英语作文

Should college students drive private cars on campus?

1.目前有大学生将私家车开进校园

2.你是否支持这种现象

3.说说你的看法

【范文】

Currently more and more student-owned private cars appear on campus, and this phenomenon has aroused a big concern. Some take it as a positive thing since it reflects the social development and progress; while others think it fosters vanity and "keeping-up-with-the-Jones" mentality, so it should be prevented.

As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own private cars, especially for those who need them as tools for travelling, such as the senior students who are hunting for jobs in downtowns while living in a far-away place; those who need cars as cargo transport tools while starting business independently on campus.

Actually dozens of problems indeed come along with an increasing number of students driving to and from college. These problems include the availability of parking space and the likely danger among young drivers. Safety is the one which should be paid due attention to. With this in mind, schools have the responsibility to take all effective measures to ensure the safety of students.

【点评】

本题谈论的是一种社会现象。第一段首句引入“大学生将私家车开进校园”这一现象,之后列举人们对此现象的不同观点:赞成者认为这一现象体现了社会的发展与进步;反对者认为该现象会滋生虚荣心和攀比心理。第二段说明自己的观点---大学生开私家车并不是件坏事,尤其是对于那些需要找工作的大四学生,和在校园中开店需要 “运货工具”的学生而言。第三段列出这一现象引发的问题,呼吁学校采取有效的措施,对学生的安全问题引起高度重视。

第一段最后一句中vanity 表示“虚荣心”; "keeping-up-with-the-Jones" mentality表示“攀比心理”; 第二段第一句As far as I am concerned表示“就我而言,我认为”; 第三段第一句中come along with表示“随同,和??一起”; 第二句中likely danger表示“潜在危险”; 最后一句中have the responsibility to do sth. 表示“有责任做某事”。

College Students Buying Houses

1. 最近有不少在校大学生(或在父母帮助下)买了房子

2. 你如何看待这种现象?

【范文】

Recently, some “childish faces” appear in the real estate market, and to be property owners has gained popularity among college students. What comes along with this phenomenon is the contradiction: even if they thought it’s improper to use parents’ money, they still let their parents pay for their houses.

The following three factors can account for this trend: First and foremost, more and more local and foreign investors flood into the housing market, pushing the already soaring price to an even higher level. Furthermore, houses undertake the roles of value retaining and increment of assets, and help to be against inflation. Last but by no means the least, in many cases Chinese people often can’t get the sense of security completely until they have owned their own houses—they will save every penny to fulfill this lifelong dream.

Fortunately, government has issued policies to inhibit house prices. I personally believe that an increasing number of people can change their traditional mode of thinking, and improve their living quality and thus live a better life.

【点评】

本题谈论的是一种社会现象。文章第一段指出现象---房地产市场的准业主们中有越来越多的稚气面孔,学业未竟但悄然储房的“校园业主”大有人在,由此滋生一种奇怪的现象:一方面大家都意识到了不应该用父母的钱买房,而另一方面仍然在动用父母的钱,是什么催生了这种矛盾呢?文章第二段作者结合自己的观点分析产生这一现象的三大原因: 首先国内外投资人蜂拥入市,将居高的房价进一步推高;其次房产承担着资产保值,增值的角色;最后中国人 “没有家就没有安全感”的传统观念挥之不去,所以省吃俭用也要买房。最后一段指出政府已经出台政策抑制房价,相信越来越多的人会改变传统观念,从而改善居住环境,提高生活品质。

文章第一段中comes along with表示“伴随着”。第二段中列举三个原因,分别用First and foremost表示“首先”,Furthermore表示“其次”,Last but

by no means the least表示“最后但并非最不重要”,短语value retaining and increment of assets表示“资产保值,增值”。

第三段中inhibit表示“抑制”,change their traditional mode of thinking表示“改变传统思维模式”。

预测作文(三)

Food Safety

1. 食品安全问题仍然令人担忧,售卖染色馒头,添加瘦肉精于饲料中,这种把自己的利益置于别人生命基础上的行为让老百姓心痛不已

2.你是怎么看待这些行为的(可从人的良心、道德方面分析)?

【范文】

In the recent period, several cases of food scandal have been disclosed on various media, such as tainted steamed buns sold in the

highly-reputated supermarkets, lean meat powder added to pig feed. Food security has become a hot topic across society.

This kind of shameful behavior, which places their own interests on the basis of others’ lives, hurts common people and influences social

security. Furthermore, these cases reveal the declining of morality and inefficiency of related government branches. During the course of rapid social development, moral education has been ignored, which gives rise to the increasing rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers fosters the trend.

“It is better late than never.” A massive moral campaign should be launched to educate all citizens. Apart from moral condemnation, it also requires integral efforts from different authorities, especially the law enforcement departments and supervisory bodies. I am firmly convinced that through combined efforts we will enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.

【点评】

不断被媒体曝光的食品安全问题触动人心,如何解决食品问题,让老百姓不再有类似的担心迫在眉睫。文章由热门话题“染色馒头”“瘦肉精”事件引出话题,之后在第二段谈及这一问题的层次含义---这些行为揭示了“道德败坏”和“相关部门执行不力”。最后一段由俗语开头,呼吁人们立刻采取措施解决相关问题。

第一段中tainted steamed buns 表示“染色馒头”,lean meat powder表示 “瘦肉精”。 第二段中reveal表示“揭示”,regulation表示“规章”, punishment表示“处罚”。第三段中moral condemnation表示“道德谴责”, 预测作文(四)

Qualifications Needed for a College Student to Get a Job

1. 高校学生就业仍然很难,很多人为了找到一份工作不顾学业成绩

2. 你认为大学生应该具备什么样的素质才能找到一份合适的工作?

【范文】

Nowadays, the social competition is fiercer than we could imagine. College students are facing great difficulties in finding satisfactory jobs, and they even hold the opinion that graduation means joblessness. Therefore, for getting jobs, they even take risks of ignoring their academic achievements.

After knowing that fact, it occurs to me the question “What

qualifications are needed for a college student to get a job?” First of all, I think one should have professional technical abilities, which are the prerequisites to prove whether one is qualified for the job. Second, they should be diligent and eager to learn knowledge. Only after making the best of time to study can they get progress rapidly. Last but not the least, they should learn to be striving, cooperative and creative. Those features are usually neglected by university students when they have to struggle under the burden of study and work.

Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should hold long-term insight and avoid paying only attention to the immediate interests.

【点评】

文章首段指出如今社会竞争比想象中激烈,许多大学生找工作难,甚至认为“毕业就意味着失业”,因此很多人为了找到一份工作不顾学业成绩,因此引出要探讨的问题“大学生应具备哪些素质才能找到工作?”第二段结合作者自己的观点分别叙述了三个必备素质:一是专业技术能力;二是勤奋好学的态度;三是努力奋斗、团结合作、用于创新的精神。最后总结全文---面对竞争压力的不断增加,大学生应该做出长远规划,切忌只顾眼前利益。

第一段中satisfactory jobs表示“满意的工作”;第二段中professional technical abilities 表示“专业技术能力”;diligent表示“勤奋”;

striving, cooperative and creative表示三个特性,“奋斗精神的”、“善于合作的”、“创新性的”。第三段中immediate interests表示“眼前利益”。 预测作文(五)

Studying Abroad at Low Age

1. 中国留学生低龄化趋势明显

2. 低龄留学是轻松还是艰难

3. 谈谈你的看法

【范文】

Pubic surveys show that students’ studying abroad has displayed the low-age trend in recent years. More and more middle school students have been sent abroad for further study, including those in primary schools. Generally, studying abroad at low age can benefit students a lot. They can have access to advanced science and technology easilier and earlier. What’s more, they can be exposed to entirely creative ideas and new trends, meanwhile improving their foreign language much faster. Nevertheless, studying abroad also confronts ones with a series of hardships. Let alone the language inconvenience at first, the completely new environment with different customs and habits may also be barriers to overseas students, especially to the young and low-age ones. Another added difficulty lies in finance.

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