雅思作文两个月轻松过6分:模板、逻辑是捷径

　　和大多数为了Dream School和雅思“相爱相杀”的“烤鸭”不同，陈琨考雅思的目的是为了达到出国移民对于语言成绩的要求。自然，他的目标并不是一份漂亮的高分成绩单，而是用最短的时间和最少的精力达到自己移民需要的成绩——四个6分。

　　下面，就让我们一起来听听他是如何在短时间内在作文单项上获得提高的。

　　用模板理清结构

　　陈琨说自己之所以能在作文上有所提高，源于他在老师的指导下学会了使用模板。一开始准备考试的时候，他完全都没有要准备写作模板的意识，就是想到什么写什么，文章结构非常混乱，文章中用于支持论点的理由也不充分。但是通过背诵老师在上课时提供给他的模板，陈琨逐渐明白了一篇高分雅思作文是什么样子的，首尾句应该怎么写，中间段要如何展开等等……特别是议论文，如果考生能够按照模板写，整个文章就会变得行文流畅、思路清晰。

　　用论点支撑逻辑

　　谈及第二个成功的关键，陈琨提到了文章的逻辑。逻辑是作文当中非常重要的组成部分，从一篇文章的逻辑性就可以充分看出考生的思维能力和英语水平，特别是在议论文当中。因此，考生一定要在自己的文章中注入强大的逻辑。那么文章的逻辑性体现在何处呢?陈琨的答案是文章中的论点。若是一篇文章中各个分论点都不够充分，不足以支持文章主旨的话，这个文章就是没有逻辑的。因此，陈琨的建议是，当考生看到题目后，应从脑海中能想到的众多论点中选出几个内容最合理、理由最充分的论据，填入考前就准备好的模板当中，确保文章的逻辑性。

　　除了作文单项的制胜秘诀之外，陈琨还分享了他认为很有效的其他单项的备考技巧。

　　听力：多做听写

　　陈琨的听力曾经在无老师指导的情况下考到过7.5分的高分，他说他的备考方法就是多听多练。听力的提高除了多练习磨耳朵之外是没有捷径的。

　　口语：不用模板

　　与写作所用的模板不同，口语考试中并不推荐依赖模板回答口语问题的方式，陈琨在练习口语的时候从来不用模板和万能答案去套问题，这样的好处在于他能充分锻炼自己的思考和应答能力，也避免了考试中抽到不熟悉的问题就慌得说不出完整话的情况。

　　阅读：找关键词

　　如果说词汇量是阅读拿高分的充分条件的话，找关键词就是其必要条件。学不会找关键词，就算文章全读懂了也不代表能将阅读题目回答正确。

 

第二篇：雅思作文模板

辩论类：

In the new millennium, recognised as the chief force behind D，A makes the unprecedented changes spring up in our lives. In the meantime, whether 从句 has sparked spirited debate. Some people believe that …(while others hold different idea). From my own perspective, I think their view is only partly true. (I am in favor of the former view.)

From a more pragmatic standpoint, evidence abounds that

A is still an indispensable part of B. 1 In the first place, it goes without saying that ….. More exactly, …. 2 In the second place, ……. As a consequence（结果是…..）, (因果主语), which may in turn render E adj/n. 3 In extreme cases, ( ). I would be hard-pressed to imagine how it can be possible for A to do sth if ….

However，I should admit that C still palys a pivotal role in

B realms. The reason for this is that C promotes the development of B. Obviously, ……. /And this, in turn, helps them to do sth. However, the proliferation of C does not come without adverse effects. To illustrate,……..

In summary, I would admit that C enables B to do sth. In spite of this, speaking for myself, I insist that …..

报道类：

In the new millennium, recognised as the chief force behind D，A makes the unprecedented changes spring up in our lives. Yet at the same time, B , 定语 ，find it increasingly difficult for them to cope with serious C. This issue has widespread repercussion on society as a whole. In this essay, I will ascertain some possible causes of this phenomenon and then propose some solutions.

It is manifest that a wide range of factors contribute to ….. 1 In the first place, it goes without saying that A is the root cause of the crisis. More exactly, …. 2 In the second place, the staggering advancement of B poses a threat to C/affords

C to do sth. To illustrate, ….. As a consequence of it, (因果), which may in turn render E adj/n. 3 In extreme cases, …..

Given the severity of this phenomenon, we have no alternative but to take immediate steps to address this situation. First, we must do our utmost to enhance people’s awareness of A . Second, B should spare no effort in doing sth. For instance, a funding allocated by the government on the use of doing sth will, doubless, help to do sth. Lastly, C should strive to encourage D to do sth.

In summary, A(environmental preservation) calls for more public attention. Speaking for myself, I am convinced that more measures, including ……, ….. and ……. , should be taken to combat this problem.

个月从6到6.5感想加写作7分模板~~希望能给大家有所帮助~~

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以下是我两次考试都过6.5的经验，现在分享给大家，回馈3G~~~~~~~希望给大家有所帮助哦 ~ 以下内容只有回复后才可以浏览

在一个月时间内，我的总成绩从6分升级到了6.5分，如果说一次是巧合，那两次就是自己努力的结果了。我连考了两次，都是6.5。我觉得，考雅思等于50%的思考加50%的实打实复习。因为我自己的确已经了解到想要考出高分，就必须找出适合自己的全套复习计划。就如我自己而言，在复习开始之前，所有的具体复习计划都已经拟好了，时间利用率非常高。我每过一天，就在那天的复习计划上打钩，说明当天的任务已经完成了。这样便于自己一步步准确的达到训练目的。同时，单单拟好计划还不够，我还适时根据自己的情况来调整我的复习进度。这样才能更切合于实际，以便于以最短的路途向目标前进。

好的参考书对我们非常重要。读透一本好书比得上泛读10本普通的书。我想结合自己的经验，就参考书提供一些建议。

阅读：刘洪波的雅思阅读真经１＆２和３都非常好用。想想我就是在练完真经１＆２后成绩从６分到了７分，等我练完３时，阅读分数已经到８了。时间距离也就是一个月不到时间。

听力：我觉得“雅思听力经典教程”不错，也是刘洪波的，难度适中，和现在的听力考试比较接近。还有，我觉得听力机经非常重要。听力机经明显是我们加分的筹码。我在两次考试中都分别背到了1篇，虽然不多，但是足够给我加分啦~~机经的话背3gbbs上咸蛋超人的重点推荐就可以了。

写作：最后一次考试得了7分，自己都觉得有点不可思议，但是后来想想还是可以理解的。我觉得，如果目标只需要6.5的同学，那本“十天突波雅思写作”还是够了的。只要你总结出自己的一套模板，然后背熟书本里面的全部词汇加加分句型就足够了。总之，模板非常的重要，这样使你在考试时有更多的时间来思考主体段。

口语：由于我的口语只有六分，所以也不敢怎么说自己的意见。本人主要是觉得口语的话还是要靠练习。你不练习的话即使有再多的技巧也是白搭。本人是在考前每天都坚持联系一个小时的口语，材料是超人的每月最新雅思预测。还有凉月的口语还是不错的，分类得非常的清晰，照着复习蛮好的。以上的都是自己复习了这么久的感想，这些都是自己奋斗之后总结出来的，让那些一次性就考出７分以上的同学们见笑了～～

这是我这次作文7分的模板，现在贡献给大家参考哦

Since we have embraced upon information era, the way we live, work, play, and learn has undergone noticeable and profound transformation. Whether has been a breeding ground for heated debate. People from all walks of life can hardly reach on absolute consensus. For my part, my view will be identical with the advocates/opponents.

Granted, does not come without drawbacks/benefits.

However, much heavier weight should be attached to be blessings/drawbacks.

To put all into one nutshell, .only under this circumstance can be establish a scientific, harmonious and progressive society.

８分雅思作文模板 Post By：2007-2-3 11:35:00 [只看该作者]

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单一式观点

1. 陈述支持或者反对的理由

给出一个论点，此论点不包括两种事物的比较，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。具体表述如下：

TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? AAA. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

AAA: 表示题目中给出的观点，请考生在写作时根据实际情况进行替换，

MODEL（1）agree

Before rendering my opinion, I think it is important to take a glance at the arguments on both sides. People who support AAA usually give some, even all of the following reasons. The first is that①.

The second is that②. Third, ③.

Generally, people who attack AAA claim that④. They also often say that there will be problems of⑤.

As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that there are three main reasons why I support AAA. Firstly, ⑥. Secondly, ⑦. Furthermore, ⑧.

①人们支持AAA的第一个原因

②人们支持AAA的第二个原因

③人们支持AAA的第三个原因

④人们反对AAA的第一个原因

⑤人们反对AAA的第二个原因，或如果选择AAA会带来的问题

⑥我支持AAA的第一个原因

⑦我支持AAA的第二个原因

⑧我支持AAA的第三个原因

MODEL（2）disagree

I disagree with AAA for numerous reasons. The first and foremost reason is①. AAA may have some advantages, ②. There may be nothing wrong with these, and they can be easily understood by many people, but③.

AAA has also had a bad effect on④.

Another innate characteristic of AAA is⑤. In addition, ⑥.

Finally, it seems to be true that AAA⑦, but⑧.

AAA has done many good things. ⑨. However, we also cannot deny that⊙.

①反对AAA的第一个原因

②AAA的优势

③这些优势里所隐含的劣势

④AAA的一个重大缺点

⑤AAA的第一个劣势

⑥AAA的第二个劣势

⑦AAA看起来的一个优点

⑧AAA的一个缺点

⑨AAA的贡献

⊙AAA的不好之处

2. 通过比较来陈述支持或反对的理由

给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。具体表述如下：

TOPIC: A is superior to B in DOING C. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons to support your point of view.

在模板中用A，B进行比较的两个事物，这种形式与对立观点式有着很多的相似之处，考生可以进行适当的借鉴。

MODEL (1) Disagree

I completely disagree with this statement that choosing A has more advantages than choosing B. And I would like to present two explanations to conform you that I am right.

First of all, ①. Generally, ②. Let me give you an example: ③. Thus, proving my point, ④.

The second thing that must be taken into consideration when choosing A or B is that⑤. As I have said, ⑥.

Finally, the point I am trying to make is that it is not better to choose A than choose B in that⑦.

In sum, ⑧.

①支持B的第一个理由

②进一步阐述支持B的原因

③举例说明原因一

④填入一句支持B的句子

⑤支持B的第二个理由

⑥进一步阐述支持B的第二个原因

⑦支持B的第三个理由

⑧总结观点

MODEL (2) Agree

Something we all cannot neglect as we get older is to accept the opinions of others. On the question whether it is better to choose A or choose B, I have long admitted that A has a strong argument. Privately, however, ①. I disagree with the above statement and support the superiority of

B.

Although②. There is no evidence to suggest that③. What’s more, ④. Similarly, it has been said that⑤. To be sure, ⑥.

Another reason why I secretly dispute the statement above is that I am very sure that⑦. For instance, ⑧.

To take the point above to an extreme, ⑨.

For me, A could never equal B. ⊙.

①提出自己的观点：支持B

②A具备的优势

③A胜于B

④A的第一个缺点

⑤A的第二个缺点

⑥支持B

⑦支持B的另一个原因

⑧举例说明

⑨举出一个极端的例子来支持B

⊙比较A和B，总结观点

A类训练题目

1.政府是否应该资助理科生，因为科学家为社会贡献大。

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1. The social development is based on science, as any high technological product derives from scientific theories.

2. The payment for those who are engaged in science is still at a low level, which should be changed. Therefore, the support from the government is indispensable.

3. Emphasis from the government will ignite the passion of citizens so that science will be promoted to a higher level.

Against:

Science and arts should be placed equally

1. It cannot be denied that the modern material aspect of civilization is created by the modern technology. It is scientists’ hard work that prospers the material life.

2. Our life is greatly enriched by the works of arts, such as literature, painting and music.

3. Without the contribution from the workers of the arts, such as social workers, litterateurs and legist, the society cannot remain healthy, peaceful and stable, and people cannot engage in the scientific work in a good environment. Therefore, it is necessary to put equal emphasis on the science and arts.

2、衡量政府成功是否以经济繁荣为标志？

For:

1. The economy is the criterion of a country or government’s success.

2. The economy is the fundamental of everything.

3. Without economic prosperity, happiness is just the castle in the air.

4. The economic situation is the most objective criterion.

5. A powerful economy is the cornerstone of social development. With a strong economy, we can have a comprehensive welfare system accessible to all citizens.

6. With a sound economy, our people will have sufficient access to free medical care and education.

7. Along with economic prosperity, our national defense system will be greatly enhanced.

Against:

1. The criterion of a country or government’s success should be citizens’ satisfaction to the country or the government.

2. The criterion of a country or government’s success should be the country’s comprehensive strength.

3. With money while devoid of sense of security, life will become dull and monotonous.

4. Money is omnipotent, so that economic level isn’t everything of a country.

5. Without a sense of security, a democratic atmosphere, economic prosperity doesn't mean everything.

6. It is not uncommon that in some countries that boast so-called economic prosperity, corruption and discrimination are prevalent.

3、强迫退休制度

For:

1. Every one is human with limited energy and vigor; therefore, after an exhausting working life, one tends to be increasingly slow both in mind and action. Remaining in one’s post would undoubtedly impair one’s physical and emotional health.

2. When one reaches an old age, he/she tends to be more conservative and reluctant to accept new ideas and innovations. They are likely to adhere to past practices and old ways. One’s originality and creativity will dry out. They always hesitate to strive forward.

3. Too many old people remaining in high positions will hinder the development of society.

4. Offer more employment opportunities and promotion to the young so that they will be able to give full play to their talent.

5. If one never stops working, what’s the point of life?

Against:

1. Different occupations have their diverse traits and distinguishing features. Some jobs call for special psychological requirements. For example, professors, doctors and research fellows are always required to work into their seventies for their rich experience and academic achievements, while professional athletes, such as gymnasts, retire even at the age of twenty.

2. Some people think working gives them the mental satisfaction/contentment and a role in society. If they are obliged to withdraw from work to complete domesticity, they will feel that they are abandoned by the society and useless. Work brings social and personal esteem.

3. It is regarded as a breadwinning process. Retirement will bring about some financial troubles.

4. It is unfair to some people who have studied for years to obtain a higher degree. If they are required to retire at the same age as those who receive shorter schooling, they cannot enjoy the same length of working. It is also a great waste of talents.

5. Thanks to the improvement in medical science, people enjoy a much life span/expectancy. We should redefine the term “old age”.

6. Chronological age is not always a true indicator of one’s capabilities.

7. It would be more economical to some employers to retain the old hands than to spend more time and money training greenhands.

8. Older workers usually are more stable, skilled and experienced than younger ones. It is deemed as an economic asset.

Conclusion/suggestion:

1. One’s retirement age should be decided according to one’s own conditions and willingness. We shall adopt a flexible and rational retirement age so that different age can have a chance to give play to their talents and wisdom.

2. We should implement the policy of mandatory retirement, because it really brings us a good many benefits. The policy is not only good to the old, but also beneficial to the young.

4、体罚是否为好的教育方式

FOR:

1. We should teach children to respect discipline.

2. Discipline is the basis of all achievement.

3. Children are hardy creatures.

4. It moulds strong and real character.

5. It helps to reinforce the authority of teachers and parents.

6. Sometimes children will test the patience of their parents and teacher; teachers and parents should not be too permissive; otherwise they will spoil the children.

7. Permissiveness results in undisciplined children.

8. Parental laxity leads to the spread of juvenile delinquency.

Against:

1. Children shouldn’t be exposed to parental abuse (emotionally and physically).

2. It seriously violates the legal rights and interests of children.

3. It is tremendously cold-blooded and unhealthy, resulting in life-long adverse/negative repercussions/rebellious reaction.

4. It endangers children’ physical and mental development.

5. Not “you spare the rod” but “spare” the “reaction and attention” and you spoil the child. We should employ moderate and appropriate discipline.

6. It is a kind of brutality and cruelty which may lead to injury or even death of the student.

7. Achieve the reverse result.

8. Research reveals that students who suffer from corporal punishment tend to resort to violence in their future life.

5、小孩是学会竞争还是合作

For Competition:

1. Competition is inevitable; it’s human nature.

2. Competition builds character; it strengthens our self-esteem.

3. Competition is regarded as an open and fair race where success goes to the swiftest people regardless of their social status.

4. Competition is required to help us reach our fullest potential.

5. Natural selection and survival of the fittest.

For Cooperation:

1. Cooperation offers us a break from the pressure and stress of competition.

2. A win-win approach tends to fosters exploration of the root causes of the conflict and leads to constructive, sustainable solutions with positive expectation for future encounters.

3. Cooperative groups display more coordinated efforts, more division of labor, more acceptance of other ideas, and fewer communication difficulties than competitive groups.

4. Two heads are better than one.

5. Cooperation is marvelously successful at helping children to communicate effectively, to trust in others and to accept those who are different from themselves.