考研作文在考研英语考试中占据了30分的比例

考研作文在考研英语考试中占据了30分的比例,是不容忽视的重要部分。

根据《考研大纲》对作文这一部分的要求,对于“语言”的要求放在了第一位,即:语言

第一,内容第二,思想第三。各位考研勇士要想在这一部分胜出,就必须在语言的“精美度”上下功夫,用高质量的语言吸引阅卷人的眼球,获得高分。笔者建议大家时刻培养“亮点设置”意识,在考研作文中设置“语言亮点”,从而为斩获高分打下坚实的基础。本文将为广大考研勇士介绍考研写作的三大高分句式——短句拉长,插入语和并列修辞。 高分句式一 —— 短句拉长

在考研英语作文中,任何短句都可以拉长为长句,而且,从理论上讲,一个句子的长度可以是无限的,但是出于实际情况,大家要学会写有限度的长句。

虽然《考试大纲》没有明确规定考研作文中长句的长度和数量,但是基于考研作文实战的需要,考生需要有一种“长句设置”意识,即通过在文中设置若干个长句,向阅卷者展示考生对于复杂语言的掌握能力,从而征服阅卷者的心,获得满意的分数。

短句拉长的写作要领:

名词:+形容词,+同位语,+定语从句

动词:+状语(时间、地点、目的、方式)

例句实战:

例1、Officials have built highways.(4个单词)

In recent years, the responsible, hard-working and warm-hearted officials have built a great number of highways which have brought much convenience to the local citizens. (拉长后25单词)

例1中短句拉长的步骤:

1)在句首,加上时间状语in recent yeas

2)在名词officials前面加上responsible, hard-working, warm-hearted 三个形容词修饰它

3)在名词highways 后面加上定语从句which have brought much convenience to the local citizens.

例2、Factories have discharged gas and liquid.(6个单词)

With a view to preserve the marine resources, the newly-built chemical factories have discharged harmful and even poisonous gas and liquid which had a seriously negatively impact on the surrounding environment.(拉长后31个单词)

例2中短句拉长的步骤:

1) 在句首,加上目的状语With a view to preserve the marine resources

2) 在名词factories前面加上两个修饰形容词newly-built和chemical

3) 在名词gas and liquid 后面上加上一个定语从句which had a seriously negatively impact on the surrounding environment.

高分句式二——插入语

增加句式复杂性的另外一种方法就是使用插入语。中国学生写的英语句子喜欢一通到底,没有任何语气的间歇,像一根笔直的竹竿,因此笔者称之为“竹竿句”。而英美人士写的句子则不同,他们偏爱插入语,通过插入语表现出作者语气的间歇和停顿。有了插入语,读者眼中的句子有一种跌宕起伏的感觉,这种句子像海浪一起忽起忽落,笔者称这种句子为“海浪句”。试比较:

Ancient men made tools of stone. For instance, they always used flint because it is easier to shape than other kinds. (不使用插入语)

Fortunately, however, ancient men made tools of stone, especially flint, because it is easier to shape than other kinds. (使用插入语)

我们用图形表示这两个句子,如下:

第一句: 竹竿句

however especial

第二句: 海浪句

由此我们看出:地道的英语句子要写得跌宕起伏。

考研的同学要在语言上下功夫,就必须学会写作“海浪句”,从而使得自己的作文“波涛汹涌,错落有致”。

插入语的写作要领:

1)插入语可以是一个词,一个短语,或者一个句子。

2)插入语两边分别用逗号,跟其他成分隔开。

3)插入语最好放在主语之后,便于掌握。

例1:副词插入——frankly, especially, fortunately, indeed, however “坦率地说,旅游可以促进国家之间的相互了解。”

Tourism, frankly, may promote the mutual understanding among nations.

例2:短语插入语 ——generally speaking(总的来说), to tell the truth(老实说), in a sense(在某种意义上讲),in a word (总而言之), strange to say(说来奇怪)

“总而言之,家长不该无视电脑游戏对小孩的副作用。”

Parents, in a word, should never lose sight of the side-effects of computer games on their children.

例3:短句插入语——I suppose, as I see it, I believe, what is important(重要的是).

“重要的是,环境对人的性格有深远影响。”

Personality, what is important, has a far-reaching influence on one’s personality.

高分句式三——并列修辞

请大家欣赏历史上最精彩的三个并列修辞句式:

凯撒:I came, I saw, I conquered.

(我来了,我看到了,我征服了。)

培根:Studies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability.

(学习可以怡情,可以博采,可以长才)

林肯的政治抱负:a government of the people, by the people and for the people. (民有,民治,民享的政府)

历史上,名人使用并列修辞写出了千古名句,流芳百世;今天,我们也可以使用并列修辞写出精彩句式,创造作文高分奇迹。

并列修辞的写作要领:

用and或者or 连接两个词性相同,意思相近的单词,就构成了并列修辞。 比如:give support and assistance to?

?benefit from the education and instruction.

?develop and promote the economic growth.

并列修辞实战举例:

1) The American girl,dressed in traditional Chinese costume and ornaments,indicates and symbolizes the multinational communication of cultures and customs.(选自20xx年考研作文真题,一句话包含三处并列修辞)

2) It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young. Let’s take a closer look at the drawings. In an ideal condition, the flower blooms. But when moved out of the green house, it perishes under the rain and storm. It is obvious that the flower in greenhouse can’t withstand wind and rains.(选自20xx年考研作文真题,一个段落包含四处并列修辞)

“亮点句式”是考研阅卷人定档次,给分数的主要凭据,所以同学们应该有意识的多训练自己“亮点句式”的写作。如果能将本文介绍的“三大亮点句式”天衣无缝地设置在考研作文当中,整篇作文就会看起来“星光闪闪”“炫人眼目”,那么,获得高分也就是水到渠成事情了。预祝天下的考研勇士金榜题名!

 

第二篇:英语考试作文写作

英文作文写作方法加写作常用词组

英语写作方法六大原则:

1. advanced words (高级词汇原则)

2. adverbial advanceed (状语提前原则)

3. phrases preferred (短语优先原则)

4.compound sentence, composite sentence and sentence of special kind (并列句、复合句和特殊句式原则)

5. long and short sentences alternately (长短句交替原则)

6. passages in paragraphs(短文分段分层原则)

高分作文的五大特性

1. sense of order (条理性: 段落完整,层次分明)

2. accuracy (准确性: 语法准确,用词精当)

3. fluency (流畅性: 层次清晰,行文连贯)

4. conciseness & variety (简洁、多样性: 语言简洁,不重复)

5. ideological content (思想性: 文章立意高,表达个人观点内容积极向上) 过渡词的使用

过渡词是一种关系指引词,一般由副词或起副词作用的短语承担。此外,代词、连词、上下文的近义词等也可作过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”,在文章中发挥着连接上下文的作用,学会恰当地运用过渡词会使文章结构紧凑,启、承、转、合,过渡自然,融会贯通,连成一体。

1、根据意思和作用的不同,过渡词可以分为以下十六类:

(1)表并列关系的过渡词:

and, also, as well, as well as, or, too, not only?but also, both ? and, either ? or, neither?nor等。

(2)表递进关系的过渡词:

besides, in addition(加之,除??之外), moreover(此外,而且), what’s more, what’s worse等。

(3)表转折对比的过渡词:

but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not only?but also, here?there, years ago?today, this?that, the former?the latter, then?now, the first? whereas the second, once?now, on the one hand ? on the other hand, some?others等。

(4)表原因的过渡词:

because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to(由于), for this reason, owing to, as far as, considering that, seeing that等。

(5)表结果的过渡词:

so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, so?that, such?that?, accordingly等。??

(6)表条件的过渡词:

if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as等。

(7)表时间的过渡词:

when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since, from then on,? eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, form now on, at present, immediately, the moment等。

(8)表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:

first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterward(s)(后来), meanwhile(几乎同时), thereafter(在那以后), last, finally, eventually(终于)等。

(9)表换一种方式表达的过渡词:

in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。

(10)表进行举例说明的过渡词:

for instance, for example, take ? as an example, namely, such as, like, in other words, that is to say, that is等。

(11)表陈述事实的过渡词:

in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。

(12)表强调的过渡词:

certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely等。

(13)表比较、对比的过渡词:

like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, be similar to, rather than, on the contrary, by contrast, one one hand?, on the other hand, otherwise 等。

(14)表目的的过渡词:

for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to等。

(15)表总结的过渡词:

in a word(总之,简言之), in general, in short(总之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。

(16)表增补的过渡词:in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what’s more, similarly, next, finally 等。

2、文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡词来完成,在修辞中称为启、承、转、合。“启”就是开头, “承”是承接,“转”是转折,“合”是综合或总结。

(1) “启”。

用于表示“启”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落或文章的开头:

过渡词: first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently, 过渡句:It is often said that?,

As the proverb says?,

It goes without saying that?,

It is clear/obvious that?,

Many people often ask ?

(2) “承”。

表示“承”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中:

过渡词: second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what

is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt,

过渡句:It is true that?,

Everybody knows that?,

It can be easily proved that?,

No one can deny that?

The reason why ?is that ?,

There is no doubt that?,

To take?for an example (instance) ?,

We know that?,

What is more serious is that?

(3)“转”。

用于“转”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中:

过渡词:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate(无论如何), nevertheless(虽然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, inspite of ..., yet, instead, 过渡句:I do not believe that?,

Perhaps you’ll ask why?

This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to?,

Though we are in basic agreement with ?, yet differences will be found, That’s why i feel that?

(4) “合”。

用于“合”的过渡词或过渡性的语句通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中:

过渡词: in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking,to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus,after all(毕竟), eventually, hence, in short, in conclusion, in a word, in sum(总之), on the whole(就整体而言), to sum up

过渡句:From this point of view ?

On account of this we can find that ?

The result is dependent on ?

Thus, this is the reason why we must?

长短句结合

(1)句子既要生动,又要简明扼要。

(2)在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、复杂句和复合句并用,还可以使用简化句等,一些较复杂的结构如独立结构,分词结构等也可以使用。

(3)可以使用一些特殊句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力,以增加文章“亮点”。强烈建议:在文章第一段(开头)用一长一短,且先长后短;在文章主体部分,要先用一个短句解释主要意思,然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式,定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。

提高英语写作分数的88个词组

1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy

2.人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges

5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that?

6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development

7.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention

8.不可否认 It is undeniable that?/ There is no denying that?

9.热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate

10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue

11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

12.一些人 ?而另外一些人 ? Some people? while others?

13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,

14.就?达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on?

15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

16.双方的论点 argument on both sides

17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in?

18.对?必不可少 be indispensable to ?

19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:

20.?也不例外 ?be no exception

21.对?产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on?

22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。

23.导致,引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in

24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

25.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement

26. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation

27. 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision

28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden

30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration

31. 从另一个角度 from another perspective

32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33. 对?有益 be beneficial / conducive to?

34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society

35.打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for?

36.综合素质 comprehensive quality

37.无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach

39.致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to?

40. 应当承认 Admittedly,

41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty

42. 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of?

43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

45.因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词,字母I 大写)

46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly

49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress

50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology

51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

52.支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion

53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence

54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

55. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice

56. ?必然趋势 an irresistible trend of?

57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition

58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

59.长远利益. interest in the long run

60.?有其自身的优缺点 ? has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

61.扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

62.取其精髓,取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs。

63.对?有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

65.跟上?的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …

66.采取有效措施来? take effective measures to do sth

67.?的健康发展 the healthy development of ?

68.有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。

No garden without weeds。

69.对?观点因人而异 Views on ?vary from person to person。

70.重视 attach great importance to?

71.社会地位 social status

72.把时间和精力放在?上 focus time and energy on?

73.扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge

74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally

75.有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to?

76. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal

77. 可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that

78.缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden

79.优先考虑/发展? give (top) priority to sth。

80.与?比较 compared with?/ in comparison with

81. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary。

82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of

83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water

84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities

85. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress

86.毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that?

87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding

88.充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of

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