2009-2013安徽高考英语作文 范文和详解

（2009.安徽卷）

假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应认为同学们不必为此苦恼；希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：

【参考范文】Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it.

Thank you!

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材的现实性强，考生的话语较多，显见这种作文，难度不大，考生应注意基本语言和句式的运用，以及上下文的过渡。本文中使用了look into, make sure, be bound to等短语以及as，if引导的状语从句和why引导的宾语从句。

[2010安徽卷]

假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机（cell）和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up:TV, cell, or Web?”为题，写一篇英语短文。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

We are now living in an information age, in which TV,cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.

However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there're too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.

As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.

点评：本文层次清晰。第一段提出文章的主题，第二段提出选择并阐述理由，第三段说明了保留另外两个选择的原因，这三段用了连词however，as for 是段落衔接自然。在文章中，作者用了定语从句in which TV，cells…、虚拟语气、rather than、原因状语从句等复杂的句式，句子长短结合，语言流畅，充分展示了作者写作功底。

20xx年

书面表达(满分25分)

某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、短文中不能出现本人相关信息。

One possible version

My Approach to Difficulties in Learning

As high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. Everyone has their own way to deal with them. Here I would like to share mine.

When I am faced with a dificulty, I ususlly choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages. In this way, I can not only it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.

However, when it is something beyond my sompetence, I turn to classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice. As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies.

分析：

20xx年安徽卷写作部分的话题贴近学生生活，考察学生学习中的现实问题，探讨如何解决学习中遇到的困难。文章的主线是写自己如何解决困难，这一点是考生审题时需要注意的，如果通篇写成了what（即学习中遇到的各种困难）、而没有提及自己的解决办法，这无

疑犯了跑题的大忌。和一些其他省区作文不同，安徽卷的作文题目没有给考生提供要点，这一方面有利于一些考生的发挥，但另一方面也会给许多考生设置组织结构的难题。笔者认为，要根据遇到的困难来分析解决的办法，并在面对不同困难当中总结不同的解决方法，行文中加入举例、对比论证，有理有据，让文章摆脱要点的堆砌，论证更具体而有针对性。总之，考生要自圆其说、合理论证、逻辑清晰，避免语言错误，完成一篇高质量的高考英语作文。

20xx年

第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文，理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。

注意： 1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.词数120左右； 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。

参考词汇：文科 arts; 理科:science

Good afternoon, everyone.

Welcometo our school! ______________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

Thanks！

One possible version

Good afternoon，everyone.

Welcome to our school! The topic I’m going to talk about is the choice between arts and science. As is known to all, students in China can’t study both arts and science. Therefore, a choice between them is bound to be made.

At the end of my first year in high school, I decided to study science rather than arts. And the reasons are as follows: The most important one is that I love science, which can show me the mysteries of nature and the universe. What’s more, I’m good at it. So, it is far easier for me to learn science than arts. Last but not least, I want to become a scientist in the future. It is science that will equip me with necessary abilities.

Now, years have passed, and my affection for science is much greater than before. I hold the view firmly that my choice is absolutely right.

Thanks!

20xx年安徽高考

假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明, 从我做起”为主体的征文活动, 请你以“On the Way to School”为题, 写一篇英语短文.

内容主要包括:

1. 遵守交通法规;

2. 注意举止文明.

注意:

1. 词数120左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;

3. 短文中不能出现与你本人相关的信息;

4. 短文的题目已为你拟好, 不计入总次数.

试题分析

20xx年安徽高考作文，属于提纲式要点作文，话题为：讲文明从我做起.要求学生写一篇作文，叙述自己上学途中文明的行为举止。这个话题体现了实用性和生活性原则，贴近学生的生活和学习，为考试所熟知。提纲雷书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成普通顺畅的语句，因此要组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要注意简洁明了，开门要见山。

审题要素：

1，注意人称，应该用第一人称。

2，注意时态的正确使用，根据试题的要求，本文用一般现在时和一般将来时。

3，注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。

思路指导：

首段，引入话题--发生在身边的不文明现象，从我做起。(start from my self) 其次，上学途中应该怎么做到文明：遵守交规；个人举止。

参考范文：

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school.

I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.

 

第二篇：20xx安徽高考英语作文写作指导

课题：如何在一节课中有效指导学生写出20xx年安徽省高考英语作文

陈景侠

假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：

1.遵守交通法规；

2.注意举止文明。

注意：

1.词数120左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

Teaching plan

Step I Warm-up

1. Question: How do you usually come to school ?

2. Brainstorming: Divide students into different groups to brainstorm the traffic rules we should obey and

3.A example show. Ask students to summarize the structure of a good composition and the apply of linking words

辽宁卷

第二节 书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：

1、乐观的人生态度；

2、努力学习；

3、参加体育锻炼。

生词：态度---attitude

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、开头已为你写好。

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.

If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.

Step II Drafting

Give students 15 minutes to draft the

composition.

lingking words

tense person main points

Step Ⅲ Revising

writing needs revising time and time again.

1 Divide four students into a group. I ask them to exchange their drafts and revise them.

2 Invite some students to show their

composition ,evaluate them.