一、根据左面六幅图画，写一篇题目为“An Interesting Book”的小故事，词数约120。

提示：1．画中人物：Mr. and Mrs. Smith；他们的儿子Mike。
    2．故事的开头是：It was dinner time…
          3．题目与故事的第一句话不计算入总词数内。

It was dinner time．Mr. and Mrs. Smith were about to begin their dinner when they found that their son, Mike, wasn’t there yet．So Mrs. Smith asked her husband to go and find him．Mr.Smith went to Mike’s room and found Mike lying on his face on the floor, reading a book．He was laughing! Mr. Smith told him to go for dinner, and he left quite unwillingly．Wondering what absorbed his son so much, Mr. Smith took a look at the book．Now Mrs. Smith and Mike were at the table, waiting for Mr. Smith．She got quite impatient and sent her son for his father．Mike went back to his room．To his great surprise, he saw his father lying on the floor, reading the same story book of his!

二、

课外活动：

after-class activities
演讲比赛：
speech contest

Hi everyone,
   It's so nice to see all of you here. I'm John Smith and I come from America.
   I have been studying in this school since September 2000, and I have joined in quite a few very popular and unforgettable after-class activities.
   The school often holds the English Corner, in which the students practise their spoken English. I have learned a lot more about China by talking with my Chinese schoolmates. On New Year's Eve we have a New Year party with wonderful performances of singing and dancing. In March, the school organized a tree-planting activity in the countryside. Recently many students have taken an active part in the English Speech Contest. All these activities have had a good effect on the training of the students' abilities, so they are warmly welcomed by the students.
    Thank you

三、下面图画描述的是发生在学校办公楼的一件事。请为学校黑板报用英语写一篇短文，介绍此事。

注意：短文要包括图画所表现的主要内容，词数100左右。

One day, Mr. Li was reading a book in his office after school when a ball broke the window and flew in. Mr. Li was greatly shocked when the ball hit him on the head. He took the ball and came downstairs to see who threw the ball. He met a little boy at the doorway and the boy said it was he who had thrown it. The boy said sorry to Mr. Li and Mr. Li praised the boy for his honesty. Mr. Li told the boy to be more careful next time. The boy thanked him for his kindness and said goodbye to him, running away with the ball

四、你的朋友首次来该城镇。仔细观察下图，用英语写一篇短文，向他介绍城里最热闹的街道并告诉他从火车站怎样到达这条街。（第一句话已给出）
     I would like to make some recommendations to make your first visit to our town a pleasant one

I would like to make some recommendations to make your first visit to our town a pleasant one. The busiest street in our town is Prospect Avenue. There are many things to do and see on this street. First, you could visit the Art Museum, where an art show is going on. Directly across the street from the Art Museum is the Library. If you would like to buy some books you could cross Third Street and go to the Book Store. It is on the south side of Prospect Avenue.  From there, if you would like a snack, you have several choices. Continuing west on Prospect Avenue you could visit the Ice Cream Shop, the Bakery, or the Candy Store. Finally, cross Second Street and enjoy all the unusual animals at the Pet Store. 

   To find Prospect Avenue from the train station, turn left on Fourth Street and head south. It is just two blocks to the entrance of the Art Museum. I hope you will enjoy your visit!

五、John和你(李兵)是同班同学,他住在你们学校(二中)。你到他的住处请他参加明天下午王红同学的生日聚会,碰巧他不在。请你用英语给他留个条子, 邀请他参加, 并告诉他王红家的路线。(参看下图)第一句话已给出。
注意:

 1)地点:图中标□处是王红家。

 2)聚会内容:唱歌、跳舞、吃蛋糕。

 3)短文要包括提示中的内容要点,并注意格式。

Dear John,

I came to see you but you were out.           
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参考范文：

Dear John,

I came to see you but you were out. Tomorrow is Wang Hong's birthday. We'll have a party at Wang Hong's tomorrow afternoon. We'll dance, sing and we'll also have a big cake. We would be very happy if you can come.

Wang Hong's home is not far from our school. If you come, you may go straight along the People's Road, then turn right at the Happy Road, then go across the Sunshine Road. And you'll find a cinema on the left. Wang Hong's home is just beside it. Hope to see you at the party.

Yours,
Li Bing

 

第二篇：初中英语作文病句和错句修改范例

初中英语作文病句和错句修改范例

下面的英语句子不是病句就是错句. 让我们用锐利的眼睛, 一起来找茬吧.

1. We have computer class one week a time.

2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.

3. There have 100 books.

4. I study there very happy.

5. I usually swimming there.

6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.

7. Several hours after, he was surprised.

8. He had to asked the other one.

9. He thought he speak well.

10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .

11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.

12. This film is very good-looking .

13. It is very good to family look.

14. I think we can’t live Internet.

15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.

16. I have a future dream.

17. It can help me to walk on my life road.

18. I think everything must be change a lot.

19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.

20. But I singing not very well.

21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.

22. Almost students use the computer not study.

23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.

24. When I was very small.

下面我们来看看要怎么改正吧.

1. I have computer class once a week.

英语中表达频率次数时:一次 once, 两次 twice 从三次开始用 three times ...

2. Going into my school, you can see many flowers.

这里使用动名词going做主语, go 这个动作由后面的you 发出.

3. There are 100 books.

表示某个地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型.

4. I study there very happily.

Study 是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词happy.

5. I usually swim there.

-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.

6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.

这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题.

如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:

By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall.

7. Several hours later, he was surprised.

使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.

8. He had to ask the other one.

“Have to do something” 是固定用法 ,不定式后用动词原形.

9. He thought he spoke well.

这个句子属于语法时态的不一致.

10. Mr. Li is from Beijing .

一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词..

11. He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese.

首先要区分hard 和 hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别. He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He

hardly works. 他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大. 其次,be 动词后面不能使用副词.

12. This film is very interesting.

这是一个完全中文式的英语句子. good-looking 一般用来形容人物的.

13. It is fit for family to enjoy.

又是一个中文式的句子,

14. I think we can’t live Internet.

学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.不改变原意的基础上,我们修改为:

I think we can’t rely on Internet.

15. Most people use the net to send the mails.

这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译.

16. I have a dream about future..

Future 在这里不可以直接修饰dream.

17. It can help me to walk on my life ‘s journey.

“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。

18. I think everything keeps on changing.不细心看这个句子,我完全不了解他想表达什么.但从上下文来推测,我想他想表达世事在变化的意思.

19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do.

宾语从句要使用正常语序.

20. But I don’t sing very well.动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用..一般现在时的句子表否定,如果是实意动词需要有do来帮忙.

21. Tom’s mum didn’t care about him.Care 是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。

22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study. 一个句子中间只能有一个谓语动词。

23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.

这是一个中文式表达的句子，按照上下文来看，我们修改为：

Most of people like sending mail in the internet.

24. When I was a little child.

Small 用来形容人的体型和物品体积。这里要表达的“小孩子”的意思。

从学生在作文中写的英语病句，错句来看，很多时候都用中文的思维来写英语句子。针对这种情况，我们建议学生要多看文章，看地道的英语文章，同时多多储备优美的英语表达句子，这样才能做到拿起笔时，心中有数，肚里有货，才不会生硬翻译句子而弄出笑话了。