英语高考短文改错训练

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请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分。

一、

In China, people and giant pandas had been living together for thousands of years. But China’s human population has been great growing. More population means more land is needed for farming. It also mean more forests are cut for wood to build and heat houses. Loss of habitat in lowland areas has forced pandas live only in the mountains. The most damaged result of development has been that it has divided the panda’s habitat into little islands of forest. Today, many panda are isolated in these small sections of forest, because of they will cross into areas which people live. The result is that the giant pandas can connect with one another to mate and have babies.

Besides, to our relief, there is still some good news that people are trying to help the giant pandas by creating protected areas.

【答案】

【小题1】had--have

【小题2】great-- greatly

【小题3】mean--means

【小题4】live 前加to

【小题5】damaged --damaging

【小题6】panda-- pandas

【小题7】of划掉

【小题8】which--- where / in which/ live后加in

【小题9】can--can’t /cannot

【小题10】Besides --However

二、

Dear mum and dad,

I still cannot believe that I am taking up this prize I won last year.I have to

remind yourself constantly that I am real in AD 3008.Worrying about the journey, I was unsettled for the first a few days.As a result,I suffer from“time lag”. This is similar with the“jet lag”you get from flying,but it seems that you keep getting flashbacks from your previous time period.So I was very nervous and uncertain

at first. However,Wang Ping,my friend and guide, were very understanding

but gave me some green tablet which helped a lot.Well-known for their expertise, his parents companytransported me safely into the future in a time capsule.

?

Yours,

Li Qiang

【答案】

【小题1】yourself—myself

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【小题2】real—really

【小题3】Worrying--Worried

【小题4】去掉a

【小题5】suffer--suffered

【小题6】with--to

【小题7】were--was

【小题8】but--and

【小题9】tablet--tablets

【小题10】parents—parents’

三、

I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help others．At school I get along well with my classmates．Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time．It’s the relationship among my desk mate and me．He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well．But he’s a person with few words．What’s more, he got angry easily．I don’t know what to deal with him．Maybe that ’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts．I value our friendship．I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better．I do hope we will be close to each other than before.

【答案】

【小题1】加上to

【小题2】Therefore--However

【小题3】myself--me

【小题4】among--between

【小题5】rule--rules

【小题6】got--gets

【小题7】what--how

【小题8】why--because

【小题9】去掉with

【小题10】close--closer

四、

Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both sad and annoyed, I decided to walk on foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of the experiences.

【答案】

【小题1】去掉a

【小题2】minute----minutes

【小题3】and --but

【小题4】with ---on

【小题5】when --- than

【小题6】waited前面加had

【小题7】other-- another

【小题8】do --did

【小题9】possible --- possibly

【小题10】lose---losing

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五、

One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window. The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led him into the store. There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing. They walked back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.

【答案】

【小题1】去掉the

【小题2】has--had

【小题3】passes--passing

【小题4】her---him

【小题5】warm---warmly

【小题6】so---and

【小题7】come---go

【小题8】looked 后面加at

【小题9】how---if /whether

【小题10】child---children

六、

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. May I have your attention, please?

I have something important to tell you. Our plan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain. Now I will introduce their plan for today. we would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning. A school has a history of 85 years. Then we’ll go to an exhibition of some new invention. I think it will be interested. The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel. We’ll set out at 8:30. Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time. You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions. Thank you for listening.

【答案】

【小题1】加上be

【小题2】加上 of

【小题3】their--our

【小题4】would--will

【小题5】去掉on

【小题6】A--The

【小题7】invention--inventions

【小题8】interested--interesting

【小题9】Taking--Take

【小题10】unless--if

七、

Miss Jones was math teacher. Her home not far from her school,but she always walked there in the morning.All the pupils in the school was very young.In a cold and windy morning,Miss Jones walked to the school,and the cold wind goes into her eyes.and big tear began to run out . she reached school.opened the doorand going into the classroom.It was nice and warm here and Miss Jones was happily, but then a small boy looked at her for a few seconds,to put his arms around her and said kind."Don't cry,Miss Jones .School isn't very bad."

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【答案】

【小题1】加上a

【小题2】but--and

【小题3】was--were

【小题4】In--On

【小题5】goes--went

【小题6】tear--tears

【小题7】going--went

【小题8】happily--happy

【小题9】去掉 to

【小题10】kind--kindly

八、

Yesterday I stepped into a restaurant for lunch. As I was waiting my order to come,I noticed the oldman in awheelchair roll himself over to a table. No one and me seemed to notice him. I got up and goover to his table andasked if that I could get him something to drink. He smiled and said,“Thank you.You are generously. I’d like anyorange juice,please.” When I was getting ready to leave, I walked by theold man’s table to saying goodbye. Hethanked me again and told me I had made his days,coming overand helping him out. I gave him a hug and toldhim he had made my day,either.

【答案】

【小题1】waiting后面加for

【小题2】the改为an

【小题3】and改为but/except

【小题4】go改为went

【小题5】去掉if后面的that

【小题6】generously改为generous

【小题7】any改为some

【小题8】saying改为say

【小题9】days改为day

【小题10】either改为too

九、

I was working in a beer company, helped the president do something important. At the same time, my mother was in the final stages of the cancer. I worked during the day and drive 40 miles home to be with her every night. It was tired, but it was that I wanted to do. I didn’t want to bother the president with my trouble, yet I felt someone at the company needed to know about it. So I told a friend and asked him not to share the information with someone. Therefore, the president called me into his office one day. He faced me from across her large desk, looked at me and said, “Alice, I hear your mother is very ill.” I was caught by surprise and burst into tear. He just gentle said a sentence I will never forget: “Whatever you need.”

【答案】

【小题1】helped ---helping

【小题2】the cancer

【小题3】drive – drove

【小题4】tired---tiring

【小题5】that --- what

【小题6】someone---anyone

【小题7】Therefore--- However

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【小题8】her--- his

【小题9】tear---tears

【小题10】gentle---gently

十、

Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s disease. She lived in a generation that girl’s education was second to boy’s. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made hersuccess later on was the kindness and consideration the showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy with her choosing career, in traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How greatly she was!

【答案】

【小题1】that--when

【小题2】which--that

【小题3】is--was

【小题4】tiring--tired

【小题5】去掉 for

【小题6】safe--safely

【小题7】choosing--chosen

【小题8】write--writing

【小题9】woman--women

【小题10】greatly--great

十一、

This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside aPatience is of a great importance in our daily life. One day I waited for a bus to come at a stop. 30 minute had passed, and no bus came. Upset and annoyed, I decided to walk with foot. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I had chosen to take the next bus, I would have had to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste the effort that we have put in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.

【答案】

【小题1】去掉a

【小题2】minute----minutes

【小题3】and --but

【小题4】with ---on

【小题5】when --- than

【小题6】waited前面加had

【小题7】other-- another

【小题8】do --did

【小题9】possible --- possibly

【小题10】lose---losing

十二、

My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have threelessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school

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activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

【答案】

【小题1】have--are

【小题2】didn’t—don’t

【小题3】many--much

【小题4】去掉an

【小题5】hour--hours

【小题6】look--looks

【小题7】去掉the

【小题8】sat--sit

【小题9】加上to

【小题10】helpfully--helpful

十三、

We’ll never forget a day when my classmates and I paid a visit a chemistry factory. It is alarge one with nearly 20, 000 workers. It looks like a garden but we saw colorful flowers,grass and trees there. We also visited some workshop and found workers working hard. Wetalked to them and learned a lot of. We understood them farther. On the way home we feltvery tiring, but we both thought we had a very good day. We really hoped what we could getmore chances of learn about society.

【答案】

【小题1】athe

【小题2】visit后加to

【小题3】butand

【小题4】workshopworkshops

【小题5】去掉of

【小题6】 farther further

【小题7】tiringtired

【小题8】bothall

【小题9】去掉what或改为that

【小题10】learnlearning

十四、

Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. “Should I choose a good major and a good university ?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested . It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs. In my opinion , a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we couldn’t obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best.

【答案】

【小题1】student→students

【小题2】去掉by

【小题3】and→or

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【小题4】在interested 后加in

【小题5】impossibly→possible

【小题6】believes→believe

【小题7】graduate→graduating或graduate前加who

【小题8】a→the

【小题9】can→can't 或后加not

【小题10】they→we

十五、

It is three years now since I graduate from Jixing High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places

【答案】

【小题1】graduate→graduated

【小题2】on→in

【小题3】time 后加to

【小题4】properly→proper

【小题5】a→the

【小题6】remember→remembering

【小题7】they→we

【小题8】which→that

【小题9】去掉abroad前面的to

【小题10】card→cards

十六、

My next vacation will be wonderfully for me. I will go to Maryland to visit my friends. I have known her for eleven years since I am in high school. Right now, she is studying English at the University of Maryland. When I visit her, she will have to go to her classes, but we will have lots of free time together either. When we go to high school together, she didn’t study very much hard. She wasn’t getting very good grades. And now she is a very good student in American. She know that she should study hard to success. We will have a great time together this summer.

【答案】

【小题1】wonderfully--wonderful

【小题2】friends→friend

【小题3】am→was

【小题4】either→too

【小题5】go→went

【小题6】去掉much

【小题7】and→but

【小题8】American→America

【小题9】know→knows

【小题10】success→succeed

十七、

I’m an senior high school student. I’m upset these days because my parents. They pay too much attention

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on my study. I have to report my test results to them every time. If I get good grades, they will be happy and satisfied. But if not, they will be worrying about me, especially my mom. I never want to let them down, but she has made a plan for my future. I was very bored with it and don’t know how to do. I know they really love me. I also know knowledges is important for everybody. Therefore, I can’t stand they are always making me to study. I really expect they can understand me.

【答案】

【小题1】an→a

【小题2】because后加 of

【小题3】on--to

【小题4】worrying—worried

【小题5】them—her

【小题6】was—am

【小题7】how--what

【小题8】knowledges—knowledge

【小题9】Therefore –However

【小题10】to study去掉 to

十八、

There are lots of experience in our life.The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year.I’m interested in English.When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation.I was determined to win the first prize.I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything.Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down.Finally，I do a good job.When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down.Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confidentthat makes people successfully.

【答案】

【小题1】experience→experiences

【小题2】holding→held

【小题3】been∧chosen

【小题4】me→myself

【小题5】such→so

【小题6】a去掉

【小题7】do→did

【小题8】in→with

【小题9】confident→confidence

【小题10】successfully→successful/succeed

十九、

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward atrelaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can playthe basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday!However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knockeddown by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. Ihate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.

【答案】

【小题1】made改为makes；

【小题2】at改为to；

【小题3】movie改为movies

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【小题4】去掉the；

【小题5】How改为What；

【小题6】different 改为differently

【小题7】加to；

【小题8】fallen改为fall；

【小题9】Beside改为Besides；

【小题10】keeping改为kept；

二十、

With the growing popularity of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to their health, especial their eyes, but also to their studies. Comparing with online games, many traditional games, like hide-and-seek, benefits kids mentally and physically. They were ever popular to several generations, which not only learned something valuable but also had fun playing the games. Therefore, the games are dying away now.

Personally, I think teachers and parents should take measure to limit their children's Internet time. Let children to know the harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. Help children judge healthy and unhealthy games. What's more, we should often organize events for children in which traditional games played.

【答案】

【小题1】把play online改成playing online

【小题2】把especial改成especially

【小题3】把Comparing with改成Compared with

【小题4】把benefits kids改成benefit kids

【小题5】把popular to改成popular with

【小题6】把which not改成who not

【小题7】把Therefore改成However

【小题8】把measure改成measures

【小题9】Let children to去掉to

【小题10】games played 改为games are played

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