高考英语作文详解说明文
假如你是李辉,参加了1998年7月2530 日在山东烟台由英语辅导报社举办的全国中学生英语夏令营活动。请根据所给提示,用英语写一篇100140 字的报导,以便刊登在?英语通?上。
提示:1、来自全国各地的100多名中学生参加了活动;
2、有来自国内外的30多名英语教学专家;
3、营员们必须用英语交流;
4、举办了一系列活动:1)第二届全国中学生英语辩论赛;
2)第三届全国中学生英语演讲比赛;
3)参观了名胜古迹; 4)举办了英语晚会。
作文思路详解:
注意:1、应包括自己参加夏令营的体会。
2、参考词汇:
1)英语辅导报社:English Coaching Paper Office
2) 1998年全国中学生英语夏令营:1998 National English Summer Camp for Middle School Students (1998 NESCMSS);
3) 辩论:debate
4) 演讲比赛:speech competition
5) 主办:sponsor
6) 英语通: An Express Way to English
3、不要逐句翻译提示,可增加适当有关细节,使文章连贯。
范文:
1998 National English Summer Camp for Middle School Students
As a lucky student, I attended the 1998 NESCMSS held in the beautiful seaside city of Yantai from July 25 to 30, which was sponsored by the English Coaching Paper Office. Over 100 students all over the country and 30 English teaching experts from home and abroad took part in the activity. All the campers were required to speak English. During the four days, a series of English activities were held including the Second National English Debate for Middle School Students and the Third National English Speech Competition for Middle School Students. We also visited some places of interest. A colourful English evening was held on July 29. The camp provided us with a valuable opportunity to speak English, make friends and exchange learning experience. I found my English much improved at the end of the camp. Never in my life shall I forget the impressive days in Yantai.
写作指导 (7)
说明文
1.说明文是以说明为主要表达方式,用简洁明了的语言来解说事物、阐明事理,从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。
2.在高考书面表达中,其主要命题形式为图表式作文,有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。
3.它要求语言要简明扼要,通俗易懂,说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。
4.这种文体通常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
根据以下图画,写一篇英语短文,描述今昔通讯方式的变化,以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
注意:1.词数:100左右;
2.参考词汇:通讯communicate (with sb.)vi.,communication n.;互联网the Internet n.。
案例分析⊙
从材料的呈现方式(两幅图对比)及材料所提出的要求“描述变化及影响”可知,本文应该用说明文体来写作。时态的把握是本文的一大难点,一般情况下,说明文应用一般现在时,但本文描述的是今昔通讯方式的变化,所以在描写过去通讯方式的时候要用一般过去时,例如:In the past,people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone及
It used__to__take several days to hear from each other.在描写过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响时,谓语动词要用现在完成时,例如本文的起始句可用“Great changes have__taken__place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years”及讲述影响的过渡句“With these changes,people’s pace of life has__been__quickened__and people’s work has__been__made more efficient ”。 相对来说,本文用第三人称容易把握。
Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years.
In the past,people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.What’s more,people have easy access to the Internet,which enables them to send and receive emails whenever they like.With these changes,people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient.It used to take several days to hear from each other,but now it takes only several minutes,even if they are in two different continents.
In a word,people have an easier life nowadays.
有朋自远方来,不亦乐乎?Jack第一次从美国来北京做客,想尝尝北京风味,你首选烤鸭。请根据下表所提供的材料,向Jack介绍北京烤鸭(Beijing Roast Duck)。
注意:1.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数:100左右。第一句已经写好,但不计入总词数。
Beijing Roast Duck has the reputation of the most delicious food in Beijing.________________________________________________________________________
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【参考答案】
Beijing Roast Duck has the reputation of the most delicious food in Beijing.Eating it is a mustdo while you are here.Ducks are slowly roasted over flames by fruittree wood,which you actually can see with your own eyes in the restaurant.Among all the restaurants that offer Beijing Roast Duck,Quan Ju De Restaurant,which has a long history of 130 years,and Bian Yi Fang Restaurant,opened in 1833,are the most famous.At table the cook helps you cut the meat into slices.Then the meat is served with green onion and a special kind of sauce.The best roast duck is datered,shining with oil.It has a crisp skin and tender meat.I am sure you’ll never forget the taste once you’ve tried it.
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