advancement both in their mind or knowledge, for almost everyone give their concentration on their external activities, ignoring the insight of their hearts. Nevertheless, it is of more importance to reach the mind's pinnacle, and only by this way, difficult matters in the frustrating life become nothing.
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The person I love/ admire most
要求
1. No less than 90 points by Pigai.
2. No less than 26o words.
3. Deadline Nov. 3.
作文号:357928 教师:邵春 字数:260~500 满分:100
Attitude
要求
For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Attitude by commenting on the famous saying, “A man can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited enthusiasm .” You should write at least 260 words but no more than 500 words.
作文号:357929 教师:邵春 字数:100~500 满分:100
第一篇
The person I love/ admire most
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Life is a treasure , and it contains many interesting and colorful things . We gain a lot from life , in the meanwhile the life teach us plenty of things that involve many aspects . So the problem of what is the best way of learning about life has aroused people’s concern in recently years.
Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends.They've done a lot of learning in their lives , so they can give you suggestions before you make a decision,even set you examples in school,family,enterprise and other aspects.
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初中作文批改评语范例
一、字迹
A、书写清秀、整洁，犹如海滨小城的街道一样，找不到一点脏??端端正正的字迹， 让人看了真舒服??你的字像印的一样漂亮??
B、随随便便，字哪能不像猫掏的似的??字不在格子中间，当然看起来不顺眼??你
的字东倒西歪，是不是今天风太大，才刮成这样的??我不相信你的字写不好，永远就这么 潦草??认真耐心地写，你会写的比我还要棒??
二、内
容
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、这般丰富的内容，简直和作家写出来的差不多呀??你的习作有血有肉，读起来真 是一大享受??你的作文内容具体，我读的十分过瘾
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内容紧贴现代生活，新颖别致，把握时代脉搏，尽现时代气息。
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脉络分明，层次感强，叙气说井然有序，纤毫不乱。
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详略得当，主次分明，思路清晰。精挑细拣，素材似为主题量身定制。
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叙述详细具体，细节描写生动逼真，人物个性鲜明突出，形象丰满，跃然纸上。
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以环境烘托人物的心情，情景交融，情现景中，景随景现。
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想像丰富，构思奇特且不脱离生活的真实，扎跟于生活的联想，拓宽了读者的思维， 让人觉得生动有趣。
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景物描写传神逼真，遣词造句贴切得体，景随情生，情景交融，
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