谋篇布局

1． 仔细审题，确定体裁格式，选择文章主体时态，弄清中心人称。 除第一段对事实一个表述以外，都用一般现在时。

中心人称应为他们—they认为我们应该。。。我们会学得更好。。。

2． 构思---文章结构

正反观点对比类的文章: 开头：提出问题

主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由 结尾：说明自己观点

3． 选择合适的短语与句型表达论点与论据。

表示不同观点的套语

v总起:

Different people hold different opinions.

Opinions are divided.

People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards … People have different opinions on this problem.

People take different views on this question.

v表达不同观点:

…of them hold the opinion that …

…of them are in favor of the idea that…

People who are for/against the idea think …

The majority of the students are against the idea, arguing/holding the view that…

Some people believe that…. Others argue that …

v不同观点之间的衔接:

however, …of them hold a different view. / …of them hold the opposite opinion.

people who are against it don’t think so.

however, each coin has two sides.

different from those…., …people think ….

on the other hand, … people object that ….

v并列关系：and, as well as, also… v 递进关系：besides, in addition, moreover, what’s more…

v比较、对比：like, unlike, on the contrary, on the other hand

4． 利用所列短语、句型组句成文，打好草稿。要避免出现汉语式的表达，根据自己所掌握的词汇，在比较有把握的情况下可以大胆使用较高级词汇，使文章增色。

5． 将草稿写到卷面上并再次审视文章结构。

6． 最后做一次全面检查，注意文章的文体、格式是否正确，要点是否全面，是否有明显的语法错误和低级的失误，是否有单词拼写错误，字母大小写是不是恰当，词数是否符合要求。 注意：

1. 书写要尽量避免涂改，保持卷面清洁，酌情加扣分

2. 分段，首字母要缩进4-5字符。

3. 条理要清晰，思维不要跳跃，

4. 句子不要让老师一下看不懂，要避免用很长的长句，容易出错。

Some students stick to the opinion that we should bring a

cell phone to school, arguing that it is more convenient as they can make phone calls whenever they want. Meanwhile, they can use it as a dictionary or a calculator, from which students can benefit a lot. What is more attractive is that they can use it to listen to the radio or even watch the movie they like to relax themselves.

However, there are still a majority of students holding the opposite ideas. Their reasons are listed as follows: First and foremost, by having a phone at hand, they will make too many calls, which is a waste of time and money. Besides, the ring of a call can be disturbing. What worries them most is that some students may surf the internet by

a smart phone, reading something harmful.

As for me/ as far as I am concerned/ Personally/in my opinion/from my point of view, the problem is not whether or not to bring a mobile phone to school but how to make proper use of it. If a student can use a mobile phone wisely, he can certainly bring it anywhere as he likes.

1. However, there are many students arguing against it. (ying shan)

2. The school and family shouldn’t put too much emphasis on study or expect too much of us.

3. Judging from all the evidence above, we can safely arrive at the conclusion that our school should …(zhang junbei)

4. And we can solve the problems we can’t work out by means of turning to our teachers for help or exchanging different ideas with each other in class. (Liu)

5. However the students who object to the idea hold the view that we deserve a good rest in the summer holidays. As is often the case, the students may have their own arrangements for their holiday. (Zhao shuai)

6. It is indisputable that we can learn more by means of studying at school during the holiday and

it contributes to our grades. (tian yichuan)

7. On no account can we ignore the importance of teachers.

8. What’s more, it offers easier access to getting the teachers’ help, which can make a real difference. (zhang zhennan)

9. Having studied for such a long time, not only their body but also their mind is in desperate need of a good rest.

10. There’s no denying that a good physical state and a clear mind are the solid foundation for further study.(Ye lingxia)

11. We shouldn’t fail to take into account the fact that a strong body is the solid foundation for our study. (li Huixuan)

12. Personally, I think it is of vital importance that we alternate work and rest/balance between work and rest, for as the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

13. The majority are against it in an attempt to get a good rest. (Zhou Luyao)

14. In my eyes, we shouldn’t attach too much importance to the student’s grades and overlook their health.

15. There is no doubt that our life is far more than study. ( xu Yajie)

16. It is foolish to neglect the rest time in order to pursue the improvement in marks. (Zhang mianjing)

对比选择型作文模板：

Recently, we have had a heated discussion about whether (主题) should be … Some people tend to think that…(观点一) They point out that…(理由一) Additionally, (理由二)…

On the contrary, other people hold the view that …(观点二) They argue that … (理由一) What’s more, …(理由二) …

As far as I am concerned, I think … (我的观点) The reason is that … (理由一)

强调套死句型，只要符合某一模板，一定紧扣模板句型作文，不要过多引申个。

 

第二篇：英语对比论述行作文框架

对比论述型作文

对比论述型作文多为提纲式作文，议论文题材。这类作文是以考生面临的两种选择为主题，最终以考生本人的选择和态度归结全文。如果考生对选择的态度是明确的，即二者选其一，那么考生分别阐述两种不同的观点的时候应有自己的主观倾向性。比如：对赞成事物的优点要详写，缺点要略写；对反对的事物则反之，从而使自己的论点得以实现。如果考生的态度是不明确的，即两者各有利弊，那么就不应该完全肯定某一个事物，也不应该彻底否认另一个事物。如果个人看法与文章前面列举的某种观点相同或相似并且需要论述理由时，考生要避免简单地重复前面提到的论据。

这类题型的基本模式是：

第一部分：引言。阐述标题中涉及的现象并且提出问题。

第二部分：第一种选择。第一种选择及其理由或者优缺点；（这一部分除了可以独立成段外，也可以与第一部分合为一段，或是与第三部分合为一段。

第三部分：第二种选择。可以考虑用对照关联词引出第二种选择及其理由或者优缺点。 第四部分：考生自己的选择。综合前面的分析，表明自己的态度或做法，并且简述选择的理由。

常用的英文模板有以下四种：

对比论述型模板一(重要)

1 When it comes to _____________, people’s opinions differ(different people have different opinions). 2 Many people believe(hold the view) that ________________. 3 For one thing, ______________. 4 For the other thing, ________.

5 However, some people take a different attitude. 6 They regard that ___________. 7 In their views, ____________________. 8 Furthermore, ____________________.

9 As far as I am concerned, _________________. 10 On one hand, _____________.11 On the other hand, _______________. 12 So _______________.

填充内容：1.文章主题2.一些人的观点3.理由一4.理由二 5. 另一些人反对 6. 另一些人的观点 7. 理由一 8. 理由二 9. 作者自己的观点、看法10. 观点一 11. 观点二 12. 总结上文

对比论述型模板二

① When asked _____________________, people have different opinions.②Many people believe that _____________________.③On the one hand,___________.④on the other hand, ____________________. ⑤ All these point to the indispensability of _________________.

⑥Howevt_____.⑦As far as they are concerned, _________________. ⑧Moreover,______________________.

⑨As for me, ___________.⑩Because _____________________.11 What’s more,

________________.12 Therefore, _________________.

in one’s opinion / from one’s point of view / in one’s eyes / as far as … be concerned 填充内容：1.文章主题2.一些人的观点3.理由一4.理由二5.主题词6.另外一些人的观点 8. 理由一 9. 理由二9 作者自己的观点、看法10. 论点一 11. 论点二 12. 总结全文

对比论述型模板三

1 There is no consensus of opinions among people as to _______________.2.Some people who are in favor of the idea of _____________hold that ___________. 3 For one thing, ____________. For another,________________.5. Therefore,__________.

6.However, those who insist on _______________ argue that _______________.7.In their opinion, ________________.8.In addition, _____________________. 9 Thus_____________________. 10 In my viewpoint, __________________.11 That is to say,_____________.12 In a word, _____________________________.

填充内容：1.文章主题2.一些人的观点3.理由一4.理由二5.总结上文6.另外一些人的观点 8. 理由一 9.总结上文10. 作者自己的观点、看法 11. 进一步解释说明作者的观点 12. 总结全文

对比论述型模板四

1 There is a heated debate over _____________. 2 It is commonly accepted that _____________. 3 In contrast, others think _____________.

4 Those who hold the first opinion suggest that __________.5 In their view, _______________. 6 However, others think _________. 7 They argue that________.

8 Considering one after another, I stand on the side of ___________. 9 First of all,_______________. 10 Furthermore, _____________. 11 Thirdly, _____________. 12 Therefore, _________________.

填充内容：1. 文章主题 2. 一些人的观点 3.另一些人的观点 4. 揭示支持第一种观点的理由 5. 进一步解释说明第一种观点 6. 揭示支持第二种观点的理由 7.进一步解释说明第二种观点 8.作者自己的观点、看法 9. 论点一 10. 论点二 论点三 12.总结全文

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled A Good Major or a Good University. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1. 学生在报考大学时面临两种选择—— 选好专业还是好大学。有人认为应该选择好专业

2. 也有人认为应该选择一所好大学

3. 我的看法

范文一（用模板一改写）

A Good Major or a Good University

When asked to choose between a good major or a good university before college enrollment, people have different opinions. Many people believe that a good university means great advantage for job application after graduation. On one hand, a good university has good reputations, which adds credits for its graduates. On the other hand, a good university has all sorts of channels to help graduates get a good job. All these point to the indispensability of a good university.

However, others claim that a good major is all that counts. As far as they are concerned, excellent teaching staff of a good major makes sure that the student are sufficiently trained in the chosen field. Moreover, if one chooses a major that is most needed by the society, not only will he/she find a job easily, but they will contribute much to the society.

As for me, such choice should be made according to our academic interest. Because whether a major or a university is good depends on how we look at it. If certain major or university fits our interest, it will be considered good. What’s more, interest is the best teacher, so a choice of our own interest can help us overcome difficulties in the study. Therefore, let our interest decide for us.

范文二

A Good Major or a Good University

There is no consensus of opinion among people as to the choice between a good major or a good university before college enrollment. Some people who are in favor of the idea of having a good major hold that it can ensure one’s future success. For one thing, a good major, even in a common university, can help its students become rare talents, thus gaining in advantages for future competition. For another, a good major boasts various exclusive learning recourses which makes it highly possible for students to further their education. Therefore, a good major is more important. However, those who insist on choosing a good university argue that graduates from famous universities are popular in talent market. In their opinions, a good university can give students confidence, which is very helpful in their study and future work. In addition, a good university has a set of educating system, incomparable with common university. Thus it is wiser to choose a good university.

In my viewpoint, a good university should be my only choice. If there is a chance, who doesn’t want to enter Bejing or Qinghua, Harvard or Yale? That is to say, a good university is worthy of every effort. In a word, a good university is of great importance in one’s future development.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life. You should write at least 120 works following the outline given below:

1. 很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内，赞成理由是…

2. 很多人认为学校不应该强制要求大学生住宿舍，理由是…

3. 在我看来，…

范文一：

The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life(重要)

When it comes to whether university authorities should require students to live in dormitory, people’s opinions differ. Many people believe that there are great advantages of dormitory life. For one thing, students have the chance of enjoying the friendship of their roommates. This can be the most precious memory they have later in life. For the other thing, university dormitories do not cost much, while living off campus can be very expensive, let alone the issue of security.

However, some people take a different attitude. They regard dormitory as an undesirable place. In their views, since 4 to 8 people live in one dormitory, there is not enough privacy. Furthermore, dormitory is troublesome because it is very likely that one could have clashes with his dorm mates.

As far as I am concerned, students benefit greatly from dormitory life. On one hand, dormitory life provides precious lessons on how to communicate with others. On the other hand, students do not feel lonely. There are always people of the same age around.

why

should students live off campus while there is a good life right in here? And when they have trouble, there are always helping hands in the dormitory. So

范文二：

The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life

There is a heated debate over whether students should be required to live in dormitory. It is commonly accepted that dormitory life is a very important part of college life, so students should live in dormitory. In contrast, others think that students have the right to choose other places for accommodation.

Those who hold the first opinion suggest that dormitory life is colorful and interesting. In their view, when young people live in one dormitory, they tend to create and enjoy a culture of their own. However, others think dormitory life can be annoying. They argue that dormitory is always crowded and one can hardly feel convenient and comfortable.

Considering one after another, I stand on the side of the first group. First of all, I am interested in living with students from different places so that I can contact with special cultures. Furthermore, I can learn how to get along with other people from dormitory life. Thirdly, I like making friends and dormitory life gives me such chance. Therefore, I think dormitory life is worthy of living.

Directions: for this part, you are allowed 30minuttes to write a composition on the topic Marks or

Abilities? You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below.

1. 在大学，一些学生认为学习成绩是最重要的

2. 在大学，一些学生认为培养个人的能力是最重要的

3. 你的看法

范文一（套用对比论述型模板一）：

Mark or Abilities?

When it comes to the task of college students, students’ opinions differ. Many students believe that marks are very important. For one thing, they think that their primary task is to study and learn from teachers and textbooks. For another, they seldom take part in other activities, for they are afraid that those activities will affect their study.

Some students, however, take a different attitude. They regard it is more important to develop one’s own practical ability. In their views, college students should not learn from the textbook knowledge, they should also learn from outside the textbook. Furthermore, one’s own practical ability is of primary importance.

As far as I am concerned, we should first study hard, then try to develop our abilities at the same time. On the one hand, study is our primary task. On the other hand, we shouldn’t neglect our own practical abilities, for when we enter the society, we need various abilities. So the sound foundation of knowledge along with practical abilities is essential for us to be useful for the society.