四六级图表作文

图表作文

Part I Writing (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of learning basic skills. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.

首先,要看懂图画的表面意义及其的深层本质。

  图画中,一群学生坐在教室里,样子都傻傻地。老师正在讲解乘法口诀表,教的不亦说乎!这个时候一个傻孩子突然提问:“老师,我无意冒犯,但是等到我们工作的时候,这些你教的东西不会过时吗?

  图画作文分三写段:

  第一段:图画描述,也是题目中明确要求的(a brief description of the picture),所以你不描绘图画,或者是图画信息不全,扣分。描述的时候,你要把学生提问的那句话写出来,把老师教课的动作写出来,以及老师听到学生挑衅性的提问之后的表情,也要写出来。

  第二段:提炼挖掘图画的内涵。孩子对老师教的知识,确切地说,是对老师教授的基本知识、非实用性知识的一种质疑。所以,你可以在第二段分析一下原因:为什么学生,也就是现代人,对这种不能马上用于工作的、带来回报的、理论性的基础指示和技能不懈

  第三段:结论和表态,分析完了原因之后,你要回到主题,那就是我们不能忽视这些基本技能,要唤起大家对“基本技能的重要性”的认识。所以,这一段,你可以正面阐述为什么basic skills 如此的重要,就可以了。

  范文:

  As is vividly depicted in the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many students sitting in a classroom. When listening to the teacher, one of the students just interrupts the teacher and says “No offense, but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that stuff be outdated?” Having heard this question, the teacher stops demonstrating the Multiplication Table and seems to be quite shocked and embarrassed。

  The cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that quite a few students undervalue the importance of learning basic skills these days. Confronted with fiercer competition from society and employment market, students are more focused on practical skills which can be applied in daily work immediately. Moreover, they also fears that the basic knowledge and skills they learn today will be outdated by the time they are in the job market。

  However, no one can disclaim the importance of learning basic skills. It enables us to lay a strong foundation for further learning and exploration. In other words, those who have mastered basic skills well are more likely to acquire other skills and knowledge with ease. Basic skills are equivalent to the first step of success, as an ancient Chinese saying goes, “ A road of thousand miles towards the success begins with the first step。”

20##年6月四级作文

On Doing Small Things

 图画的内容和构图不难:父亲和男孩子的对话,

孩子说“ DadI am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon. (爸爸,我有点担心清除核武器这个问题)”,

父亲则回答“ If you can empty the dustbin, you can do anything. (如果你能把垃圾桶倒掉,你就能坐好任何事情)” ,说话间,手指着垃圾桶。

作文的第一段,要进行简单描绘图画内容,这是必须的,也是题目中强制要求的(a brief description of the picture)。描述的时候,只要把父子两的对话移植到第一段,然后把父亲手指垃圾桶的动作描绘一下就可以了,非常简单。

作文的第二段,进行主旨提炼并且论述。这幅图画很容易看出主题,那就是做大事之前,要先做小事(一屋不扫,何以扫天下),而且题目中其实早就已经透露了主题了 (express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big。)因此,第二段通篇论述小事做起的重要性就可以了。属于我在课堂上讲过的作文三大分类之“积极主题,论述意义”

  作文第三段,总结,启发。这一段再次强调小事做起的意义,我们不能低估他的威力。文章最后可以以名人名言作为结尾。

  

 

范文:

We can see from the cartoon that there is a father talking with his son.  Having heard his son’s words that “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste” The father replies that “ If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything” and points the garbage can beside him。

Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big. Definitely, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are able to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other words, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who desire to do something big at once will constantly be haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures, As when opportunities-“something big” appears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin?

From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly。” Aristotle used to say。

20126月六级作文参考范文及解析

20##年6月的六级漫画作文,图中,两人对话,女儿和父亲。

父亲问女儿:“ Hi, sweetie, how was your school today ? (嘿,小甜心,你在今天在学校过得怎么样?)”

女儿非常冷漠的回答:“Dad, you can read all about it on my blogs.

(爹哋,你自己可以在我的博客上读到所有内容)”,然后呢,女儿拔腿出门,留下父亲一脸惊愕。

  题目:The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication

  要求:by commenting on "DadHi, sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad"

  得分要点提示:

根据去年官方的评分标准解释:该作文类型既考表达,又考理解。即:

1) The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication;

2)对于对话的评论:"Dad:Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad"

如果只写网络对于人际交流的影响,而没有提到要求评论内容的评论。作文评分时,会受到很到影响。

  

范文(双语)1 :

In contemporary society, our life is filled with a variety of anecdotes or stories, and the following is no exception: "Dad:Hi sweetie, how was school, today? Daughter: You can read all about it on my blog, Dad." This conversation can be naturally associated with the impacts of Internet on our life: In an era of Internet, the time for interpersonal communication is impaired by online chats or blogs.

Apparently, the impacts of the Internet on interpersonal communication are diverse. For one thing, as a vital invention, Internet brings great convenience to our communication, eliminates the barrier of distance, and helps humans to keep in touch wherever and whenever. For another, it is Internet that does not enables family members, friends or classmates to communicate more in a face-to-face way. One case in point is that youngsters may spend hours chatting with acquaintances through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face. Unfortunately, if we let this trend to continue as it is, the interpersonal relationship will, definitely, become alienated or indifferent.

 To my understanding, it is advisable for people to communicate more with their families, friends and acquaintances in real life instead of merely through the Internet. Do bear in mind: Internet is just a tool.  (213words)

(当今社会,生活中有很多轶事或故事,下面的对话便是其中之一:"爸爸:'亲爱的,今天上学怎么样?'女儿:'都在博客上,自己看吧!老爸'"。该对话使我们很自然的联想到了网络对人际交流的影响:在网络的时代,人际交流的时间受到网络聊天或博客影响了。

  显然,网络对于人际交流是多方面的。一方面,作为一个重要发明,网络给我们的交流带来巨大便利,消除了我们交流的距离障碍,也帮助人们能够随时随地的联系。另一方面,正是网络没有使得人们与家人、朋友或同学面对面交流更多。一个典型的例子是年轻人可能花好几个小时上QQ或MSN与熟人热聊,但很少与他们面对面谈话。不幸的是,如果我们让这种趋势继续下去,人际关系将必然变得疏远。)

 范文2

As is described in the picture, a father asks her daughter how her school today goes on. Instead of answering directly, the daughter tells her father to read her blog. It is common that youngsters nowadays incline to communicate with others on internet increasingly, and lack communication with people around them. With the development of Internet, it has influenced our society to a large extent, especially interpersonal communication.

To begin with, we can communicate with others anytime via internet. Otherwise, we would have to arrange our schedules strictly in advance. Also, interpersonal communication through the internet is not restricted by space. For example, in most multinational corporations, instant messages and video conferences help colleagues solve problems timely and efficiently. Last but not least, the internet can greatly speed up our interpersonal communication. Whereas, there are also disadvantages that the internet brings to us. More and more people complained that they have lost face-to-face communicating skills. As a result, people become more and more indifferent to each other in real life. Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.

In conclusion, communication through the internet could bring us both convenience and inconvenience. We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.

3The importance of reading literature

The importance of reading literature

  真题解析:

  本篇作文依旧为漫画作文,通过观察图中所给的信息,提炼图画的主题,进行论述,最后给出结论、观点。

  图画中,师生站在一个教师里,老师给学生一本书,挺厚的,孩子讶然,震惊并由几分不情愿。老师就安慰并鼓励学生:“ 你就当做是在读一个长篇短信就行了

  这幅图说明一个什么主题?说明的是,学生代表的现代人,都没有耐心阅读长篇的文字,比如文学作品,而更倾向于阅读短篇的、速食的信息。心态浮躁,没有耐性。这是一个负面现象。

  写作的时候,依旧分成三段来写:

  第一段,图画描述,将师生的动作,对白都要写出来。没有进行图画描绘的考生,违反了题目要求,扣分;

  第二段,分析原因,分析一下现代人,或者是学生,为什么不太喜欢读长篇的、信息量大的文学作品:一、现代人已经更加习惯于读来自互联网和电子交流工具诸如微博、手机和QQ的短篇信息,认为这样省时省力;二、相当多的人认为文学作品枯燥乏味,而且在现代生活中没有什么用处。

  第三段进入主题,阅读文学的重要性不写出这点,跑题,要扣分。阅读文学有什么意义呢?一、可以丰富知识拓展视野;二、可以激发人们批判性的、独立性的思维;三可以完善人格,使人变得耐心和积极乐观。因此,我们为什么不花点时间在文学上呢?

  范文赏析:

  From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there is a teacher and a student standing in the classroom. When receiving a literature book given by her teacher, the little girl seems to be quite nervous and unwilling. Having observed her student’s response, the teacher tells her that “Just think of it as if you are reading a long text-message

  The cartoon aims at informing us of the phenomenon that quite a few students or youngsters are reluctant to read literature nowadays. With the Internet and electronic communication tools such as micro blogs, mobile phones and QQ becoming increasingly widespread, quite a few people are more used to reading short context. They hold that, compared with long contents such as literature, these short ones are more convenient and timesaving. What’s more, many students refuse to read literature in that they believe that literature is boring and of little use in modern society。

  However, no one can disclaim the importance of reading literature. It enables people to enrich their knowledge and expand their horizons. Moreover, reading literature also inspires people to think critically and independently. Last but not least, by spending time in reading literature, we can also develop and perfect human personality such as being patient and optimistic. Hence, why not just get out of the reality temporarily and spend some time on literature ?

  译文:

  如图所示,我们可以观察到有一位老师和一个学生正站在教室里。当这个女学生收到老师给的文学书本的时候,她显得紧张而又不情愿。观察到女学生这种反应后,老师告诉她:“你只要把它想成是正在读一条很长的短信就可以了。”

  这幅漫画告诉我们一个现象,那就是,相当多的学生,或者是年轻人如今都不太乐意阅读文学作品。随着诸如微博、手机和QQ这样的互联网或电子通讯工具变得越来越普及,相当多的人更加适应于阅读短小的信息内容。他们认为,比起文学这样的长篇内容,这些短小内容更加方便和省时。再者,相当多的学生拒绝阅读文学作品是因为他们认为文学作品非常枯燥,并且在现代社会没有什么用处。

  然而,我们不能否认阅读文学作品的重要性。它能使我们丰富知识,拓宽视野。而且,阅读文学作品可以激发我们批判性地、独立性地思考问题。最后,通过花时间在阅读文学作品上,我们也可以发展和完善我们的人格,比如变得有耐心、乐观。因此,我们威慑么不可以暂时的远离现实而花一些时间在文学上呢?

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