大学英语对比型作文

20xx年6月18日四级考试作文真题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1. 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚

2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题

3. 我的建议

Online Shopping

Nowadays, with the rapid development of information technology, online shopping has gained great popularity among more and more web users. (topic)For example, it is fashionable for youngsters to purchase daily essentials, such as books, clothes, electrical equipment, on some famous website, like Taobao, EBay and Alibaba.

Undoubtedly speaking, online shopping has many advantages. (topic1)To start with, compared with traditional shopping, it’s very convenient. What you need to do is just clicking your mouse and waiting instead of going out by foot or driving. Furthermore, more choices than real store are another attraction to customers. However, in spite of convenience and more choices of online shopping, we cannot turn a blind eye to its disadvantages. (topic2)Obviously, quality problem is its first disadvantage. It’s common that articles aren’t so good just as they are described online that customers always buy fake commodities. In addition, it’s troublesome and annoying for many customers to make a change when they are not satisfied with what they bought online.

As a college student, I like online shopping but I expected that effective measures should be taken to make it better. (topic)Specifically speaking, government should work out strict regulations and rules to prevent unfaithful and unlawful activities of online shop owners. Only by this way can online shopping become really safe and attract an increasing number of customers.

20xx年6月英语四级真题

Recreational activities

提纲

1. 娱乐活动多种多样

2. 娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性

3. 作为大学生我的看法

Recreational Activity

In people's daily life, there are various recreational activities apart from studying or working ranging from Karaoke or dancing to computer games or sports games.

Recently, we may hear quite different opinions about the benefits of recreational activities. Most people take it for granted that such activities are beneficial. they are harmful to us if undertaken inappropriately. recreational activities can help us not only build our body and mind but also improve our communication and understanding with friends because most of these activities are done with others. Nevertheless, the objectors think we should not spend too much time on singing, dancing or other games. They argue that with too many recreational activities, we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying our working, which in turn may lead to further consequences. (topic),we should make full use of the benefits of recreational recreational activities should be done within a certain limit to avoid its disadvantages. we should keep a proper balance between recreation and studying or working life.

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第二篇:大学英语四级写作专项练习(比较对照型)

大学英语四级写作专项练习(一)

比较对照、选择型

1. 定义:对比选择型文章,要求考生就题目中提到的某一事物或社会现象给出两个对立的观点,然后将两种观点进行对比,并表明自己的看法和立场,或做出选择。所提出的两种观点有时并没有对错之分,有时也可以根据常识判断出某一观点错误或者不成立。

2. 写作步骤:

大学英语四级写作专项练习比较对照型

3. 对比选择型作文模版

模板一

1) There is no complete agreement among people as to _____. 2) Some people consider that _____. 3) However, others think that _____.

4) Some people contend that _____. 5) They hold this opinion because _____. 6) However, others who stand on a different ground believe that _____. 7) They argue that _____.

8) Personally, I prefer the former/latter opinion/choice. 9) Firstly, _____. 10) Secondly, ____. 11) Most important of all, _____. 12) Taking the above-mentioned into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that_____.

模板二

1) When asked about / When it comes to _____, different people will offer different opinions. 2) Some people take it for granted that _____. 3) In their opinion, _____. 4) Besides, _____.

5) By contrast, others hold that _____. 6) They maintain that _____. 7) And _____.

8) Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the first opinion/choice. 9) For one thing/ On the one hand, _____ 10) For another / On the other hand, _____. 11) For instance, _____. 12) Therefore, as stated above, _____.

练习篇 (第一次四级模拟考试)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资,而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是更重要的

2)阐述他们各自的考虑

3)表明你的看法

【行文思路】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的选择,提纲第2点要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由,提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点:注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。

【背诵范文】

High Salaries or Career Development?

There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.

[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. [3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.

[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later. In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.

【点评】

[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。

[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。

[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。

[4]“因为缺钱”。

[5]强调句型,此处是强调句子的主语。

[6]while引导比较状语从句,意为“然而”。

[7]“一般来说”。

[8]“选择”。

【句式练习】

1.佳句:Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.

临摹:近些年来,越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。

___________________________________________________________________________.

2.佳句:However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.

临摹:然而,持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献,因此应该得到特殊待遇。

___________________________________________________________________________.

3.佳句:Career may give us long term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.

临摹:我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固,而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。

___________________________________________________________________________. 【KEY】

1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.

2. However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.

3. The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.

练习篇

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Machine Translation and Human Translation. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)现在诸多的电子辞典及相关翻译软件被开发出来,人们不再需要翻阅厚重的字典;

2)有人认为以后机器翻译会完全取代人工翻译;

3)你是否同意这种观点,为什么?

【思路点拨】

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种新兴事物,提纲第2点针对该事物提出一种有争议的观点,提纲第3点要求表明“我”是否同意这种观点,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述电子辞典和翻译软件的使用现状,引出机器翻译会代替人工翻译的观点;表明“我”对这一观点的态度并说明理由;总结“我”的观点,提出建议。

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