Personal Statement（951 words）

“I SWEAR by Apollo the physician, and Aesculapius, and Health,…” Six years ago, at the registration hall of *** Medical School, *** University, a bunch of fresh students held the Hippocratic oath and repeated each sentence, with fists clenched. I was among them. Today, after long-term study and exploration, I am determined to dedicate my life to neuroscience, a mystery-hidden, while challenging field of science.

In college, I enjoyed myself in the realm of medical knowledge and laid a solid academic foundation in clinical medicine. My overall GPA 3.63 ranked me among the top 2% of about 640 students in my department. Due to my excellent performance, you would find the attached CV ripe with numerous scholarships and honors for every semester.

Weaving together a keen interest in academic study and expertly

hands-on experience, I took the internship opportunity at the First Affiliated Hospital of *** University during senior year. It helped me realize that, although modern medical science can solve a great many problems, it remains ineffectual with regard to some maladies, especially the CNS

diseases. The treatment of some diseases, such as stroke and Alzheimer’s disease, has produced results that are far from satisfactory. I came to a conclusion that a genuinely qualified physician should have the ability to probe into the nature of diseases, not merely in possession of the requisite medical knowledge and skills.

The year of 2008 marked watershed of my life. Unlike many other

students transitioning to career stage with desirable pay and secured future, I decided to continue in academic field. It was a decision supported by my pure love for research and accompanied by my instructor’s encouragement. I chose to pursue a master’s degree at the Department of Anatomy of *** University, the first university in China that incorporated a Medical School. What fascinated me most was their research program in Injury and Repair of the Nervous System. After one year of course study, I participated in the

project directed by Professor ***, The Experimental and Clinical Research on Injury and Repair of Peripheral Nerves. Significant attention was paid to the cultivation and improvement of experimental skills including

immunohistochemistry, radioimmunoassay, in situ hybridization, electron microscopy technology, etc.

On account of my practiced experimental skills and enthusiasm for

scientific research, I was honored to be chosen by Professor ***, Vice Dean of Medical School, as one of the main researchers in his project,

Neuro-immunomodulation in Cerebral Ischemia, on which my graduate

thesis was focused. On a quick review on my graduate studies, this could the highest point of excitement. My research aimed to find out the relation between cerebral infarction and the expression of cytokine, explore the

immunoloregulation mechanism of electroacupuncture (EA), and to observe the EA impacts on the level of cytokine. After those sleepless nights on data analysis, I discovered that IL-6 and TNF-αlevels in the brain and serum increased after cerebral ischemia and verified the hypothesis that EA could raise the expression of IL-6 and decrease the expression of TNF-α. This was the beauty of research! The inspiring findings were always wrapped in

unexpected details. Out of this project, I acquired a good knowledge not only about the advanced mental faculties of the human brain but also about the interaction between the nervous system and the immunological system. At the same time, my teamwork ability and the efficiency in real problem solving were greatly enhanced.

Meanwhile, another project of Professor ***, Neurobiology of Learning and Memory, also interested me. I participated in this project by getting

involved in numerous experiments. Strange it may appear, long hours in lab rarely exhausted me, but elevated mood instead. I studied the synaptic plasticity and the change of cellular morphology in hippocampal formation during spatial learning and memory. I enjoyed the process of inching ever closer to the final discovery. At first we established animal model by using Morris water maze; then we planned to observe the expression of

synaptophysin and glial fibrillary acidic protein(GFAP) in the hippocampus with immunohistochemical method; moreover, the positive

synaptophysin-immunostaining particles under the subcellular level would be localized with immunoelectronic microscopic technique.

It was no accident that I was appointed as the editor of China Journal of Practical Medicine Hygiene as the sole graduate student in the whole editing team. I attributed this great acknowledgement to my four published papers in leading academic journals in China.

The more I learn about neuroscience, the more I realize that my knowledge is insufficient to unravel the secrets of the brain. This has

prompted me to seek the most advanced knowledge and expertise at a world top university. *** University is, without doubt, a right place for me to pursue a Ph.D. degree and to fulfill my dream: to become a top neuroscientist in China. Your graduate program deeply fascinates me because the

Department of *****, with distinguished faculty, best-equipped laboratories and nurturing academic atmosphere, plays a leading role in neuroscience research. Furthermore, my special research interests, the treatment of

cerebral ischemic injury and the neural mechanism of learning and memory, are similar to the interests of some professors, such as Dr.***’s research in

“******”, Dr.***’s work in “******”. Nothing has proved more challenging and intriguing to me than in-depth research in projects like that.

My motivation to succeed is reflected in my outstanding academic preparation, independent research capability, and vision for the future.

These attributes, combined with my defined purpose and willingness to learn about all aspects of neuroscience, will guide my success as a doctoral student at *** University. Upon completing my proposed degree program, I will return to China with a conscious effort to increase the present research level in neuroscience, and use my professional knowledge to help the suffering

 

第二篇：个人陈述范例集锦

个人陈述范例集锦

　　成功的申请可以帮助你按自己的条件进入最合适的学校，是不可忽视的一项，个人简历是反映一个申请者自身情况的材料。国外绝大多数的学校都要求申请者提供，并作为审查批准入学的重要依据之一。

　　个人简历的英译很多，如"Personnel Vita"、"Autobiographical Statement"、"Personal Statement"、"Autobiography"、"Resume"。其中"Resume"写法稍有不同。个人简历一般应简要写明本人所受教育、专业兴趣、工作经历、所取得的成绩及家庭背景。

　　有关个人简历写作的注意要点。综合各校的要求，特做如下分析：

　　1.个人简历的结构可分为三或四个段落。第一段落简单交待自己的个人情况，如姓名、出生时间及地点、家庭背景等。良好的家庭教育对你的成才当然有利。但美国对此不很重视，一般可以不写。第二段可以围绕你的求学经过来展开，但不要用流水帐式的写法使叙述过于生硬刻板。第三段以你的大学生活为主，你为何选此学科，可以与前面的叙述相呼应。第四段要说明你个人的能力、性格。

　　2. 内容要着重在你留学的动机，目前所取得的成绩，你终生的目标。

　　3. 个人简历避免过多的形容词，例如，想象力十分丰富、创造力超群等，宜举小小的例子来说明。

　　4. 个人简历约200－300字为可，不宜写得太长。

范例1 计算机系毕业生个人简历

I have the honor to present a brief introduction of myself to you in compliance with the requirements of your graduate admission I was born in November 7th, 1966, at the town of Changing, Beijing. My parents are doing business and farming. I have one elder sister, one younger sister, and two younger brothers. The family is in a well-to-do country with harmonized atmosphere.

After my elementary and junior high school education at my hometown, I went on my senior high school education at a public vocational technical high school at the neighboring county Fangshan. Courses I have taken there include: mechanical structure, applied mechanical dynamics, material strength, heat treatment analysis, and electrical engineering. I also had practice courses on lathe work, bench work, casting, engineering drawing, and electronic television repair skill.

After graduation from this technical school, I found a job at the Evergreen Traffic Corp. When I had worked one year in mechanical design and heat treatment analysis, I was admitted to the Computer Science Department of Beijing Institute of Technologies.

Computer science education was an extension of my pursuit in electronic knowledge, it had led me into the world of applied electronics. Courses I had taken are: Calculus, Computer Programming (FORTRAN, COBOL, ASSEMBLY, and BASIC), Computer architecture, algorithm, maintenance, system analysis, and some related courses in Accounting, Statistics, Operating research, Digital value analysis. Beginning at the second year of college, I participated in a work study program and was assigned to the computer center of Far East Textile Corp. as night-shift computer operator, The computers I dealt with were CDC 3300 MSOS and IBM 370-115 DOS/VS system. The major work I had done was the system transference of CDC 3300: MSOS to IBM 370-115 DOS/VS. In 1989, I was employed by China Automobile Corp. as a computer programmer, and was informed to work on the first of June. For the first six months of my service, I was in charge of the IBM 4331; DOS/ VSE System Operation, and later on dealt with personnel / payroll and financing system programming works. In the second year, I was promoted to be a system analyst for personnel/ payroll system. In an attempt to upgrade the efficiency of computer data process and to simplify users operating procedures, I redesigned the whole working system and I successfully transferred a Batch operation from oriented system to on-line system. In the third year, I spent five months in the developing of subsystem of financing-accounting. No sooner had I finished that system than I was reassigned as a Subsystem Programmer in charge of DOS / VSE, CICS, and VTAM. At that position I have full responsibility for affairs of technical transition, system development, recruit training, and network communications. With the elapse of time and the accumulation of experiences, I am now familiar with all of the popular computer languages: FORTRAN, COBOL, ASSEMBLY, and BASIC. Other than these languages, I have also learned and practiced in planning, designing, and analyzing of the following computer applications: DL/ 1, Data Base, On-line (CICS, BMS), Data Communication Network (ACF/ VTAM / NCP), VM, DOS / VSE Operating System: Personnel / Payroll, Accounting Application System and etc.. For these achievements I owe a great deal to China Information Association Since I have taken almost every training course they have offered.

With the ever-increasing level of my work, I am feeling strongly that the theoretical study and actual practice are equally important and dependent on each other. Though I personally possess many years of experiences in actual practices, there is always need for me to extend my existing theoretical basis for future research. My love for computer sciences and my inquisitiveness had pushed me to apply for your graduate school admission, and I have decided . should I be accepted by you, I will concentrate on the field of net-work-data-communication, then make a breakthrough on my current ways of thinking in computer related research and development. Finally, I expect that I, myself, as one member of today's world of computer domain, I should strive to offer my best professional computer service to our society.

范例2 医学工程专业转攻计算机专业读书计划

I majored in Biomedical Engineering at Nankai University after graduating from high school. There, I took courses on Introduction to Computer Science, Computer Programming, and Microprocessor. Therefore, I became greatly interested in the field. In my spare time, I attended BASIC Training Class and read lots of related books whenever I was free. Also, I decided to further my study in the field of Computer Science. After the graduation. I was hired by Tianjin Medical Equipment Co., LTD. to be a Service Engineer taking charge of the maintenance of X-ray instruments of Phillips and Siemens. Owing to the need of the work. I attained ASSEMBLY and PASCAL Training classes and realized more of the importance of Computer Science. I would like to enter your Graduate School to study Computer Programming and System Analysis as computer is definitely going to play an important role in the life of humanbeing. Upon the completion of the study, I will return to China to devote my knowledge to Biomedical Engineering, to manufacture new products to be either marketed or applied to hospital management and help computerizing hospital management

范例3 经济系转计算机系读书计划

After my undergraduate study at Hebei University where I majored in Economics. I became a sales representative for Tang Shan Textile Co. I have worked in this position for about three years. In my work, I have witnessed the growing role played by computers in today's business administration and research. This trend became acute after the advent of minicomputers and microcomputers. The computer programmers and engineers trained in this country can not meet the pressing demand. I wish to devote myself to the application of computers and therefore, I have decided to pursue an M.S. degree in Computer Science. If admitted, I will concentrate my studies on the computer software.

I have some fundamental knowledge regarding the characteristics and capabilities of computers in a course on the Introduction to Computer Science which I took as an undergraduate, Nevertheless, I am willing to take more prerequisite courses if necessary. Upon completing the studies, I will return to my country and seek a position as a programmer.