20xx年北京卷高考英语作文：开放作文范文

20xx年北京卷高考英语开放作文题目：

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

20xx年北京卷高考英语开放作文范文

In the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. Across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the band for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. Not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.

The message conveyed in the picture is clear. In pursuing a dream, we might focus on only one say of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. As indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. All he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.

 

第二篇：20xx年高考英语作文范文30篇

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写人：

1．OurEnglishTeacher

OurEnglishteacher,MsHuang,cametoourschoolin1970.ShehasbeenanEnglishteacherformorethan30years.Sheworkshardandhasbeenamodelteacherformanyyears.

Sheiskindandfriendlytousafterclass,butSheisratherstrictwithusinclass.ShealwaysencouragesustospeakandreadmoreEnglish.Sheoftensays,"Practicemakesperfect."

Sheisgoodatteachingandtriesherbesttomakeeverylessonlivelyandinteresting.Sheoftengivesusslideshows,teachesusEnglishsongsandhelpsustoputonshortEnglishplays.

Sheisnotonlyourteacherbutalsoourfriend.Weallrespectandloveher.

Tomorrowsheisgoingtoattendanimportantmeeting,atwhichshewillbegivenamedalforheradvanceddeeds.

2．MyEnglishTeacher

OurEnglishteacher,Mr.Wang,isastronglybuiltthirty-year-oldman,whoisoftensimplydressed.HehasbeenteachingusEnglisheversincehegraduatedfromtheEnglishDepartment,BeijingNormalUniversityin1993.Hedevotesallhistimeandenergytoteaching,oftenworkinglateintothenightpreparinghislessons.Heiscapableofmakinghislessonslivelyandinteresting,andallofuslikehislessons.Heisverystrictwithusbutheshowsusgreatconcern.Heoffersushelpwheneverweneedit.Weallconsiderhimnotonlyasourgoodteacherbutalsoasourclosefriend.Weallrespectandlovehim.

B．写物：

3．Ourschool

OurschoolislocatedatthecentreofBeijing,Itisoneofthelargestschoolsinthecitywithover2,000studentsandabout200teachers.Ourschoolsubjectsincludepolitics,Chinese,English,maths,history,geography,physics,chemistryandbiologyandsoon.MostofuspaygreatattentiontothestudyofEnglish,Chineseandmathsbecausetheyareveryimportantsubjectsintheuniversityentranceexam.WetakespecialinterestinEnglish.Wehavespentmuchtimeonit,butwestillfinditdifficulttolearnthelanguagewell.Intheafternoonwhenclassisover,weenjoystayingatschoolforaboutonehourforsomephysicalexercisesbeforeleavingforhome.

4．MyHomeVillage

Myhomevillageisasmallone.It'sinYuxiancountyofShanxiProvince.Smallasitis,it'sverybeautiful.Therearemanyhillsaroundmyhomevillageandtheyaremorebeautifulthansomebigmountains.Inspring,wecanflykiteswhicharemadebyourselvesonthetopofthehills.Thekitesflyveryhigh.Insummer,thetreesaregreenandthegrassisgreen,too.Itisgreeneverywhereonthehills.Therearesomanywildapple高考制胜网：

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treesonthehills.Thewildapplesarenicetoeat.Inautumn,thecornsunderandaroundthehillsareripe.Soweeatthemalmosteveryday.Inwinter,whenitsnows,allthegroundiscoveredwithsnow.Wecanplaywithsnowandsometimesweeatthecleansnowwithsugar.Inmyhometowntheskyisblue,theairisclean,thewaterissweetandthepeopleareveryfriendly.Ilovemyhometown!

5．ChangesinOurLife

Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.Takemyfamilyforexample.Myparentscontactedothersmainlybysendingthemlettersinthepast.Butnowwecalllongdistanceathome.Andoncemyparentslistenedtotheradiofornewsandotherinformation.ButnowwegetthenewsbywatchingTV.Anotherbigchangeisinmylivingconditions.Whentheygotmarriedabouttwentyyearsago,myparentslivedinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture.Butnowwehavemovedintoabignewthree-roomapartment.Inshort,ourlifehasbecomecomfortableandconvenient.

C．日记：

6．AGoodDeed

Oct.19thTuesdayFine

Oneafternoon,onmywayhome,Isawanaccident:acarhitanoldman!

Ishoutedtothepedestriansforhelp,butnoonestopped.Whenthecardriversawthis,hequicklyclosedthewindowOfthecaranddroveaway."WhatshallIdo?Theoldmanneedshelp."Ithought.

Atthattime,atruckstoppedandoutcamethedriver."What'swrongwiththeoldman,boy?WhatcouldIdo?"thedriveraskedme."Uncle,pleasehelptheoldman.Acarhithimandheisbadlyinjured!"Isaid."Well,don'tworry.Letmetakehimtothehospital.''thedriversaid.

Afewminuteslater,thedrivertooktheoldmantothehospitalandItelephonedthepolicestation.ItoldthewholestorytothepoliceandIalsotoldthemthenumberofthecar.Thepolicesaidtome,"Welldone,boy!Leaveittous.Hemustbepunished!"ThenIwenttothehospitaltoseetheoldman.

WhenIgothome,itwas7:30.IthinkwhatIdidwasfight.

D．书信：

(1)你堂兄建华在国外学习，你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业，不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信。

1．建议他回国。

2．你的理由是：学有所用，就业容易；照顾父母。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．行文应连贯，内容应完整；

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3．开头语已为你写好。

DearJianHua,

I'mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.

ToJianHua

DearJianHua,

I'mverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.I'vebeenthinkingaboutthequestionyouaskedme.Inmyopinion,youshouldcomebackafteryoufinishyourstudiesabroad.Foronereason,whatyouarestudyingisbadlyneedednowadaysinChina.Itwillbequiteeasyforyoutofindagoodjob.Infact,Iknowafewbigcompaniesinourcityarehopingtoemploypeoplelikeyou.Foranotherreason,Ithinkitwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyoutolookafteryourparentsastheyaregettingold.Therefore,Ithinkit'sagoodideaforyoutoreturn.Sowhatareyouwaitingfor?

Bestwishes;

MingHua

(2)20xx年春季

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生征寻为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由。(包括所具备的条件)。

2005春季范文

Dearsir,

IhearthatourschoolwillwelcomesomeCanadianstudentstostaywithusforortwoweeks.Studentswhowanttoinvitethemtostaycantakepartinit.Iwanttotry.

First,myparentsandIcanspeakEnglishwell.Thatbenefitsustocommunicatewitheachother.Second,ourhouseisbigenoughforheorshetostay.Furthermore,IliveneartheHuangpuRiver.IthasagoodviewofShanghai.

Lastbutnotleast,inmyhome,heorshewillenjoymuchChinaculture.Mygrandpaandgrandmaaregoodathandwriting.MygrandmaalsohasagoodskillinChinesepainting.

Ithinkourfriendlywillgivehimabothinterestingandcomfortableexperience.

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Thankyouforyourreadingduringyourbusywork..Ihopethatyouwillagreewithme.

Yourssincerely,

LiHong

(3)假如你是王华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头如下：

DearMumandDad,

Howareyoudoing?

范文

DearMumandDad,

Howareyoudoing?

I’mwritingtoyouaboutmygratitudeforyourhavingbroughtmeupandmyfutureplan.

DearMumandDad,Iamalready18yearsold,whichshowsthatIhavegrownup.WheneverIamthinkingofthis,Ican’thelpfeelinggratefultoyou.ItisyouwhofirstgivemeencouragementwhenImeetwithdifficulties,especiallywhenIamnotgettingalongwellwithmystudies.Indeed,yourinspirationseemstobealamp,whichoffersmelightofhope,courageandconfidence.Andmoreimportantly,youarealwaysteachingmetobegoodtoothers,andtrytocontributetooursociety.

DearMumandDad,Iannowaseniorthreestudent,whoisfacingthecompetitivenationalcollegeentranceexaminations,Sofirstofall,Ioughttotrymybesttopasstheexams.IamsurethatthroughmygreateffortsIcanandwillbeabletorealizemybeautifuldreamofbeingakeyuniversitystudent.Then,Iwillstrivetobeanindependentyouth.ThesocialsituationIwillbefacingmustbemorecompetitive,soIwilldevelopandpreparemyselftobeayouthwithastrongsenseofcooperationandcompetition.Believeinme,MumandDad,Iwillmakeadifference.

Bestregardstoyou.

Yourssincerely,

WangHua

(4)求职信

DearSirorMadam,

Ihavelearnedfromanadvertisementthatyourcompanyisinneedofasecretary.Iwouldlikeyoutoconsidermefortheposition.

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MynameisLiMin.Iamtwenty-threeyearsold.IamstudyingbusinessmanagementinXiamenUniversity.Iwillgraduatethissummer.Iamfamiliarwithcomputeroperationandofficesoftwares,whichcanhelpmedotheofficeworkverywell.AndIhavelearnedEnglishfortenyears.Inthepasttwoyears,IhavebeenaneditorfortheEnglishPaperofmydepartment.Mygradescomeouttopinmydepartment.What'smore,IlikeofficeworkverymuchandIalsothinkthatIcanbecompetentforthejob.IfIcouldhavetheopportunitytogetthejobIwillbequiteappreciative.

Thankyouforyourconsideration.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yoursfaithfully

LiMin

E．说明文：

HowPeopleSpentTheirHolidays

Ascanbeseenfromthetable,greatchangestookplaceinthewaysthatpeoplespenttheirholidaysovertheperiodfromtheyear1990to1999.Theproportionoftravelingabroadandcampingwasincreasingsteadily,from12%to24%andfrom10%to36%separately,whilethatofstayingathomeandgoingtotheseasidewasdecreasingyearbyyear,from38%to31%andfrom40%to9%separately.Whyweretherechanges?Ithinkpeoplecannowadaysaffordtraveling.Also,peopleprefertopursueahigh-qualityandcolorfullife.Sowecanseethatpeople＇slivingstandardhasbeenrisinggreatly.

F．议论文

(1)最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为:

1．不应该收门票

2公园是公众休闲的地方

3.如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

40％的同学认为:1．应收门票，但票价不要太高

2．支付园林工人工资3．购新花木

注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。

2．词数：100左右。3．参考词汇：门票---entrancefee

Deareditor,

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I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeedonotmeetpeople’sexpectations,foraparkisconsideredtobeaplacewherethepubliccanhaveagoodtimewhentheyarenotbusyeitherathomeoratwork.Ifanentrancefeemustbepaidbythevisitorsforapark,itwillbenecessarytobuildagateandsurroundingwalls.Intheendacitywilltakeonabadlook.40%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeecanbeaccepted,butitmustnotbetooexpensive.Themoneyfromticketsellingcanbeusedforpayingthegardenersintheparkandbuyingsomeotherkindsofflowersandtrees.

Withregardtomyself,Ithinkanentrancefeeisuseful,foritcanbeusedtoprotectapark.Dowesharethesameopinion,deareditor?

Yourstruly,

LiHua

Deareditor,

I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Sixtypercentofmyschoolmatesarefortheideathatanentrancefeeshouldnotbeforcedonthepublic.Theybelieveparksaretheplacewherethepublicenjoythemselvesattheirleisure.Theythinkthatagateandwailsaretobebuiltifanentrancefeeistobecharged.Thecitywillnotlooksobeautifulasitshouldhave.FortypercentofmyschoolmatesarefortheideathatanentrancefeeisOK,butitshouldn’tbeoutofcontrol.Entrancefeecanbeusedtopaythegardenersandbuynewtypesofflowersandtrees.Formyself,I’dliketosaythatifweallworkhardtobuildourcityintoaflowergarden,whocaresabouttheentrancefeeforparks?

DearEditor,

I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussiononwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsvaryfrompersontopersononthisissue.

50%ofthestudentsdisagreewiththeideaofentrancefees.Intheiropinion,parksarepublicplaceswhereallthepeoplecanhavearestandenjoythemselves.Soifanentrancefeeischarged,somepeoplewillsurelybekeptawayfromthepark.Besides,inordertochargeentrancefees,gatesandwallsmustbebuilt.Theythinkthatitwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.

40%ofthestudentsagreewiththeideaofentrancefees,becausethegardenersneedtobepaidandnewplantsandflowersneedtobebought.Butfeesshouldbechargedreasonably.

Yourstruly,

XXX

DearEditor,

I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussiononwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.

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Opinionsvaryfrompersontopersononthisissue.60%ofthestudentsopposetheideaofentrancefees.Theybelieve

everyonecangotoparksforrestandfunbecauseparksarepublicplaces.Butanentrancefeemaykeepsomepeopleawayfromthepark.Besides,inordertochargeentrancefees,itisnecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.

40%ofthestudentsapproveoftheideaofentrancefees,becausemoneyisneededtopaythegardenersandtobuynewplantsandflowers.Butfeesshouldbechargedreasonably.

Yourstruly,

(2)

DearHeadmaster,

Astheministerofstudents'lifeintheStudentUnion,Iamwritingtoyoutoreflectsomethingaboutourcanteen.

Tooursatisfaction,thecanteensuppliesuswithvariouskindsoffood.Thisgivesusmanychoices.Atthesametimethepriceforthefoodislowandthefoodistasty.Andthesurroundingsforhavingamealhavebeenimproved.Thecanteenhasbecomeclean.Andwhenweareeating,wecanwatchTV.

Butsomethingunsatisfactoryexists,too.Forexample,thequantityofahelpingislessthanitshouldbe.Thisisunfair.Andinthecanteen,theseatsarenotenough.Somestudentshavetostandwhileeating.Wehopethattheschoolwillconsideraddingmoreseatsforus.

Finallywehopethattheycanimprovethequalityofthefoodandtheirservice.Wewillbeveryhappyifouradviceistaken.

Yoursrespectfully,

(3)OnMoney

Moneyisindeedimportant,butmoneycannotbuyeverything.Amisermaythinkthat“moneytalks,”butifyouonlygiveyourattentiontomakingmoney,youmaylosemanythings,suchashealth,friendshipandlove.Idon'tthinkweshouldregardmoneyaseverything.Moneyisjustatoolthatcanhelpussolveproblemsorenableustoliveacomfortablelife.Whatweshoulddoistouseitappropriatelyandnotbecomemisers.Thisway,allofuscanleadahappierlives.

(4)假设今天你上网,点击进入"今日话题"网站.看到一则有关禁止学生在校园内使用手机的报道.网友们对此各抒己见.作为一名高中生,你对此颇感兴趣,就在该栏目下发帖,客观反映周围同学们对此的不同看法.并简单谈谈你的看法.(100字左右)

以下为同学们的看法:

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赞同:便于联系,有安全感,功能(function)多样

不赞同:便于联系非必需，因有IC卡电话,玩游戏，发短信(e--massage),耗时费钱

你的观点

Justnow,Ienteredthewebsite—"TopicforToday".Ifeelinterestedinthereportonbanningtheuseofthecell-phoneoncampusinmiddleschools.

Onepossibleversion:

Justnow,Ienteredthewebsite--"TopicforToday".Ifeelinterestedinthereportonbanningtheuseofcell-phonesoncampusinmiddleschools.Infact,morestudentsnowcometoschoolwithcell-phones.Myschoolmateshavedifferentopinions.Somethinkitisconvenienttogetintouchwithotherswiththecell-phone,whichalsomakesyoufeelsafeespeciallyintimeoftrouble.Besides,itisnicetoenjoyvariousfunctionsofdifferentcell-phones.Othersthinkdifferently.First,thecellphoneinnotamustinschool,astherearesomeICphonesthere,makingiteasytocallothers.Second,manyoftenplaye-gamesandsende-massageswiththeircell-phones,eveninclass,whichwillsurelyhavebadeffectsontheirstudy.Worseistocome,itwillresultinagreatwasteoftimeandmoney.Inmyopinion,thecell-phoneisausefultoolinourdailylife.Butitdoesn'tmeanwecanusefreelyinschool.

(5)三班的学生进行了一场有关大学生是否应该打工的讨论。请你根据下面表中的提示

写一篇英语短文，介绍讨论的情况。

一些同学认为

另一些同学认为

打工会影响大学生的学习；改变正确的人生观；甚至会使他们崇拜金钱

打工可以减轻父母的负担；同时使大学生获得社会经验;发展个人能力；丰富学习生活

注意：1．字数：100左右；2．不必逐条翻译，可进行合理发挥。

负担load3．参考词汇：打工lakeapart-timejob人生观lifeview

ThestudentsofClass3hadadiscussionaboutwhethercollegestudentsshouldtakepart-timejobs.

Somestudentsthinkitisadvantageforcollegestudentstotakepart-timejobs.Because,bydoingpart-timejobs,theycanearnmoneyontheirownsothattheydon’tneedtoasktheirparentsformoney,andinthisway,theyreducetheirparents’load.Besides,takingpart-timejobscanhelpthemgainsocialexperience,developpersonalabilitiesandmaketheirlifeenjoyable.

Onetheotherhand,somestudentshaveadisagreement.Intheiropinion,thestudents’maintaskistostudy,whiletakingpart-timejobshasabadeffectontheirstudy.Andalso,itmaymakecollegestudentschange高考制胜网：

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theirlifeviewsandtheymaythinktoomuchofmoney.

(6)面对中学生“出国热”，社会对此有不同的看法。请你以StudyingAbroad为题，

根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。

Advantages:

1.良好的语言环境，更利于语言学习。

2.拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。

3.传播各民族间的不同文化。

Disadvantages:1.年纪小，缺乏生活经验，自理能力差。

2.情感孤独，思乡。3.生活学习费用高。

注意：1）第一句已为你写好，不计入总词数。

3）参考词汇：媒介，中间人mediator

StudyingAbroad

Inrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.TensofthousandsofChinesestudentshavegonetoforeigncountriestostudy.Manypeoplearetryingtheirbesttoapplytogoabroad.

Therearemanyadvantagesinattendingschoolsabroad.First,studentswhohavestudiedabroadcanactasmediatorsbetweenpeopleofdifferentcultures.Second,wecanlearnmuchmoreadvancedknowledgeofscienceandtechnologyfromforeigncountries.Third,wecanlearnforeignlanguagesmorequickly.

However,therearesomedisadvantages.Mostofthestudentsaretooyoungtolivebythemselveswithoutanyliving

experience.Besides,beingfarawayfromtheirhomecountry,theymayfeellonelyandhomesick.Ofcoursethecostsaremuch.

(7)Onnetbars

WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,thenetbarplaysanimportantroleinpeople'slife.Moreandmorepeople,especiallystudents,liketogotonetbars.Theyareabsorbedinplayingvideogames,makingbadfriendsandhavingachatwith"Meimei"onthenetinthebar.Somestudentsoftengoonplayinglateintothenightinthenetbar.Asaresult,notonlydoesitdoharmtotheirhealthbutalsoproducesabadeffectontheirstudies.NowalotofnetbarshavebeenshutdowninBeijing.Butsomestudentsgobybustothenetbarsatsuburbstoplay.

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Fortunately,moreandmoreparentsandschoolshaverealizedit.Recently,morethansixthousandstudentsensuredthattheywouldbefarawayfromnetbarsinJinzhoucity,LiaoningProvince.Itisquitenecessaryforthestudentstogetridofthebadhabit.

Recently,moreandmorestudentswouldliketogotonetbars,especiallystudents.Ithasbecomequitecommontogothere.Theywastetoomuchprecioustimeonplayingvideogamesinthenetbar.Asaresult,notonlydoesitdoharmtotheirhealthbutalsoproducesabadeffectontheirstudies.Theirhealthbecomesworseandworseandtheirstudiesareneglected.NowalotofnetbarshavebeenshutdowninBeijing.Butsomestudentsgotothenetbarsatsuburbstoplay.

Fortunately,moreandmoreparentsandschoolshaverealizedit.Recently,morethansixthousandstudentsensuredthattheywouldbefarawayfromnetbarsinJinzhoucity,LiaoningProvince.Moststudentsaremakingfulluseoftheirtimeanddevotingthemselvestotheirstudies.Itisagoodthing.

F．看图作文：

(1)假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1．词数：100左右：

2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).

I’mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI’mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallflat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI’lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.

Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!

Allthebest!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由

本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

DearBob,

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WelcometoChina!Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.

IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere’rethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.

Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?ThenI’Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由

本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。

DearBob,

Howareyouthesedays?

I’msogladtoknowthatyou’llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI’vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It’sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.

Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Ifnot,I’lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.

Yours,

LiHua

满分理由

本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。

(2)请看下面的这幅漫画，再联想实际生活，写一篇短文，词数120左右。题目：Don’tWasteWater

Don'tWasteWater

Amaniswashinghisclothes,regardlessofthenoticeabove"SavetheWaterPlease."

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Aswesee,wateristhesourceoflife.Butthereisverylimitedavailablewaterresourcesinourworld.Soweshouldn'twasteit.Ofcourse,wehavetouseittodrink,cook,wash,cleanandetc.Butwemustremembernottouseitextravagantly.Ifwedidn'tstopsuchwastefulhabits,wewouldcutoffthedevelopmentoftheworldandthehumanlife.

E．其他：

(1)CompanionshipofBooks

Amanmayusuallybeknownbythebookshereadsaswellasbythecompanyhekeeps:forthereisacompanionshipofbooksaswellasofmen;andoneshouldalwaysliveinthebestcompany,whetheritbeofbooksorofmen.

Agoodbookmaybeamongthebestoffriends.Itisthesametodaythatitalwayswas,anditwillneverchange.Itisthemostpatientandcheerfulofcompanions.Itdoesnotturnitsbackuponusintimesoftroubleordistress.Italwaysreceivesuswiththesamekindness,amusingandinstructingusinyouth,andcomfortingusinage.

Bookspossessanextracthavingthefundamentalpropertiesofimmortality.Theyarebyfarthemostlastingproductsofhumaneffort.Templesandstatuesdecay,butbookssurvive.Timeisofnoaccountwithgreatthoughts,whichareasfreshtodayaswhentheyfirstpassedthroughtheirauthor'smindsagesago.Theonlyeffectoftimehasbeentosiftoutthebadproducts,fornothinginliteraturecanlongsurvivebutwhatisreallygood.

Booksintroduceusintothebestsociety:theybringusintothepresenceofthegreatestmindsthathaveeverlived.Wehearwhattheysaidanddid.weseethemasiftheywerereallyalive;wesympathizewiththem,enjoywiththem,hurtwiththem;theirexperiencebecomesours,andwefeelasifwewere,inameasure,actorswiththeminthesceneswhichtheydescribe.

Thegreatandgooddonotdieeveninthisworld.Embalmedinbooks,theirspiritswalkabroad.Thebookisalivingvoice.Itisanintellecttowhichonestilllistens.Henceweeverremainundertheinfluenceofthegreatmenofold.Thegreatintellectsoftheworldareasmuchalivenowastheywereagesago.

(2)HowtoKeepHealthy

Nowadaysmoreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheirhealth.Buthowtokeephealthy?Differentpeoplemaygivedifferentanswerstothisquestion.Inmyopinion,itisessentialtodothefollowing.

First,itisabsolutelynecessarytotakesomeexerciseeveryday.Researchshowsthatgettingplentyofexercisemaketheheartbeatfasterandthelungsworkharder.Thisstrengthenstheheart,reducesthechanceofheartattack,andhelpslowerbloodpressure.That'swhymoreandmorepeoplearebecomingactiveinvariouskindsofsportsandexercises.Everymorningmanypeoplegetupearlyandtakemuchexercise.Somepracticeshadowboxingandswordplaywhileothersrun,jog,walkordancetomusic.Intheafternoon,therearealsomanypeoplekeenonsports.Someplaybasketballorvolleyballortabletennis,othersgoinforgymnasticsortrackevents.Throughsportsandexercise,peoplebecomehealthierandstronger.

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Medicalresearchershaveprovedthatwhatpeopleeataffectstheirhealth.Theyadvisepeopletoeatmorefruitandvegetablesandlessmeatsuchasbeefandporkbecausemeatcontainsmorefatthanpoultryandfish.Fatcanbuildupinthearteries,blocktheflowofblood,andcauseaheartattackorstroke.

Gettingridofbadhabitslikesmokinganddrinkingalcoholisalsoanimportantwaytokeephealthy.Smokinganddrinkingalcoholinjureone'shealthagreatdeal,andthereforeshouldbegivenup.Unfortunatelyfewpeoplefollowthisadvice.

Ifpeoplefollowthesethreewaysofkeepingfit,theygreatlyimprovetheirhealth.

(3)ChildrenandTelevision

Televisionhasbeenchangingthewaypeopleliveforthirtyyears.Itinfluencesnearlyeveryaspectofmodernlife.howpeopleuseleisuretime,hownewsisreported,howinformationislearned,andhowpeoplethinkandfeel.Childrenareparticularlysusceptibletotheeffectsoftelevisionbecausetheirmindsaregrowing,developing,andlearningmuchfasterthanthoseofadults.Whereastelevisioncouldbeusedasaneducationaltoolforchildren,moreoftensimpleentertainingcartoonswithlittleornoeducationalvalueareshown.

Socialscientists,teachers,andparentsaretroubledbythekindsoftelevisionprogramschildrenchoosetowatch.Thesegroupsofpeopleareconcernedaboutthemedia'simpactonyoung.children.Theyareworriedabouttheeffectsoftelevisedviolenceonsocietyaswellascommercialsforsugarcoatedfood.Mostimportantly,however,theyfeeltelevisionisonefactorthatcausesdecliningmathandreadingscoresamongschoolchildren.BecauseoftheexcessivetimespentinwatchingTV,childrenarespendinglesstimereadingandthinkingindependently.

Expertsareconcernedabouttheviewoftheworldthatyoungstersarelearningfromtelevision.Parents,schools,andchurcheshavetraditionallybeenthesocialmodelsandteachersforchildren.However,becausetelevisioninfluenceschildren'sattitudesandbehavior,itsroleinsocietyisbecomingincreasinglymorepowerful--itismuchmorethanasimplerecreationalactivity.

Exposuretoexcessiveviolenceisanotherinfluenceoftelevision.Accordingtoseveralstudies,televisedviolencemaycausechildrentobecomemoreaggressive.Also,becausesomuchviolenceisseenbychildrenontelevision,theybecomemoreusedtoitastheonlysolutiontodifficultsituations.Childrenwhowatchagreatdealofviolenceontelevisionmaybecomeapathetictowardactualaggression.Onestudyhasshownthat,comparedtoacontrolgroup,fifth-graderswhowatchedanaggressivetelevisionbroadcastwereslowertoaskforadulthelpwhenafightbrokeoutamongyoungerchildren.

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