2009高考英语写作预测系列讲座（四）

电影评论的写作方法

本讲座的写作任务是为杂志写一篇电影评论。首先要介绍这部电影的类型、主要演员、导演等；然后简要介绍这部电影的情节；最后简要评价这部电影，或发表自己的看法。下面我们以电影《天下无贼》为例来探讨一下如何写好电影评论。

写作指导：

一、审题

本文是一篇电影评论。为体现故事的真实性，介绍电影情节时常用一般现在时。

二、列提纲

Outline of the passage:

HEADLINE

Paragraph 1 to introduce the stars and director of the

film.

Paragraph 2 to give a brief description of it.

Paragraph 3 to make a brief review.

三、所涉及到本单元的词汇

drama, masterpiece, moving, entertaining

四、扩充要点,连词成句。

学生习作

A World Without Thieves is ①Chinese action &drama film, which is directed by Feng Xiaogang, a②director of a number of excellent films in China. It has an all-star cast,including Andy Lau,Rene Liu and Ge You.

The story is set mainly on a train. Sha Gen (played by Wang Baoqiang), a lovely village boy working as construction worker, is returning home to get married. He carries his five years of saving③worth ?60,000 with him. Thus, he has attracted the attention of Wang Bo (played by

Andy Lau) and Wang Li (played by Rene Liu), a pair of lovers who are also high④skilled thieves. Wang Bo wants to steal the ?60,000 but Wang Li, moved by Sha Gen's innocence(纯真) , decide⑤ to protect the boy.They begin a fight with a small gang of thieves leading ⑥by Hu Li, also known as Uncle Li (played by Ge You)….

The film is moving and entertaining . Ge You’s humorous lines will make you laugh.

It is a masterpiece. It shows the theme of human goodness and also uncovers humorously the problem of common thievery on public transport in Mainland China. Go and see A World Without Thieves.It will make your heart shocking⑦.

教师点评：

本篇习作以三段式展开，能使读者对这部电影有个清晰的认识，能激发读者的观看欲望。 本文语言流畅，句式多样, 如使用了非限制性定语从句which is directed by Feng Xiaogang. including结构、现在分词做定语working as construction worker；过去分词做定语moved by Sha Gen's innocence(纯真) , also known as Uncle Li (played by Ge You)。在语言的运用上使用了一些较高级的词汇如: a number of; entertaining;masterpiece;shocked等,增加了文章的亮点。当然，文中也存在着一些明显的需要改善的地方，建议修改如下：

①在is后加a。a Chinese action &drama film.

②把a 去掉。在职位、官衔等名词前一般不用冠词。

③把saving改为savings。savings意思为 “积蓄；存款”。

④把high改为highly。highly意思为 “高度地；非常”，表示抽象意义。

⑤把decide改为decides。本句的主语为Wang Li，谓语动词用单数。

⑥把leading改为led 。thieves与lead为被动关系，用过去分词作后置定语。

⑦把shocking改为shocked。shock意思为 “使震惊；使震撼”。 your heart与shock为被动关系。

【范文】

A World Without Thieves is a Chinese action &drama film, who is directed by Feng Xiaogang,

director of a number of excellent films in China. It has an all-star cast,including Andy Lau,Rene Liu and Ge You.

The story is set mainly on a train. Sha Gen (played by Wang Baoqiang), a lovely village boy working as construction worker, is returning home to get married. He carries his five years of

savings worth ?60,000 with him. Thus, he has attracted the attention of Wang Bo (played by Andy Lau) and Wang Li (played by Rene Liu), a pair of lovers who are also highly skilled thieves.

Wang Bo wants to steal the ?60,000 but Wang Li, moved by Sha Gen's innocence(纯真) , decides to protect the boy.They begin a fight with a small gang of thieves led by Hu Li, also known as Uncle Li (played by Ge You)….

The film is moving and entertaining . Ge You’s humorous lines will make you laugh.

It is a masterpiece. It shows the theme of human goodness and also uncovers humorously the problem of common thievery on public transport in Mainland China. Go and see A World Without Thieves.It will make your heart shocked.

巩固写作。

请根据下面的材料, 写一篇介绍电影《夜宴》的短文。

Night Banquet《夜宴》

Stars (Cast ): Ziyi Zhang (章子怡),Daniel Wu(吴彦祖), Xun Zhou(周迅), You Ge(葛优) Director：Xiaogang Feng(冯小刚)

Plot：这部电影取材于莎士比亚（Shakespeare）哈姆雷特《Hamlet》。故事以五代十国 (907-960 AD)为背景，通过争斗、舞蹈和讲故事的方式，讲述了宫廷中人与人之间争权夺利的故事，最后在一次夜宴上他们一个一个地死去。

Rewiew&comments：这是一部历史武打题材的电影。著名演员周迅的精彩表演和精湛的舞蹈技艺给我们留下深刻的印象。冯小刚用激动人心的故事向我们诠释了正义和勇气的含义。这部电影堪称精品，百看不厌。

。 Night Banquet is a history & martial arts film. It is another masterpiece directed by Feng Xiaogang. Ziyi Zhang, Xun Zhou,You Ge ,Daniel Wu star in the film.

The plot of Night Banquet ,which is based on Shakespeare’s Hamlet, is set in ancient China during the Period of Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. Through fighting, dancing and story telling, it tells of a fight for rights and interests in the court between different people. Finally they died off at a night banquet.

Chinese mainland actress Zhou Xun will act the leading role. Zhou Xun's excellent acting, singing and dancing skills impress us deeply. FengXiaogang has used an exciting story to examine the ideas of courage and justice. It is a masterpiece and worh seeing again and again.

 

第二篇：影评

观《麦兜当当伴我心》有感

我们是花花，春天是妈妈，我们是春天的花花〃〃〃

车车车车车车车车，有架车车有架车车，冲向你爸爸、爸爸、爸爸〃〃〃

自从看过《麦兜当当伴我心》后，我的耳边久久回荡着这其中歌曲的旋律，《春田花花》让我感到心中暖暖的、甜甜的，而《车车车》却让我的心有种被猛烈撞击过一样，一种原始的音符透过脚底直达心脏〃〃〃〃〃〃

麦兜又回到了春田花花幼儿园，可是幼儿园却狼狈不堪，孩子们每天只有硬邦邦的糖炒栗子可以吃，却依旧开心地说着：“真好吃！”。学校的四周贴满了欠债还钱的标语，看起来十分落魄，校长十分着急，突然，他想到了一个可能拯救学校的方法—他找来了曾今的学生筹款，花光了所有的积蓄。可是，从幼儿园出来的，都是“草根”，哪会筹到什么款。就在校长认为失败时，却突然有了让小朋友们组建一个合唱队的想法，行就吃龙虾，不行就回老家，于是，春田花花合唱团就此成立了。

麦兜和小朋友们历经了种种困难，终于找到了一个“胶牌”经纪人，于是了他们“买口条”的歌唱生涯。小朋友们一首首可爱又纯洁的歌声传入了喧闹的都市，传入了每个人的心坎，人们被深深的震撼了，感动了。

小朋友的歌声得到了人们的肯定，他们当选了华仔演唱会的童声伴唱，被更多的人肯定。可是，这个世界就是这样的，山寨经纪人卷

走了所有的演出金逃跑了。校长失望之极时，小朋友们获得了最后一次在澳门演出的机会。

演唱会上，小朋友又将车车车演绎了出来，终了，主持人告诉大家有一位伟大的音乐家也是从春田花花毕业的，他感谢那位改变他人生的校长。可是，这个世界就是这样的，音乐家也改变不了幼儿园的命运，春田花花倒闭了，慢吞吞的校长也消失了，麦兜也长大了，也不再有童真与纯洁了。

影片中小朋友的歌声和那些天真纯洁的笑脸给我留下了很深的映象，他反衬出了这个世界的丑恶，其中那个富有的鳄鱼妹妹就成功的反映了这一切。

现在的我们，都还是天真的小麦兜，都歌着春天长大，内心的纯真与童心犹在，不想变成大孩子，不想进入变化莫测的社会。可是，这个世界就是这样的，总会有重重困难与挫折，我们也应追逐着梦想，创造出内心深处的世外桃源。

万般不舍，直言再见，你愿远走，笑掩孤单。逐光芒，未预见，我以奔跑忘不安。荒野之上，孤军奋战，以梦为马，以汗为泉。回头望，路已黯，人在旅途洒泪时。泪满面，因失去而想念。泪已干，感心流交换。终有一旦转弯遇见。沉默一笑抵千金〃〃〃〃〃〃

人在风里，风要去哪里。一路在祈祷，一路继续前进。眼前的道路，你通向哪里。失散的我们，会不会再相聚〃〃〃〃〃〃