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从评分标准看提高雅思大作文

如何才能取得雅思写作高分是很多同学苦苦思索的问题，却一直不得其解。其实，要想获取雅思写作高分不仅要勤于动笔，善于思考还要认真修改自己写过的文章。我们可以从雅思写作的评分标准(大作文)入手，想一想怎样才能获得考官们的青睐。下面快来跟随前程百利雅思小编一起看如何提高雅思大作文吧。

首先是Task Response(任务的完成情况)：在这个方面最重要的是字数和审题。所以练习速度至关重要，考前一定要有限时写作的体验。审题方面，一定要看清题目的 问题(包括到底有几个问题，问题是辩论式的还是论说式的，辩论焦点是什么)，可以把历年考题拿出来做专门的审题训练。一定要注意，千万不能跑题，字数一定 要超过250字，否则只有拿低分的命运了。

接下来是Coherence and Cohesion(文章的连贯性)：段落划分和连接词训练。在段落方面，一定要用符合英美写作习惯的topic sentence + supporting details的方式来写作，连接词方面，以下给同学们例举一些常用linkers：

开始：currently, at present, initially, to begin with

承接：besides, in addition, moreover, meanwhile

转折：however, whereas, while, on the other hand

表示结论：in conclusion, to sum up, overall

表示原因：because (of ), accordingly, due to, owing to, since

表达观点：in my opinion, personally

举例说明：for example, for instance, such as?

表示让步：although, despite , regardless of

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最后是Lexical Resource(词汇的多样性)和Grammatical Range and Accuracy(语法句式的准确性和多样性)：这两点都与考生的英语基本功有关，短期内很难有实质性突破。很多考生采取背单词和看语法书的方法，但因为 非常枯燥也坚持不了多久且没有什么成效。这里给大家的建议是第一，通过作文习作并让有经验的老师批改，找出属于自己的在语法和词汇方面的问题，发现一个问 题解决一个问题，并在老师的指导下配合相关的有针对性的语法和词汇学习。第二，一定要摈弃用“大词”、“难句”的强迫心态。

以上就是前程百利雅思小编为大家介绍的从评分标准看提高雅思大作文，希望给大家的雅思备考带来帮助。

 

第二篇：雅思小作文最全万能模板

雅思小作文写作万能模板

1、通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___

According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.

2、一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)

There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: __________.

3、当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___

Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to ______________.

4、目前，共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____

Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like______________

______________.

because ______________. Besides,

5、(图表所示)_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出___________

______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ____________.

While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.

6、每种事物都有两面性和________，是没有异议的，包括利和弊

Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.

7、_____作为_____被观察了许多年，但是人们现在像发现新大陆一样注视着它

For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking

a fresh look at it now.

8、政府保证________，对于这份保证，大多数人做出了强烈地回应，因为_____

It has been stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.

9、_______出现在我们日常生活中是很平常的，无论我们做什么，_______都是不可避免的

______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.

10、_____在人群中已经成为热门话题，特别是在年轻人中，激烈的争论无休止

______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.

1 according to the chart```

2 the data lead us to the conclusion that```

3 the data show```

4 the tree diagram reveals how```

5 the figures show```

6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend of```

7 the pie graph depicts```

8 the graph provides some interesting date regrarding```

9 the table shows the changes in the number of ``` over the period from ```to ```

10 as is shown in the table ```

11 from the table ,we can clearly see that ```

12 this table shows the changing proportion of X and Y from ``` to ````

14 as can be seen from the grape ,the two curves show the fluctuation

16 in the year between ```and ```.

17 in the 3 years spanning from 2005 through 2008.

18 the number of ``` remained steady from ```to ````.

19 the number sharply went up to ```

20 the percentage of ``` stayed the same between ``` and ```

21 the percentage remained steady at```

22 the percentage of ```is sightly larger than that of.

23 there is not a great deal of difference between ```and ```

24 the graphs show a three fold increase in the number of ```

25 ```decreased year by year while ```increased steadily.

26 there is an upward trend in the number of ```

27 a considerable increase occurred from ```to ```

28 from ```to ```the rate of decrease slow down.

29 from this year on,there was a gradual decline/reduction in the ```reaching a figure of.

30 be similar to ```be the same as

31 there are a lot similarities between ```and ```

32 the difference between X and Y lies in ```

雅思学术性写作考试中Task 1 考查考生解释，说明信息的能力，这些信息通

常体现在图解，表格和插图中，这一部分的模式化程度更高一些。下类50个句式是雅思留学类考生需要背诵的最最基础的句子。请同学们自己背诵。在写作小作文的时候，也可以作为参考材料。

1. the table illustrates the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...

该表格描述了在...年至...年间...数量的变化。

2. the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...

3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding...

该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4. the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...

5. the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...

这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7. the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据（字）表明...

8. the tree diagram reveals how...

该树型图向我们揭示了如何...

9. the data/statistics show (that)...

该数据（字）可以这样理解...

10. the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...

这些数据资料令我们得出结论...

11. as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示...

12. according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表（数字）...

13. as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...

14. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。

15. from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...

从图表我们可以很清楚（明显）看到...

16. this is a graph which illustrates...

这个图表向我们展示了...

17. this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...

该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。

18. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。

19. this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图，描述了...

20. as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of... 如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

21. over the period from...to...the...remained level.

在...至...期间，...基本不变。

22. in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间...

23. in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...

19xx年至1998三年里...

24. from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起...

25. the number of...remained steady/stable from

(month/year).

...月(年)至...月（年)...的数量基本不变。

26. the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至...

27. the percentage of...stayed the same between...and...

...至...期间...的比率维持不变。

28. the figures peaked at...in(month/year) (month/year) to

...的数目在...月（年）达到顶点，为...

29. the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在...

30. the percentage of...is slightly larger/smaller than that of... ...的比例比...的比例略高（低）。

31. there is not a great deal of difference between...and... ...与...的区别不大。

32. the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of... 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33. ..decreased year by year while...increased steadily. ...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。

34. the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of [%]. ...的情况（局势）到达顶（高）点，为...百分点。

35. the figures/situation bottomed out in...

数字（情况）在...达到底部。

36. the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough. 数字（情况）达到底部（低谷）。

37. a is ...times as much/many as b. a是b的...倍。

38. a increased by... a增长了...

39. a increased to... a增长到...

40. high /low /great /small / percentage. 比低高（低）

41. there is an upward trend in the number of... ...数字呈上升趋势。

42. a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to... ...到...发生急剧上升。

43. from...to...the rate of decrease slow down. 从...到...，下降速率减慢。

44. from this year on，there was a gradual declined reduction in the..., reaching a figure of...

从这年起，...逐渐下降至...

45. be similar to... 与...相似

46. be the same as... 与...相同

47. there are a lot similarities/differences between...and... ...与...之间有许多相似（不同）之处

48. a has something in common with b a于b有共同之处。

49. the difference between a and b lies in... a与b之间的差别在于...

50. ... (year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in... ...年...急剧上升。

满分作文常用句式之图标题

1.总体而言，昂立托雅学院在20xx年间招生人数和营业收入都呈现出了非常快的发展局面。

To sum up, the student enrollment and the sales realized at Onlytoya College in 2007 both achieved rapid development.

2.总体而言，托雅雅思和托福两个项目在20xx年至20xx年两年间的发展虽然有些不均衡，但发展势头强劲。

To sum up, the two programs offered at Toya—IELTS and TOEFL, showed a strong momentum of development though it was unbalanced.

3.总体而言，托雅教师的收入状况在图表所标识的时段里呈现了非常乐观的增长。

To sum up, the income of Toya teachers showed a very optimistic growth during the designated period of time.

4.总体而言，随着雅思考试在中国境内场次的增加，参加雅思考试的人数呈现出了非常快的增长。

To sum up, with the increase of IELTS in China, the number of IELTS candidates showed a fast growth.

5.总体而言，在图表所标识的时段里，托雅学生在饭店就餐的频率在不断提高。 To sum up, during the designated period of time, the frequency of Toya students eating out at restaurants revealed a constant increase.

6.总体而言，托雅总部及其五个分校的招生在图表所标识的时段里呈现出了非

常快的发展。

To sum up, the student enrollment at Toya Headquarters and its five branch schools revealed a very quick development during the designated period of time.

7.总体而言，从托雅学生信息资料的分析可以看出：大多数人是为了出国目的的。

To sum up, through the analysis of the students’ information at Toya, we find that the majority of them wanted to go abroad.

8.总体而言，学雅思的学生的家庭背景总的来讲要优越于托福学生的家庭背景。 To summarize, the family backgrounds of the students studying for IELTS were generally superior to the family backgrounds of those who studied for TOEFL.

9.总体而言，在图表所标识的时段里，托雅女生比男生雅思考试成绩要高出很多。

To summarize, the IELTS scores of girls were much higher than those of boys at Toya during the designated period of time.

10.总体而言，在图表所标识的时段里，参加雅思考试的男性比例要远远高于参加托福考试的男性比例。

To summarize, the percentage of male IELTS candidates was much higher than that of male TOEFL candidates during the designated period of time.

1起伏不定go up and down/ wave/ fluctuate/ be unstable/ be in flexible

2 The first point to note is the huge increase in the number of

需要注意的第一点就是…的急剧增长

3 The statistics show that这些数据表明

4占百分之几Form/comprise/make up/constitute/ account for ….percent

5 This cure graph describes the trend of该曲线图描述了…的趋势

6 The statistics lead us to the conclusion that由这些数据，我们可以做出如下结论

7 As can be seen from the line graph, 由线状图我们可以看出

8增加：Increase / raise / rise / go up/ soar/ ascend/ mount/ climb

9减少：Decrease / grow down / drop / fall/ reduce/ descend/ shrink to/decline

10稳定：Remain stable / stabilize / level off/ remain unchanged

11 It can be seen from the table that

由表格我们可以看出

12 The table shows the changes in the number of… over the period from…to…

该表格展示了从…到…数据的变化

13 The table provides some data of

该表格提供了有关…的数据

14 As can be seen clearly from the table,

从表格中我们可以清楚地看出，

15 As can be seen from the table, great changes have taken place in... 从表格中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化

16 This table illustrates the changing proportion of A and B from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系

17急剧地 sharply, steeply, dramatically, drastically, suddenly

18显著地,considerably, significantly, noticeably, remarkably, rapidly

19稳步地, 逐渐地 steadily, moderately, gradually, smoothly

20轻微地, 缓慢地 slightly, slowly, mildly, moderately

21 The following diagram shows the structure of...... 以下的图展示了...的结构

22 The picture illustrates...... 该图展示了...

23 It mainly consists of following steps. 它主要包括以下步骤

24The whole procedure can be divided into...stages. 整个的过程可以分为...步

25 The first step is to第一步是...

26 The next step is to接下来的一步是...

27 The last step is to最后的一步是...

28 The first stage involves第一步包括...

29 In the next stage接着，

30 In the last stage最后，

31The bar chart illustrates that…该柱状图展示了

32 As is shown in the bar chart, 如柱状图所示，

33It can be concluded from the bar chart that…从该柱状图我们可以推导出

34 The bar chart presents the general trend in…该柱状图描述了……总的趋势

35 This bar chart displays the numbers of…该柱状图展示了…的数据

36 The number of … increased by %…的数字上升了百分之…

37 The number of… dropped by %…的数字下降了百分之…

38 The chart reflects several trends. 该图展示了几个趋势

39As can be seen clearly from the bar chart, the fluctuation of…took place 从该柱状图我们可以清楚地看出：…出现了波动

40 Over the period from…to…the…remained level. 在……至……期间，…基本不变