中考作文点评

今年的中考英语作文题是“明年此时”(This Time Next Year )，黄浦区初中英语教研员周加有分析，这道题比较抽象，给予了考生一定的想象空间，可以说是在“意料之外，又在情理之中”。周加有表示，前几年的作文题比较多的是从学生的角度对某些事物谈感受，或者对一些事情进行评论，比较容易套题。但今年的这道题不是很具体，加上时态是将来式，因此对学生来说不太容易套题，要写好必须有自己的想法，所以有一定难度。不过，今年的这道作文题依然延续前几年的特点——以“我”为出发点，谈的还是学生自己，这点方便了学生有话可说、有情可抒。 20xx年中考英语作文：

题目：This time next year

This time next year I will be enjoying my senior school life 1.which I have expected for a long time. The life then will be 2.as colorful as flowers.I will take an active part in all kinds of activities in high school 3.because the saying goes ”All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. In addition, making friends 4.will be on top of the list since a real friendship5.is of great importance to me. As for me, I will be definitely6.turning a new leaf of my future life this time next year, and I’m really looking forward to it. ? 精彩亮点分析：

亮点一：定语从句修饰对高中生活的向往

亮点二：用as...as的比较级结构，抓人眼球

亮点三： 用到了idiom，而且用的极为恰当

亮点四： on top of the list永远放在第一位

亮点五：be of great importance 名词结构更高端

亮点六： turn a new leaf of my future life 翻开未来生活的新篇章

? 写作小Tip：

今年中考是篇看似记叙却要叙中带议的文章。全文的时态应全部运用一般将来时，对未来生活进行展望。全文应表达积极阳光的信念。

20xx年上海中考英语范文1 This Time Next Year

It's exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.

At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Also I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.

Life will be totally different, but I'm really looking forward to it.

【解析】

这篇作文需要涉及三个方面：变化、期望和自己的作为，因此文章中需要涵盖着三点。

第二段的第一句是明年此时的变化，第二句是期望及第一个作为，紧接其后的是第二个作为，而最后表达出了作者对变化的想法及态度。

20xx年上海中考英语范文2

This Time Next Year

Life is changeable, and that's why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.

Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Then, I will benefit from reading

English books. What is more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English endlessly.

Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.

(110 words)

文章的标题告诉我们文章内容应该是与未来的生活相关的，生活在变化，一年后我将进入高中，但是学习还在继续，所以我仍有自己的目标。文章主要立足于两点，我对未来的计划或者期待，以及我要如何去实现。作为一名英语学习者，我会从三点去提高自己的英语。英语学习是一个持续的过程，只有不断努力才会有收获

 

第二篇：20xx-5英语作文范文背诵(一)(20xx-5-31)

20##-5英语作文范文背诵（一）

1. (20##高三英语综合练习（1）)

Taking Chinese Character Dictation Contest broadcasted on CCTV as an example, the passage points out that many people now have trouble in writing Chinese characters in daily life, which may be caused by the overuse of digital devices.

Nowadays, I feel a bit ashamed every time I am unable to write Chinese characters correctly, some of which are commonly used in our everyday life.

What causes this phenomenon? As is mentioned in the reading passage, the popularity of digital devices is a major contributing factor. Unlike older generations, young people today prefer typing instead of writing by hand. Besides, some wrongly-written advertising signs can be seen everywhere, which mislead people a lot.

We should attach great importance to Chinese traditional culture. First, we should call for the popularity of handwriting because Chinese characters are the most important part of Chinese culture. Opening calligraphy lessons in schools would be a meaningful method to rebuild children's interest in handwriting. Then, celebrating Chinese traditional festivals is also significant to pass on Chinese history and culture. In addition, don’t forget to protect the cultural relics around our country, which are precious heritages left by our ancestors.

2. (20##高三英语综合练习（2）)

范文(一)：

Will New Ways of Consumption Make Us Smart Consumers?

[l]Nowadays, in this consumption-oriented society, more and more people including students are pursuing new ways of consumption in order to save money. Coupons, group-buy deals as well as discounts are warmly welcomed and considered fashionable by consumers. [2] However, will they really help us save money and make us smart consumers? Undoubtedly, the answer is NO.

[3]First of all, the gratification of saving money on one commodity will greatly stimulate consumers' desire to buy more. It is easy to presume that more money will be spent eventually. [4] Similarly, at the sight of such low price, many consumers tend to lose their mind and come back home with packages of unnecessary goods. It is absolutely a waste of money. [5]Last but not least, many consumers are passion­ate enough to purchase piles of group-buy coupons without realizing that there are many unpleasant additional clauses attached to them. [6] For instance, many restaurant coupons can only be used at a certain time with certain specified dishes, which can hardly be called a satis­factory consumption experience.

[7]To conclude, there's no denying that these fashionable ways of consumption can to some extent help us save money. However, a much greater amount of money will be spent if we are indulged in us­ing them. We will never become truly smart consumers if we don't spend money rationally.

[1] 开门见山，通过现象引出话题。

[2] 通过一问一答的方式表明自己的态度：

[3][4][5] 分别从三个方面来论述团购等消费方式并不能真正省钱。

[6] 通过举例说明有些团购券的附加条款限制了消费者的自由，并不能让消费者满意消费。

[7] 结尾指出沉溺于这种消费方式并不明智，强调应理智消费。

范文（二）

The advantages of being careful with money in daily life

Nowadays, there is a hot debate on whether people, including students should be careful with their money in their daily life since they try their best to save money. Some people think it is not good to do so because this may not make people smart consumers. But in my eyes, the advantages of being careful with money in daily life outweigh the disadvantages.

Firstly, being careful with money is a virtue that can always benefit people. Being thrifty is of great help, especially when the economic status around the world is not very good and it becomes harder to earn money than before. A good habit of being careful with money will help many people go through this difficult period or any other difficult financial situation in their life. People with this awareness will think carefully before deciding to buy anything. For students, this awareness is also of great help since they mainly depend on their parents for financial supports. When they keep this awareness in their mind, they will definitely avoid wasting money.

Secondly, being careful with money is, in fact, a good way of practicing how to manage one's money. In current society, it is necessary to learn something about finance. But theories are usually hard to learn. In contrast, most people can learn quickly by practicing. Being careful with money means an efficient use of money, which, in essence, equals to part of the job of a financial planner. Being careful with money can teach people to make best use of their money.

It is true that being too careful with money may have some disadvantages; for example, it may cause people to ignore other aspects of commodities. But overall this behavior is good and has its reality basis. Money-consciousness is always needed in the market-oriented economy.

3. (20##高三英语综合练习（3）)

Potential is limitless

It’s universally acknowledged that a person’s potential is limitless. When exposed to various pressure or challenges, many people will be sceptical of themselves, thinking they are incapable. Perhaps, never have they realized how powerful a person’s potential will be.

An interesting story will never fade from my memory though I heard of it many years ago.  An injured soldier was informed that he would spend his rest life on the wheelchair. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in drink every day. It never rains but pours.

One day, hardly had he got out of a pub when he was robbed by three guys. Unwilling to give in, he struggled against them, however, which set off the robbers’ anger and therefore they set fire to his wheelchair. Just when the big fire was endangering his life, he suddenly jumped out of his wheelchair and ran through a whole street swiftly. Then he stopped to take breath, only to find that he should walk and even run normally.

The story makes me firmly believe that our potential is limitless. Consequently, it’s of vital importance for us to spread the wings of our mind and grow our potential to the fullest.

4. (20##高三英语综合练习（4）)

The writer encountered a little disabled girl when he was working as a cashier in a clinic. The girl’s smile taught the writer a profound lesson, and inspired him to become successful.

After reading the story, I was deeply touched too. I’m in favor of the idea that when you smile to the world, the world will smile back to you. The story reminds me of my friend Joe, who used to complain a lot when he came across any kind of difficulty or whenever something unpleasant happened to him. Later, Joe’s classmate sitting next to him in Senior Grade One helped him to change greatly. The classmate was born in a very poor family, but instead of complaining, he always smiled to everybody around and devoted himself to his studies. Ever since he met his deskmate, more and more smiles appeared on Joe’s face and soon he even made greater progress in his studies.

In a word, attitude is everything. Only when we take a correct attitude toward life can we enjoy a better, more meaningful and more beautiful life.

5. (20##高三英语综合练习（5）)

A life without a goal is a life without hope.

As John Ruskin puts it, “Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass”. Goals of life determine what we are going to be.

       I used to be so addicted to computer games that I had little time for study and thus fell behind. My parents and teachers were greatly worried about me. It was what my English teacher said to me that helped me out. She told me hat I must have my own goal of life, otherwise my future would be hopeless and that playing computer games was fun but it wouldn’t guarantee me a bright future. I finally realized that I must set up a goal and work hard towards it right away. In the days that followed, whenever I felt tired or had an urge to play computer games, I thought of my goal and soon regain strength.

       As the saying goes, a life without a goal is a life without hope. Bearing my goal of life in mind, I am always full of energy in my study.

6. (20##高三英语综合练习（6）)

The writer mainly tells us not only students but also other people would feel stressed on different occasions. Also, he gives some suggestions on how to reduce pressure.

As far as I ‘m concerned, pressure is part of life. It’s quite natural for us to feel stressed occasionally, at an exam, or when speaking to a stranger. So it’s of great importance to have a right attitude towards pressure. What we need to do is to relax ourselves and face the challenge positively and initiatively.

As Senior 3 students, we have to deal with some grown-up problems and make decisions by ourselves. Family can be one of the biggest causes of stress, such as problems with arguing with parents or brothers or sisters. We also have lots of stress from school, either from our classmates or teachers. However, the greatest pressure comes from study, which worries most of us as the National Matriculation Test is approaching. We also feel stressed about choosing our education after high school or not affording to go to university.

In order to reduce pressure, first, a balanced diet and enough sleep are necessary; secondly,   I would schedule my study properly so that I can have time to do sports or listen to music; also, friendship, support from my parents and encouragement from my teachers can help me a lot. I would try every means to relax myself and work with high efficiency to achieve my goal. 

7. (20##高三英语综合练习（7）)

This passage lists some of the causes for the decline of Chinese students’ health and discusses one possible solution to the problem – including P.E. in the Gaokao.

In my opinion, it’s unreasonable to include P.E. in the Gaokao. While students may spend more time doing physical exercise to prepare for the test, this doesn’t mean they will improve their health. On the contrary, additional test pressure and excessive exercise may make their health worse. Moreover, it’s unfair to students born with health problems and to those not gifted in sports.

It is often said that “a healthy mind needs a healthy body.” With good health, you have enough energy to perform at your best. I think the core issue however is how to get students healthier. Besides a test, I think schools should do things such as stop selling the soft drinks and junk food, as well as give students less homework and more time for outdoor activities.

8. (20##高三英语综合练习（8）)

From the article, we know a school has set a regulation about civilized communication between boys and girls to prevent students falling in love at an early age, which has caused different opinions.（33 words）

In our daily school life some students can’t resist the opposite gender’s attraction，disturbing themselves. With such a school rule carried out, it’s of great help for them to take control of themselves and realize the harm of abnormal communication. Meanwhile, however, it’s not good for the students’ emotional development and normal relationship.

Personally, I hold a right attitude towards communication with the opposite gender. I’ll get on well with my classmates no matter whether they are boys or girls, but keeping a certain personal distance is extremely necessary. It’s of great importance for me to bury myself in my school work before I regret only because of my puppy（early）love.

9. (20##高三英语综合练习（9）)

Dear Peter,

I am very glad to receive your letter, in which you asked me about family tradition recently referred to on CCTV and meanwhile among the masses. Different families hold different focuses of family tradition, such as unity, love and care, honesty, diligence, respect and responsibility.

Now, I’d like to introduce ours to you — hard-working, which my family would appreciate permanently. In the morning, my grandma usually gets up early, prepares us a good breakfast, and then begins to do other jobs. She works slowly, but always makes everything clean. Under the influence of my grandmother, my mother also does quite well both in her work and at home. Because of this attitude, every year she was titled "outstanding communist." After dinner, she often gives up entertainment, helping our family with housework. It’s my grandmother and my mother's diligent deeds that make me believe that if there is dirt just mop it repeatedly, never quitting until removing it. I serve as a good help to my teachers and classmates as well as my family. Hardworking has deeply rooted in my heart in the form of invisible power.

Family education is an important part of Chinese traditional culture and education. It can be a life of truth; also the principle of doing things. Good family tradition pushes one generation after another to ensure children’s healthy growth, whose positive energy promotes social progress of civilization.

What about your ideas about it? Looking forward to your letter.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

10. (20##高三英语综合练习（10）)

Patti, at the age of 5, lost her speaking ability accidently. With the help and encouragement of her mother and a doctor, she overcome many difficulties and succeeded in learning languages.

I think Patti and her mom’s attitudes towards illness and misfortune are positive. They tried every means to overcome difficulties, which led to her success at last. We should learn from their strong will and perseverance.

As far as I am concerned, difficulties or misfortunes are an unavoidable part of our life. When facing them in real life, we should be brave and positive and determined to overcome them.

Once in a school speech contest on environment, I was so nervous that I forgot everything. I lost and felt very sad then. But I didn’t lose heart. Since then, I have read lots of books about speech skills, and found every chance I could to improve myself, so last month I got No 1 in the school speech contest, which has proved the power of positive attitude towards failure.

11. (20##高三英语综合练习（11）)

The Development of World Urban Population

This chart is cited from the UN report which reviews the "rapid change of urban population in the 20th century". It demonstrates that the rate of population in ur­ban area has witnessed a sharp increase from 13% (0.22 billion) in 1900 to 49% (3. 2 billion) in 2005. It is predicted that the rate will amount to 60% (4. 9 billion) in 2030.

There are several factors leading to the rapid development of urban population in the world. Firstly, with the development of economy, many industries have been boomed and prosperous, which attract more skillful workers and employees. Secondly, with the migrant famers pouring into city, the structure of the population has been changed greatly. Thirdly, the industrialization of the rural areas also contributes a lot to the increase of urban population.

With the development of science and technology, the city will be developed at a relatively high speed. And with the increasing pace of industrialization both in the city and countryside, the urban population will absolutely become larger and larger.

12. (20##高三英语综合练习（12）)

Fly Your Dream

Ladies and gentlemen,

Today I would like to begin my speech with Jia’s story.

Born poor and previously a safety guard at Qinghua University, Jia never gave up on his college dream. By taking advantage of the academic resources at Qinghua, he finally made his way to college last year.

Reading this piece of news, I am both shocked and moved. Jia pursued his dream and made achievements despite his disadvantaged financial and occupational background. Among the many reasons why he succeeded, I would point out the role of having a dream as the most critical one. As we can see around us, many would have dropped their dream and thought of themselves as doomed to be underprivileged the whole life, should they be in Jia’s shoes. Yet that’s far from the worst case. Take a look around us, and it is not unusual to find students with better family background than Jia but without a dream, spending their youth playing games and surfing the net. In my opinion, they are simply not making their life as worthwhile as a security guard did.

Therefore, I would appeal that we all follow the example of Jia, find a dream and fight for it. After all, only if we do have a dream can we fly it and finally realize it!

That’s the end of my speech. Thank you.

13. (20##高三英语综合练习（13）)

A daughter writes to God recalling her unforgettable past about experiencing the love from her loving, thoughtful, patient and forgiving parents, deciding to follow her parents’ perfect example.

What a touching letter! Undoubtedly, we all have experienced parents’ love countless times during the process of our growth. It is they who keep, at all times, focusing their mind and energy on raising us, ensuring our lifelong safety and happiness.

We are never short of such stories as parents’ love. As a child, once I felt terribly sick at midnight. Hearing this, my parents rose immediately and took me to the nearest hospital. Accompanying me by my bed, they didn’t even sleep a second the whole night.

We can never thank our parents enough. Never ever will I let them down from now on. Studying hard is the only way, in my opinion, to express my gratitude to them. Only in this way can I guarantee to live up to their expectations in the future.

14. (20##高三英语综合练习（16）)

In the cartoon, a senior 3 student is reading in bed and taking some tonics, with many books beside his bed.

　　Seeing it, I can't help wondering whether Senior 3 students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit. I don't think it unnecessary to. Taking tonics will cause us to put on weight, which is bad for our health. What's more, the price of tonics is rather high.

　　Then how can we face the college entrance examinations? In my point, we can make progress if we follow the advice. First of all, we should work hard, do more practice and use our mind whenever we meet with problems. Secondly, try to build up our confidence, never give up or lose heart whatever happens. We also should keep a good state of mind. Thirdly, we must create our own way of learning and seek help from both teachers and classmates. Finally, we should have enough nutrients and do more physical exercise so as to keep fit. Don't stay up!.

　　Make efforts, and we will succeed.

15. (20##-5-9周五练习)

For this part, you are required to write a short essay entitled The Change of the Number of People Registering for State Civil Service Exam. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

1. 上图所示为20##年至20##年国家公务员考试报名人数的变化情况，请描述该变化；

2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因；

3. 你是如何看待这种现象的。

The Change of the Number of People Registering for State Civil Service Exam

From the chart, we can find_________________________________________________________________

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范文

The Change of the Number of People Registering for State Civil Service Exam

From the chart, we can find that the number of people registering for state civil service exam increased sharply in recent years. In 2003, there were 87,000 people taking part in the exam. Then the figure went up year by year. In 2009, it soared to 1,050,000, which means the number of people registering for the exam jumped more than ten times in 6 years.

There are two main reasons for this phenomenon. For one thing, compared with other jobs, the position as a civil servant means a "golden bowl" characterized by stability, well-paid salary and sound welfare. For another, with the increased enroll­ment of high education since 1999 in China, along with the recent financial crisis a-round the world, it is more and more difficult for college graduates to find a good job up­on graduation. There is no doubt that a lot of students want to have a bet on their luck.

From my respective, whether taking part in the civil service exam depends on one's own specific situation. Concerning our career goal, more factors should be considered seriously, such as our interest, personality, major, career plan, etc.

16. (2014届高三模拟（一）（南京）)

On October 9, 2012, Malala, a 15-year-old Pakistani girl, was shot in the head by the Taliban on her way home from school. However, the Taliban failed to silence her. After a miraculous recovery, she was committed to fighting for girls' right to education. In honor of her bravery an devotion, the UN declared July 12(her birthday) as Malala Day.

Deeply inspired by the story of Malalas. 1 firmly believe in the significance of education enables people to raise their voices for rights and change the world by calling for more equality. Furthermore, education promotes the development of science and technology as well as more values and world peace. Without education people may become weak fearful and hopeless.

When I reflect on my own experience. I feel grateful I have benefited a lot from my school education. To begin with, 1 have acquired knowledge and skills to prepare myself for the future, addition, school education provides me with opportunities to broaden my horizon and better myself. Finally. I have learned to be a more caring and loving human being.

17. (2014届高三模拟（二）（徐州）)

It is known that honesty plays an important role in our life, which can contribute to our success, and earn us respect from others. Therefore, honesty is of vital importance and bring people benefits.

Dishonesty may bring people short-term benefits. But actually, it will cost them friendship, love, social status or even life. Dishonesty destroys the harmonious relationship between people. What's worse, it even becomes a barrier of the moral development in society.

San Lu Milk Powder Company made a lot of money by dishonest means. But when the scandal was disclosed, not only did the company have to close down, but also some officials concerned were sent to prison.

Personally, we should keep in mind that honesty is the best policy. We should try our best to avoid dishonesty. Only in this way, can we trust each other and have a harmonious society.

18. (2014届高三模拟（三）（南通）)

Come Back to Reality

As is shown in the picture, a woman is sitting in front of the computer and trying to add more friends to her facebook. Just outside the door, some people are eagerly watching her, hoping to make friends with her.

This picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts. They lose themselves in the virtual world and if it continues, they will eventually be cut off from reality. There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting, but that's not the reason for us to go too far. Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet can lead to a disaster, mentally and physically. The real world that we live in is what counts.

As for myself, I'll devote myself to worthwhile things in real life, from making friends to my studies. Only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.

19. (2014届高三模拟（四）（南通、扬州）)

With three generations' efforts of the Ferrero family, Ferrero, a chocolate company, has developed into a world-famous husiness from the then pastry shop through their creativity, hard work and determination.

It's no easy job to start a business. You may not only suffer from hardships hut also run across unexpected risks. You need to deal with all kinds of people and learn many new things through your work, especially when you are green hands in a new field.

What account for one's success in his work include determination and hard work. It also requires of him qualities like honesty, patience and bravery.

As for us students, we all have a dream of our future. After setting a goal of our life, we must devote ourselves to achieving it. No matter what difficulty we meet, just try our best to overcome it. Only in this way can we live our dreams.

20. (高三英语综合练习(35))

请先仔细观察并描述下面的漫画，然后针对这一社会现象写一篇短文, 反映人们对此现象的不同观点并简要陈述自己的观点。

注意：1. 词数150左右；

      2. 开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数；

      3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

What should you do if an old man falls down right under your nose?

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One possible version:

What should you do if an old man falls down right under your nose?

An old man suddenly fell to the ground in a faint just in front of the boy. Many people crowded round but nobody would help the old man up. Most people encouraged the boy to help the man, while some of them thought the boy shouldn't give a hand because he was likely to get himself into trouble since the old man or his family might insist that he knocked down the old man. Even worse, some urged the boy to leave immediately. The boy was troubled by the question as to whether he should help the old man or not.

In my opinion, helping others is a traditional Chinese virtue. We must give a hand to the old and at the same time we must protect ourselves from being involved in trouble.