写作
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一、 结构篇
1、开头
Sample one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一,agree or disagree,除了个别);
On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景),XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ However, people (universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:题目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “编____”I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要). 要做的:想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目
Sample two:(如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time,就用下面的)
On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景))/ On account of …,XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for 背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However,when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whetherpeople get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that以下最后决定怎样写:Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3).
要做的:想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)
2、分点一:分层论证
Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from
_______ is that__________/ First and foremost,
On one hand_________, On the other hand_________
Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.
这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节,重点是要用一些精华句子!
3、分点二:举例论证
Further lending credence to my position is that____________ (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________,…..(例子见后面)
一句话总结例子:As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样
4、让步段:
Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments. For instance, _______ However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./
二选一:Admittedly,BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____(字数不够就多讲点) However,Compared with AA, (which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面, )it pales.
5、结尾段:
Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不够了用), I reinforce my stand point that Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________; only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;
and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______
Or It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)
二、 语言篇
1、 基本句型
? 因果
On account of/owing to/due to+ N
For the reason that/as/since+句子
It is due to____that
eg:It is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.(强调句)
derive/arise/stem from来源于
eg:His success derives from his persistence and perseverance. ascribe A to B 归结于
eg: His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverance
? 条件
A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success)
If/on condition that/provided that/as long as________
? 让步
Despite the fact that/regardless of
2、 经典句型
? 倒装
1) Only via(by/through /with/when/after) __do/did/can we__ ef: Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know
about American typical type of spending leisure time.
2) Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can__ of
3) So +adj+主谓倒装+that__
4) Not only 主谓倒装 but also...
eg: Not only should education prepare children to compete
Not only do people care their economic needs,they but also want to meet their spiritual needs.
5) On no account 主谓倒装(决不....)
? 强调
It is/was....that/who(m)....
? 插入语
1) 限定性副词 probably/directly or indirectly/to some(a large) extent
2) N+,ving,+v
3) 同位语
3、经典中的经典
? 排比
1) It is tourism that gives me the opportunity to know the culture of this dynamic, robust and alive country.
2) It is computers that make our life diverse,convenient,dynamic/ vibrant, without which our life would probably pale.
3) A/which needs to be/In this way, A can be readily accepted, respected,appreciated and advocated.
4) Only via university education can we have systematic knowledge concerning arts and science.Only via university education can we know the essence of symbiosis and collaboration. And Only via university education can we meet the demands of society and make our future success inevitable.
? 十大副词
1) Considerably
2) Invariably
3) Undoubtedly/indisputably/incontrovertibly
4) Increasingly
5) Most/exceedingly/exceptionally 格外地
6) Insightfully 富有见底地
7) Regrettably
8) Effectively and efficiently
9) Gradually and eventually
10) Readily
? 其他
1) It is not difficult for us to imagine that 不难想象
2) B makes it possible for us to have an universal access to A/A is readily available. A容易得到
3) In order to survive and thrive in this fiercely competitive society, people have no choice but to work and study hard. 4) Ruthless and relentless无形/fierce and intense competition
The ruthless and relentless competition imposes an unprecedented pressure on each and every individual, and therefore, there is no exaggeration to say that our innovative
and inventive ability can lay a solid foundation for our future, enabling us to survive and thrive in the modern world.
5) Inspiration, aspiration and perspiration
6) Vision,passion and mission
7) 其他词语见最后清单p120
三、论证篇(详见讲义)
1、模糊论证
Range from...(其他见讲义)
2、举例论证
? 自己的例子
I can think of no better illustration than the example of my own visit to Singapore. Only after going shopping on Orchard road, the main shopping district in Singapore,did I realize what "a paradise for shopping"really was. Only after roaming in the City Hall,the financial center of Singapore, did I experience the quick pace of modern life. Only after lying on the beach of Sentosa did I know about the Singaporean typical way of spending leisure time.
? 名人的例子(Yu Minghong,。。。)
? 社会的例子
For example, on account of the advent of the technologically advanced society, employers tend to hire people equipped with a
wide range of knowledge rather than the ones with limited knowledge.
? 瞎编的例子
3、数据论证
I can think of no better illustration than the statistic. Experts from the Department of Sociology in Peking University pointed out that the average sleeping time an adult has everyday, compared with 8 hours in the 1970s, has decreased to 6.8 hours due to the busy work and study.
4、引用论证(开头)
5、假想论证
Imagine/visualize/picture/suppose ....
四、思路篇
怎么好写怎么来~
详见讲义
新托福独立写作模板十四套
这14套模板是为即将考托、又没时间自己写模板的朋友准备的。毕竟,网上的模板有太多人借鉴,如果有时间的话,还是建议自己写模板,不会和别人的发生重复,而且自己写的模板,容易记住,用起来也得心应手。
模板一 A or B
Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________. 就理由进行解释_____________________. For instance,____________________
Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________. 就理由进行解释___________________. For example,____________________ The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________ Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.
In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.
模板二 A or B
将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity of _________is that___________________ The second reason can be seen by every person that________. In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.
There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.
In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.
模板三 单一命题式
The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for __________is that____________. Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________. Furthermore, ______________. In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.
模板四 agree or disagree
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a
_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.
What is more, some students are interested in____________. In a word, ________________.
模板五 A or B
Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is
that________________. Take ___________as example, ______________.
There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as________________. Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________. (examples:___________).
From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.
模板六 Agree or disagree
Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.
One of the primary causes is that_______________________.
Examples_______________. But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Examples.
What is more_______________. Examples___________
General speaking, __________. Recognizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.
模板七 A or B
In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For
example,___________________
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________
It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.
In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.
模板八 A or B
When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.
We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.
Also, ________________________.
This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________. Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.
模板九 A or B
When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than
B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________. Naturally ___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.
A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________. Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B的1-2优点___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.
模板十 A or B
____________改写并复述题目____________. There may be by one or two
disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to ____________is that ______________.For instance, ____________. Another drawback to
_____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________. Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________. For example_____________.
Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________. For example, _________________.
In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.
模板十一 A or B
____________改写并复述题目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here
One of the primary cause is that_______________________.
What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________. Furthermore, ________________________.
Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to
_________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________. _______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that___________________.
模板十二 A or B
____________改写并复述题目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________. Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________. The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.
In a word, ___________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.
模板十三 A or B
From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that ________________.
There is another factor that deserves some words here. In a word,
________________________. While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.
模板十四 agree or disagree
Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that________________.
In a word,_________________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.
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