范文一：假如你是李华，你的美国好友托尼（Tony）来信询问你对未来生活的畅想。请你根据下面的内容提示，发挥想象，给托尼写一封回信。

Dear Tony,

I am very happy to get your letter. Now I will tell you about my future .

I’ll be an artist when I grow up. I love drawing and I want to draw all the beautiful things. I will live in Paris because there are lots of art exhibitions in this city. Also, my parents will live in my large house with me. Then we can enjoy the great city together. I will go sightseeing somewhere else on vacation. I will show people what I see in the world with pictures.

                                                            Yours,

                            Li Hua

范文二：以下是对10年后生活的畅想                              

My Life in Ten Years

In ten years, I think I’ll be a reporter. I’ll live in Beijing, because I went to Beijing last year and fell in love with it. I will live in an apartment with my pets. I like animals very much so I’ll have many different pets. I may also collect plane tickets because I will travel a lot of places. And I think I will wear a suit during the weekdays. I hope I can go to America and Australia on vacation in ten years. So now I should work hard to make my dreams come true.

范文三：

Julia has got a bad cold. Her mother has gone to Beijing on business. Now you are writing a letter to Julia to give her some advice.

Dear Julia,

I am sorry to hear that you are ill. I think you should go to see a doctor and take some medicine. You should go to bed early and take a good rest. You’d better eat a lot of healthy food like vegetables. You’d better not drink coffee. It’s bad for your health. You should drink lots of water. You shouldn’t go to school tomorrow. I hope you will be better soon.

范文四：

保持一份好心情（in a good mood）对我们的学习和生活都很重要。如何保持好心情呢？

内容提示：1、多做运动；2、保持良好的饮食习惯；3、拥有健康的兴趣、爱好；4、乐于助人。

How to keep a good mood

It’s very important to be in a good mood. How can we keep in a good mood? Here is some advice.

First, you should do sports often. That helps you keep healthy. As you know, Good health can help you to be in a good mood. Second, you’d better have healthy eating habits. Then, good hobbies can also help you a lot, too. For example, you can listen to music and read some good books. Finally, when your classmates or friends are in trouble, you should try to help them. When you help others, you will feel happy.

范文五：

你的英国朋友Tony询问你的期中考试（the mid-term exam），请根据成绩单回信，告诉你的成绩和老师的评价。

Name：Wang Chen  Class: Two

English---B+; good at writing

Chinese---A; hard-working

History—B; can do better

Science—C; lazy student

Math—A; hard-working

Dear Tony,

I’m happy to get your letter.

I finished my mid-term exams last week and I got my report card last Friday. I did OK in some subjects this time. My English teacher said I was good at writing. I did well in Chinese and math. The teachers said that I was hard-working. I had a hard time with science and I only got C this time. It is the worst. My science teacher said I was a lazy student. As for history, the teacher said I could do better.

Well, that’s all about my report card.

                                    Yours,

                                      Wang Chen

范文六：

课本：P85

写作要点：

When did you start learning English?           How long have you been studying it?

How was your English? /How much have you learned?

Have you ever used English outside of school?     What could you do to improve your English?

I started learning English when I was ten years old. So I have been studying English for five years. For me, it is a hard school subject. And my English is not very good, though I think English is a very important subject in school. English is also useful in life. One day a foreigner came to my mom’s store and wanted to buy some water. My mom didn't know English at all. I helped and my mom was very happy about that. I will work hard to improve my English.  I think I could read more English books, watch English movies, listen to English tapes, or even make friends with a native speaker of English. I hope my English will be better and better.

范文七：

                        If I have a lot of money

If I have a lot of money, I will do many things I love. First of all, I will spend money on travel, so my dream of traveling around the world will come true. Then I will probably buy a big house with a swimming pool for my parents, so they can have happy lives. Of course, I will buy myself an original car, and drive it everywhere. What’s more, I am going to use most of my money to help the poor children. So I may give my money to charities and make the poor students go to school and get a better education. This is a great chance that many people do not have.

     You can imagine how happy my life is if I have a lot of money.

范文八：

              Have you ever been to Lishui?

Have you ever been to Lishui? For many people, Lishui is an excellent place to take a holiday.

Lishui is a beautiful city with a small population. It’s famous for beautiful mountains and clean water. Many cities have mountains, but have you ever climbed the mountains at night? Baiyun Mountain is a wonderful place to have fun at night. It might seem strange to climb the mountain when it’s dark. But if you’ve ever climbed the mountain during the night, you might fall in love with it. 

Don’t fear you won’t be able to find delicious food in Lishui. Although Lishui is a small city with a small population, there are many kinds of food. Weather you like traditional Chinese food, Western food or Japanese food, you will find them all in Lishui

范文九：

( Unit 10 试卷) 感谢信

Thanks so much for the great New Year present. I am really surprised when I got the computer games. I think it’s probably the best gift I have ever received. However, my parents don’t want me to play computer games. I know it’s because they worried about my study. I’m sure I will spend much time in studying rather than playing computer games. By the way, I can’t wait to visit you and Aunt Sun next summer holiday.

   Best wishes.

范文十：

My Summer Vacation Plan

The summer vacation is coming. During this summer holiday, I’m going to do many interesting things. First, I’ll do some reading. Because I’m interested in reading and it can help me know more about the world. Second, I will spend some time with my friends. We’re going to see movies, take part in some activities and even travel to a new place. I always enjoy myself with friends.

 I think I will have a lot of fun and relax myself on the summer vacation. I can’t wait.

作文批改要求：

1．内容符合题意（离题不得分）。2.句子连贯，语法正确，无错误（语法：一处0.5分）尤其是标点，大小写。

3.内容结构得当，层次清晰(结构：2分)   4.书写端正（书写：2分）

5.句子优美，（能够运用一些连词，副词）文章有一定拓展，有一定深度。（文采：4分）

常见的几种错误

1.        用词不准确；2.语法结构有误（主语，谓语，句型）；3.句子之间缺少连接成分，文章结构不紧凑，层次不清楚；4.中文式的表达；5.标点符号，大小写等用法不规范；6. 字数不足，等等。

 

第二篇：八年级命题作文题目

八年级命题作文题目

4、将奉献进行到底 5、品味遗憾 6、预习青春

7、遗忘教你洒脱 8、皈依自然 9、不能向生活称臣

10、揣好梦想上路 11、我最重要 12、守候心灵的春天

13、勤俭，从这里开始 14、与往事干杯 15、有一种失败叫成功1、思想，是不过时的美丽 2、微笑是一把神奇的钥匙 3、为感情喝彩

16、作别失去 17、让心灵在书中放飞 18、爱，是这样炼成的

19、心灵的储蓄 20、倾听心灵的钟声 21、月若有情月长吟

22、心星点灯 23、与诚信同行 24、带着“诚信”上路

25、生命的出口 26、点一盏心灯 27、人生也是一张答卷

28、期待诚信 29、打开“第三只眼” 30、 一花一世界

31、我是谁？ 32、请把我的情感留 33、救救孩子

34、滴滴香浓，意犹未尽35、有梦才有远方 36、世界有了我们更美丽

37、大爱无声 38、不经意的美丽 39、活着就是为了别人

40、最好的风景 41、人生需要装饰 42我闻到了阳光的味道

43、我为人人，人人为我 44、脚比路长 45假如时光可以倒流