大学英语四级考试优秀范文

Part 1:20xx年x月

1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该……

How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent

①It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in single-child families. ②However ,many parents go so far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future.

③It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parent on their first day in college. ④I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of independence .In such a world full of fierce competition ,being independent becomes essential for a would-be success .Thus ,⑤what should parents do ?

In my humble opinion, ⑥on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children;⑦ on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything .⑧I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop independence.

精彩点评：①引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包办一切。③引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。④分析包办所带来的后果。⑤提出问题：父母应该如何做？⑥和⑦具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。⑧简要总结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。

加分亮点：beyond reproach 无可非议 be accompanied by…有……陪同

declare in no uncertain terms 毫不讳言 fierce competition 激烈的竞争

essential 至关重要的 cling to the belief 坚信

Part 2:20xx年x月

1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写

2.出现这种现象的原因是……

3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……

Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling

Nowadays,① an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning .②Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, ③and what ”s worse , a well-organized essay is therefore totally impossible.

④There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation. ⑤For on thing ,much more students give priorities to oral English at the cost of dosing less spelling exercises ,let alone reflect on what they learned the other day .⑥For another ,many teachers put so much emphasis on communication and grammar in teaching that they seldom highlight spelling, and occasionally worse still, they themselves are caught in spelling.

To change this situation, ⑦I hold to the belief that students and teachers should work together. ⑧On the one hand ,students should stop complaining about spellings ,and they should realize correct spelling is a must in learning English .⑨On the other hand, teachers should pay more attention to spelling in teaching, for example, focusing on pronunciation and word formation.

Only via joint effort can students gain much ground in spelling.

精彩点评：

①开门见山，描述现象：很多学生不重视拼写。②和③使用thus, and what” s worse 说明该现象造成的结果：拼写错误连篇，文章结构混乱。④本段分析造成上述结果的原因。⑤和⑥for on thing…for another…具体列举不同的原因，层次分明。⑦概括提出解决问题的方法。⑧和⑨使用on the one hand …on the other hand …结构，针对上述成因，提出两种对应的解决方案。最后结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。

加分亮点：embarrassing 令人为难的，尴尬的 give priorities to 认为优先

Put emphasis on 强调

Part 3：20xx年x月

1. 建设绿色校园十分重要

2. 绿色校园不仅是指绿色的环境……

3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该……

Creating a Green Campus

During recent years ,①the topic of a green campus ,which has aroused widely public attention, is becoming more and more popular. ②Undoubtedly, a green campus, the indispensable part for the development of college students ,has a profound impact on both individuals and society, for its significance cannot be neglected

A green environment ,rather than anything else, plays a decisive role in the growth of college students .Meanwhile ,③it should also be mentioned that a preen campus includes not only the places where the students live, but also the mental environment .Without green surrounding ,the soul of students would be not as pure as we wish. In that case ,④in no place other than campus should we attempt to make a green atmosphere .

Due to the seriousness of the situation, it is crucial for us to take effective measures to create a green campus .⑤In the first place, it” s essential that law and regulations should be worked out and enforced by the government and authorities. ⑥Furthermore, it is high time that we enhanced the awareness of the students themselves.⑦ Only in this way can we get satisfactory results. With these measures taken ,it is reasonable for us to believe that a green campus will be achieved in the near future.

精彩点评：①开门见山，提出绿色校园的话题已经引起社会关注。②点名绿色校园的重要意义。③用not only ..but also 句型介绍绿色校园的内涵和外延。④半倒装句的运用恰到好处，引出下文要阐述的内容，即社会各界应行动起来，推动绿色校园的建设。⑤和⑥结构连接词in the first place 和furthermore 的运用，使得论述清晰明了。⑦结尾常用的倒装句，总结前文。

加分亮点：undoubtedly 毋庸置疑地 indispensable必不可少的，必需的 significance意义

Part 4:20xx年x月

1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是……

2. 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题

3. 在我看来…

Free Admissions to Museums?

①Recently ,more and more museums are open to the public free of charge. By doing so ,they can attract more visitors ,and offer the visitors more opportunities to explore and get easy access to the world of history ,culture and knowledge.

②However, some people view that the practice also brings problems and concerns. They are right in a sense .③For one thing ,their main concern is that with more visitors ,it is possible that objects exhibited can get damaged more easily. ④For another ,it becomes a huge economic burden for museums to run as usual without any profits from the visitors.

⑤In my opinion, I am absolutely in favor of this practice. The reason lies in the fact that the government should provide more opportunities for citizens to explore and get access to the knowledge world .Moreover, kids and teenagers can acquire knowledge in a more vivid way in the museums .⑥I hope all the people can share the same national treasures in more free museums.

精彩点评：①开门见山，提出论点。并说明这样做的目的。②话题一转，阐明这个举措的弊端。③和④运用关联词For one thing …For another…,使文章层次分明。⑤利用in my opinion 衔接文章，引出自己的观点。⑥最后提出希望，总结全文。

加分亮点：get access to 接触 in favor of 赞同 vivid 生动的 鲜明的

Part 5:20xx年x月

1. 一次性塑料袋曾广为使用

2. 由此带来的问题

3. 限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义

Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags

①Recently, limiting the use of disposable plastic bags has been brought to popular attention in China. No one would deny that it was a real convenience in our daily life . ②However ,what would our society be like with the excessive use ?

The sharp increase in using plastic bags has given a rise to such problems as environmental pollution. It takes many years for plastic bags to be absorbed by soil, ③which blocks the drainage system and causes water pollution. ④What ?s worse ,some bags are of poor-quality, and even harmful to public health.