1.The arguer may be right about…, but he seems to neglect (fail) to mention (takes into account) the fact that…

2.As opposed to (Contrary to) widely (commonly / generally) held (accepted) belief (ideas / views), I believe (argue) that…

3.Although many people believe that…, I doubt (wonder)whether the argument bears much analysis (close examination).

4.The advantages of B outweigh any benefit we gained from (carry more weight than those of / are much greater than) A.

5.Although it is commonly (widely / generally) held (felt / accepted / agreed) that…, it is unlikely to be true that…

6.There is an element of truth in this argument (statement), but it ignores a deeper and more basic (important / essential) fact (reason) that…

7.It is true that (True, / To be sure, / Admittedly,)…, but this is not to say (it is unlikely / it doesn‘t follow / it doesn’t mean / it won‘t be the case) that…

8.The main (obvious / great) problem (flaw / drawback) with (in) this argument (view / remark) is that it is ignorant of (blind to) the basic (bare) fact that…

9.It would be possible (natural / reasonable) to think (believe / take the view) that…, but it would be absurd (wrong) to claim (argue) that…

10.In all the discussion and debate over…, one important (basic) fact is generally overlooked (neglected).

11.There is absolutely (in fact) no (every) reason for us to believe (accept / resist / reject) that…

12.Logical (Valid / Sound) as this argument and I wholeheartedly agree with it, it appears insignificant (absurd) when…is taken into consideration(account).

13.To assume (suggest) that…is far from being proved (to miss the point).

14.A close (careful) inspection (examination / scrutiny) of this argument would reveal how flimsy (groundless /fallacious) it is.

15.On the surface (At first thought), it (this) may seem a sound (an attractive) suggestion (solution / idea), but careful weighing on the mind (on closer analysis / on second thought), we find that…

16.Too much emphasis placed on (attention paid to / importance attached to)…may obscure (overlook / neglect) other facts…

17.The danger (problem / fact / truth / point) is that…

18.What the arguer fails to understand (consider / mention) is that…

19.However just (logical / sound / valid) this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem.

20.Among the most convincing (important) reasons given (cited / offered / identified) by people for…, one should be stressed (emphasized / mentioned).

21.As far as I am concerned, however, I believe that…

22.I believe that the title statement is valid because (of)…

23.I agree with the above statement because I believe that…

24.Although I appreciate that…, I cannot agree with the title statement.

25.There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of… Those who object to…argue that…. But people who favor…, on the other hand, argue that…

26.Currently (In recent years / In the past few years / For many years now), there is (has been) a(n) general (widespread / growing / widely held) feeling towards (concern over / attitude towards / trend towards / awareness of / realization of / illusion of / belief in)…

27.Now it is commonly (widely / generally / increasingly) believed (thought / held / accepted/ felt / recognized / acknowledged) that…. But I wonder (doubt) whether…

28.These days we are often told that (often hear about)…, but is this really the case?

 

第二篇：写作

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Try to improve the following sentences:

1.Though our new life has lasted not very loang did I found much from it.

2.I don’t know what have I done in our plenty of spare time but I am busy.

3.I felt a little bit disappoint. Because it a little small, also not good enough than my imagined before.

4.However, it was not so pleasure that he learnt at school.

5.There also have many societies join in. join in the society can improve our skill, and make more friends.

6 the students who reading and studying in the library are my idols.

7 I was not agree with the life style here, but now it become ok.

8 from these lessons he knew life is a lesson and it had sweet but also hard work.

9 what you experience is from sunrise to sunset, the world, and something around yourself, the weather , even people.

10 I made a lot of friends and start to accept this not beautiful but with a long history city.

Writing

A small society 何湃

In my opinion, college is a small society in which you learn many things.

On the one hand, to live in the society, getting along well with others is a first step. And there are studens who come from different parts of the whole country in the college. so you can not only learn different culture from them, but also get to know how to get along well with different people. On the other hand, knowing how to cooperate is very important in the society. In the college, you have to study, take part in different activities and so on. So college is a place that is full of both rivalries and cooperation. You can learn a lot from it.

Most of all, absorbing knowledge is a never changed theme. In the society, you can learn many living shills. However, in the college you can learn more. It’s full of cultural atmosphere not only can you learn the living shills, but also improve your personal cultivation.

Above all, college is a small society. Treat it carefully and enjoy it.