英语四级记叙文写作

记叙文写作策略 (Strategies for Narration Writing)

1．记叙文的6大要素（时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、结果）要交代清楚。同时要把握好各个要素和中心思想的关系。

2．确定叙述的人称：选择合适的人称为主题服务。如果要叙述细腻的人物内心活动、丰富的思想感情，选用第一人称的叙述方式比较合适；如果叙述需要比较广阔的发挥空间，那么，用第三人称就可以真实、客观地完成全过程的叙述。

3．确定叙述的内容：首先确立中心思想。然后，根据中心思想选择材料，从具体材料中提炼出中心来。

4．确定叙述的方式：叙述的结构要合理安排，情节要合理安排。叙述方式有顺叙、倒叙和插叙。其中，最常用的叙述方式是按照时间顺序，事情发生、发展的顺序进行叙述。这种顺叙的方式在英文写作中最常见。

5．选用合适的时态叙述：例如，事情发生在过去的过去，就用过去完成时叙述。一般按时间顺序发生的事，用一般过去时。根据具体情况，还可以用到过去进行时和过去将来时。

三个步骤：

第一段、总结描述：交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句

第二段、具体描述：具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果： 1

起因＋经过＋结果

第三段、对事件的分析：分析句1+分析句2+分析3

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Honor for My Teacher

题目要求：

1） 向老师致以节日祝贺

2） 从一件难忘的事回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献

3） 我如何报答老师的关爱

The once per year’s Day will come soon, which is a quite important day and deserves attention from the whole society. There is no more appropriate time than this for us students to express our special recognition and respect to all our teachers. So on this special occasion, I want to show my esteem and thanks to my dearest teacher, Mr. Wang for all the work he has done for me.

Now I still remember clearly one lesson on cheating he gave me. It happened on the end of one term, when we were having an exam. I was copying answers from one of my classmates. Just at the moment, Mr. Wang came in and found my cheating behavior. It impressed me most that he did not criticize me but talked about the importance of honesty and emphasized that dishonest behavior is very harmful even if it was not an exam.

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Every time I remind this and all other work he has done for me, I feel that I should return his great love with my achievements. I will study hard to become a real talent. Furthermore, I will devote myself to the development of our country as he does. In conclusion, the enlightenment he gave me will always encourage me in my whole life.

首段:描述背景

主题句：交代背景事件及其重要性或意义

扩展句：阐述如何对待和应对该事件。

结尾句：表明“我”的态度，引出主题事件

(1）主题句：交代事件的背景（背景事件 扩展句：如何对待和应对该事件There is no more appropriate time than this for us students to （3）结尾句：表明“我”的态度，引出主题事件So on this special 中间段:描述事件

主题句：引出具体事件

扩展句：具体描述事件发生的经过

(4）主题句：引出具体事件 3

扩展句一：事件的开始 It 扩展句三：事件的进展一扩展句二：事件的进展二扩展句三：事件的突出表现一It impressed me most that he did not criticize me but 末段:总结观点

主题句：承上启下，引出“我”的感受或得到的启示 扩展句：表明“我”的感受或将采取的行动。

结尾句：总结全文

(9）主题句：承上启下，引出“我”的感受或得到的启示Every 扩展句一：行动一I will study hard to become a real talent. (11)扩展句二：行动二Furthermore, I will devote myself to the development of our （12）结尾句：总结全文

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An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident （20xx年6月） 4

假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：

1）车祸发生的时间及地点

2）你所见到的车祸情况

3）你对车祸原因的分析

首段:描述背景

引言句：简要介绍“我”的情况（姓名、职业等）。

主题句：简要交代事件发生的时间，引出下文对事件的具体描述。

[1] 引言句： “我”的情况[2] 主题句：交代事件 中间段:描述事件

扩展句：具体描述事件发生的经过及结果

[3] 扩展句一：事件的开始It was th[4] 扩展句一：“我”当时的状态及事件的进展 扩展句二： 事件进展 It happened[7] 扩展句： 事件结果 I went up and found that 末段:总结观点

主题句：承上启下，引出“我”对事件原因的分析

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扩展句：分析事件发生的原因。

结尾句：总结全文，呼吁采取必要的方法或措施来避免或增加类似的事件。

[10] 主题句：承上启下，引出“我”对事件原因的分析 Many factors 扩展句：分析事件发生的原因it is clear that [12] On the other hand结尾句：总结全文，呼吁采取必要的方法或措施来避免或增加类似的事件Anyway, I believe accidents may be reduced or avoided if

大学英语应用文写作

第一部分：书信体写作

书信文体的一般布局：

开头（一般第一段）：开门见山，表明写信目的。

主体（一般第二和第三段）：根据所给提纲，阐明来信问题。（注意一定按照提纲要求来写）

结尾（一般第四段）：礼貌祝福，表达希望。

书信文体的写作要求：

1、简洁：书信的语言贵在于精，要用最简洁的语言表现尽可能丰富的内容。

2、清晰：要写清楚信件内容，以免看信人发生误会。

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3、礼貌：言语得体，措辞礼貌。

A．投诉信

写作指津：

投诉信也叫抱怨信。一般是当自己的正常生活受到骚扰、自己的利益受到侵害或当社会规范有失规范时，用来表达不满情绪和提出批评。所有的投诉信都有一个共同点，就是最终是要收信人解决问题，所以需要提出解决方案。考生应该注意如果题目中没有给出解决方案，那么就要根据投诉内容中的不满提出自己的解决方案。具体写作步骤：

开头：表明来信所要投诉的问题，尽可能做到客观礼貌，给读者留下好印象，应该记住读信人不一定就是错误的责任人，他的合作对事情的最后解决有着非常重要的作用。

主体：写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产生的后果。可以说具体的理由，也可以说问题的具体体现方式。

结尾：提出解决方案，不需展开。这段应体现书信的礼貌原则，可以用类似“如果你能??，我将十分感激”这样的表达方式。还要注意做到公平、公正。

Directions： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below：

假如你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应涉 7

及食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on

Campus

Dear Mr. President,

I'm a student in our university. Here I am writing to you to call your attention to some problems about the canteen service on our campus.

Generally speaking, we are not content with the canteen service in our university. The reasons are as follows： For one thing, the dishes at our canteen are too expensive, and they are by no means good in quality and taste. For another, far from being kind and warm-hearted, the canteen workers always seem to be cold and rude to us students. Besides, the canteen is becoming more and more crowed and noisy with an ever larger present of vocational students every term.

Nutritious and delicious meals well within the students ’means are very important for young students. So it is urgent to take measures to improve the canteen service so that we can study hard. I do hope something will be done to improve the present situation.

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I look forward to your reply. Thank you very much.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus 写信人的身份 I'm a student in our university.表述抱怨的内容Here I am writing to you to call your attention to some problems 说明存在的问题：

说明事物的重要性 9

点名解决问题的紧迫性表达本人的愿望

惯用结束语I look forward to your reply. Thank you very much.

Your

s sincerely, B．邀请信

Directions： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter of Invitation to your friend. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below：

假如你是Zhao Liang,已经很久没和你的美国朋友Philip见面了。请写信邀请他和你共度春节。

Dear Philip,

With the Spring Festival drawing near, my family and I sincerely invite you to join us for this year’s Spring Festival. It would be pleasant to have you here. Will you join us?

During the festival time, we will have lots of activities you are interested in. First, we’ll have a big New Year’s Eve dinner, a symbol of family reunion, with all family members sitting around the table and 10

having a variety of delicious food. Second,we will go to watch the marvelous lion and dragon dances symbolizing happiness, good fortune and prosperity.

I believe you will be interested in these activities. The Spring Festival is the most popular holiday for Chinese and is celebrated almost in every household in China. During the holidays, we visit each other to express our best regards and whishes. The Spring Festival this year would not be complete without you!

Since the New Year’s Eve dinner will begin at 6:00 p.m on

February17, is it possible for us to meet at 5:50 p.m? We do hope you can come.

sincerely, yours,

Zhao Liang

Dear Philip,

(1)开门见山提出时间（活动）以及时间、地点2)表达邀请愿望It would be pleasant to have you here. (3)正式发出邀请Will you join us/give me the pleasure of your company?

(4)开始介绍活动的内容activities you are interested in. (5)具体始介绍要举行活动的内容First, 11

(6)具体始介绍要举行活动的内容(7)引出受邀请人参加的理由(8)受邀请人参加的具体理由(9)受邀请人参加的具体理由(10)总结受邀请人参加的必要性without you!

(11)说明具体的决定时间和地点再一次发出邀请We do hope you can come.

Sincerely yours,

Zhao Liang

C．申请信

Directions： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an application letter to a university of America for your Master degree in Electrical Engineering . You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below：

1） 表达申请攻读硕士学位的愿望。

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2） 自己的情况简介。

3） 表达对申请学校、专业、教授的看法。

An Application Letter for Further Study

October4,2014

Dear Professor William,

I have read the annual prospectus issued by your school and found that it has the best graduate program of Engineering Science. I am greatly interested in the program and hope that I COULD DO MY Master degree research under your instruction.

I am working at the Electrical Engineering Department of Wuhan University. During my four-year study there, I took such courses as Electrical Technology and Engineering Science.And I have passed all the required courses with satisfactory marks. Also,I have learned to cooperate with others, which , I believe, is supremely important to my work. As for my English ability, I am especially proficient in spoken and written English. Besides, I was a major member of several

campus clubs including Flyer’s Disciples and Technology Association. Two of my former professors and the present dean of our

department have kindly written letters of recommendation for me, as enclosed with this letter.

I would be very grateful if you could send me the necessary forms and any information about financial aid in your program. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

An Application Letter for Further Study

October4,2014 (1)介绍自己获得对方学校的信息 I have read the annual

prospectus(招生简章) issued by your school and found that it has the 表达自己申请该校就读的愿望I am greatly interested in the program and hope that I could do my Master degree research under your instruction.

(3)开始介绍自己的情况、5、6)具体介绍自己大学期间的学习，所学的专业和其他课程及特长During my four-year study （5）And I have passed all the required courses with

satisfactory marks. （6）which , I believe, is supremely important to my work.（7、8）进一步介绍自己的其他能力 As for my English ability, I am especially 14

（9）提出自己将获得教授的推荐，争取对方学校的信任Two of my former professors and the present dean of our department have kindly written letters of recommendation for me, as enclosed with this letter.

（10） 再一次发出请求，并表达自己的感激之情I would be very grateful if you could send me the necessary forms and any information about financial aid in your program. （11）结束语I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

D．倡议书

Directions： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an open letter to call on all students to truly show their care for the children who are unable to afford their education. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below：

4） 对失学儿童的简单介绍。

5） 目前的主要困难：无法承担学费

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6） 倡议援助，联系方式

Your Help Needed

May 21,2014

Dear fellow students,

I am writing this letter to call on all the students in our university to do something for those who are unable to go to school. As some of you may know, many children, who have postponed their school plans to get jobs to support their families , are unable to afford the expense of

education today. In fact, the situation is becoming more and more urgent. It is necessary for us to show our care for those poor children. On one hand, education plays a key role in the development of our country. On the other hand, education can have a positive impact on a person’s future by increasing marketable job skills and earning power. So, it is a pity that so many children in rural areas are unable to afford their eduation.So, it is high time we did something to help them.Firstly,we can donate part of our pocket money to them.Secondly, books we have used can be given to them so that they can access to some information.

If you are willing to make a donation, please contact 62335648 in the daytime and 62335658 at night. Join us in the action and extend your love into a spirit of daring any possible difficulties.

incerely yours,

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Chen Feng

Associate Professor of Statistics（统计系副教授）

Your Help Needed

May 21,2014 (1)直接表达写信目的(2)开始引出问题出现的背景(3)进一步阐述问题的现状(4)关注解决问题的必要性It is (5)解决问题很必要的两个理由On one hand, On the 进一步表现问题需要解决的紧迫性However, it is a pity that so many children in rural areas are unable to afford their eduation. (9) 发出号召，提出解决问题的办法So, it is high time we did something to help them. (10) 解决问题的两个办法 17

Secondly, (11) 联系方式62335648 in the daytime and 62335658 at night. (12) 书信结尾语，发出号召，增强感染力Join us in the action and extend your love into a spirit of daring any possible difficulties.

Thank you!

Sincerely yours,

Chen Feng

Associate Professor of Statistics（统计系副教授）

E．演说辞

Directions： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of monitor of your class. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below：

7） 你认为具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任班长的工作。

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如果当选班长，你将为本班同学做什么

A Campaign Speech

Dear fellow students,

It is a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. To begin with, let me introduce myself, my name is Hu Tao, one of your

classmates and friends. As some of you may know, I am an outgoing and responsible person.

As for the position of monitor, I find I am quite qualified. Firstly, I had always been the monitor of my class before I came into the university, which will be extremely helpful to my future work here, if I get elected. Secondly, I have a variety of hobbies, for example, basketball, football, pingpong , and so on. Thirdly, I am good at communicating with others and organizing activities.

Looking into the future, I will try my best to serve you, my classmates if I am lucky enough to be the monitor. On one hand, I, with my

co-workers, will make the class committee a true assistance to students’ study as a bridge of communication between teachers and students. On the other hand, I will form a Teacher-Student friendship association. In addition, I will establish an information center to provide students with the latest information.

I wish all of you the best and thank you all for listening. Thank you!

Yours sincerely,

Hu Tao

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A Campaign Speech （1）表达自己的心情It is a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech. （2）做简单的自我介绍To begin with, let me introduce （3）进一步介绍自己的情况（4）说明竞选职位，引出自己所具备的条件As for the position of （5） 罗列自己所具备的三个条件（8）展望未来，做出承诺（当选后会做什么）Looking into the future, （9）罗列三个承诺 20

（12）演说结束语 I wish all of you the best and thank you all for listening. Thank you!

Yours sincerely,

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