篇一 :符合英文写作习惯的Statement of purpose个人陈述范例

Statement of purpose

本文经修改后,作者的学习目的和选择学校的原因显得很清晰、明确,十分令人信服。对比原作者提供的中文稿和专家的修改稿,读者可以清楚地看出中英文写作的区别。

A graduate from the Harbin Institute of Technologies, an institution of higher learning known for its selectivity, I have solidly grounded myself in a discipline that is still new in China, namely, mechatronics. With four years of strict training and conscientious studies behind, I am now versed in a broad range of subjects related to this discipline. But I would like to pursue more advanced studies in it. I now apply for acceptance into your Master' program for the sole reason that your program is one of the few that offer graduate studies in mechatronics.(一般而言,开头并不是一定要依时间顺序介绍自己的童年。扼要的阐明自己目前的情况和学习的愿望往往更好。)

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篇二 :Statement of Purpose(ce)

Statement of Purpose - Civil Engineering (SOP) Statement of Purpose - Civil Engineering (SOP)

In this essay I outline my academic and extra-curricular accomplishments. Also discussed are my career objectives and the motivation to pursue the graduate program in Civil Engineering at the University of Massachusetts, Amherst.

The undergraduate curriculum in Chemical Engineering at IIT, Kharagpur, introduced me to a wide gamut of subjects, both in and outside the field. Various courses like Mass Transfer, Heat Transfer, Fluid Mechanics and Transport Phenomena have provided me with a strong footing in the theoretical concepts of Chemical Engineering.

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篇三 :PS (Personal Statement) 和SP (Statement of Purpose)的写作精髓

PS (Personal Statement) 和SP (Statement of Purpose)的写作精髓

我想说的是,经过这次一对一边改边交流,我的重大发现是:原来大家的对PS的理解本身就是错的。 初衷就是错的!

当然,回想两年前,我也是一样错的。

初衷都是报着个如何写出一篇我这辈子写过的最优美地道的英语范文。

(CHECK一下自己 不是吗?)

而不是真正的 “PERSONAL”!“STATEMENT”! 人家招生委员,看漂亮散文,多了去了。你要拿美文,以语言之美,来打动一个本地人,好像并不是一个SMART的愿望。

写PS的同学们大都需要洗脑,你现在的目的,不是写一篇漂亮的英文作文,而是: 平实的、老实的、诚实的讲述自己!

我在写PS的时候,脑子里想的面向对象都是那模糊的远在世界不知道有没有的角落的一个严肃的审稿的影子,那是错的。

如果你跟我一样这样想象,那是错的。

那样就会直接导致你PS的结果是:假 大 空。 因为你所假想的说话对象,是在一个“大”学校的一“空”旷的位置上的(在我的想象的画面里没有墙壁和门的巨细的一个“假”想的对象。

你所想象的读者是个假人,那么你的说话的内容和口气必然是假的、虚的。

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篇四 :怎样写一份成功的personal statement~

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以下是第三方论点,里面对PS很有帮助!

本人一直认为硕士申请过程中两个主观方面的努力是最重要的:1、根据自己的情况实事求是、因人制宜,选择适合的学校和专业,2、尽量把PS写好,展现自己的优势和特点。客观的东西因人而异,说不清楚,不过话说回来大家总有渠道去挖掘各种信息,反而是写PS这样需要主观创造的东西似乎更让大家挠头;本人见过不少学生自己写的和比较专业人士写的PS,自己写写过不少的PS,自认为小有心得,在此跟大家分享;不求爆红于网络,但求能让需要这些信息的你眼前一亮,如果能给你些许帮助,就算是我积了德了。

说到PS首先总得知道什么是PS,它的功能是什么,应该包含什么内容,质量衡量标准是什么,对吧?其次,咱再来看怎么样才能把它写好,千万不要把顺序弄混了。写PS的准备工作中最首要的任务是明确一个思路和框架,这是最重要也是最困难的工作,千万不要一开始就想我怎么把语言写的多么的深不可测、妙笔连珠,不是说语言好不是PS所需要的,而是开始的时候重点不在这里。好了,言归正传。PS的全称是Personal Statement,意为个人陈述,另称SoP, Statement of Purpose,虽然不同学校对于PS内容的描述和要求确实有微妙的区别,但是大体上可以这么理解:PS,即个人陈述,是一份陈述个人申请原因和解释为什么认为自己适合所申请课程的信。PS的主要功能是向学校解释自己的学术兴趣、教育经历、实践活动、职业规划等成绩单不能体现的方面;这么形象的来说,如果说成绩单和语言能力证明等文件在学校面前搭建了一个申请人的骨架的话,那么PS的主要目的就是为这个骨架增添血和肉,这样才能构建一个鲜活的、独一无二的申请人形象。当然了,这既然是个比喻,它就只是个比喻,只可意会不可细琢。

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篇五 :Personal Statement个人陈述

I am a thinker, but not one to think out loud. I love myself, but am not in love with the sound of my own voice. I want to be loved, but not at the cost of not loving myself. I want to know everything, but realize that nothing can ever be known for sure. I believe that nothing is absolute, but I can absolutely defend my beliefs. I understand that chance is prevalent in all aspects of life, but never leave anything important to chance. I am skeptical about everything, but realistic in the face of my skepticism. I base everything on probability, but so does nature...probably.

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篇六 :雅思写作教育类话题范文:Purpose of education

雅思写作教育类话题范文:Purpose of education

Question

Some say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society; othes say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions.

Discuss both views and give ur own opinion.

Sample answer

What education serves for has been immersed in conflict for decades. Some firmly believe that it aims to produce efficient and capable promoters for the social progress, whereas others argue that to achieve personal fulfillment should be its ultimate goal.

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篇七 :英语四级作文范文-大学的目的(On the Purpose of University Education)

Writing (30 minutes)

? Directions:For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the

Purpose of University Education. You should write at least l20 words but no more than 180 words

On the Purpose of University Education

University education can mean many things for different students in various higher

education institutions. The purpose of university education is most commonly regarded as a necessary approach to an ideal profession such as being a lawyer, a businessman, a civil servant and so on. While this purpose is accurate and concrete for the undergraduates, by no means, it is the end result of the university education.

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篇八 :personal statement

Personal Statement

By xxx xxx (your name)

To Australian Embassy, Beijing

The statement is being submitted in support of my application in your approval for studying in xxx University in Australia.

Previous Education:

I was born in Guangzhou, a southern city in China that has long been known for the prosperity of its economic development. With high scores in the National University Entrance Examination in 1995, I was admitted to the xxx university where has a good reputation for its business and economic courses in South China. Facing the era of reform and opening-up, I did not hesitate to choose economics as my Bachelor Courses.

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