留学申请书一(中英文)

I am a student, graduated from BaoYang middle school, Nanning, GuangXi autonomous region, in 2006. I am still studying in high school now, because I was not enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently, I have a dream to study abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient and suitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.

First, New Zealand is a multicultural country, which has the most advanced education in the world. Second, the tuition is lower than other countries’, which I think is mo

re reasonable for me. Finally, the climate of New Zealand is similar with the climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons, I told my parents my plan on going to New Zealand for study, and my parent agreed with me.

As a girl, I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays, Chinese parents, who want their children to get better education, pay more attention to preschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education, I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leaving college.

My plan is as follows: first, I plan to study English in language institute for about a half year in New Zealand. Then, I will study specialized curriculums on preschool education.

I believe I have the ability of study abroad, because I have finished all high school curriculums. Besides, my parents both have job and have rich income, so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study, I will return to my homeland and work on preschool education, so as to realize my life value.

出国留学计划

我是江苏省南京市XX中学20xx年高中毕业生，由于未被理想大学录取，我一直在XX中学复读。自20xx年起，我受同学的影响，产生了出国留学的念头，于是我通过上网了解到去新西兰留学有比较多的优势。首先，新西兰是一个多元文化的国家，具有世界先进的教学水平；第二，留学费用比其他国家较低、较合理；第三，气候也与我国南方差不多。因此，我向父母提出拟到新西兰留学的愿望，得到了父母的支持。因为我是女孩子，从小就喜欢幼儿教育。且现代中国的家长对小孩的教育要求比较高，我如果能到新西兰学习幼儿教育专业课程，学成回国后一定能在幼儿教育事业上有作为。所以，我决心到新西兰留学，打算先用半年的时间到语言学院专修英语，过好语言关，再进行幼儿教育专业课程学习。我相信我已经过三年高中课程的学习，又经过一年的复读，在学习能力和知识水平上有了一定的基础。同时我父母都有固定的工作和较丰厚的收入，在留学经费上也会得到父母的全力支持。因此，我一定能较好地完成留学课程。学成回国后，我一定能实现我从事幼儿教育的愿望，并能在幼儿教育事业上实现我的人生价值。

 

第二篇：留学申请书 修改样本

Hello ,

Thanks for submitting your resume today. I’ve included some marginal comments about some specific things that you can update in your resume. Mainly, I noticed that you included your coursework in your Education section. However, you typically wouldn’t include coursework on your resume, since it isn’t technically work experience—however, you can certainly include some of your entrepreneurship experience in your cover letter. Additionally, you could definitely add more information to your Work Experience section by including more accomplishments—for example, is there anything exceptional that you accomplished in your job that no one else would have done? You can also expand some of your bullet points now by quantifying some

accomplishments; you can do this by specifying your tasks and their results (i.e: Researched and supervised 25 news reports per week). One last recommendation I have that can help you expand your resume is to include any relevant volunteer or extracurricular activities in which you accomplished something relating to your field. You can list this in a Volunteer or Extracurricular section, and this information would help show that you have more professional experience outside of a formal position.

I appreciate having the chance to read through your paper. I hope you’ll find my comments useful when

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