19xx-20xx年考研英语作文全部真题及例文

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:44 PM 标题: 1991-20xx年考研英语作文全部真题及例文

19xx年考研英语真题作文

Directions:

A、Title: WHERE TO LIVE-IN THE CITY OR THE COUNTRY?

B、Time limit:40 minutes

C、 Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)

D、Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence :“Many people appreciate the conveniences of the city.”

E、Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET.

OUTLINE:

1、Conveniences of the city

2、Attractions of the country

3、 Disadvantages of both

4、My preference

(15 points)

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【审题解题】

从标题和提纲看来，这是一篇典型的选择类议论言语。选择类的文章可以先写A和B的好处，再写A和B的坏处（被称为交替式）；也可以先写A的好处和坏处，再写B（被称为板块快）。从提纲看来，这里是第一种情况。这篇文章可以写成三段，第一段先写两者的优点，

第二段写两者的缺点，第三点写自己的选择；但是这里最好的写法还是根据提纲写成四段，也就是将两者的优点分开来写。

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【核心词汇】

attraction 具有吸引力的人或物，胜地

disadvantage 不利条件

prefer 宁可，更喜爱

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【参考范文】

Where to Live — In the City or the Country?

Many people appreciate the conveniences of the city. They can take less time to go to work because of the shorter distance and better transportation. They can enjoy themselves in restaurants, theaters and shopping malls. They can also get more information, better health care and better education.

Also country life has many attractions. Fresh air, beautiful scenery, and singing birds will enable

people to have a quieter and healthier life. Far from large crowds of people here and there, we will be able to have a better mood and concentrate on what we are doing.

However, both the city and the country have their own disadvantages. Living in the city, pelple are likely to suffer heavy traffic, poor housing, air pollution and noises, while in the country, life will not be so convenient as in the city.

As far as I an concerned, I prefer living in the country. I have been living in a big city for many years, and fed up with all the noises, which are a big annoyance both during the day and at night. It is my years’ wish to live a peaceful, healthy and relaxed life in the country.

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【实用词组】

May people…

Also… has many attractions…

However, both…and…have their own disadvantages…

As far as I an concerned, I prefer…

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【结构点评】

文章的整体写作完全按照构思展开。第一段在主题句之后，使用了段落写作中极为常见的方法之一的排比句来写，非常清晰。先写工作，再写娱乐，再写更广阔的方面——获取信息，保健和教育。

第二段的的第二、第三句话非常值得大家学习。第二句句首的主语是平行的名词词组，紧接首句，是上句中的attractions的具体体现，而后说这可以使得人们生活地安静、健康。第三句句首使用介词词组，而后句子的主干部分与上句在意义上平行，是说我们可以有个好心情，并可专心致志于我们所做的事。

第三段首句后只有一句话，使用了while来突显对比，非常简洁。最后一段写自身的情形，重要的是将独特之处写出来。

【文章点评】

首段中注意词、词组和句子等各个层面上的平行结构的精彩用法，其中形容词比较级的平行用法最为引人注目。注意末句中also的用法是表示强调，也是为了在平行之中突显变化，这是一种高级技巧，望大家学习。

第二段第二句的平行名词词组做主语效果强烈，其后又有形容词比较级的平行。第三句句首的far from large crowds of people让人想起哈代的名著《远离尘嚣》；句中concentrate on what we are doing是个非常好的词组，意即“专心致志于我们所做的事”。

第三段的第二句除了学习while之外，注意前面使用的是平行结构来删繁就简，而后面用的是比较，正好又呼应首段首句。

末段首句是段落的主题句，之后有两句话，分别写过去和未来的情形，个性强烈。第二句话中的be fed up with 表示“受够了”，其后又跟了一个非限制性定语从句。后面一句中years’ wish 是个好词组，表示“多年的心愿”，之后是三个形容词的平行，最后的in the country 是呼应本段首句，也是点题和扣提纲。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:45 PM

19xx年考研英语真题作文

Directions:

A. Title: FOR A BETTER UNDERSTANDING BETWEEN PARENT AND CHILD

B. Time limit: 40 minutes

C. Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)

D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence:“Nowadays there is often a misunderstanding between parent and child.”

OUTLINE:

1. Present situation: lack of communication between parent and child

2. Possible reasons:

1) Different likes and dislikes；2) Misunderstanding；3) Others

3. Suggestions:

1) For parents；2) For children

【审题解题】

19xx年的考研真题完全沿用了19xx年的做法，仍是命题作文，给出了英文标题、英文提纲和文章首句，只是提纲之详尽是绝无仅有的——第二和第三个要点分别分为三个和两个小点。这就不仅限定了篇章的安排，将段落的发展也做了规定，也就是将考察的重点基本放在了语言上面——实际上这是完全没有必要的，谋篇布局也是写作很重要的方面。我们可以看到，在以后的考试中再也没有出现这种情况。

这篇文章非常典型，属于原因——办法类的文章。首段是引入一个令人担忧的问题或者现象。

第二段是从三个方面来写可能的原因。第三段是从家长和孩子两个方面来写解决问题的办法。

【核心词汇】

reasons + account for (responsible for) 原因+解释

to enhance communication 加强交流

to achieve better understanding 达到进一步的理解

【参考范文】

For a Better Understanding between Parent and Child

Nowadays there is often a lack of understanding between parent and child. Parents often consider their children’s behaviors “irrational” while the children are always complaining about their

parents’ not understanding them. Consequently, the so-called generation gap comes into being.

In my opinion, there are several reasons responsible for the situation. First, it is most natural for the two generations to have different likes and dislikes since they grow up in different times and environments. What really counts, in my mind, is that when you develop an interest or a hobby, you don’t hinder others’ life. Second, their understanding of the world and methods of thinking are also different from each other, which is likely to cause misunderstandings. If both parents and children become more reasonable and tolerant, will there be so many quarrels and conflicts? Last but not least, nowadays, in most cases both parents and children are too busy to have enough time to exchange ideas with each other.

The most effective way to solve this problem is that parents and children make joint efforts to enhance their communication. Parents should be patient enough so as to listen to their children If they remember how they felt when young, their children’s clothes and hairstyles will stop being that irritating. The children should respect their parents, Whose suggestions, although hard to follow at the beginning, always prove to be beneficial and valuable. Only in this way can parents and children achieve better understanding.

【重点句型】

Nowadays there is often a… between… and …

In my opinion, there are several reasons responsible for the situation. Fist,… second, … last but not least, …

The most effective way to solve this problem is that… Only is this way can we, …

【文章点评】

第一段的第二句在while前使用动词加宾语加宾补的结构，而后面使用的是动词词组加动名词的复合结构做宾语的情形。句中irrational表示“不理性的”，complain意即“抱怨”，后接about或of。第三句使用so-called引出术语generation gap对此现象作小结，非常恰当，而后的动词词组come into being表示“形成”。

第二段分三点来谈该现象的原因。第一点有两句话，第一句中的most表示“非常”，修饰natural；第二句中的count表示“be important”，其后的hinder表示“妨碍”，此处用affect亦可。第二点也有两句话，第二句使用了条件状语从句和反问句，还有形容词和名词的平行用法，请大学细细琢磨。第三点只有一句话，too?to?表示“太?以至于不能?”，其后的exchange ideas表示“交流思想”。这一点实际上是与提纲中的第一点也有呼应，又为最后一段的首末句呼应埋下了伏笔。

第三段中的第二句是说父母们应该更耐心地倾听，之后使用了破折号；句中的that意即“那么”，表示强调，irritating表示“恼人的”。第三句也是个长句，使用的非限制性定语从句，follow这里表示“遵照、听从”，接宾语suggestions; at the beginning表示“开始”。 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:45 PM

1993考研真题作文

Directions:

A. Title: ADVERTLSEMENTS ON TV

B. Time limit: 40 minutes

C. Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)

D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence:“Today more and more advertisements are seen on the TV screen”。Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET.

OUTLINE:

1. Present state；2. Reasons；3. My comments (15 points)

【审题解题】

这篇命题作文是一篇原因类的文章。文章共分三段，第一段是写当前电视上广千很多这一现象；第二段是写这一现象的原因；第三段是写个人的看法。这里实际上第一段与第三段都是相当灵活的——如果认为广告是个令人忧虑的问题，这里应提出解决的办法；如果认为广告是个好事情，则是如何推动其进一步发展。本文可采用更全面的办法，就是兼顾两个方面。如果这样写的话，要注意首尾两段的呼应。

【核心词汇】

to enter into 进入

to attract one’s attention 吸引某人的注意力

reasons for this phenomenon 这一现象的原因

in favor of 赞同，支持

【参考范文】

Advertisements on TV

Today more and more advertisements are seen on the TV screen. There are so many of them that we can hardly find a TV program not accompanied by them. In a word, advertisements have entered into our life and attracted more and more attention.

Generally speaking, the major reasons for this phenomenon can be listed as follows. To begin with, manufactures need advertisements to promote the sales of their products since the competition in modern market is so fierce and the choices for consumers are so many. Second, the television companies need to get funds from the advertisers to facilitate the development of their programs. Third, advertisements can help consumers to gain information about new products. Last but not the least, a successful advertisement has artistic value and social significance in itself.

As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of those ingenious, interesting and informative TV advertisements. No matter how many times I watch them, I rarely get bored. And I hope there will be less advertisements cutting into a program, for the inserted advertisements always hinder me from enjoying the program to my heart’s content.

【黄金模板】

As far as I am concerned… And I hope there will be… for…

Today more and more… are seen… These are so many of them that we can hardly… In a word… Generally speaking the major reasons for this phenomenon can be listed as follows. To begin with… Second/In the second place… Last but not the least…

【结构点评】

首段的中间一句是对首句的进一步说明，可用so? that? 这一结果状语从句来加强效果，第三句是段内的小结，呼应首句。次段分成四个方面来说，结构非常清晰，我们应注意连接词的使用。第三段分两个方面来说，处理起来不必非常平行。

【妙笔生花】

首段次句的状语从句中使用了动词加宾语加过去分词作宾补。第三句中有动宾词组的叠用。

第二段分四点来写，每一点是一句话，第一点中的promote the sales of their products表示“促进他们产品的销售”，描述竞争激烈首选fierce，用intense亦可；第二点中的fund表示“资金”，facilitate表示“促进”；最后一点中的artistic value表示“艺术价值”。

末段分两方面来说，前面两句，后面只有一句。第一句使用了三个平行的形容词，而且还压了头韵。关于头韵我们来看看美国女作家Adrienne Rich名作Claiming an Education中的句子:

Women everywhere are finding the courage to do this, more and more, and we are finding that courage both in our study of women in the past who possessed it, and in each other as we look to other women for comradeship, community, and challenge. The difference between a life lived actively, and a life of passive drifting and dispersal of energies, is an immense difference.

虽然我们记下的总是后一句话，但前句中的名词平行却是异常引人注目，三词全以“c”开头，而平行中又有了变化（前两词更接近）。第二句使用让步状语从句，效果很不错。末句是从另一方面来说这个问题，for是引出原因状语从句，其中的insert与主句中的cut into是一个意思；hinder me from doing? 表示“阻碍我做某事”，to one’s heart’s content表示“尽情地”。

【文后之思】

练习多年前的经典真题作文是非常有好处的，可能通过考研作文的沿革揣摩考研英语写作的规律，但要注意一是字数不宜少于180字，二是不一定受首句甚至提纲的束缚。这样持之以恒，必有大的进步。在多年的写作实践中，我发现，那些将阅读、背诵、模仿与练习、批改相结合的同学进步最大。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:45 PM

19xx年考研英语真题作文

Directions:

A. Title: ON MAKING FRIENDS

B. Time limit: 40 minutes

C. Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the given opening sentence)

D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence:“As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend”.

E. Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET.

OUTLINE:

1. The need for friends；2. True friendship；3. My principle in making friends。(15 points)

【审题解题】

这篇文章的结构是较为复杂的，包含了三个相对独立的部分。第一段是写人们需要朋友的原因——可从两个方面来写。第二段是写什么是真正的友谊，可从三个方面来写。第三段是写自己在交友之中的原则，可从两个方面来写。

【核心词汇】

as to 至于，关于

to get / form / build and maintain friendship 得到/形成/建立/建立和保持友谊

lasting / enduring friendship 持久的友谊

honest and conscientious friends 诚实和勤劳尽责的朋友

true / genuine friends 真正的朋友

tolerance and forgiveness 忍耐和宽容

【参考范文】 On Making Friends

As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend. Living in the society, only when a person has friends can he live a happy and colorful life. What’s more, in this modern society where communication becomes so important, one’s ability to form and maintain lasting friendship has been regarded as a necessity for a successful career.

As to what true friendship means, my opinion is as follows. First of all, true friendship originates from sincerity of both parts, and only sincere friends will give us a hand when we are in need of help. Second, no matter whether they are similar or different, genuine friends should be able to get along, share experiences and exchange ideas with each other. Last but by no means the least, since no one is perfect, we should learn tolerance and forgiveness, which are essential to an enduring friendship.

As far as I an concerned, my principle in making friends is that friends can be few but must be well chosen. In the first place, I would like to make friends with those who are honest and conscientious. In the second place, once the selection is made, I will trust him and offer him help whenever need arises.

【黄金模板】

As a human being, one can hardly do without… Living in the society, only when a person… what’s more…

As to what… means, my opinion is as follows. First of all… Second… Last but by no means the least…

As far as I am concerned, my principle/view… is that… In the first place, … In the second place, …

【结构点评】

第一段和第三段都分两个方面来写。第一段的第一点没有使用连接词，这时第二点前的连接词就要有所选择，可能用what’s more, moreover, furthermore等等。第三段的两点前都使用了连接词，这是就应与三点或三点以上的段落有所区分。大家看到，首段与末段在这里使用了不同的方法，显得相得益彰。

第二段分三个方面来说，应注意连接词的配套使用——这里是从最重要的说到最不重要的，所以分别使用了first of all, second, last but by no means the least。

【妙笔生花】

第一段的第二句使用了现在分词短语作状语，之后使用了only开头的倒装句，突出了朋友的重要性而后有形容词平行的用法。第三句中的介词短语作状语非常值得学习，这里关系副词where引导的定语从句使其结构简单之中又富于变化，具有很强的表意功能。之后的form and maintain lasting friendship表示“建立和保持长久的友谊”，form亦可用get或build代替；be regarded as表示“被认为是?”，此处动词亦可用consider；其后的a necessity for a successful career非常精彩，请大家学习，其中a necessity比necessary 要好，请大家品味，万里for a successful career意义凝冻。

第二段分三点说，每一点各有一句话。第一点中的originate from表示“源于”，而后有sincerity和sincere的连续使用；而后的give sb. a hand和in need of help分别表示“帮助某人”和“需要帮助”，意义恰合。第二点中的similar和different指的是两种朋友——相似的和不同的，而后的genuine呼应了上文的true，用来修饰friend或friendship；之后的动词词组的平行使用。第三点中先说“没有人是完美的”，之后说我们应学会容忍(tolerance)和宽恕(forgiveness)，而这对于持久的友谊是至关重要的(essential)，其中enduring等于上文的lasting。

第三段的首句是模仿Samuel Paterson名句:Books, like friends, should be few and well chosen。而后分两点来说。第一点中使用了形容词的平行，conscientious表示“按良心办事的”。第二点中使用one the selection is made这样的一个时间状语从句，时间的错落感就体现出来了，其后有个很好的时间状语从句whenever need arises，表示“每当有需要的时候。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:45 PM

19xx年考研英语真题作文

Directions:

A. Title: The “Project Hope”

B. Time limit: 40 minutes

C. Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the give opening sentence)

D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence:“Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country”. E. Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET.

OUTLINE:

1. Importance of good health

2. Ways to keep fit

3. My own practices (15 points)

【审题解题】

这篇文章写的是教育问题，题目是The “Project Hope”（希望工程，很可惜有个别的同学不知道这个短语是指希望工程）。提纲共分三点，可相应地写成三段:第一段是写当前的状况，首句已写出教育的重要性，下面应立即写当前不足之处，以突显实施此工程的追切性。第二段是写该工程的必要性，可分两点来写。第三段是写我的建议:这里我们可以写得很简洁，就用两句话——第一句写建议，第二句写这样做的意义。

【核心词汇】

can’t afford to go to school 上不起学

drop out of school 辍学

can’t gain access to education 没有机会上学

illiteracy and poverty 无知和贫穷

accept donations 创始项目

promote education 促进教育

【参考范文】The “project hope”

Education plays a very important role in the modernization of our country. The modernization of our country calls for the modernization of education in advance. However, the development of education is by no means balanced all over the country. In some poverty-stricken areas, a surprisingly large number of school-agars cannot afford to go to school. As a result, the “Project Hope” is initiated to promote education in those areas.

This project, in my eyes, is necessary especially in two respects. For one thing, if children can’t gain access to education, the lack of human resources will be inevitable, and how can we hope to get rid of illiteracy and poverty? For another, at present it is beyond the ability of our government to provide enough money for so many school dropouts. The “project hope” accepts donations from organizations, enterprises and individuals, and then distributes the fund scientifically and reasonably to those in need of help.

My suggestion is that all of us who have the financial ability join in the Project to help those school-agers. Only when all of us extend the helping hands can we hope to modernize our education and our nation.

【黄金模板】

? plays a very important role in… However… As a result, …

This project, in my eyes, is necessary especially in two aspects. For one thing…. For another… My suggestion is that…

【结构点评】

第一段采用总一分——总的结构，第一句说教育在国家的现代化中起着重要的作用，第二句是反过来说，使意思更为明确，起到了强调的作用——国家的现代化需要教育首先现代化。而后用however引用转折，说明教育发展并不均衡；在一些非常贫困的地区，许多孩子上不起学。最后一句呼应段首，说希望工程应运而生了。

第二段分两个方面来说希望工程的必要性。首先是说孩子上不起学，那么必然会带来人力资源的匮乏，那我们又怎么能消灭文盲和贫困呢？其次是说光靠政府是不够的，还需要各个组织、企业和个人的资助。

第三段我的建议只有一句，非常简洁，就是所有有经济能力的人都加入这个工程来帮助那些需要帮助的孩子们。后面一句说这样做的意义，只有所有人都伸出援助之手，我们才能期盼教育的现代化和国家的现代化。这里使用了一个动词加了两个宾语，巧妙地呼应了文章第一段的前两句。

【妙笔生花】

第一段第二句中是call for和in advance分别表示“需要”和“事先”。第三句中的by no means表示“一点也不”。第四句中的poverty-stricken表示“贫穷的”。

第二段的首然使用了插入语，还有especially表示强调。以下分两点来说，第一点只有一句话，却包含了条件状语从句和反问句，逻辑清楚，语气强烈。句中gain access to education表示“获得受教育的机会”，inevitable表示“不可避免地”，illiteracy and poverty表示“文盲和贫困”。第二点包话两句话，第一句中的beyond the ability of表示“超过?的能力”，而dropout表示“退学学生”，来自动词词组drop out of school；其后的donation表示“资助”，distributes the fund scientifically and reasonably表示“科学地、合理地分配资金”。

最后一段的第一句中的join in表示“参加”。第二句使用了only开头的倒装句，非常有力。 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:45 PM

19xx年考研真题作文

Directions:

A. Title: GOOD HEALTH

B. Time limit: 40 minutes

C. Word limit: 120-150 words (not including the give opening sentence)

D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence:“The desire for good health is universal”.

E. Your composition must be written clearly in the ANSWER SHEET.

OUTLINE:

1. Importance of good health

2. Ways to keep fit

3. My own practices (15 points)

【审题解题】

这篇文章延续了数年来的体例，考的仍是命题作文。提纲分为三点，我们按照惯例分三段来

写。第一段是写健康的重要性，第一句已给出，我们可以写得很简洁，增加一句作进一步说明即可。

第二段是写保持健康的方法，可分为三个方面来写。第三段是写我自己的做法。考察这一模块是数年来一个流行的趋势，即写自己的部分——称为从宏观出微观亦可，叫做从整体到个体也罢，一定要把自己的特别之处写出来，这里与上一段不同，可以写得很具体，但又是上面一段基本原则的具体体现。这一段我们分为两点来说，第一点写冬泳，就是呼应第二段的第一点，第二点说晚上十一点前睡觉，就是呼应第二段的第二点，而后做结。

【核心词汇】

do regular exercises 有规律地运动

strong and energetic 健康和精力充沛

balanced diet and sufficient sleep 平衡的饮食和充足的睡眠

mental health 心理健康

strike a balance between work and relaxation 在工作和娱乐间取得平衡

【点石成金】 Good Health

The desire for good health is universal. It is almost believed by everyone that good health is an essential part of a happy life.

The best way to keep fit, in my opinion, is to do regular exercises. Just as the Chinese proverb goes, “Life lies in exercises”, exercises never fail to make us stronger and more energetic. Moreover, we should put great emphasis on forming good habits, which can turn out to be invaluable as time goes by. A balanced diet and sufficient sleep are both indispensable. Finally, mental health, in my mind, is also of vital importance. We are happy and healthy so long as we not only embrace life’s wonderful moments but also stand up to its twists and turns.

As for as I am concerned. I have practiced winter swimming for many years. I become not only healthier and more vigorous, but also more optimistic, confident and persistent. What’s more, I try to go to bed before 11 o’clock in the evening, because I firmly believe that burning the night oil is harmful to my health. I believe only by striking a balance between work and relaxation can I have a healthy body and an intelligent mind.

【黄金模板】

The desire for… is universal. It is almost believed by everyone that…

The best way to keep fit, in my opinion, is to… Moreover, we should put great emphasis on… Finally, … in my mind, is also of vital importance.

As far as I am concerned, … I believe only by striking a balance between … and …can I …

【妙笔生花】

第二段分三个方面说，第一点中的第二句运用了一句中国谚语——请大家注意，如果不知道确切的译法，就应该选用英语中固有的谚语。此句后的never fail是双重否定的用法，语气很强烈；之后有形容词比较级的平行用法，一个加er，一个加more，平行之间又有变化，确属高级技巧。第二点中的form good habits意即“养成好习惯”。第三点中的not only? but

also?表示对比，其中embrace和stand up to 分别指“拥抱”和“勇敢面对”，注意其中不同的感情色彩，而twists and turns表示“曲折变化”。

第三段分两点说，第一点的第二句中有两处平行的用法，非常引人注目。这一点是呼应第二段的第一点。第二点只有一句话，是呼应上段的第二点；其中burn the night oil表示“开夜车”。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:46 PM

19xx年考研英语真题作文

Directions:

A. Study the following set of pictures carefully and write an essay in no less than 120 words.

B. Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET.

C. Your essay should cover all the information provided and meet the requirements below:

OUTLINE:

1. Interpret the following picture.

2. Predict the tendency of tobacco consumption and give your reasons.

【审题解题】

19xx年考研英语写作经历了一次重大变革——由传统的命题作文转向图画作文与图表作文——虽然之后对此类型进行了不断的改进，但这一总的趋势一直沿用至今。写作的字数由120至150字改为不少于120字，为第二年提高字数打下了基础。这篇文章没有题目，写作时也不必加上。

这是一个比较复杂的图表题，出现了一个柱状图，一个饼状图和另外两个数据（单个数据无法称为图表，合在一起只能称为图画）。绘出英文提纲这一点始终没有改变。这里分为两点，可写作两，第一点是解释下面的图画，第二点是预测烟草消费的趋势并给出原因。

这里我们必须清楚吸烟人口比例与吸烟损失（包括金钱与生命）都是绝对数字，都是相当惊人的，而烟草总产量是呈递减趋势的两个数字，也是预测的出发点。这里提纲中的第一点是阐释图画实际上就没概括地描述数字——这里我们可将前三个数据放在第一段，瑞加上统领句；然后把后一对数据放在第二段，以做为趋势预测的基础。第二段可以这样写:首句描述这一对数据，次句作预测，而后分两方面来说，最后一句做结，这样整个段落和整篇文章都可以达到前后呼应的效果了。

【核心词汇】

arouse / receive attention / concern 引起/受到注意/关注

As is indicated / shown by the pictures 如图所示

Witness a decrease 目睹了减少（拟人手法）

Win the fight / battle against smoking 取得后烟战斗的胜利

【参考范文】

The problem of smoking has received more and more concern from all over the world. As is

indicated by the pictures, smokers for nearly 20% of the world population. And tobacco has caused a loss of 200 billion U.S. dollars and claimed 3 million lives annually.

However, it is billion that the world tobacco production witnessed a decrease from 14.364 billion pounds in 1994 to 14.2 in 1995. according to this change. I confidently believe that there will be less and less tobacco consumption in the future, generally for two reasons. On the one hand, being aware of the harm of smoking, more and more people join in the fight against it. They either try their best to give up smoking or advise others not to smoke any longer.

On the other hand, many governments have attached more attention to this social hazard and take various measures to put an end to it. Therefore, I have every reason to believe that the fight against smoking will be won by us human beings at last.

【黄金模板】

The problem of … has received more and more concern from all over… As is indicated by the pictures….

However, … According to this change. …. Generally for two reasons. On the one hand, … On the other hand, … Therefore. I have every reason to believe that …

【妙笔生花】

首段第二句中的account for表示“占”。第三句中的造成金钱的损失用“cause a loss of。。。”，夺去生命用“claim lives”，用在同一句话中显得比较紧凑，句中的annually表示“每年地”。

次段首句一定要把变化的趋势写出来，所以用了witness a decrease from?in?to?in的结构。第二句很关键，不仅做了预测，而且起了承上启下的作用，这主要是借助了句首的According to this change和句末的generally for two reasons。

第四句中的social hazard表示“社会危害”，take various measures to put an end to it表示“采取各种措施消灭它”。最后一句包含一宾语从句，have every reason to? 表示“有充分理由相信?”；从句中使用被动句强调了主语。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:46 PM

19xx年考研真题作文

Directions:

A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.

B. Your essay should meet the requirements below:

OUTLINE:

1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.

2. Give your comments. (15 points)

【审题解题】

19xx年的考研写作是第一次考图画作文，图画作文又可分为漫画(cartoon)与照片(photograph)

等多种。这首题目属于漫画类，画的是一只下蛋的母鸡，手中拿着一份承诺书，旁边还有一首诗。从19xx年至20xx年，共考了两次图表作文，六次图画作文。从20xx年到20xx年，更是连续考察了五次图画作文。

从这一年起考研写作字数从不少于120字增加到不少于150字，这一要求一直延续到20xx年。从20xx年起，字数增加到200字左右，写作部分所占分值增加到20分，充分体现了对写作部分的重视。

这次的提纲包含两点，第一点是写出漫画所包含的信息；第二点是给出评论。总的来说，这一提纲的第一点是相当固定的，是对漫画的描述。这里我们注意应着力描写母鸡手中的承诺书，而勿须将旁边的逐句翻译，但这篇文章原来没有题目，则可以借鉴诗歌的题目——《如此承诺》，写作My View on So-called Promises，其中so-called即是“所谓的”意思。提纲的第二点即是较为笼统的，给大家留出的自由驰骋的空间很大。按照上述分析，这篇文章可以分为三段来写，首段是描述图画，次段写此种承诺产生的原因，末段写这些承诺的危害。

【核心词汇】

make premises 做出承诺

duties and responsibilities 责任和义务

take?as? 把。。。看作。。。

absurd and ridiculous 荒谬的，荒唐的

come into being 形成

widespread empty promises 普遍的空话

【参考范文】My view on So-called promises

As can seen from the cartoon, a hen is making promises that her eggs are all round and consist of shells, egg whites and yolks. In our daily life, many people, just like the hen, keep making such promises in which they take duties and responsibilities as virtues to be proud of.

Such promises, absurd and ridiculous even at the first sight, come into being mainly for two reasons. First, some profit-driven enterprises take advantages of such promises to win people’s trust and understanding——their advertisements are intentionally misleading and their behavior is sheer cheating. Second, some organizations and individuals, obsessed with fame and success, are by all means publicizing their deeds, but actually they just assume their own duty.

These widespread empty promises will do great harm to people as well as to the whole society. They will result in a dishonest atmosphere in our society——people will lose mutual trust and become more doubtful. As a result, the economic development of our country will be hindered.

【黄金模板】

As can be seen from the cartoon, … . In our daily life, … .

Such…… and … even at the first sight, come into being mainly for two reasons. First (On the one hand), … Second(On the other hand), …

These widespread… will do great harm to people as well as to the whole society.

【结构点评】

首段共分两句，首句将母鸡承诺的两句话简练地描述了出来，次句立即进行类推（analogy），在日常生活中许多人与这只母鸡一样，把自己的责任当成了引以为傲的美德。

次段写此类承诺形成的原因，在主题句后分两方面来说。一方面，某些追逐利益的企业利用这样的承诺来骗取人们的信任和理解，其广告是故意的误导，其行为纯属欺诈。另一方面，一些组织与个人为了名声和成功大肆宣扬本来是自己份内应做的事情。

末段写这些承诺的危害——既危害了人们，又危害了社会。这些承诺会导致社会中不良风气的产生，人们会失去相互信任，变得更多疑。结果是经济发展受到了影响。

【妙笔生花】

首段首句的as can be seen from the cartoon是常用的模板句，make promises表示“承诺”，而sell, egg whine和yolk分别是表示“蛋壳”，“蛋清”和“蛋黄”。次句立即借助插入语just like the hen作一类比，说有些人总是作这样的承诺。

次段首句后两点来说:第一点中使用了破折号作进一步的说明，profit-driven和take advantage of分别表示“追逐利益的”和“利用”，破折号后的intentionally表示“故意地”，misleading表示“误导的”，sheer表示“完全的、彻底的”。第二点中使用了插入语obsessed with fame and success是一个过去分词短语，相当于一个定语从句，be obsessed with意即“着学于。。。的”；by all means表示“利用一切手段”，publicize表示“宣扬”，assume one’s duty表示“承担责任”，亦可用take on。

第三段首句之后有两句话:前一句中的result in表示“结果是。。。”，mutual trust表示“相互责任”；后一句开头的as a result起承接上句的作用，其后的hinder表示“阻碍”，亦可用affect。 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:46 PM

19xx年考研英语真题作文

Directions:

A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words.

B. Your essay should cover these points;

OUTLINE:

1. effect of the country’s growing human population in its wildlife

2. possible reasons for the effect

3. your suggestion for wildlife protection (15 points)

【审题解题】

19xx年的考研英语写作继19xx年之后再次考察了图表作文，也是至今为止最后一次考图表作文，其后一直考的都是图画作文。这一次给出了两幅图表，分别标示了美国人口的增长与物种的灭绝。我们截取共同的1800的到19xx年的情况，可以发现两个数据均呈上升的趋势，由此可以得出人口增长很大程度上导致物种灭绝的结论。

提纲要求我们写三点，第一点是写人口增长对野生动植物的影响。第二点写可能的原因。第三点是写自己对野生动植行保护的建议。第一段自然是描述数据， 而后得出结论。第二段可以在统领句后为三点来写。第三段分为政府和公民两个方面来说。

【核心词汇】

soar 高涨，剧增

rapid growth of U. S. population 美国人口的快速增长

sharp decline of wildlife species 野生动植物种类的迅速下降

result from 由?引起，是?的结果

forbid wildlife hunting 禁止捕猪野生动植物

be aware of this ecological crisis 意识到这场生态危机

take on the responsibility of wildlife protection 担负起保护野生动植物的责任

【点石成金】 the ups and downs of population growth

As is seen from the two graphs, it is clear that with the rapid growth of U.S. population from 1800 to 1990, the number of its wildlife species no longer existing soared during the same period. Naturally, we can draw the conclusion that the sharp decline of wildlife species resulted from the population growth.

Two reasons may account for this phenomenon. To begin with, as the population grows, people consume much more natural resources, which often leads to excessive hunting. Second, with the increase of human activities, modern people take up more and more space. Which has a great impact on other species. Finally, the problem of pollution becomes more and more serious with the development of modern industry. More and more animals have to adapt themselves to the decaying environment or move to a totally different place, but not all of them are fortunate enough to survive the changes.

Solving this problem calls for, above all, the government’s efforts to control population growth, to decrease industrial pollution and to enhance the laws to forbid wildlife hunting. Moreover, common citizens should be aware of this ecological crisis and take on the responsibility of wildlife protection. In a word, only when the government and the common people make joint e f forts can we hope to find a satisfactory solution to this problem.

【黄金模板】

As is seen from the two graphs, it is clear that …. Naturally, we can draw the conclusion that …. ? reasons may account for this phenomenon. To begin with … . second …. Finally.

? calls for, above all, … .moreover, … . in a word, only when the government and the common people make joint efforts can we hope to ….

【结构点评】

首段首句先描述数据，次句得出结论。次段首句是主题句，而后分三方面来说。第三段先分政府和公司两方面来说解决方法，而后做结。

【妙笔生花】

首段首句非常精妙:先以as is seen from the two graphs 开头，再使用一个主语从句以表示客观，而后用with the rapid growth 和during to the same period来表示两者之间的密切联系。第二句以naturally开头，使用模板句we can draw the conclusion, 而后引出同位语从句——物种的急剧减少是人口增长的结果。

第二段首句是常用的模板句，而后分三点来说。第一点是说随着人口增长，人们会消费越来越多的自然资源，而这会导致过度的捕猎。句中consume、natural resources和excessive hunting分别表示“消费”、“自然资源”和“过度捕猎”。第二点是说随丰人类活动的增加，现代人占用了越来越多的地方，这对其它物种产生了巨大影响。句中human activities、take up和impact分别表示“人类活动”、“占据”和“影响”。第三点是说污染的影响，其中后一句非常值得大家学习。

More and more animals have to adapt themselves to the decaying environment or move to a totally different place, but not all of them are fortunate enough to survive the changes. 句中adept themselves to the decaying environment表示“适应于恶化的环境”，之后使用了部分否定句，survive 表示“幸存下来”。

最后一段使用了分——总的结构，先分两面三刀点来说，首句讲政府应当控制人口增长，减少工业污染和加强法律保护。第二句是讲公民应该意识到这场生态危机（ecological crisis） 的严重性并肩负(take, on,亦可用shoulder)起保护动植物的责任。末句是以only开头的倒装句，是个经典模板句。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:46 PM

20xx年考研真题作文

Directions:

A. Study the following two pictures carefully and write an essay of at least 150 words.

B. Your essay should meet the requirements below:

OUTLINE:

1. Describe the pictures.

2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the pictures.

3. Suggest your counter-measures. (15 points)

【审题解题】

200年的考研写作考察的是图画作文，它标志着真正意义上的图画作文考察的开始。这是继19xx年之后第二次考图画作文，也是之后连续考察图画作文的开始，19xx年的图画作文并不典型，因为包含的文字（包含图画内的和图画边的）太多；从20xx年起，就变得言简意赅了。

这里给出了两张图画，形成了强烈的对比:1099年只有一艘捕鱼的船只，鱼儿却很多；到了19xx年，船只成群，而鱼儿却只剩一条了。这里给人的震撼是巨大的，在多年的商业捕鱼之后，渔业资源受到了巨大的破坏。提纲共有三点，第一点是描述图画，第二点是推断绘画

者的意图，第三点给出对策，也就是解决办法。我们应该根据提纲来构建文章的三个段落。

【核心词汇】

alert us to ? 使我们对?有所警觉

the diminishing fishery resources 逐渐减少的渔业资源

ensure the moderate exploration and reasonable disposition of natural resources 保证适度开发和自然资源的合理配置

destructive ecological disaster 毁灭性生态灾难

heighten awareness 提高意识

【组词成句】

第二段的首句应该紧紧扣住提纲的第二点，同时道出绘画者的用意:

It is most obvious that the drawer means to alert us to the diminishing fishery resources because of excessive global commercial fishing. 句中的most表示“非常”，语气要强于very, mean后面加不定式时表示“意欲，想要做某事”，alert us to ? 表示“使得我们对?有所警觉”， diminishing fishery resources表示“日益枯竭的渔业资源”，excessive表示“过渡的”。

【点石成金】

The picture, “a brief history of commercial fishing”, shows us that there have been less and less fish in the ocean for the last century. The two parts that comprise the picture display totally different scenes in 1099 and 1995. In1900 there were a large number of fish while only one boat was fishing on the ocean. But in 1995 fishing boats increased sharply while only one fish was left. We can’t help asking ourselves a disturbing question:will there be a day when no fish are for our descendants?

It is most obvious that the drawer means to alert us to the diminishing fishery resources because of excessive global commercial fishing. If no measures are taken to ensure the moderate exploration and reasonable disposition of natural resources, a destructive ecological disaster may not be far away and the nest victim will probably be man himself.

There fore, it is high time we took effective measures to solve this problem, The essential solution, in my opinion, is to combine fishing with raising and protecting not least, people’s awareness of protecting natural resources must be heightened through education and publicity. In a word, we can never solve the problem until all of us take actions to protect fishery resources.

【黄金模板】

The picture shows us that… We can’t help asking ourselves a disturbing question: will there be a day when…

It is most obvious that the drawer means to alert us to …

Therefore it is high time we took effective measures to solve this problem. The essential solution, in my opinion, is to … In addition,… Last but not least,… In a word, we can never solve the problem until all of us take actions to,…

【结构点评】

第一段是描述图画，这里应将两幅图画的对比表现出来，并将重点落在渔业资源的大幅度减少上面。本段共分五句话。首句先总括性地说出上个世纪海洋中的鱼儿越来越少了一这事实。次句说两幅图画对比明显，第三句第四句分别说1900和19xx年的情形，都使用了while来表示对比。最后一句非常精彩:我们不禁问自己一个令人担忧的问题，是否未来有一天我们的子孙将一条鱼也没有了呢？此句对下面引出绘画者的意图起了很好的铺垫作用。

第二段首句说出了画家的意图是想让我们对这个严重的问题有所警觉，之后进一步说，如果不采取措施，毁灭性的生态灾难就将不远了，而下一个受害者就是人本身。第三段是写对策，首句是常用的模板句，而后分三个方面来说，最后做结。

【妙笔生花】

首段次句中的comprise表示“组成”；末句非常引人注目，can’t help表示“忍不住”，之后是个问句:will there be a day when?表示“会有那一天时?吗？”，这是把问题推出极致的办法，能更容易地看清问题。

第二段的次句中的moderate exploration and reasonable disposition of natural resources表示“自然资源的适度开采和合理配置”，使用了平行的名词词组；destructive ecological disaster表示“毁灭性的生丰收灾难“，may not be far away 表示“可能就不远了”，victim表示“受害者”。请大家仔细品味这句话的语气——为了获得强烈的效果，在词、词组和句型的选用和排列上都要下功夫，这里看似简的himself实际上就是为了加强语气来增加上去的。

第三段的首句是常用的句型it is high time we?后面用过去时。第一点说的是将捕鱼和养鱼、护鱼结合起来，raise就是养的意思。第二占是说应立法控制商业捕鱼。第三点是说加强人们保护自然资源的意识，包含heighten awareness这个好词组。末句使用经典句never?until做结，语气强烈。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:46 PM

20xx年考研真题作文3

Directions:

Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, live is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it, There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to newspaper to:

1. show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,

2. give a specific example, and

3. give your suggestion as to the best way to show live. You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

[审题解题]

20xx年考研英语写作又经历了一次重大变革——要求字数从150字以上提高到200字左右，也就是说，写在180字以下的文章要扣分。同时写作这部分所占的分数也由15分提高到20分，充分体出了对写作这一部分的重视。写作是一种产出性的技能，最能直接体现考生综合

运作语方的能力，再怎么强调也不为过啊。

这次的漫画可谓历年考试中最为简明的，但却意义深远:油灯上面的火焰象是个孩子的微笑，在黑暗中发出明亮的光芒，上面有一句话:“爱心是一盏灯，在越黑暗的地方越明亮”——这句话很关键，前面是个暗喻，后面是个越?越?的结构。提纲分为三点，一是写出对漫画象征意义的理解，二是举出一个具体的事例，三是就献爱心的最好办法给出建议。我们应紧扣提纲，可分三段来写。在第一段中，不仅应包含漫画的描述，还应描述旁边的一句话。在

第二段中，应举一个能与漫画所表达的深刻的道理相匹配的典型事例。

[核心词汇]

present 呈现

gives out bright flame 发出明亮的火焰

so innocent and pure smile 如此天真纯洁的笑容

devoted ourselves to 献身于

[组词成句]

文章首段的首句和次句应该描述漫画，首句可以说“在呈现给我们的这幅画中一盏油灯在黑暗的背景中发出明亮的火焰“。这里的present表示“呈现”。

In the picture presented to us, an oil lamp gives out bright flame against the dark background.

次句可以说“火焰设计成了一个孩子的模样，是如此的天真和纯洁”。其中innocent和pure分别指“天真的”和“纯洁的”。

The flame is designed to be a child’s smile, so innocent and pure.

[点石成金]

In the picture presented to us, an oil lamp gives out bright flame against the dark background. The flame is designed to be a child’s smile, so innocent and pure, The oil lamp here is a symbol of love, which is noblest among all the worthy feelings of mankind. Just as the Chinese characters in the picture say, live is a lamp; the darker the background is, the brighter it look. It is true that the harder the situation is, the more valuable love is.

This picture reminds me of one of our national heroes, Lin Zexu. At the end of the 19th century. He was exiled by the Qing Government to a border town in Xinjiang, where people were extremely pllr, in severe lack of water and suffering constant dust storms. But he was never discouraged by the harsh conditions. He called on people to plant trees, open ditches and build reservoirs, thus greatly improving the living conditions there. Even today’s people are benefiting from these projects. Who can deny that resulted from the sincere love of a most courageous person?

The best way to show love, I think, is to devote ourselves to our work and our nation. No matter where we work, what we do and how harsh the environment is, we must try our best to shoulder the responsibility of the job so as to help others live better and make contribution to our nation’s development.

【黄金模板】

In the picture presented to us, ….Just as the Chinese characters in the picture say, … It is that. …. The picture reminds me of. …. Who can deny that resulted from…?

The best way to …., I think, is to ….

【结构点评】

第一段是描述漫画，前两句是纯粹的描述，第三句是推导其象征含义，第四句是描述旁边的一句话，末句是其引申含义。第二段是举例，这是个难点。提纲明确要求举一个特定的例子，这里不能一笔带过，最好自成一体。本文举了一个林则徐的例子。本段末句使用反问句来做小结，突显主题，效果强烈。第三段是给出献爱心的最好办法——投身工作，献身祖国，这一段要呼应上面两段并升华主题，实属不易。

【妙笔生花】

首段前两句是描述漫画，第三句创造性地与指令中的话相联系，来推导漫画的象征含义。第四句是描述旁边的话，注意分号的用法。第五句写出了其引申的意义，这里与上句一样都使用了“越?越?”的结构。

第二段首句的remind?of?表示“使某人想起某事”，这里使用是为了引出其后的事例。第二句的exile和border town分别表示“流放”和“边陲小镇”。第三句中的call on、 open ditches和build reservoirs分别表示“号召”、“开渠”和“建水库”。最后一句是反问句，语气很强。句中的the sincere love of a most courageous person表示“一个无比勇敢的人的真挚的爱”，呼应了主题。

第三段首句中的be devoted to 表示“献身于”。次句使用了让步状语从句，shoulder the responsibility 表示“担负责任”，make contribution to our nation表示“为祖国做出贡献”；句中how harsh the environment is 呼应了首段的末句，而help others live better和make contribution to our nation又在不同侧面上呼应了献爱心的主题。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:47 PM

20xx年考研英语真题作文

Directions:

Study the following picture carefully and write an essay entitled “Cultures—National and International”. In the essay you should;

1. describe the picture and interpret its meaning, and

2. give your comment on the phenomenon

You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.（20 points）

[审题解题]

20xx年考察的也是图画文凭，但却是第一次使用照。照上是一个穿着我国传统服务的美国少女，下面有一行注释。文章给出了题目。提纲包括两点，一是描述图片并解释含义，二是对此现象作出评论。文章可以分为三段来写，首段简要地描述照片，次段阐释其含义，末段给出评论。

[核心词汇]

at first sight of 第一次见到

brighten my eyes 使我眼睛一亮

beam with a smile 微笑

an unexpected and yet harmonious design 一种出乎意料却又和谐的设计

convey 蕴涵

a deep and soul-stirring meaning 深刻又振奋人心的意味

when it comes to 当谈及?

cultural blending 文化融合

[点石成金] Cultures—National and International

At first sight of the picture, my eyes are brightened by the pretty girl, beaming with a smile. She is a typical American girl, but she is dressed in our traditional Chinese costume.

Through such an unexpected and yet harmonious design, the picture conveys a deep and soul-stirring meaning. The girl stands for two different cultures—western ture, which symbolizes the harmonious blending of the two cultures. And thus the picture assumes a kind of peaceful and inspiring beauty.

When it comes to cultural blending, we should attach importance to two factors. On the one hand, with economic globalization, the blending of different cultures has become a necessary trend of the times. Furthermore, the fact that all cultures are both open to and infiltrating into each other lays down the foundation for cultural blending. On the other hand, maintaining and vitalizing national cultures are most important in cultural blending—what have been and will always be most appealing to foreigners are the unique characteristics of national cultures. Only on this basis can we achieve efficient cross-cultural communication and promote world peace and prosperity.

[黄金模板]

At first sight of the picture, my eye are brightened by…

Through such an unexpected and yet harmonius design, the picture conveys a deep and soul-stirring meaning… And thus the picture assumes…

?ON the one hand, …ON the other hand, …

[结构点评]

文章分为三段，实际上是把提纲的第一点分成两段来写。首段的描述非常简练，次段采用总—分—总的结构:首句是段中的主题句，而且分两句来说。段中的第二句说这个女孩代表了两种不同的文化，第三句说她的笑是整幅画中必不可少的笔法，象征着两种文化的和谐融合。

第三段是对文化融合这一现象的评论，从两个方面来说。第一点是时代的潮流。第二点是说这一过程中保持和振兴各族文化是非常重要的——各个文化的独特之处才是最吸引外国朋友的。最后做结。

[妙笔生花]

第二段第二句的stand for 表示“代表”。第三句的touch、symbolize和harmonious blending 分别表示“笔法”、“象征着”和“和谐融合”。第四句的assume和inspiring分别表示“呈现、具有”和“激励人心的”。

第三段第二句中的economic globalization和trend of the times分别表示“经济全球化”和“时代潮流”。第三句中的open to、infiltrating into和lays down the foundation for分别表示“对?开放”、“渗透入”和“为?打下基础”。第四句中使用了破折号进行补充说明，前面的maintain和vitalize分别表示“保持”和“振兴”，破折号之后的appealing和unique分别表示“吸引人的”和“独特的”。末句以unique开头的倒装句结尾，句中的cross-cultural communication和promote world peace and prosperity分别表示“跨文化交际”和“促进世界和平和繁荣”。 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:47 PM

20xx年考研真题作文

Directions:

Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should:

1. describe the set of drawings, interpret its meaning, and

2. point out its implications in our life.

You should write about 200words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

【审题解题】

20xx年考察了图画作文，提纲要求共分两点:第一点是描述图画，阐述其含义；第二点是指出在我们生活中的含意，即暗含的意思。注意这里meaning 和 implication 是不同的，前者指图画本身包含的意思是什么，而后者在这里指的是在现实生活中通过类比（analogy）所揭示的道理。

题目给出了两幅相对的图画:上面一幅图中，尽管外面正在下雨，温室中的花朵却在怒放。可是下面的一幅图中，这花朵一旦搬到了外界，在雷雨中立即就凋谢了，由此我们得出了“温室中的花朵经不起风雨”的推论，这就是两幅图画的含义。

其暗含的意思可以想见，指的就是当前社会孩子的教育问题。许多父母对孩子呵护有加，百般溺爱，不让孩子吃一点苦，受一点委屈，这样对孩子就好吗？此外在当前的教育制度下，孩子学习负担过重，绝大部分时间都在学校和家庭度过，没有多少接触社会的机会，又怎能茁壮成长呢？

经过分析文章最后定为三段。第一段是描述图画。第二段是类比于生活中孩子的教育问题，并从两方面来分析此现象产生的原因。而后的段内得出结论，这样的孩子就象温室里的花朵一样，是经不起人生的磨难的。最后一段是做结，由于提纲中没有单独例举这一点，所以此段可以非常简洁。

【核心词汇】

shape sharp contrast 形成强烈的对比

in full bloom 盛开

wither 凋谢，凋零

cannot stand natural wind and rain 经不起自然风雨

compare ? to ? 把?比做?

bring up children with tender care 细心照顾孩子成长

owing to 由于

the examination-oriented education system 应试教育体系

be heavily burdened with studies 背着沉重的学习负担

take part in social activities 参加社会活动

stand sufferings and overcome obstacles 经受磨难和克服困难

【点石成金】

The above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to each other. In one picture, a flower grows in a greenhouse and is in full bloom in spite of the outside rain. But in the other, the flower, moved outside and without the protection of the green-which is raised in a greenhouse and carefully protected, cannot stand natural wind and rain at all.

It is most likely that the drawer means to compare children in our country to the flower in his drawings and reflect a problem in the present education of our children. For one thing, nowadays, most children are brought up by their parents with tender care. Parents always try their best to meet the children’s demands, to provide them with the best environment of growth and study and to protect them form any possible harms, setbacks and sufferings. For another, owing to the present examination-oriented education system, most children ant too heavily burdened with studies to have time to take part in social activities, so they learn little about the society, the real world outside their family and school. Growing up in such a manner and such an environment, the children will inevitably and naturally lack the ability to stand sufferings and overcome obstacles when they leave their parents and step into the society.

To sum up, the problem of children’s education must be solved timely and effectively because it is they who constitute the future of our country.

【黄金模板】

the above two pictures have shaped sharp contrast to each other. In one picture,…… But in the,…… The two pictures show that……

it is most likely that the drawer means to compare……to…… in his drawings and reflect a problem in …… For one thing …… For another……

to sum up ……

【结构点评】

谋篇布局时我们一定要扣昆所给的指令，特别是提纲。本文花分三段来写。第一段是描述两篇相对的图画，第一句是开篇句，第二、三句分述两幅图，第四句是本段重点，在对比过程中，得出图画的含义。

第二段首句推测绘画者的意图，引出了孩子教育这一重要问题。而后分两个方面来描述其原因。此段的末句非常精彩，是根据上述两个原因所作的推论，说明在此种情形下，孩子们离

开父母、独自生活时又怎能经得起人生的风雨呢？

最后一段下结论，非常简洁， 但却相当于原因——办法类混合模板中的办法模块，说这一问题必须尽快有效地解决，因为孩子是我们国家的未来。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:47 PM

20xx年考研真题作文

Directions:

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should

1) describe the drawing

2) interpret its meaning, and

3) support your view with examples.

You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

【审题解题】

20xx年再次考察了图画作文—考研写作中这种形式的作文占据统治地位已有多年，这种趋势很可能仍将继续。提纲要求共分三点:第一点是描述图画；第二点是阐述其含义；第三点是用例子来支持自己的观点。

题中给出的图画是主人公是个正跑到终点线上的小男孩，他头上冒汗，嘴角却含着笑，地上一个箭头写着终点，而另一个却又写着起点。下面有一行字“终点又是新起点”。而这正是千百年颠扑不破的真理啊。人类的发展与进步的历史不就是不断奋勇向前的历史吗？

经过分析文章最后定三段。第一段是描述图画。第二段是类比于人类一条永恒的真理。第三段是举例，举的是著名的画家毕加索的例子——他的一生极具传奇色彩，他不仅是二十世纪世界最伟大的艺术家，而且还被喻为“最年轻的艺术家”——他一直到90岁高龄还保持极高的创作热情，勇于探索，不断创新。最后的段内做结，一个人、一个民族、一个国家想要实现梦想，创造奇迹，应该向毕加索学习，把终点当成是新的起点——这里是呼应主题，起了画龙点晴的作用。

【核心词汇】

annular tracks 环形跑道

the finishing line 终点线

start a new run 开始新的跑步

demonstrate a universal law 证明了一个普遍规律

keep forging ahead 不断前进

resting on laurels 停留在荣誉上面

remind?of? 让?想起?

enterprising spirit 进取精神

unremittingly 不松懈地

realize dreams and accomplish wonders 实现梦想，创造奇迹

【点石成金】

In the picture presented to us, a boy is running on annular tracks and reaching the finishing line. Heavily sweating as he is, a happy smile hangs on his lips. However, where an arrow marked with “Beginning”.

Though this picture only describes a runner who is going to start a new run after reaching the finishing line, yet it demonstrates a universal law that governs the development of mankind. In other words, if we want to make constant progress we must keep forging ahead instead of resting on laurels. Robertson once said, “Whenever he is satisfied with what he does, he has reached his culminating point—he will progress no more .”

This reminds me of Picasso, whose works greatly influenced the path of 20thcentury art. But what has impressed me most is not the notable success he has achieved but his enterprising spirit. Besides “the greatest artist of the 20th century”, he is acclaimed as “the youngest artist in the world” because he unremittingly pursued and explored new styles of painting all his life. After producing his most famous postimpressionist style, he later developed many other styles and even at the last moment of his life he was creating a new painting. I firmly believe that any person, any people or any country who ever wants to realize dreams and accomplish wonders should learn from Picasso and takes ends as new beginnings.

【黄金模板】

in the picture presented to us, ……

though this picture only describes……, yet it demonstrates a universal law that…… In other words, ……

this reminds me of …… I firmly believe that ……

【结构点评】

文章共分三段。第一段对图画进行描述。共分三句。第一句和第二句描述主人公，第三句重点描述了画有“起点”和“终点”的箭头。

第二段分三句。首句从图画引人其包涵的深刻的道理。第二句是进一步的说明。第三句使用了名言来支持论断。第三段是举例的段落。首句引出毕加索这一伟人，此句说给人印象最深的不是他巨大的成功，而是他的进取精神。第三句与第四句进一步说明。第五句是结语，这里没另起侧面落。

【妙笔生花】

第一段首句中的annular tracks 表示“环形跑道”，the finishing line 表示“终点线”。第二句中使用了让步状语从句的变体形式，heavily sweating as he is 就相当于although he is heavily sweating; 其后的hang 一词用得非常生动。第三句中的arrow 这里表是“箭头”，marked with 这里是过去后分词短语作后置定语，表示“标有?的”；follow表示“接着”，与immediately 联系紧密，这是Beginning 和End 均使用了大写。

第二段第二句中的constant progress 表示“不断进步”；forge ahead 表示“前进”，通常有迎着困难的意思；instead of 突显了对比，rest on laurels 表示“停留在荣誉上面”。第三句是一

句名言，其中culminating 表示“终极的、最后的”，注意句中破折号的用法。

第三段第二句中的notable 表示“值得注意的、显著的”；enterprising spirit 表示“进取精神”，这是重点词组，望熟记。第三句中的unremittingly 表示“不间断地，不松懈的”，其后的动词的平行用法，pursue 和 explore 分别表示“追求”和“探索”。第四句中的postimpressionist style 表示“后印象派风格”，注意句中的even 起加强语所的作用，非常引人注目，充分表现了毕加索热爱绘画事业、不懈追求的精神。最后一句的结语，realize dreams 和 accomplish wonders 分别表示“实现梦想”和“创造奇迹”，注意句中ever的用法。

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作者: Bamboo 时间: 2005-11-24 01:47 PM

20xx年考研真题作文

第一部分、Part A （小作文）

Directions:

Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & fashions. But now you find that the word is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision stating your reason(s), and making an apology. （辞职，给boss写封信，解释辞职原因）

Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter, use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

小作文参考范文:

Dear Mr. Wang,

I am writing to inform you of my resignation, effective immediately.

After two months of work, I find it is inappropriate for me to take the position as an editor here. I have expected the job to be interesting and challenging, which turns out to be the opposite. Therefore, I have decided to quit the job after much deliberation. Please let me know if there is anything I need to do before my departure.

Thank you very much for your offering the opportunity to me to work with the outstanding staff here. I wish you and your company great success in the future.

Sincrely,

Li Ming

第二部分、Part B （大作文）

Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay ,you should first describe the drawing the interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20 points)

一幅图，养老“足球”大意是现在的子女都不赡养父母，先描述图，再谈看法！漫画题目为养老"足球赛" 漫画中间是一个蜷缩成一团的老人，漫画左上右上，左下，右下分别为老人的大儿子、二儿子、小儿子和小女儿。每个人后面均有一个足球门。大致意思是现在的子女都不赡养父母，将父母像足球一样踢来踢去作文要求:先描述图，再谈看法。

大作文参考范文:

In the picture, there are five people, in the middle of which is an old man who is crouching. Around the old man are three young men and a young woman, each of whom is in the front of a goal.

I think the picture means that neither of the sons and the daughter will look after their father when he is old. They regard their father as a burden to live with although it is their duty to support parents when they grow up. The old man is like a football, since all of his sons and daughter want to abandon him and keep him far away from themselves.

It is no doubt that this phenomenon is becoming common in modern society, but it is not a good manner for young people to imitate. Most parents devote all their lives to bring up their children. They give their children everything they have just because of love and hope. They won’t blame you even when you treat them in a bad way. Therefore, it is necessary and compulsory for children to love and take after parents when parents are old.

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素材：

The successful launch and return of the manned spacecraft Shenzhou IV is deemed both a symbol of national prestige and a sign of advanced science and technology, which will definitely contribute to the economic growth of our country. 载人航天飞机神州五号的成功发射及返回既是国家荣誉的一个象征，也是先进的科技能力的标志，这对我国的经济发展无疑会产生促进作用。

We all know that China is still a developing country and its education still lags behind that of developed countries. Many young Chinese are denied chances of receiving higher education because of insufficient educational facilities. 我们都知道，中国还是一个发展中的国家，其教育水平仍然落后于发达国家。不少中国年青人由于教育设施的匮乏而得不到接受高等教育的机会。

They say that pride comes before a fall. In the case of both Napoleon and Hitler, they won many victories, which led them to believe that anything was possible and that nothing could stand in their way. But Russia’s icy defender proved them wrong. 人道是骄兵必败。就拿拿破仑和希特勒来说吧，他们所想披靡，便以为自己战无不胜，不可阻挡。但俄罗斯的冰雪战士证明他们错了。

As the pace of life in today’s world grows ever faster, we seem forever on the go. With so much to do and so little time to do it in, how are we to cope? Dr. Smith sets about untangling the problem and comes up with an answer. 随着当今世界生活节奏日益加快，我们似乎一直在不停奔忙。事情那么多，时间却那么少，我们该怎么办？史密斯博士着手解决这一问题，并提出了解决方法。

Professor Huntington’s paper greatly inspired me. According to him, in a plural society, there will inevitably be different opinions. The key is to deal with them in such a way that they can play a constructive rather than destructive role. He argues that in a plural society we must stress/attach importance to interpersonal relationships, cooperation, and look at issues from the perspective of other people. If some groups regard themselves as superior and treat other ethnic groups or religions with disrespect, the whole society may be paralyzed. I am convinced that if we put into practice 第 11 页

the ideas mentioned above, then there is the possibility of creating a new civilization. Huntington教授的论文使我深受启发。他认为，在一个多元化(plural)社会里，不同意见是不可避免的。关键在于怎样正确对待不同意见，使之发挥建设性、而非破坏性的作用。他还说，在一个多元化社会里，我们必须注重人际关系，强调合作，多从他人视角考虑问题。如果某些群体自视高人一筹，不尊重其他种族或宗教，那么整个社会有可能陷入瘫痪。我相信，要是我们把上述想法付诸实践，那我们就有可能创造出一种新的文明。

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