考博英语作文点评

一、金融危机(答题型议论文)

Financial Crisis

he ongoing international financial crisis has landed the world economy in the most difficult situation since last century’s Great Depression. A mass of unemployment, difficult business conditions for enterprises (and housing have influenced our (life) . Therefore,just as the saying goes, “A fall in a pit, a gain in your wit”, We must learn from this crisis and spare no efforts to take some measure to solve this problem.

(As we know that ), there are many steps which can be (taken) to (undo) this problem. First of all, the government (would) should (introduce) relevant policies to help graduates and migrant workers find jobs and (provide) more government-funded jobs in public service. In addition, another way contributing to success of solving problem is help enterprises overcome the difficult period structural tax cut and technical innovation. At the same time, the government (would) increase spending in housing project to help vulnerable groups have the residence in both urban and rural areas.

(Above) all, to solve the problem of financial crisis, As a big responsible and developing country, China should act in active and responsible way during this crisis to keep steady and fast growth of economy, and contribute our power for global financial stability and world economic growth.

评论:写作还是需要使用书面语和适当地使用一些常用句型,特别是在开头和结尾。建议特别注意词汇的搭配和词组的使用。Above all是“首先”,不是“总而言之”,如果要表示总结归纳就要换成all in all。

二、信息技术(利弊型议论文)

Information Technology

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the use of information 1

technology. Generally speaking, it is widely believe (there are) several positive aspects as follows. (Firstly) , the internet, a typical application of information technology, presents an opportunity for advancement of acquisition and application of knowledge. (And secondly) , the internet provides people with a virtual existence which is far more appealing than traditional life. To begin with, the problem of information security is undoubtedly the most serious and threatening. sexy photo gatemany people have difficulty coping with the increased social and technological complexity and the overload brought forth by the information technology.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantage of information technology into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the information technology.

评论:博士英语写作最重要的一项技巧就是举例,一定要学会通过例举来支持你的观点,这样会让你的文章显得比较饱满,论证得更加充分。

运用名言警句的时候注意不要使用那些陈词滥调,特别是Every coin has two sides!

要注意定冠词的正确使用。

三、食品安全

Food Safety

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Currently, there is a widespread concern over food safety problem. many children (killed by) contaminated milk. . As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measure to solve this problem.

As we know, (that) are many steps which can be taken to this problem. First of all, (all the) (have to) make compensation . The leader of these companies ought to sentenced to death. In addition, food safety supervision and management system and strengthen food safety control “from the production line to the dining table” . Last but not the least, the knowledge of health should be popularized, and the awareness of personal health among the people in both urban and rural areas should be raised.

(Above all) , 评论:不能说as we know that…,

模板不能生搬硬套,一定要看它是否适用于文章的主题,一般来说在结尾段应该要首尾呼应,重申主题,不能光说一些无关痛痒的没有营养的话。

四、和谐社会

Establish A Harmonious Society

Nowadays,establishing a “harmonious society” is (today) the catchphrase of China’s political life, (it) is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to .

To begin with, the government is bound to carry out various policies to help graduates and migrant workers find jobs and provide more government-funded jobs in 3

public service. In addition, public funds for compulsory education in rural areas, offer more financial support to students from poor families and improve the well-being of middle and primary school teachers so as to promote equity in education and optimize the educational structure. At the same time, government increase spending in housing project so that the vulnerable groups (have) a residence .

评论:establishing a harmonious society可不是什么社会问题,而是我们应该竭力去达成的目标。

如果能增加一些有代表性的例子,可能会使你的论证更有说服力。

在开头可以描述一下和谐社会的模式或是给其下一个定义。

五、失业问题

Unemployment

Nowadays, more and more university graduates and migrant workers complain that they experience great difficu finding jobs. , we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem .

First of all, college graduates and migrant workers (Secondly) , the unemployed receive vocational training, which is expected to pay off in the short term and give them an advantage in the job market. It is due to the lack of professional skills that these workers have lagged behind in the society. , these training programs which aims to equip the workers with special skills such as typing , sewing and cooking will certainly help them to a large extent. In addition, psychological advice also available, 4

since unemployment, (apart from) the exerting financial pressure, brings enormous psychological discomfort. With the advice, the unemployed will learn how to the fierce competition in the technological age .

I am convinced that, with the joint efforts of the government and the society, we can be optimistic to win the current war on unemployment, and a bright future is awaiting us.

评语:文章一定要有主题和两三个分论点,要言之有物,要围绕主题,通过举例子、做比较等方法进行论证。

要注意单词的拼写。

句式要富于变换,要熟练掌握定语从句和现在分词作伴随状语的句型。 5

 

第二篇:考研英语复习:写作必备热点词汇总结

考研英语复习:写作必备热点词汇总结

1、经济:

economic globalization( 经济全球化) , sustainable development( 可持续发展) , unfair competition( 不正当竞争) , crack down on fake commodities ( 打假) , boom( 繁荣) , fierce competition(激烈竞争), credit crisis(信用危机), stabilize prices (稳定物价)

2、文化:

great and profound (博大精深的),integration and interaction( 融合交汇),crash( 碰撞),charming(极具魅力的),splendid(壮丽辉煌的),English fever( 英语热)

3、环保:

environment- friendly( 生态型的,环保的),threat of global warming(全球变暖的威胁) ,

promote fundamental shifts in the economic system and mode of economic growth(促进经济体制和经济增长方式的转变) ,curb environmental pollution/ bring the pollution under control(治理环境污染), develop renewable resources (开发可再生资源), a low-carbon economy (低碳经济)

4、科技:

science and technology( 科学技术) ,web-addiction(沉迷网络) , computer crime(电脑犯罪) , e-commerce( 电子商务) , virtual life ( 虚拟生活) , information era(信息时代) ,cyber romance(网恋),surf the Internet(网上冲浪)

5、就业:

applicant(申请人), position available/ vacant position(空缺职位), competent(能胜任的),be qualified for(合格的), proficiency(熟练程度 ),job arrangement and benefit(工作待遇和福利), promotion (晋升), gender-biased(性别歧视的), appearance-biased(相貌歧视的)

6、大学生活/教育:

cultivate(培养), further one‘s study (深造), quality education(素质教育), foster abilities(培养能力) , relieve the burden on students( 减轻学生负担) , be occupied with so much schoolwork( 忙于功课 )place emphasis on( 以 … 为重心) , comprehensive( 全面的,广泛的) ,practical capability(实际能力),duck-stuffing(填鸭式)

7、社会现象:

enlightening( 富有启发的) , cause alarm and attention( 引起了警惕和重视) , set good example for(为…树立榜样),dedicate(做贡献), take action (采取行动),ensure implementing activities(确保执行), vulnerable(易诱惑的,易受影响的),be supposed to(应该)

8、人物特征、情感描写:

strong-minded( 坚强的), industrious(勤奋的), promising(有前途的), dynamic(有生气的),

responsible(有责任心的), influential(有影响力的), profound(渊博精深的), devoted(忠实的,投入的),warm-hearted(热心的)

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