考研英语作文结构分析(经验总结)

第1段:图画描述  (共三句)

1-(1):总体描述图画:人物/动物/事物+动作+环境  or  人物+服装+表情  (一句)

1-(2):图画细节描述       (通常一句,有时也可写两句)

1-(3):对图画中的文字进行翻译  (一句,有时可省略这句)

第2段:图画寓意阐释兼论证(共五句)

2-(1):主题句:点出图画寓意 (一句)

2-(2)(3)(4):论证段 (注意:既然前面提出了观点,随后就应有相对应的原因/解释/论证。不要犯考生易犯的有论点无论据的错误) (三句)

论证段的思路:     

    【内容层面】论证的内容可以从如下角度选择其一

      a、谈背景:即问题或现象出现的政治/经济/文化/社会背景

      b、摆事实:即已经成为普遍社会现象的事实情况

      c、驳观点(欲扬先抑):先摆出与自己观点对立的他人观点,随和在反驳中提出自己观点(因为欲扬先抑是英文写作习惯)

      d、讲原因:即分析问题或现象出现的原因,最好给出2-3点 (注:王江涛在书上说“原因”是现在改卷老师最喜欢看到的角度,偶不置可否,大家可以多练练这个角度)

      e、论后果:即分析问题或现象导致的后果,最好利弊都写。

      f、“象-义”对应(书上写的是“联系现实”,“象-义对应”是我自己发明的词,因为“联系现实”容易让我产生歧义):即阐释图画寓意时把图中每个事物和现实中的象征的涵义对象联系起来(例如写道“图画上的花朵象征着现在的少年儿童,温室象征着家长的溺爱”) 

      备注:书上只列了五大角度,f点是单独列在后面的,但我认为这一点谈的也属于构思上的写作内容层面,所以就一起归进来了。大家也要重点练习这点,因为只要涉及图画阐释的题都要写到这个内容。     

     【写作方法层面】可综合运用下面的论证方法(我打算每一种方法都积累几个相应的好句型,最终形成自己的句型模板):

       1、因果论证(注意:英文的逻辑是前果后因,和中文刚好相反。从这个意义上说,每一段的首句应是主题句,即“结果”,后面的论证就是“原因)

       2、分类论证:如果在前述的写作内容上选择了d角度(讲原因),则最好在第2段写两到三点原因或例证,然后在第3段写两点建议,这样结构更严谨。

       3、定义法:采用自问自答的设问形式,来引起阅卷者的注意(注:如果要用也最多一次)。例:What is idol worship? Idol worship is usually……

       4、解释法:即换个角度把上一句的意思再说一遍(注:如果要用也最多一次)    。例:In other words,……    

       5、统计或事实:可以虚构一些统计数据或调查结果,来使文章有理有据。只要数据不夸张,能自圆其说即可。例:According to the recent survey/data/study/statistics by the Academy of Social Science 70% of……

       6、举例论证(最常用,不多说了)

       7、比较和对比:比较两者的相同点或者对比两者不同点

2-(5):小结:将2-(2)(3)(4)三句进行小结,与本段首句呼应。(一句)

第3段:结论兼建议措施段 (共四句)

3-(1):结论句 (一句)

3-(2)(3):针对双方或从某一现象的正反两个方面提建议 (两句)

3-(4):结尾或展望未来:建议用倒装句、强调句、虚拟语气 (一句)

 

第二篇:考研英语作文(自己总结的)

大作文(图表或图画类作文)基本框架:(三段论,200字左右)

第一段:(描述)

第一句,描述图片内容

第二句,进一步说明图中现象,引入主题

第二段:(对第一段出现的现象进行论述)

第一句,主题句,这个图片要传达的信息 第二、三句,正面论述 第四、五句,反面论述

第三段:(总结上文,提出建议)

第一句,结论句,得出了什么样的结论

第二、三句:提出建议,一般是两个建议

第四句:only in these ways, can we (build up a society full of harmony and sunshine). 展望句

模板一:图画作文

This illustration/picture depicts_________ (图画中的人物)doing, with______________(补充说明). Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to_____________(进一步阐释)

It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题), which is ______________(进一步的说明). He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节). In my opinion, ___________(个人阐述).

This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体,如the whole of the human race). Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在). One the one hand, we must _________________(建议一). It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明). On the other hand, ________________(建议二) Only in this way can we___________(展望前景).

模板二:图表作文

The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题). The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点). This means that as __________, _________________(进一步说明).

We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一). After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化), the _____Ved+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化). The

figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二). (数据位置,如In the second column), we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述).

Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因). / It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议)

模板三:利弊型作文

Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_________. For one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一). For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二).

But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ____________(列举缺点). For instance, it can be __________to _____________(举例说明). In addition, many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________(第二个缺点)

When asked to __________, I tend to ____________. This is because I _______________(原因一). Furthermore, _______________________(原因二). Finally, ______________(原因三).

模板四:展望未来型

With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years, ___has____________(引出现象). However, _______ has________________, as____________(提出问题). As a result, _____has ____________________(指出影响).

The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.

First , __________________(影响一). More importantly, ________________(影响二). Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)

There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. The first is that the more(比较级)_____, the more (比较级). In addition, we all agree that________________________(第二个原因)

小作文(各种书信,150字左右)

第一段:

第一句,自报家门

第二句,写信目的(申请、建议、投诉、感谢)

第二段:没有固定格式

第三段:只写一句话

建议时,希望自己的建议能有所帮助(I do hope that you will find my proposals constructive and I am looking forward to your early response)

感谢时,再次表达感谢(again, I would like to express my gratitude to you )

申请时,对对方表示感谢,并期望得到答复(at last, I would be grateful if you can take my application into a favorable consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply)

1:投诉信

Dear_______,

I am . (自我介绍) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(总体介绍). In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一个方面). In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二个方面). Under these circumstances, I find it ___(感觉) to ____________________________(抱怨的方面给你带来的后果).

I appreciate it very much if you could_______________________(提出建议和请求), preferably __________(进一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(设定解决事情最后期限).

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

2:询问信

Dear ______,

I am _________________________(自我介绍). I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding_______.(要询问的内容)

First of all, what are _________________________________?(第一个问题) Secondly, when will________________________________?(第二个问题) Thirdly, is _________________?(第三个问题)

I would also like to inquire _________________________________(将最重要的问题单独成段). Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?

Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

3:请求信

Dear___________,

I am writing to formally request to___________(请求的内容)

The reason for ______________is that______________________________(给出原因).I________, so I ___________________________________(给出细节)

I would also like to request ________________________(提出进一步的要求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.

Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at____________(电话号码). I look forward to a favorable reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

4:道歉信

Dear ___________,

I am truly sorry that_________________________(道歉的原因).

The reason is that ______________________________________(介绍原因) Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

6:建议信

Dear ___________,

You have asked me for my advice with regard to _______, and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.

In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions:_________________(建议的内容)

I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Good Luck with your_______(祝愿)

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

7.求职信

Dear Sir or Madam,

I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in____________(报纸名称)of________(广告发布时间).

Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a __________(工作名称). In the one hand,_______________________________(第一个原因). On the other hand, __________________________________(另一个原因).

Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at _______________(电话号码)

Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

8:邀请信

Dear________,

There will a ________________(内容) at/in________________(地点) on___________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at ___________(具体时间). This will be followed by a _______(进一步的安排). At around______(时间),____________________________(另一个安排)

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before ____________(通知你的最后期限)

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

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