外研社杯英语写作大赛参赛稿

外研社杯英语写作大赛参赛稿

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The things that important to me

河北联合大学轻工学院商学人文部2011级国贸1班 武晓艳

In everyone’s life, there must be something that they think are precious. If you ask me what is the most important things in my life, my answer is family、friendship and love.

FAMILY: As we all know: Home is always a warm harbor. Wherever you are, there always has persons wait for you .And whenever you go home, you can always eat hot food. When you succeed, they will happy for you. When you fail and sad, they will comfortable you and encourage you to come on, instead of blaming you. Family plays an important role in our life. Father and mother love me very much, so I think have a warm family is the most happy thing and I love it forever.

FRIENDSHIP: There is such a word to say: A life without a friend is a life without a sun. So friendship is a precious resource in our life. When you get into trouble they will give you a hand, when you lose your way they will guide you and cheer you on and when you make progress they will send their heartiest congratulations to you. A forever friend will never leave you. Remember , friendship is our psychical guard, please treasure it.

LOVE: Love to us is what water to fish, so our life can’t be without love. Where there is great love, there is always miracle. When we grow up, we will find own love, then we make up a new family and live together. Having love, one can be find happiness. A heart that love is always young and the soul cannot live without love.

Of course, there are others important things. However, the three things are very important in my eyes. I must be cherish them.

中文:在每个人的一生中一定有一些他们认为很重要的事情。如果你问我在我的一生中我认为重要的事情是什么,我的答案是亲情、友情和爱情。

亲情:正如我们所知道的:家永远是温暖的港湾。无论你在哪里,家总会有人等着你。无论你什么时候回到家你总能吃到热的饭菜。当你成功时,家人会为你高兴。当你失败悲伤时,家人会安慰你并鼓励你而不会责备你。家在我们的一生中扮演着一个重要的角色。爸爸和妈妈深深地爱着我,因此我认为拥有一个温暖的家是最幸福的事,我也会永远的爱着它。

友情:有这样一句话:一生中没有去朋友好比生活中没有阳光。因此,友谊是一生中一笔宝贵的资源。当你陷入困境时他们会伸出援助之手;当你迷失方向时他

们指引你、鼓励你;当你取得进步时他们会想你送去最真心的祝贺。一个真正的朋友将永远不会离开你。切记,友谊是我们精神的指导者,请珍惜它。

爱情:爱情对于我们来说就好比水对于鱼,因此我们的生命中不能没有爱。哪里有爱,哪里就会有奇迹。等我们长大后,我们都会找到自己的爱情,然后组成一个新的家庭并永远的生活在一起。有了爱情,才能够幸福快乐。一颗有爱的心将永远年轻并且一个人的灵魂中不能没有爱。

当然,还有许多其他重要的事。然而,在我眼里这三件事是最重要的,我一定会好好珍惜它们。

 

第二篇:20xx年“外研社杯”全国英语写作大赛仲恺农业工程学院获选作品(黄家宝)

学号: 201210714106

姓名: 黄家宝

班级: 食品121

标题: Should we change our behavior depending on what situation we are in?

正文:There is an old saying in China,whoever understands the times is a real hero.Human is a senior animal,human behavior is very complex.Along with the advance of the society more and more controversial issues have been brought to our attention,one of which is that should we change our behavior depending on what situation we are in?To this issue different people come up with various attitudes.

Sometimes in our life,there are too much things that will influence our decisions.People's decisions depends largely on the environment,the environmental impact,people will make the decision to change.Flood,earthquake,fire and other natural disasters.Before,everyone is equal.At these times,people often showed extraordinary,decisions tend to make people feel unbelievable behavior.In war,riots,such as environment,whether people will make different behavior?Of course,the answer is yes! We all know that people's behavior is not always the same,according to the Darwin theory of evolution,species can change,to adapt to the environment.However we can see those examples above which is doing damage to the itself,due to we have both choices just like every coin have both side.

We alter things like our speech patterns,depending on the social situation.When we are with friends,I have a tendency to use bad language.Since we are all of about the same age and because we are in casual situations, this is not inappropriate in most people’s eyes.However, I would never use such language around my parents or my children.In fact,we would be very unlikely to use such language to anyone who is either much older or much younger than us.It would be disrespectful to the older people and a bad example to the young.

I have so many years of experience tell me,no matter in study or daily life,people tend to change their ideas and practices in some time.Many times,I also can do,but no way,the variable must change,otherwise life will be a mess.Some people may ask,isn't there some people change?Perhaps some people will continue to be the same,but we think it might be?We will only change in some principle on the issue,to do all the same,basically is not possible.Just as people for some political event view,previously considered a leading people wise,but now the situation is wrong.We will change everything, including the behavior of people and ideas,so we discuss this problem at the same time,we need to recognize their own environment.Internal cause is important, but the environment influence is enormous.

Closely so that people act with their own thoughts and environment,that is the reason why people will change their minds fully is the human and the natural result.As for the part of multiple proportion,it depends on people's thought highly.We are always in a situation which is changing all the time.

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