2014高考作文解析

20xx年高考英语作文(新课标I卷)：给笔友Peter写封信

20xx年高考英语作文(新课标II卷)：给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，代卖自制中国结

20xx年高考英语作文(北京卷)：第一节 情景作文;第二节 开放作文

20xx年高考英语作文(天津卷)：竞选演讲稿

20xx年高考英语作文(上海卷)：给上海博物馆写封信

20xx年高考英语作文(重庆卷)：给WWF写封信

20xx年高考英语作文(湖北卷)：结合事例写一篇短文

20xx年高考英语作文(江西卷)：报道一次登山活动

20xx年高考英语作文(四川卷)：讨论学习习惯问题

20xx年高考英语作文(山东卷)：暑假计划

20xx年高考英语作文(江苏卷)：Actions Speak Louder than Words

20xx年高考英语作文(浙江卷)：one thing I’m proud of

20xx年高考英语作文(广东卷)：关于移民火星的快讯

20xx年高考英语作文(安徽卷)：On the Way to School

20xx年高考英语作文(辽宁卷)：介绍“中秋节”

20xx年高考英语作文(湖南卷)：根据关键词写一篇英语短文

20xx年高考英语作文(福建卷)：根据漫画写一篇孩子的成长和教育的英语作文

20xx年高考英语作文(陕西卷)：周末帮助家人做家务的周记

从20xx年高考英语作文来看，如果说高考语文作文是一个自由发挥的舞蹈，那么高考英语作文就是带着枷锁在跳舞。因为高考英语作文在内容上命题人已经通过文字、表格、图片这三种形式限定住了，内容方面，不需要学生进行发挥，大家所需要发挥的就是给这个不变的内容不要老去穿毫无变化的校服(简单句)，而要去穿一些不一样的衣服，让它显得不那么单调，让判卷老师能看到不同，这样才能在高考英语作文中得到高分。

误区：不重视逻辑词的使用

有一些学生只是一味地使用逗号，使得整篇文章显得冗长无比。也有的考生在写作时不分段，导致段落过长，甚至一篇文章只有一个段落。这样的文章显得层次不清，让阅卷官难以看出考生对语言的驾驭能力和统领全篇的水平。

对策：一篇好的文章不仅词汇语法高端化，高端化的另一个标志是逻辑词的使用。一篇没有逻辑词的文章就像支离破碎的花瓣，让人没办法看出美感。而有恰当连接词的文章逻辑性强，引着读者继续去看，像一朵玫瑰花一样，好看而实用。写作文有哪些逻辑词?

三类用词：

1.表示方向相反的词和词组：

转折关系：but, yet, however, while, on the contrary, on the other hand, nevertheless, otherwise 让步关系：although, though, despite, in spite of

2.表示方向相同的词和词组：

并列关系：and, as well, both…and, as well as, neither…nor, either…or

递进关系：in addition, besides, moreover, furthermore, above all, worse still, not only…but also, what’s more/worse/better, to make things worse

因果关系：because of, for, so, as, as a result, due to, owing to, thanks to, on account of, therefore 解释关系：for example/instance, that is (to say), in other words, such as, namely

总结关系：in a word, in short, in general, on the whole, to summarize, to conclude, in brief

3.顺序关系词：

时间顺序：at first， to begin with Second, next, then, later，The next moment, after that, since then, shortly after，At last, in the end, finally, eventually

空间关系：on the right, to the left, on one side of,… on the other side, in the middle/center of…, at the foot/ top/end of

大家来看一篇文章：来自20xx年北京卷

Our class intends to do a spring outing. Everyone's opinion differs as for where to spend our spring outing. Some suggested the amusement park while others recommended boating. The rest proposed mountain climbing. After a heated discussion, we reached an agreement: go hiking. Everyone enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the hillside. However, as we reached the top of the mountain, we found wastes and rubbish were thrown everywhere. We picked up the litters and collected them in plastic bags. We put the sorted trash into the recycling and non-recycling bins.

这篇文章几乎没有用到逻辑连接词，就像支离破碎的花瓣，让人没办法看出美感。这篇文章加上逻辑连接词后如下：

Our class intends to do a spring outing. At the very beginning, everyone's opinion differs as for where to spend our spring outing. Some suggested the amusement park while others recommended boating. Still, the rest proposed mountain climbing. Then, after a heated discussion, we finally reached an agreement: go hiking. At first, everyone enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the hillside. Unfortunately, however, as we reached the top of the mountain, we found wastes and rubbish were thrown everywhere. Without any hesitation, we picked up the litters and collected them in plastic bags. Afterwards, we put the sorted trash into the recycling and non-recycling bins at the foot of the mountain.

第二篇文章加上了表示时间和地点的逻辑词，文章内容显得紧凑，有美感，且文章更加完整。所以写作文时，大家有意识地用上合适的逻辑词，作文质量就会提高很多。

20xx年高考英语话题作文范文：建议信

假如你是李明，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：

焦虑症状建议

头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

1．考前制定好合适的复习计划

2．考试期间正常作息

3．睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠

其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；

3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。

参考词汇：头晕—dizzy(adj.)

Dear editor, I’m Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I’m writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ Li Ming

高考英语作文万能句子：开头句型

1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言

2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻，...

3.It can be said with certainty that... 可以肯定地说......

4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的，

5.It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到，...

6.It's generally recognized that... 它普遍认为...

7.It's likely that ... 这可能是因为...

8.It's hardly that... 这是很难的......

9.It's hardly too much to say that... 它几乎没有太多的说…

10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是

11.There's no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是…

13.what's far more important is that... 更重要的是…

高考英语作文万能句子：衔接句型

1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...

2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...

3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述

4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以……

5.But it's a pity that... 但遗憾的是…

6.For all that...对于这一切...... In spite of the fact that...尽管事实......

7.Further, we hold opinion that... 此外，我们坚持认为，...

8.However , the difficulty lies in...然而，困难在于…

9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同样，我们要注意...

10.not(that)...but(that)...不是，而是

11.In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势

12.As has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到的…

13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 从这个角度上我们可以说

高考英语作文万能句子：结尾句型

1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…

2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此，我们有理由相信…

3.All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地说......

4.Therefore, in my opinion, it's more advisable...因此，在我看来，更可取的是…

5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论…

6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是，....

7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论

8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好

高考英语作文万能句子：举例句型

1.Let's take...to illustrate this. 2.let's take the above chart as an example to illustrate this. 3. Here is one more example. 4.Take … for example.

5.The same is true of…. 6.This offers a typical instance of…. 7.We may quote a common example of…. 8.Just think of….

高考英语作文万能句子：常用于引言段的句型

1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。

2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.多年来，……一直被视为……，但今天的情况有很大的不同。

3. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我认为这个论点是正确的，因为…

4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我无法完全同意这一观点的… I believe….

5. My argument for this view goes as follows.我对这个问题的看法如下。

6. Along with the development of…, more and more….随着……的发展，越来越多…

7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….有一个长期运行的辩论，是否…

8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….它通常是认为…

9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.就我而言，我完全同意前者/后者。

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.在给出我的观点之前，我想有必要看看双方的论据。

高考英语作文万能句子：比较和对比的常用句型

1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B. 2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect. 3. A and B differ in…. 4. A differs from B in….

5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in…. 6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B…. 7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B…. 8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B…. 9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different. 10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B…. 11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B…

高考英语作文万能句子：演绎法常用的句型

1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.有几个原因……，但一般，他们可以归结为三个主要的。

2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.有许多因素可能占...，但以下是最典型的。

3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.有很多方法可以解决这个问题，但下面的可能是最有效的。

4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.一般来说，这些优势可以列举如下。

范文 (One possible version)

I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams. Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them. First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams. Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep. (We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)