托福独立写作作文模板

作文模板:

大作文

首段举例:1

Never in human history have we experienced such an overwhelming problem of……(world wide pollution). The controversy largely centers at whether the …… (responsibility of dealing with it should be all on the hand of government). I tend to trust my intuition that…… (whoever pollutes should be cleaning it up) for reasons as follows.

首段举例:2

Never in our modern country have we witnessed such a great emphasis on ……(education of children). What especially concerns us in this issue is whether……(the responsibility of our public finance should focus more on very young children education or on universities).To the extent of my observation, having weighed up both sides, I am inclined to believe that……(the government should pay more attention to the young)for the following reasons.

中间段落结构:

平行段+并列段+让步段

In the first place, one compelling argument is that……

In addition,another indispensable part of my consideration is that……

And of course, I do not intend to create the impression here that……(论点)is all good. However , there is no escaping the fact that……(论点反面)

中间句扩充技巧:(1+2+3+4)

1、 扩展句

2、 因果局

3、 比较句

4、 例证句

1、扩展句:

1) It is truth universally acknowledged that……

2) It is a poor story for our society that ……

3) It is a common belief/sense that……

4) Common sense tells us that……

5) It is generally assumed that ……(我们通常假定)

6) It is always taken for granted that (我们想当然的以为)

7) It is widely accepted that……

2、因果句:

1) because/ because of

2) due to/ thanks to

3) owing to the fact that

4) the reason(结果) is that (原因)

5)A contribute to B = A lead to B

6) B result from A

7) sb. attributes B to A = B is attributed to A

3、比较句:

1)unlike (like)……

2)just as ……,……

3)compared to……,……

4)A is (not)as …… as B

5)A is superior to B; A is inferior to B

4、例证句:

1) 个人经历:personally,

My personal experience tells me that……

2)其他事件:for example;for instance ; A case in point is that

We don’t have to look further than the case of……,to find Support of this idea/ argument.

To illustrate this viewpoint, I can not fink of a better example than……

3)数据调查:we are living in exponential times. According to the statistics,it is predicted that…

Data from a recently conducted survey by a related department

estimated that……

Sometimes,number does number. It is estimated that/ to be ……

(有时,数字不愧是数字,它显示出)

4/让步段材料;

1) however, they overlook one basic fact that

2) a singular example may never lead to any universal truth

3) they only stand on the behalf of the minority

4) they fail to look at the matter in the long run

5) they fail to look at the whole picture

6) Nevertheless, what I need to emphasize here is that most of these issues

can be solved or even prevented with the development of technology.

并列段举例:

In the first place, one compelling argument is that the improvement in modern transportation and accommodation has brought convenience in people’s life. It is common belief that the rapid development of our daily means of transport such as bus, automobile, subway and so on has a significant effect on human life. Owing to the fact, people can save time and take easy way to commute during hour traffic. To illustrate this viewpoint, I can not think of a better example than private cars. Compared with walking on foot, it is

dramatically fast and driving is not as complicated as operating a carriage. The importance of modern technology is clear to us.

In addition,another indispensable part of my consideration is that the efficiency in communication has been greatly improved by the development of technology. It is a truth universally acknowledged that the modern society has a desperate need for efficiency especially in commercial practice or an educational environment. Compared to the past, it took people then one to six months to write letters and made it reach to other end of communication, if the distance was too far away. The present-day society has witnessed the huge amount of time being saved by using computers and E-mails. Sometimes, this can be minimized to as quickly as one second.

And of course, I do not intend to create the impression here that technology is all good. However, there is no escaping the fact that technology also has some disadvantages like wars, pollutions, and the decline of our health. We admit that some modern problems of society are attributed to the application of the bad parts and the mistaken extension beyond our law and humanity. Nevertheless, what I need to emphasize here is that most of these issues can be solved or even prevented with the development of technology. They fail to look at the matter in the long run.

结尾段落:(表态+论述)

1)、转述论点

2)、总结论点

3)、引申结束

In the final analysis, I am still of the firm opinion that……,and sum up the given reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that choosing…… is a rather wise decision if…….

结尾段示例:

In the final analysis, I am still of the firm opinion that it is necessary for college students to work on a part-time job during there college years. And sum up the given reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that choosing part-time job is a rather wise decision if these students pay more attention to their safety problems and try not to be money-obsessed individuals. It is on a whole an optional act to us to work before graduation.

小作文

综合写作:

Introduction:

? Overall, the speaker refutes(反驳) the reading materials argument about___1

主题___ by providing contradictory(反对的)evidence concerning several critical respects (aspects) listed below.

? In summary, the lecture casts serious doubt on the reading passages in the

discussion of whether ___1主题 ____ by questioning the following essential parts of the argument.

Body paragraph 1:

? The speaker begins by pointing out that___2听力反驳的第一个层面___

? While the reading passages maintains that___3阅读的相关内容 ____,this

point is invalidated by the listening material because the speaker argue that___*4听力第一论据 ____

Body paragraph 2:

? Next, the Speaker continues his refutation against the view expressed in the

reading with the aid of the fact that___*5听力材料第二层面___.

? Although ___6阅读相关内容____, the speaker completely disagrees it and

prove that ____*7听力第二论点的论据___.

Body paragraph3:

? In terms of ___8听力第三个层面___, the passage and the lecture reach

nothing but a disagreement.

? Differing from the former which claims that____9阅读相关内容___, the

latter remains a suspicious attitude that___*10 听力第三点论据___.

综合写作例文:

Overall,the speaker refutes the reading materials argument about The School Uniform Policy, by providing contradictory evidence concerning several aspects listed below. In summary, the lecture casts serious doubt on the reading passages in the discussion of whether schools should implement a compulsory School Uniform Policy.

The speaker begins by pointing out that cost and expenses in carrying out this policy. While the reading passage maintains that wearing school uniform is to reduce family’s economic burden, this point is invalidated by the listening material because the speaker argues that school uniform will require additional spending of buying more cloths and they are not very likely to be wore for a long time.

Next, the speaker continues his refutation against the view expressed in the reading with the aid of the fact that it has a negative influence on students’ academic performance. Although this policy tends to reduce transformation and save time in choosing cloths, students show the opposite result and may do harm to individual students taste and freedom.

In terms of the connection between wearing trendy cloths and occurrence of violence events, the passage and the lecture reach nothing but a disagreement. Differing from the former which claims that to wear personal and fashionable clothes may incur violence in school environments, the latter remains a

suspicious attitude that this approach is far from effective and suggests that alternative methods such as being kind, walking with company and so on.

口语:

第一题:personal preference

What:观点表达句+比较级

According to my understanding,the greatest leader of all times was Mahatma Gandhi . and I have several reasons for that.

Why:to begin with,——,for example,——

Besides,——,simply because,——

So,——

替换:I think/ believe/ suppose / guess/ bet

In my opinion/ I assume that

According to my understanding

As far as I am concerned

I hold the opinion that

I am under the impression that

I got the feeling that

并列结构:

To begin with; Also,personally speaking

For one thing; nevertheless,I believe that

First and foremost; in addition

For one thing; in the second place,

First; That,however,……

Like & Dislike:

My favorite ……is

I love/ enjoy/ have a fancy for/ have a great affection for

I care for/ do fancy for

I find my self addicted to

I absolutely am into/ crazy about

I am a (mobile) nut/ a big fun

Sth. Entertains/ relaxes/ amuses/ recreates me more than anyting else in

the world.

Sth. kills most of my spare time

sth. is my most effective time killer/ pain killer

Reasons & Examples:

Why this is my favorite? One reason is that……

Couple of reasons for that

And I have several reasons for that.

GE & SE

I like all kinds of music, including jazz, blues, and classical.

I like music especially classical ones, well, Mozart for example.

人物卡:

Well, as far as I am concerned, X is the most helpful teacher to me, and I have two main reasons for that. To begin with,he is really concerned about all the students in his class. For example, he would meet with me and other students after class to make sure that we understand his lessons. Also, personally speaking, he is of great help to those ambitious students who were eager to attend the foreign universities fill out their applications and edit their personal statement till very late.

Well, to be honest, I got the felling that good parents all distinguished themselves in treating their child patiently with an open mind. For one thing, it often takes many efforts to teach their kid about good and bad. Sometimes when kid gets very radical the parents needs to be patient enough to bring him or her back to the track. In addition a good parent also needs to be supportive enough when the child raises a reasonable request. If the kids are in trouble they should trust the kids to make their own decisions, like how to spend their pocket money or which study group to join. Only such parent can one make a good parent.

Well, according to my understanding, Lance Armstrong is my most admirable role model for several reasons. First and foremost, he is a cyclist who has won the Tour de France seven times in a row. That, however, is not the only reason I respected this man. He also battled the cancer. When I heard his story, it changed my life. Lance Armstrong inspired me to never give up my dream of going to the Olympics, even though it may seem impossible. All in all, his qualities of endurance and perseverance compelled me to become a better athlete and a stringer person.

物品卡:

In my opinion, the most distinctive thing in my daily life is my cell phone, because it has amazingly changed my life in two main aspects. To begin with, it helps me communicate with the world around me. For example, by using my cell phone, I could keep in touch with my friends, family members, classmates, you know, everyone! And even in dangerous situations, it could even save my life. I will just have to make a call telling others that I am in danger. More importantly, if I have to say, it’s also a great entertainment. When I get bored, it’s a music box, because my favorite MP3 music and MP4 movie-clips within my cell will easily cheer me up.

Well, without doubt, I’d like to say comedy amuses me most and I have a couple of reasons. First and foremost, it’s so relaxing. Whenever I want to watch a movie, more often than not, I’m looking for something fun, something that

relieves my tiredness or sadness. A comedy fits my demand perfectly, as it’s nothing doctrine to teach seriously unlike documentaries, or tragedies or tear-jerkers and so on. Besides, Zhou Xing chi is the most famous and welcome joking star in my country, for 2 years I only focus on his shows, comedies of course. That’s why I really into all sorts of comedies, since they make me laugh every time and forget myself.

I think computer is the most important invention in the recent 100 years for the following reasons. For one thing, computer connects the whole world as closely as possible so that different people can share information and communicate with each other by new methods, such as MSN, QQ, and E-mail. In addition, computer has also pushed the increasing trends of science and technology, based on their amazing calculating ability has been applied in the most high-tech fields, many software are developed to help research in other disciplines.

事件卡

Well, in my opinion, my 20th birthday, my first surprising party held by my friends, surprised me most, and I have 2 main reasons for that. First of all, I was amazed by the definition of true friendship as some of my old friends traveling 2 hours by airplane coming to celebrate my birthday, who attacked me dramatically with a birthday cake. Another thing that was surprising and touching to me was that they took a photo of me which made the whole occasion unforgettable. Finally, they sang a birthday song for me according to western tradition, which is totally beyond my expectation.

I got the feeling that just as people in western countries do, we Chinese hold Spring Festival to celebrate our lunar new year, which is the biggest event for each family as well as the whole nation. First, on the eve there usually is a big family reunion, and all families from all over China will be sitting around the same table, feasting, toasting and chitchatting. At 12 o’clock, we set off fire works and let our crackers in order to celebrate the coming of New Year. And after that, we visit our friends and relations to send our best wishes.

地方卡

Well, as far as I am concerned, a forest would be my dream land for residence, and I have two main reasons for that. First of all, it is a fantastic way of embracing the great nature. If I got a chance, I would choose to build a splendid garden with whole lot of flowers, which will relieve me from strains burden. Besides, the tropical weather that I will enjoy is a perfect natural environment. For example, I don’t have to worry about the off-gas from automobiles, nor dazzling reflection of sun light from modern skyscrapers at all.

Well, I hold the opinion that living in a modern apartment with large rooms

would be a wise decision, and I have two main reasons for that. First, I could always feel relaxed inside, since it has high ceilings and only a few pieces of modern furniture so it would feel more spacious than ever. Besides, I am also crazy about all the big picture windows that I could throw open in summer, so that the whole place would be light and airy. And so my room like that will really lift my spirits whenever I feel down or upset.

第二题;paired choice

二选一题:A or B ——prefer

A or 非A —— agree or disagree

模板1:

Well, in such a dilemma, I believe __A__ is definitely a better choice in contrast with ___B__. And I have two main reasons for that.

First of all, I believe that……, for example

What’s more, I insist that__A1好__,simply because

(on the other hand, __B1不好___, obviously, if not___)

So,if I have to choose,I think A is apparently a better one。

模板2:

Well,in such a dilemma , I firmly / strongly agree or disagree with those people who think that……,and I have two main reasons for that.

To begin with, one reason is that……,for example

Besides,……, I myself for instance

All in all, to make a long story short, I agree/disagree with the point.

例子:

In general,I think that young generation like us lead a tougher life than our parents, spiritually, especially. For one thing, the emotion connection among people is weakened, as we depend mostly on the internet which in fact isolated one from another. In addition, we don’t have that much ballgame like our old men did at all, such as football and basketball. On the other hand, it seems that everyone I know is so devoting on the net games, and they are busy fighting, chatting, and even gambling all in a visual world.

Well, in such a dilemma, I believe sharing a dorm with other students is definitely a better choice, and personally, I have 2 main reasons for that. First of all, I insist that it’s the best way of getting to know someone new and interesting. What’s more, I believe that living on campus familiarizes students with their study lives, and especially helps the freshmen to get used to the school facilities, such as library, student center, and study lounge.

Well, in my opinion, I definitely disagree that people should always tell the truth, because lying is necessary sometimes. For one thing, we should and some

times must tell some white lies that prevent other’s felling from being hurt, even though they both know it can’t be true. In addition, in business or politics, people use lies or bluffs as a negotiation strategy to win more benefit for their side. Such lies are also acceptable for the good of the benefit of the whole nation. So, I strongly believe that not telling the truth is ok and even helpful occasionally, when it is necessary.

第三题:campus

Reading、listening、speaking—— 60’

态度(for & against);体型(A or B & A or 非A)

方法:快速记下标题;整理阅读中的第一个句子,形成自己的句子;快速搜寻

reasons、options、choices 等字眼,确定文章类型;快速记下理由或选择,答案在听力中听

模板1:

Well, according to the notice, the man disagrees with sb. about_

____for several reasons.

First of all, the man believes that_____

Besides, he holds the opinion that_____

So, he disagrees with the proposal firmly for the given reasons.

模板2:

Well, according to the notice, the university is to ……,and the

students are encouraged to vote on two options. The man chooses the

option 1 for the following reasons.

For one thing is that___

Besides, he holds the opinion that___

So, the man takes a choice like this

第四题,academic

Reading + listening + speaking—— 60’

做题方法; 阅读文章——General (定义+结构)

听力材料——Specific( cases 只有两个)

基本思路:what + why = what 1+ why 1 & what 2 + why 2

模板:

Well,according to the listening material, the lecture is about __核心概念___, and the professor offered 2 examples, the__例子1__ and the ___例子2___. In the first example, __what 1___ , for the reasons that ___why 1___

In the second example, ___what 2____, for the reasons that __why 2____ So,_____

题型五:先听在说 60’ 策略类

Well, according to the lecture, the woman has a problem that……. And the man offers two solutions for helping the woman, first one is……,and the second one is……. If I were the woman, I might as well do……,because……. So , as far as I am concerned, why not……

第六题:summary

听力材料(what + why)a single topic

模板:

Well, according to the listening material, the lecture is about___, and the professor offered 2 main reasons for that____

Firstly, the professor makes the point that __ what 1+ why 1___

In addition, the professor points out that ___what 2 ____ and the reasons ___ why2____

So ___

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