中考创新话题作文珍惜

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有一个生长在孤儿院的男孩,悲观地问院长:“像我这样没有人要的孩子,活着究竟有什么意思呢?”院长交给他一块石头,说:“明天,你拿这块石头到市场去卖,但不是真卖,不论别人出多少钱,绝对不能卖。”第二天,男孩蹲在市场的角落,真有好多人要买那块石头,而且价钱越出越高。晚上,院长要他明天拿到黄金市场去叫卖。在黄金市场,竟有人出比昨天高十倍的价钱要买那块石头。最后,院长叫男孩到宝石市场去卖这块石头,结果,石头的身价较昨天又涨了十倍,甚至被传言成“稀世之宝”。院长对男孩说:“生命的价值也就像这块石头一样,一块不起眼的石头,由于你的珍惜而提升了它的价值。”

请以“珍惜”为话题写一篇作文,可以写你的经历、体验、感受、看法和信念,也可以写故事寓言等等。

[注意]①立意自定。②文体自选。③题目自拟。④不少于800字。⑤不得抄袭。 珍惜者的天国

灵光突现,闪耀着金光的上帝浮现在我的前方,面容慈祥。“孩子,你的坚强与执着让我感动,去一趟天国吧,我想你可以感悟得更多。”

眼前一片迷蒙,等我回过神来,我已经在一个梦幻般的金光普照的神奇大陆上了,一层层云雾叠成了巨大的看不见顶端的高塔,神秘而庄严,我走了进去。

圣音缭绕,金光瀑布般倾泻着,海伦安静的坐在中间,圣母般的安详。我走了过去,“孩子,珍惜你的生命吧!”海伦没有开口,我却清晰的听到那回荡的慈祥的声音。“珍惜你还活着吧――不管命运对你多么不公甚至残酷,对活着的珍惜可以抵御命运之神的任何诅咒和玩弄。每个人都有活着的几十年,但单纯的活着却只是等待死亡,珍惜它,却能创造出任何辉煌,珍惜你看似普通的生命吧,你可以成为任何一种伟人。”

我继续上升,放眼看去,面容和蔼的居里夫人格外引人注目,我走了过去,“孩子,珍惜你的事业吧,一个人在一个角落里的研究对于几十亿人的世界而言,似乎可有可无,但记住,珍惜它会激发你所有的热情和潜力,创造出巨大的价值,让你的事业造福全世界,改变全世界。”

“甚至宁愿付出健康和生命的代价?”我胆子居然大了不少,这时,居里出现了,“为了事业,我们无悔,我们的事业挽救了许多人的生命,我们感到高兴和满足。”我崇敬的看着他们夫妇,直到他们消失在云雾之中。

云雾缭绕中我继续上升,布鲁诺出现在前面。面对着浩翰宇宙,看着行星飞驰,我走了过去。“孩子,珍惜你的思想吧,面对着芸芸众生和谬论世界,一个人的思想似乎微不足道,但记住,珍惜它――不要让它被世俗和强权所压倒,你的珍惜将让你的思想发挥出巨大的价值,甚至改变一个世界,他也将实现你的价值。”布鲁诺深遽的眼神穿过他飘动的白发盯着我,我郑重的点了点头,“珍惜你的思想,就要保证自己思想的正确性和纯洁性,改进和提纯正是珍惜自己思想的基础。”

我终于到了最顶层,上帝重新浮现在我的前方,期盼的看着我。我抬起头,已是热泪盈眶。我想,珍惜――可以让一切普通的生命放射出炫目的异彩。

【简评】作者发挥想象虚拟了一个“珍惜者的天国”,让其中的海伦·凯勤、居里夫妇、布鲁诺分别现身教海――珍惜生命、珍惜事业、珍惜思想,从而突出的表现了“珍惜――可以让一切普通的生命放射出炫目的异彩”这一主题,即人生因珍惜而精彩,人生价值因珍惜而得以提升。

几位教诲者广为人知,并对世人有巨大的影响,他们的教诲,自然就有力量,选材经过了精心的考虑。文章借鉴了《神曲》由低到高逐层上升的写法,构思巧。

碧海青天夜夜心

嫦 娥

古时候天上有九个太阳。上天赐给后羿九支拯救苍生的利箭,两粒永生的仙丹。

后羿射下八个太阳,成了英雄;嫦娥偷吃了那两粒仙丹,成了神仙。嫦娥的自私牺牲了后羿的爱情。

于是后羿的最后一支箭,洞穿了自己的胸膛。

为了成为神仙,嫦娥放弃了自己本应珍惜的爱情。月宫的寂寞是对她的惩罚。 玉 兔

寂寞的嫦娥拂动着自己的衣袖,冷清的月宫让她开始后悔当初的选择。

然而,玉免消却了嫦娥的寂寞。它每天陪伴在嫦娥身边,片刻不离。嫦娥常常问自己,既然寂寞是上天的惩罚,为什么又要让玉免成为自己的陪伴?

后 羿

发现嫦娥所作的一切,后羿的心碎了一地。他质问上天的不公平。于是上天给了他一次机会,让他用箭结束自己凡人的生命。

这样,后羿就可以日日陪伴在自己心爱的人身边,他感到无比幸福,因为他珍惜这份爱情胜过珍惜自己的生命。

但是,嫦娥却永远不会发现,玉兔的胸口,有一道深深的箭疤。

天 篷

在王母的蟠桃会上,天蓬的目光无论如何也离不开舞池中飘然起舞的嫦娥,然而,天庭的律法告诉他一切只能是场梦罢了。

黯然销魂的天篷日日借酒浇愁,终于有一天,烂醉如泥的他抱着酒坛撞进了月宫?? 跪在天庭前的天篷脑中一片空白,他没有后悔,没有怨恨,似乎他早知道这一切会发生。他不知道对或错,不知道自已是应该珍惜已拥有的一切,包括与嫦娥隔池相望的心碎,还是去追求明明不可能的幸福。

然而天庭的律法告诉他他错了,他面临的惩罚是被打下凡间,经历那一番磨难。

八 戒

卸下昔日的黄金甲,套上了一副肥大的躯壳,八戒承受着西行的九九八十一难。似乎这还不够,于是他那张丑陋的面孔让每一个人惊恐地远离他。

他只有默然承受上天注定的惩罚。只是在每一个月明之夜,他会久久难眠。那一轮冷月,总会勾起他前世未能实现的梦。

梦没有泯灭,沧海桑田也不过弹指一挥间。当八戒扛着天竺的佛经回到如来殿时,他相信一切美好都会来临??

包括他最珍惜的梦??

【简评】作者利用嫦娥奔月的神话与《西游记》的有关情节,加以大胆想象而创作了此文,生动的表现了珍惜爱情的主题。纯洁的爱情是人类美好的情感,本文对这一主题的表现积极健康,引人入胜,又发人思考。想象合理,结构轻灵,可以看出作者具有创新精神。题目借用李商隐《嫦娥》诗中的句子,有韵味。


第二篇:中考英语作文总结 8900字

一、 解决方法题型

考生要列举出解决问题的多种途径

1. 问题现状 2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状).Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future isawaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

二、说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1. 说明事物现状 2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------(A的优点之二).

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)

三、议论文的框架

(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.

(2)利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the

____讨论议题___.

议论文模板

1.正反观点式议论文模板:

导入:第1段:Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题) Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)

正文:第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)

Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)

Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What's more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由) 结论:第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点) 。

2."A或者B"类议论文模板:

导入:第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文:第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)

结论:第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论)

3.观点论述类议论文模板:

导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对) The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)

正文:第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)

结论:第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总-分-总"结构)

4."How to"类议论文模板:

导入:第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文:第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法) 结论:第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

一、考查范围

1. 主谓一致 2. 时态搭配 3. 状语 4. 名词复数 5. 单词拼写

二、常考主题的典型句子

1、环保

1. It's our duty to protect our environment.

2. It is very important to take care of our environment

3. We should not throw litter onto the ground

4. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

5. We should plant more flowers and trees.

6. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

7. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

2、旅游

1. Last Sunday (Saturday), it was sunny (rainy, windy, foggy)

2. I got up very early (late). After breakfast I went to …with my friends by bike,

3. We enjoyed ourselves.

4. We forgot the time. We didn't come back until 5 o'clock.

5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy.

6. I thought I would never forget this trip.

7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.

8. We visited a lot of places of interest.

9. We had a good time there.

10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap.

3、比赛

1. Last Sunday, Class One had a football match with Class Two.

2. All of us went to watch it.

3. The match was very exciting.

4. In fact, I have never seen such an exciting match before.

5. The score was 5-3. Our team scored three goals in the last fifteen minutes.

6. Class One won this match. Class Two lost.

7. Class One played well. They deserved to win.

8. Their PE teacher was very pleased with their performance.

4、健康

1. It is very important to keep healthy.

2. How can we keep healthy?

3. We can't go to sleep too late. We can't get up too late.

4. We should eat the food healthily.

5. We should do more exercise.

6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head.

7. I didn't feel like eating anything.

8. I decided to see the doctor.

9. In the doctor's office, the doctor looks over me carefully.

10. He said: "Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.

11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful.

12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.

13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.

5、学科

1. My favorite subject is English.

2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English.

3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world.

4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China . English becomes more and more useful.

5. So English is very important and I like English very much.

6. We have a lot of fun in the English class.

7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class.

8. I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English.

9. I like English and try my best to learn it.

6、节日

1. In China the most important holiday is the Spring Festival.

2. It comes in January or February.

3. On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner. They have a lot of nice food to eat.

4. During the Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting things to do.

5. People visit their relatives and friends.

6. They greet each other with a hug and say, "Happy New Year".

7. As China is a big country, people in different places celebrate this holiday in different ways.

7、写人

1. His name is Jack.

2. He was born in London in 1982.

3. He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos.

4. He is 20 years old.

5. He comes from England .

6. He is a good ping-pong player.

7. He is medium build.

8. He has short hair.

9. He is outgoing. Every one likes to talk with him. He gets on well with us.

10. He teaches English very well.

11. He works very hard. He works in No.5 Middle School.

12. He loves watching football games after work.

13. He often helps me with my English.

14. At the age of six, he began to play table tennis.

8、生活

1. Jim got up very early.

2. Jim cleaned the room and did the housework.

3. Jim went to shop and did some shopping.

4. Jim did some cooking.

5. Jim fed the cat.

6. Jim sweeps the floor.

7. He washes the dishes.

8. He has lunch at school.

9. It is a busy day. He is very tired. But he feels happy.

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