2009-2013安徽高考英语作文 范文和详解

（2009.安徽卷）

假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。

演讲稿的主要内容应认为同学们不必为此苦恼；希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：

【参考范文】Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it.

Thank you!

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材的现实性强，考生的话语较多，显见这种作文，难度不大，考生应注意基本语言和句式的运用，以及上下文的过渡。本文中使用了look into, make sure, be bound to等短语以及as，if引导的状语从句和why引导的宾语从句。

[2010安徽卷]

假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机（cell）和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up:TV, cell, or Web?”为题，写一篇英语短文。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

We are now living in an information age, in which TV,cells and the Web are widely used. It

seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.

However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there're too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere.

As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet.

点评：本文层次清晰。第一段提出文章的主题，第二段提出选择并阐述理由，第三段说明了保留另外两个选择的原因，这三段用了连词however，as for 是段落衔接自然。在文章中，作者用了定语从句in which TV，cells…、虚拟语气、rather than、原因状语从句等复杂的句式，句子长短结合，语言流畅，充分展示了作者写作功底。

20xx年

书面表达(满分25分)

某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、短文中不能出现本人相关信息。

One possible version

My Approach to Difficulties in Learning

As high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. Everyone has their own way to deal with them. Here I would like to share mine.

When I am faced with a dificulty, I ususlly choose to refer to relevant learning materials or Web pages. In this way, I can not only it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.

However, when it is something beyond my sompetence, I turn to classmates or teachers for help. Sometimes I also ask my parents for advice. As a result, I have made steady progress in my studies.

分析：

20xx年安徽卷写作部分的话题贴近学生生活，考察学生学习中的现实问题，探讨如何解决学习中遇到的困难。文章的主线是写自己如何解决困难，这一点是考生审题时需要注意

的，如果通篇写成了what（即学习中遇到的各种困难）、而没有提及自己的解决办法，这无疑犯了跑题的大忌。和一些其他省区作文不同，安徽卷的作文题目没有给考生提供要点，这一方面有利于一些考生的发挥，但另一方面也会给许多考生设置组织结构的难题。笔者认为，要根据遇到的困难来分析解决的办法，并在面对不同困难当中总结不同的解决方法，行文中加入举例、对比论证，有理有据，让文章摆脱要点的堆砌，论证更具体而有针对性。总之，考生要自圆其说、合理论证、逻辑清晰，避免语言错误，完成一篇高质量的高考英语作文。

20xx年

第二节 书面表达(满分25分)

假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文，理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。

注意： 1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.词数120左右； 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。

参考词汇：文科 arts; 理科:science

Good afternoon, everyone.

Welcometo our school! ______________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________

Thanks！

One possible version

Good afternoon，everyone.

Welcome to our school! The topic I’m going to talk about is the choice between arts and science. As is known to all, students in China can’t study both arts and science. Therefore, a choice between them is bound to be made.

At the end of my first year in high school, I decided to study science rather than arts. And the reasons are as follows: The most important one is that I love science, which can show me the mysteries of nature and the universe. What’s more, I’m good at it. So, it is far easier for me to learn science than arts. Last but not least, I want to become a scientist in the future. It is science that will equip me with necessary abilities.

Now, years have passed, and my affection for science is much greater than before. I hold the view firmly that my choice is absolutely right.

Thanks!

20xx年安徽高考

假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明, 从我做起”为主体的征文活动, 请你以“On the Way to School”为题, 写一篇英语短文.

内容主要包括:

1. 遵守交通法规;

2. 注意举止文明.

注意:

1. 词数120左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;

3. 短文中不能出现与你本人相关的信息;

4. 短文的题目已为你拟好, 不计入总次数.

试题分析

20xx年安徽高考作文，属于提纲式要点作文，话题为：讲文明从我做起.要求学生写一篇作文，叙述自己上学途中文明的行为举止。这个话题体现了实用性和生活性原则，贴近学生的生活和学习，为考试所熟知。提纲雷书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成普通顺畅的语句，因此要组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要注意简洁明了，开门要见山。

审题要素：

1，注意人称，应该用第一人称。

2，注意时态的正确使用，根据试题的要求，本文用一般现在时和一般将来时。

3，注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。

思路指导：

首段，引入话题--发生在身边的不文明现象，从我做起。(start from my self)

其次，上学途中应该怎么做到文明：遵守交规；个人举止。

参考范文：

These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school.

I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.

 

第二篇：20xx福建高考英语作文预测范文

When we use the word “love”, we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, which is a very narrow definition of the word. Love is emotional strength, which can support us, no matter how dark the world around us becomes. In fact, throughout history, people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions. As an example of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of the natural disasters every year. Although their incomes are still low by international standards, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can ---- be it money or goods---- to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves. In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.

Recently, ?Chinese style of crossing the road” aroused a heated discussion on the internet. It means a group of people cross the road at the same time, regardless of the fact that the signal is red or green. In my opinion, this behavior is so dangerous and harmful. First, walking through the red light can easily cause traffic accidents. It?s common that a number of people die from walking through the red light every year. Besides, this bad behavior will cause traffic jam, because many drivers have to stop and wait for pedestrians. What?s worse, “Chinese style of crossing the road” doesn?t just occur in China. Many Chinese do that abroad, which does harm to our country?s reputation. It?s high time that we should take measures to solve the problem. First, many people lack for awareness of law and traffic safety, so the policemen should guide people to obey traffic rules. Schools should strengthen the safety education. If necessary, the government can take strict punishment and make more laws to reduce this bad behavior. In addition, volunteers should help the police guide traffic. What is even more important is that people shouldn?t ignore the seriousness of this and follow others to walk through the red light. With everyone?s effort, the problem is sure to be solved at last!

Good afternoon! It?s my pleasure to briefly introduce my school life regarding two aspects: independent learning and cooperative learning. Independent learning is a basic principle of my school education. At one level it encourages us to work out plans and arrange our timetable, in which case we improve our independent thinking and management skills. On another level, it presents us a block of work in which we are developing strategies. Meanwhile, we are making great attempt to create a cooperative-learning environment, where we are encouraged to work in groups. Within group work, we are guided to voice our individual opinions, listen to each other and respect each other. Independent learning and cooperative learning form a key feature of my school education and they prove to be a great benefit to our overall development in the long run. That?s all for my introduction. We?re eager to know about your school life so that we could better learn from each other. Thank you!

A recent survey reveals that over a third of the surveyed graduates regret attending university. The signals of the survey should be watched. First, there are problems in the higher education system: It can?t meet the practical social needs. Moreover, the tutor fees are high. On the side of the students, some graduates lack a correct judgment of the reality. The majority of the graduates hope to find a satisfactory job with a high pay in big cities. Such expectations obviously go against social needs, and it is not realistic. What should be done is to reform higher education and help students adjust their work expectations, build a correct outlook on life and values. Another thing should be pointed out is that these students should recognize they will be regretting all the life if not go to college or university. College offers everyone access to knowledge and capabilities. On the campus, everyone can develop himself in all aspects, and get prepared for a new start in his life. In my opinion, it?s better to seize the time than to regret later.

Passage 1 A Letter of Gratitude writing these few lines to express my sincere gratitude I fear I reciprocating（回报）。Lately, have time Would you Again, I would like to express my thanks to you. Please accept my gratitude and give my kind Looking Yours truly, Yang Ming

Welcome to our club! Our “Easy-to-Learn” English club aims at helping students to study English in easier ways. There may be varieties of colorful activities almost every week in our club, such as English Talk Show, English Corner, English lectures, English Songs Competition, etc. If you are accepted by our club, you will find you have made a wise choice. To begin with, you may practice and improve your English in our activities in a relaxed and comfortable way. In addition, you may make new friends in the activities, which will make your school life more enjoyable and meaningful. Last but not the least, you may participate in all the activities free of charge. If you feel interested in our club, please don?t hesitate to join us. You just need to fill in the form and we will contact you as soon as possible. Our telephone number is 7788666, and if you have any problem, please call us. Thanks for your attention and we are looking forward to your joining!

Passage 3 An Apology Letter Dec.25,2008 Dear Gao Li, I am excessively sorry that I can't return the book “ Robinson Crusoe” to you on time . Now , I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret. And I hope you will understand me and excuse me for my delay in returning the book to you. I will be very grateful if you are kind enough to listen to my explanation. The reason why I can?t return the book on time is that I have to travel on business for several days. I must set off immediately because the task is so urgent that one- day delay may mean a great loss to our company . Therefore , it is not in my power to return the book to you on time . Naturally, I would like to return the book as soon as I return from my travel. I shall be obliged if you forgive my negligence. Once again, I would like to express my sincere apology for any inconvenience caused by me. I hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Faithfully yours, Cui Lei

Passage 4 How to learn English well? In order to learn English well, three things are to be paid attention to. First , oral English enjoys a top priority, which is the basis of reading and writing. It is much better to start with talking in English , even though you do make mistakes sometimes. Second, we have to follow our speaking practice with writing exercises . A good form of writing exercise is to keep a diary. You may write whatever you like , then get someone to go over what you have to write and tell you your mistakes. Thus you can avoid making the same mistake next time. Third , we need to do a lot of reading . Choose something that is not too difficult for you and that really interests you . Don?t look up unfamiliar words in the dictionary when you first come across them. Try to guess their meanings. I am sure you will be able to learn English well if you follow the suggestions above. Just try them out and you will make it.

Passage 5 It Pays to Be Honest Nowadays there still exist many dishonest phenomena, such as cheating , overcharging , producing or selling fake commodities,etc. The main reason for these dishonesties is only to make a huge profit. However, in the long run, dishonesty can not bring any profit and we will come to realize that it pays to be honest. The following reasons can support the argument. (提出观点段) Undoubtedly, being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to ourselves.If you are honest, those who associate with you will certainly profit from you and in turn you will win receive trust and respect from them. Furthermore, honesty can help build up a more stable and harmonious society. For example , Singapore, which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity, has a comparatively low criminal rate. Besides, being honest is essential for a country?s survival in the modern world, since only an honest country will win support from other countries when it is in trouble.(论证观点段) All mentioned above tell us that it pays to be honest . Only in an honest society can people enjoy their life. Therefore , we should foster the spirit of honest and prevent dishonesty from spoiling our society.(总结观点段) Passage 6

Your Help Needed I am writing this letter to call on all the students in our school to do something for Lucy. As some of you may know , Lucy , a lovely girl student from Class Two, Grade One , is seriously ill. In fact , she has been from hepatitis (肝炎), which is have the other hand, it has Lucy?s parents expenses and it is impossible for her family time. If you are willing to give her a hand, please contact us us in the action and extend our love into a Sincerely yours, Passage 7

Environment protection A clean and beautiful environment is what everyone desires. Living in this kind of environment will greatly improve our health. It can also make us feel good and help us maintain a peaceful and happy state of mind. However , environment pollution is now considered to be a major problem in many places. Every day or even every hour tons of black smoke from factory chimneys are puffed into the sky. Poisonous chemicals and industrial wast have been dumped into rivers, lakes and oceans, threatening the existence of fish and other living things. In addition, large numbers of trees have been cut down , disturbing the ecological balance. Now it is high time that we took some drastic measures against the destruction of nature. Laws are to be made to ban the factories from polluting the environment. Severe punishment ought to be given to those who should violate the law. Preserving the environment is not only preserving our present homes for living but also benefiting our future generation.

Passage 8 The Career I Pursue (原因+办法说明文) Wherever asked about the career I pursue, I will not hesitate a moment to say that I want to be a doctor in the future. The reasons why I choose to be in the medical profession are as follows. First, it would be a most glorious job to save the dying and help the wounded. By relieving the pain in the body or the heart, doctors make great contributions to the improvement of the living quality of different people. Second, by exploring in the fantastic world of medicine, doctors take on the responsibility of finding ways to make people healthier and stronger, which is vital to the development of the whole mankind. Third, a doctor can be respectable friend because of the patience to listen and the determination to help. To turn my dream into reality, I have made the following preparations. First, I listen to teachers attentively in class and review lessons carefully after class. Second, I consult all kinds of reference materials(参考资料) in the library or on the Internet to improve my expertise.(专业).Third, I carefully make the experiments to lay a solid foundation for（为。。。打下坚实的基础） future

study. I believe that my dream will become true one day as long as I work hard. Passage 9

an Invitation Letter Dec.15,2008 Dear Jack, My birthday is coming and my parents will hold a party for me in our house on Dec.21. It would be a great pleasure to have you there with me. I am sure that you must be very interested in the activities during the party. For one thing, you will have a sight of those old, familiar faces and we can have a good chitchat about anything.For another , we can also sing the popular songs we like, cut my birthday cake and do the games together.Enclosed is other arrangements of the party. Your participation will add more pleasure to it since we haven?t seen each other for a long time and I am eager to see you! All in all, the party would not be complete without you ! The party will begin at 7:00 pm. And I do hope you can make it . If not , would it be possible for you to drop me a line before Dec.21. Best wishes for you! Sincerely yours, Passage 10

Reduce waste on campus In recent years, become quite a As everyone sees, Above all , the seriousness of the problem, it is an urgent thing for us to take effective measures to 1. As is shown in the picture, milk safety problem has been a worry for most young couples. 2. (Currently,)There is a widespread concern over the issue of milk safety problem.

3. It is really an important concern to every one of us. 4. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. 食品安全

As can be seen from the picture, a couple is extremely worried about the milk safety problem shown on TV. Holding her baby tightly in her arms, the mother wonders whether keeping a cow and getting milk from it is the best way to protect the child from injury. Chemicals found in milk powder have aroused an increasing amount of attention. Driven by huge economic profits, many merchants go to great lengths to lower their production cost. Therefore, it is not uncommon to see some replacing key materials with cheap ones. “Big Head Disease” and “Kidney Stones” are a few of the conditions suffered by babies due to the enterprises? illegal deeds. In fact, food security is so significant that under no circumstances should merchants make profits at the expense of people?s health. Accusations from the public have played a key role in preventing this illegal behavior. I believe proper guidance and strict punishments from the government can solve the problem. Frankly speaking, Food is the first necessity of the people while unfortunately people have to be trapped in a terrible situation where they could hardly find safe food.They

are unable to choose a reassuring milk powder for their baby,and they can't find a cookshop without using gutter oil,and yes—they are worried about the food safety problems. Why are they so anxious about the food safety problems?The absolutely answer is that the problems concern their physical health.Most importantly,inability of regulatory authorities to solve the problems makes them more fearful.In my opinion,food safety problem has a significant effect on the social stability. To figure out this matter,government and masses ought to be together in an effort to find ways out.First of all,there must be effective regulations to block the source of profit of the operators like tightening inspection of accounts and taxes.Secondly,treat the masses as a smart inspector.Clean off obstacles and accept the complaints of consumers.At last,the government should hold a press conference periodically to release the progress of governance activities. For above reasons, the food safety problem is a long-term undertaking which needs everyone's striving.And we must move right now!

谚语警句性议论文

It is well known to us that the proverb： " ___谚语 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore， it goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____. With the rapid development of science and technology in China， an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying： ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying， the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.

根据生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功来源于凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作这个道理。因此要注意结合自己的经历，谈出自己对此的感受即可。

俗话说：早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作。 The early bird will catch worms An old saying "The early bird will catch worms" reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties. For example, the Chinese athletes' excellent performance in 2010 Olympic Winter Games in Vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. If they don' t set the aim and work hard, even though they have the best talents, they can't compete with others and get more medals. Another case in point is my learning experience. I was good at English, but I couldn't pass the exam, for I wasn't prepared well before the examination. I had many things to solve at that time. As I met the complex things, I was at a loss. The reason was that I had no plan and involved in many things and didn't study harder, so I failed. In short, the saying shows us the importance of planning, working hard and constantly trying.