小作文部分

IELTS套句式写作大全

第一部分：TASK1图表写作套句精选

1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates that...

该柱状图展示了...

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding...

该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows (that)...

该图向我们展示了...

5.the pie graph depicts (that)....

该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...

这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show (that)...

数据（字）表明...

8.the tree diagram reveals how...

该树型图向我们揭示了如何...

9.the data/statistics show (that)...

该数据（字）可以这样理解...

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...

这些数据资料令我们得出结论...

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示...

12.according to the chart/figures...

根据这些表（数字）...

13.as is shown in the table...

如表格所示...

14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that...

从图表我们可以很清楚（明显）看到...

16.this is a graph which illustrates...

这个图表向我们展示了...

17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。

18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。

19.this is a column chart showing...

这是个柱型图，描述了...

20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of... 如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

21.over the period from...to...the...remained level.

在...至...期间，...基本不变。

22.in the year between...and...

在...年到...期间...

23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...

19xx年至1998三年里...

24.from then on/from this time onwards...

从那时起...

25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year).

...月(年)至...月（年)...的数量基本不变。

26.the number sharply went up to...

数字急剧上升至...

27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and...

...至...期间...的比率维持不变。

28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year)

...的数目在...月（年）达到顶点，为...

29.the percentage remained steady at...

比率维持在...

30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of...

...的比例比...的比例略高（低）。

31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and...

...与...的区别不大。

32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...

该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily.

...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。

34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%].

...的情况（局势）到达顶（高）点，为...百分点。

35.the figures/situation bottomed out in...

数字（情况）在...达到底部。

36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough.

数字（情况）达到底部（低谷）。

37.a is ...times as much/many as b.

a是b的...倍。

38.a increased by...

a增长了...

39.a increased to...

a增长到...

40.high/low/great/small/ percentage.

比低高（低）

41.there is an upward trend in the number of...

...数字呈上升趋势。

42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to...

...到...发生急剧上升。

43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down.

从...到...，下降速率减慢。

44.from this year on，there was a gradual declinel reduction in the...,reaching a figure of...

从这年起，...逐渐下降至...

45.be similar to...

与...相似

46.be the same as...

与...相同

47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and...

...与...之间有许多相似（不同）之处

48.a has something in common with b

a于b有共同之处。

49.the difference between a and b lies in...

a与b之间的差别在于...

50...(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise in...

...年...急剧上升。

第二部分：Task1 写作常识

一、图形种类及概述法：

泛指一份数据图表：a data graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table

饼图：pie chart

直方图或柱形图：bar chart / histogram

趋势曲线图：line chart / curve diagram

表格图：table

流程图或过程图：flow chart / sequence diagram

程序图：processing/procedures diagram

以下是一些较常用的描述用法

The table/chart diagram/graph shows (that)

According to the table/chart diagram/graph

As (is) shown in the table/chart diagram/graph

As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures,

figures/statistics shows (that)...

It can be seen from the figures/statistics

We can see from the figures/statistics

It is clear from the figures/statistics

It is apparent from the figures/statistics

table/chart/diagram/graph figures (that) ...

table/chart/diagram/graph shows/describes/illustrates how

......

阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的，因此文章必须逻辑清晰，如果描述得能令人在脑海里勾画出那个data chart，这篇task1无疑会达到8分的水平。开篇的第一句话可以是一句高度概括性的introduction（当然开门见山直接描述也是一种写法）；这样做不仅使文章更趋于完美，而且可以达到凑字数的目的（但不要照抄题目，除非时间相当紧迫）。接下来另起一段开始进行描述（根据实际情况1-2段），这当中经常要连续使用非限定性定于从句，从而使得描述过程流畅、清晰。最后也可再另起一段进行简短的综述（并非必须）。上述的任何一个步骤都要遵循依据现有data进行客观描述的原则，任何推测性或议论性的内容写得再多、再精彩不仅不会加分，而且还会成为扣分的因素。

二、data的具体表达法

data在某一个时间段固定不变：fixed in time

在一系列的时间段中转变：changes over time

持续变化的data在不同情况下:

增加：increase / raise / rise / go up ...

减少：decrease / grow down / drop / fall ...

波动：fluctuate / rebound / undulate / wave ...

稳定：remain stable / stabilize / level off ...

最常用的两种表达法：

动词 + 副词形式（Verb+Adverb form）

形容词 + 名词形式（Adjective+Noun form）

1. Verb+Adverb form

The number of XXX

+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuate...

+insignificantly/significantly/slightly/suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steeply/steadily/gradually/slowly...

+from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

2. Adjective+Noun form

There was a (very) sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/steep/steady/gradual/slow/slight

+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuation （注意：上述很多词不可用于修饰fluctuation）

+in the number of XXX from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

描述稳定的data：

The number of XXX remained steady/stable from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

The number of XXX stayed the same from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

There was little change / hardly any change / no change in the number of XXX from from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

描述不同状态的data

Noun form:

steady drop / sharp rise peak / dramatic fall / sharp drop

Verbal form:

(to) bottom out / (to) reach the bottom / (to) increase gradually / (to) reach a plateau / (to) remain steady

描述the highest point以及the lowest point

高点极值：

The monthly profit / The figures / The situation ...

+peaked in (月份/年) <准确时间点用at XXX> at XXX% / XXX(极点data) 或者reached a peak / a high point at XXX% / XXX(极点data) 低点极值：

XXX bottomed out / reached

+rock / the bottom / a low point

或者hit a trough

此外，在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences，最常用的固定搭配如下：

并列： as well as(句首/中), also, as well(句尾), either, neither, too, moreover, furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, what's more, apart from ...

举例： for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an illustration, in particular, particularly, especially

事实： as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, as long as, so long as ... 雷同/近似：similarly, likewise(句首/尾), at the same time, equally ...

转折： however, whereas, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, although, even though, while, yet, on the contrary, contrarily, in contrast, conversely, on the other hand, unlikely, in stead (of), in spite of, despite of ...

原因与结果

1. cause-suggestion (几乎不常用)

since / now that ...; I hope that...

because of/on account of/owing to/thanks to + (doing) sth, I hope that...

2. cause-effect (较常用)

XXX lead to / bring about / result in/ account for ...

(一个句子), therefore / thus / hence / as a result / consequently / (and) so ...

3. effect-cause (较常用)

XXX be caused by / result from / be the result of / be the effect of / be the consequence of ...

(一个句子), because ...

it is adj. that ...

it is unimaginable that ...

it is undeniable that ...

it is interesting to discover that ...

三、其它相关常用词（组）

1. 主章开头

图表类型：table; chart; diagram; graph; column chart; pie graph

描述：show; describe; illustrate; can be seen from; clear; apparent; reveal; represent

内容：figure; statistic; number; percentage; proportion

2. 表示数据

一般：have 10%; at 10%; over 10%

最高（低）点：peaked; reached a peak / high point

bottomed out; reached the bottom

变化：recover

略有回升； increase; jump; rise/rose; climb

decrease; fall/fell; drop; decline; reduce

fluctuate

浮动，摇摆不定

remained steady/stable; stay the same; little/hardly any /no change 变化程度：sudden/suddenly 突然的，意外的

rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的

dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的

significant/significantly 有意义的，重大的，重要的

sharp/sharply 锐利的，明显的，急剧的

steep/steeply 急剧升降的

steady/steadily 稳固的，坚定不移的

gradual/gradually 渐进的，逐渐的

slow/slowly 缓慢的，不活跃的

slight/slightly轻微的、略微地

stable/stably 稳定的

表示范围：from XXX to XXX; between XXX and XXX; for XXX to XXX多长时间直到

表示程度：almost adv. 几乎，差不多

nearly adv. 几乎，密切地

approximately adv. 近似的，大约

about adv. 附近， 大约，转向，左右，周围

just over 刚超过

over adv. 结束，越过，从头到尾

exactly adv. 正确地，严密地

precisely adv. 正好 精确地；清晰地

比例：20 per cent 20%

one in three 1/3

one out of every four 1/4

3. 其它在描述中的常用到的词

significant changes 图中一些较大变化

noticeable trend 明显趋势

during the same period 在同一时期

grow/grew 增长

distribute 分布，区别

unequally 不相等地

pronounced 明显的

average 平均

no doubt 无疑地

corresponding adj. 相应的，通讯的

represent vt. 阐述，表现

overall 总体上讲

except 除外

in the case of adv. 在...的情况下

in terms of / in respect of / regarding 在...方面

in contrast 相反，大不相同

in conclusion adv. 最后，总之

in comparison 相比之下

inversely adv. 相反地，倒转地

in general 通常，大体上，一般而言

range from

excessive adj. 过多的，过分的，额外

lower v.降低，跌落

elapse vi.（时间）过去，消逝

category n.种类

government policy 政府政策

market forces 市场规率

measure n. 尺寸，方法，措施 v.估量，调节

forecast n. 先见，预见 v. 预测

大作文部分

v105

some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the advantages,do you agree or disagree?

范文1

the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our life.in the past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,cars can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars bring great benefit to all of us.but as proverb goes:no garden without weeds.car is not exception.

owing a car has a lot of advantages.for one thing,car provide us the most convient way of transportation.we can get around freely without spenting a lot of time.emotionally,i always found driving is so exciting.for another,its the comfortable to drive a car.In winter.drivers always can stay warm and dry even in rainy whether,in addition,drivers are usually safe in their cars when they are out at night.

Cars bring the human merits,their side-effects graudually come to the surface.firstly,to run a car need a lot of oil,which is getting less and less.the increasing number of cars contribute the lacking of energy.secondlly,as more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which lead to the serious social problem--traffic jam.in addition,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of carbon monoxide into atmosphere.it make the air of cities unbreathabe,it strip people contact with frensh air.

therefore,the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars under control.thus,our heavier traffic can be solluted!

范文2

Private cars vs Public traffic

As traffic problems become more and more serious in many cities of developed and developing countries, their governments have to try hard and loads of money and energy have been spent to deal with them.

Firstly, it is not efficient for the commuters to use their private cars to and back from their workplaces. Occasionally we can see they have to sit on the wheels wasting time and fuel in a heavy traffic jam. At the same time, through burning the fossil fuels, green house gas CO2, CO1, acid rain gas SO2, fumes and dusts are being released into the atmosphere, all of which heavily overload the environment. Thirdly, with the increase of private cars, the road traffic accidents are also rise dramatically. For example, in a city with 5000 cars, there will be at least 250 accidents happening everyday, which also burden the public healthy services.

On the contrary, expected public traffic may be an ideal solution to these problems. For example city buses and railways are widely used or being constructed by many cities. People can take buses easily, which can be found every 10 minutes or less in the peak time. Actually, Nottingham Transport Company is building its own light railway in the city, which is announced by the speak man of the company, “It will be completed in the next year, the tickets will be very competitive and at the same time the travel will be very safe and comfortable.”

On the other hand, public traffic had its own disadvantages. Usually it cannot provide door-to-door service. It is inconvenient to go shopping by public vehicles. Sometimes you must wait a long time for the train. And quite a lot of people prefer to enjoy driving.

In conclusion, developing the public traffic is a useful approach to deal with these difficulties. One possible way, if not the best, is to taxi private cars heavily and use these revenues to provide citizens cheaper public traffic services.

范文3

With the development of science and technology, the cars have already become the important component in our daily life gradually. Cars make our life convenient and swift. However, too many cars have caused very serious social problems. Some people claim that the disadvantages of car are more than the advantages. I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis.

Since one century [ago], the auto industry has [been] developed at full speed worldwide, and has brought the enormous progresses to our life. For example, the car is the most convenient tool of transportation. We can [be] on and off duty by car every day, we can go to travel by car on the vacation, we can utilize the cars to deal with some emergency too. The car [is] playing an important role in our daily life. They make our rhythm of life faster and faster, make our business become more and more efficient.

On the other hand, the development of the automobile has brought a lot of infant industry to people, Give people countless employment opportunities too. Such as, manufacturing industry, repairing industry and maintaining indust

ry. We are enjoying the convenience that the cars bring to us; at the same time we can utilize the auto industry to support ourselves.However, we can not ignore that too many cars cause enormous social problems, for example, traffic jam, air pollution, traffic accident, to which we have to find a solution.

In a word, the cars have brought enormous change to our life; the advantages are far more than the disadvantages. We should recognize the merit of the cars, and do our best to solve the problems. If so, our life will be brighter. Version 00106

范文1

Nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much debated as in

our society. Nowadays, tobacco is more harmful than drug to people’s

health, therefore many people think that smoking is legal that is a direct and

primary reason to induce this kind of problem. The above point is certainly

true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that tobacco is a silent killer to smokers. Tobacco is

known to be the probable cause of some 25 different diseases, and for some,

such as lung cancer, bronchitis and emphysema, it is the main cause.

According to a WHO report four million people die yearly from tobacco-relate

d diseases, that is one death every eight seconds. Tobacco is significantly

becoming a greater cause of death and disability than any other single cause.

Another reason is that more and more young people are under 18 years old who smoke cigarette have been blinded by the deceit of tobacconists. Tobacco among adolescents remains stubbornly persistent. Smoking among adolescents rose in the 1990s in several developed countries， such as China,Vietnam and Thailand . While new markets are being opened by the tobacco industry actions, old markets have not been closed. Tobacco is a global threat. Last but not the least reason is the increase in cigarette smuggling. Because

of tobacco smuggling, the legal retailing and distribution systems are badly

affected, and faced with increased lawlessness and heavy tax losses. This be

havior severely affects the economy.

In conclusion, the tobacco should be considered illegal. Perhaps a pack of

cigarettes is less harmful than another drug, but tobacco is actually the

biggest killer of all the drugs.

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范文2

Advertisements of tobacco and those of “smoking is harmful”are often seen

together. But there has been an on-going argument about whether or not

tobacco should be forbidden and made illegal. I have always believed that

smoking should be illegal for the following reasons.

First, smoking does great harm to human health and causes many diseases.

It is reported that more than 70% of lung cancer sufferers are smokers, and

the average life-span of smokers is seven years less than that of non-

smokers. Moreover, it hurts not only smokers, but also the ones around the

smokers. Many researchers claim that breathing “second-hand smoke” may

be even more harmful than smoking.

Second, many social problems and disasters can be attributed to smoking.

For instance, many wives cannot bear their husbands’ smoking all the time,

which causes many quarrels, or even divorces. Furthermore, the biggest fire

disaster in China, the Daxinganling fire disaster, was caused by a burning

cigarette end, and the cost of the resulting loss was unimaginable.

Last, smoking tobaccos is a main source of air pollution.A magazine said that

for every cigarette smoked each day,a whole tree is needed to clean the air.

In other words, smoking one less cigar every day equals planting a tree. It

is a brilliant contribution to the earth we are living on.

In a word, all the above demonstrate that smoking harms yourselves as well

as your neighbors, pollutes the air we ourselves are breathing, and even

agitates the social peace. So, in my opinion, tobacco should be strictly

forbidden, and smoking should be made illegal.

范文3

there has long been controversy over the legality and apparent acceptance of tobacco in society .some hold that cigarettes and other tobacco containing products should be banned, that is, treated as narcotics.personally,i agree with this point of view for the following reasons:

although cigarettes do not offer as intense an effect as drugs like heroin and cocaine,they rank higher in the level of dependence it creates in the user.thousands of smokers try to rid themselves of cigarettes but cannot,because of the physiological dependence they developed,chiefly imputable to its chemical nicotine.this explains why smokers continue their habit despite the numerous health warnings. furthermore,medical science has now proved beyond a doubt that smoking kills.with all the other causes of preventable deaths such as alcohol,illegal drugs,aids,suicide,road accidents,fire,and guns,cigarettes still account for more preventable deaths than all of those combined.

more disturbingly,whilst the use of heroin is dangerous solely to the users,the use of tobacco endangers those who are in their vicinity as well. this phenomenon, known as passive smoking, nulls the counter-argument that putting one's own health at risk through smoking should be up to one's own individual choice.reports have shown that the amount of second-hand smoke inhaled by a typical nonsmoker is equivalent to one cigarette smoked per day,and what is more,passive smoking can increase a nonsmoker's chance of getting cancer by ten to thirty two per cent. there are those who will say that the black market created by outlawing tobacco will produce deadlier cigarettes because the product standards of the bootleggers are not as high.however,we should all bear in mind that legal cigarettes cause roughly four hundred thousand deaths a year.it is hard to imagine the limited distribution provided by the criminal underworld could compete with this tragic figure.

to sum up, the harm visited upon our society by tobacco usage is substantial.there will be no solution other than to control tobacco much in the same way that the government now controls drugs which could allow people to remain attentive to the seriousness of the effects of these substances,and hopefully to prohibit their usage.

范文4

Apparently, it would seem that tobacco is totally different substance from drugs, and it can be used freedom by public. In fact, however, our authority should make tobacco illegal as well as drugs, and using of tobacco should be controlled strictly.

Tobacco only can be used for research and medical purpose. As far as I am concerned, as a kind of dope, tobacco has been widely used to help patients alleviate their pain in surgery. At the same time, ordinary people should not be allowed to access it legally for two main reasons.

Among countless factors which influence my inclination, there is a most conspicuous one: it is harmful that smokers addict to tobacco. Many decades ago, scientists have already found that there is a definite link between smoking and bronchial troubles, cardiac disease and lung cancer. More seriously, it not only has negative influence for smokers, but others living or working in same surrounding, even the next generation of a smoking pregnant women may be harmed by so-called “second hand smoking”. Research shows that sometimes “second hand smoking” is more dangerous than smoking directly, because, at least smokers can get the protection from filter tips to some extent. Thus, compared to the hazard of drugs, tobacco can involve more other innocent people and harm their health unknowingly.

The second aspect relates to the problem that our natural resources and money are wasted senselessly during the course of planting, transporting and manufacturing tobacco. In light of a statistics, China consumes nearly 1,000 tons of wood fibers to produce cigarettes annually. Besides, the investment absorbed by tobacco manufacturers every year, is enough to solve all financial troubles that higher education have to face. Obviously, if tobacco is banned by our governments, it means that considerable money will be saved.

In summary, judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that tobacco should be forbidden as well as drugs except for a few special purposes, such as research and medicine.

补充

With the development of society, our life and working pressure are greater and greater. In this way, a lot of people have become smokers. Tobacco, as a kind of drugs, prevails in the society. Some people hold the opinion that tobacco should be given freedom be use, but others, in contrast, deem it should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs and that is also my point.

Medical science proves that smoking can cause the heart diseases, lung cancer, and the immune system diseases. These diseases are all mankind's healthy enemies. The statistics have showed that people who die of the lung cancer, over 90% are smokers. In these smokers, 85% are chain smoker. So, obviously, there is enormous danger to the human health in smoking.

In addition, smoking not only dangerous to smoker, but also do harm to people at smoker's side. The tobacco contains a large number of noxious substances, such as nicotine. Just as a famous physician says, smoking is equivalent to commit suicide chronically.

However, the cigarette can really relax our nervous nerve, within short time. People, especially, who have heavy working pressure, are prone to produce sense of relying on to cigarette. Moreover, as everyone knows, a lot of countries impose the heavy taxation to tobacco manufacturer and seller, thus, if the tobacco business is considered as the illegal activities, the revenues of the country will be reduced correspondingly.

In a word, the danger to people of cigarette is obvious. Though it can help us flee away from pressure, this to use health as cost. Our government should forbid the production of the tobacco, make our world fresh and nonpoisonous.

With the development of society, our life and working pressure are [getting] greater and greater.

In this way, a lot of people have become smokers. Tobacco, as a kind of drugs, prevails in the society. Some people hold the opinion that tobacco should be given freedom [to] be [used, but others, in contrast, deem [that] it should be made [as] illegal as the same way as other drugs and that is also my point.

Medical science proves that smoking can cause the heart diseases, lung cancer, and the immune system diseases. [all of these diseases are enemies of mankind's healthy] . The statistics have showed that people who die of the lung cancer, over 90%, are smokers. [Among] these smokers, 85% are chain smokers. So, obviously, there is enormous danger to the human health in smoking.

In addition, smoking not only dangerous to smokers, but also [does] harm to people at smoker's side. The tobacco contains a large number of noxious substances, such as nicotine. Just as a famous physician says, smoking is equivalent to commit suicide chronically.

However, the cigarette can really relax our nervous nerve, within short time. People, especially, who have heavy working pressure, are prone to produce sense of relying on to cigarette. Moreover, as everyone knows, a lot of countries impose the heavy taxation to tobacco manufacturer and seller, thus, if the tobacco business is considered as the illegal activities, the revenues of the country will be reduced correspondingly.

To sum up, the danger to people of cigarette is obvious. Though it can help us flee away from pressure, this to use health as cost. Our government should forbid the production of the tobacco, make our world fresh and nonpoisonous.

Although it is a freedom to use tobacco{烟草} while some people think it should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs. To what extent do you agree or disagree？ What’s your opinion?

A:

Tobacco should be made illegal, I agree with this idea personally. I hope most drugs can be made illegal, because, as far as I know, they are bad to our health. However, currently most countries still keep it free to use tobacco, and this situation seems to be very hard to change in a short time.

From my own experience, using tobacco is not a good thing, especially using is for a long time. It will lead to many kinds of diseases, more importantly, many of them are fatale. One of my friends died from using too much tobacco, and it is believed there are many more people like this. The other thing that I am concerned of is, if a country doesn’t make using tobacco illegal, many young people will have a chance to use it, i.e. students. It is very dangerous, because if someone gets addicted to this when he is very young, he will then almost surely have a big health problem when he is old.

I am happy to see that, although it is free to use tobacco in many countries, most of those countries still somehow try not to encourage people using it. For example, tobacco advertisement is banned in many countries, and for many countries, smoking is banned in public places. Overall, most countries are trying to stop the use of tobacco, though it will take sometime. In my opinion, it is essential to limit the use of tobacco, and I hope everyone doesn’t use. Version 00108

Some people said the government shouldn't put money on building theaters

and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and

education. Agree or not agree?

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Nowadays, the gap between the city and the countryside becomes more and more overt, which arouses colossal concerns. To understand the solution, let’s take a closer look at the causes of the gap at first.

The main reason of the gap is the unequal investment between city and rural area. China is a typical example. While more and more money is being invested to the coastal areas and big cities, such as Beijing and Shanghai, the lack of investment barriers greatly the society development of rural area and western regions

The low education level partly sharps the gap. There is no doubt that the prime force of productivity is education. However, because of poverty, thousands of people go to work without graduating from primary school. The poorer, the few children go to school. This bad cycle finally leads to the dream of rich becoming a dream that is hard to realize.

Moreover, the rural area is short of people with high quality. A survey proved that most of university students, whether they come from city or countryside, choose big cities instead of poor areas to work. The rural area can neither adept talent man nor attract talent man. No wonder the gap is increasing largely.

Hence, The government ought to knock itself out to decrease the gap as soon as possible. First, balance the investment between city and rural area. In addition, the education level should be improved, especially pay attention on raising high quality people. Besides, let more people realize the latent capacity of rural area in order to attract talent and investment. The set up of CCTV channel12-western region channel is a good example.

Only when the ways mentioned above are realized step by step, can the gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged.

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Nowadays, many people argue against the government putting money on

building theaters and sports stadiums. They have claimed that medical care

and education would benefit the citizens and the country much more.

However, I believe it is worth building more theaters and arenas.

First, stadiums and arenas provide ideal places for people to have physical

exercises and entertainment. After a whole week’s hardworking, people can

enjoy a wonderful football game in the weekend, and refresh themselves

with a good relaxation there. Moreover, the physical exercises are good for

people’s health, which will ease the pressure of medical care.

Second, theaters and museums can be used as base areas of culture and his

tory education. The British Museum, which is the largest one in the world,

provides visitors with knowledge about the world culture and the arts. The

visitors to the museum are all overwhelmed by the magnificence of the

cultural and historical displays featuring mankind’s achievements. In additio

n, the performances shown in the theaters will also greatly enrich the lives o

f citizens. People can enjoy ballet, symphony, and Peking Opera in a theater,

which contain the soul of Chinese and western cultures.

Third, running theaters and stadiums can earn much money.And this amount

of money can do great contribution in other fields, including medical care,

and education. After winning the Olympic 2008,Beijing made a plan to spend

160 billion RMB building an Olympic Village. This will surely attract many

sports fans to China, which would be much rewarded, not only in economy

but the whole society.

You can tell form my commentary above,since building theaters and stadiums

benefit not only individuals but also the state, it is very worthy of these

expenses.And the government should speed up the pace of the constructions.

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An argument often heard these days is that whether or not the government should put money on building theaters and stadiums. Some believe that instead of spending money on this area, Medical care and education, both of which are basic developing factors of one country should be spent more money on. After weighting the pros and cons, I disagree with this opinion.

Firstly, theaters and stadiums are best choice for people relaxing. Most of workers, especially white collar who often feel nervous after one day’s hard work, need to relax both mentally and physically. Compared with staying at home, it is much better way to stay in comfortable theater and listen to a wonderful concert.

In addition, going to theaters and stadiums affect the same effect as education and medical care. Having more chances to go to theaters can help them mold character. There is no better way to keep healthy than doing proper sports in the daily. In this way, the culture and health will be improved greatly, which plays the same role of education and medical care.

Moreover, theaters and stadiums are basis essential facilities to a developed city. Take holding an Olympic games as an example, it is no doubt it will take millions of money to build stadiums. Why the winner country is proud of that. Because this is a confirmation given by whole world.

Of course I don’t mean that the more theaters and stadiums, the better society will be, after all, nothing can take the important place of medical care and education.

In summary, the key point is to keep both of this two part developing. Only in this way, can all people live better in future.

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Some people said the government shouldn't put money on building theaters and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education. Agree or not agree?

Recently, a criticism often heard is that the government tends to put too much money on building theaters and sports stadiums. They maintain that medical care and education would benefit the citizens and the country much more. However, I advocate building more theaters and arenas. Numerous circumstances lead to the worth of building theaters and arenas, but here are two main reasons:

What strikes me most of all is that theaters and sports stadiums provide ideal places for people to build up a world of relaxation. After five days of hardworking, people can refresh themselves by taking physical exercises and enj

oining a football game there. Meanwhile, exercises is to health what water is to fish. The physical exercises can benefit people’s health, which will surely ease the pressure of medical care. Moreover, it provides people a good opportunity to enter into communion with each other, which will benefit people’s mental health.

Beyond this, it is also of paramount importance to use theaters and museums as the “social classroom” of culture and history education. The Sydney Opera House, which is the mother and father of all modern landmark buildings, has come to define not only a city, but also an entire nation and continent. The opera house shows the concept of modernism and the never properly finished inside provides visitors with a story of its creator Jorn Utzon. In addition, the performances which contain the soul of human civilization shown in the theaters will also greatly enrich the lives of people from all over the world.

Certainly, medical care and education both play dominant roles, but building theaters and sports stadiums will benefit not only the individual both mentally and physically, but a nation and continent permanently

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Some people said the government shouldn't put money on building theaters and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education. Agree or not agree?

Recently, a criticism often heard is that the government tends to put too much money on building theaters and sports stadiums. They maintain that medical care and education would benefit the citizens and the country much more. However, I advocate building more theaters and arenas. Numerous circumstances lead to the worth of building theaters and arenas, but here are two main reasons:

What strikes me most of all is that theaters and sports stadiums provide ideal places for people to build up a world of relaxation. After five days of hardworking, people can refresh themselves by taking physical exercises and enjoining a football game there. Meanwhile, exercises is to health what water is to fish. The physical exercises can benefit people’s health, which will surely ease the pressure of medical care. Moreover, it provides people a good opportunity to enter into communion with each other, which will benefit people’s mental health.

Beyond this, it is also of paramount importance to use theaters and museums as the “social classroom” of culture and history education. The Sydney Opera House, which is the mother and father of all modern landmark buildings, has come to define not only a city, but also an entire nation and continent. The opera house shows the concept of modernism and the never properly finished inside provides visitors with a story of its creator Jorn Utzon. In addition, the performances which contain the soul of human civilization shown in the theaters will also greatly enrich the lives of people from all over the world.

Certainly, medical care and education both play dominant roles, but building theaters and sports stadiums will benefit not only the individual both mentally and physically, but a nation and continent permanently

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Some people said the government shouldn't put money on building theatres and sports stadiums, they should spend more money on medical care and education. Agree or not agree?

Government, as the controller of the macroeconomy, usually put large amount of money on building theatres and sports stadiums to stimulate the consumption. Especially when globle economy is in recession, stimulation is one o

f the methods for government to catch the economy’s fall. However, to my opinion, government should spend more money on medical care and education.

For men, health and education are the basic elements for development. We often say health is the best wealth. Without health, even if you are a millionaire you will not enjoy your life. The society needs more medical care to ensure people to live happily and create more fortune. This is a physical base for development of society. The spiritual foundation should be obtained from education. Only with more knowledge, can we catch up with the improvement of economy, society and technology. We need healthy people and brilliant minds to change our world into a better one. Theatres and sports stadiums are signs for higher standard of living. Compared with the basic development factors, they are minor.

Insufficiency in medical care and education will impose great stress on poor people and produce unstable factors for society. If government invested too much on recreational places, it has to lessen the expenditure on medical care and education since the total amount of distributable money will not be changed. Such action will do little influence on riches, but affect poors greatly. They can’t take out money from their own pockets to see doctors nor pursue higher education. Dissatisfaction for government will arise gradually. Then, how long the government can exist with the society fluctuated?

To make all people live and work in peace and contentment and to be a long-last power, government should do more to secure people’s basic rights. Establishments for improving living standards are in second place.

v108 Some people said the government shouldn't put money on building theatres or

sports stadiums but should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you

agree or not agree?

Theatres and sports stadiums are facilities with the purpose of enriching people’

s spiritual life. However, some people claim that the government should spend mor

e money on medical care and education rather than on such recreational programs.

As a matter of fact, these people fail to realize the essence of this issue. I di

sagree with this statement for the following reasons.

First, with the development of society, the basic material needs for people has m

ainly satisfied, a more important task for the government is to improve people’s

spiritual life. Human beings differ from other animal species in that we live no

t only for prolonging our lives, but also for spiritual pursuit.

Second, entertainment projects contribute to the development of economy, as well

as collect money to solve people’s basic needs. An typical example can be found

in the fact that every country is eager to win the right of hold the Olympics mai

nly because of the economic benefits it brings. Another example is that many spor

ts and cultural activities have donated a considerable amount of fun for benefic

projects.

Last but not least, entertainment and cultural services also play an important ro le in education as well as improvement of people’s health. As the living standar d enhance, people tend to not only go to school for education, but also go to the atres to receive another form of education. Sport facilities such as stadiums pro vide opportunities for people to exercise their body.

According to the reasons I give above, it can be concluded that entertainment and cultural constructions are worth building. The statement that government shouldn ’t put money on them is invalid.

V108 投资剧院运动场---医疗和教育

The reason that government-who is in dispose of public money-is elected primari ly to improve the social welfare of its people. As long as people in a society la ck the basic need, such as medical care or education , the use of public funds to support theatres and sports stadiums is inappropriate-and, perhaps, even cruel- when one considers all the potential uses of such money.

According to the psychological pundit Maslo, human needs can be classified into f ive categories: survival, safety and love, others recognition, self-realization, and spiritual refinement. Among the five categories, the need for medical care an d education is on the lowest floor of the pyramid and is also crucial.

The basic function of theatres and sport stadiums is to give people large extent of pleasure in order to ensure them to work more effectively and efficiently to c ontribute more to the society. While them, classified into the category of spirit ual refinement, is at the pinnacle of the pyramid. If we to realize our spiritual refinement, we should first fulfill our basic need. Or our seemingly resplendent pyramid is on the verge of collapse due to its lack of a solid plinth.

The first and foremost step of its aim to fund medical care and education is t o satisfy basic need. In case that such the condition as described in the topic h

appened (though very rarely), the government will be overturned. See multitudes o f revolts of peasants in China’s history.

Even though people’s basic needs can be fulfilled, the society, especially the g overnment, should not use all its money to the theatres and sports stadiums, a pr oper proportion of the investment must be considered exactly.

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the computer are widely used in education and some people think teacher are not play important role in the classroom .

to what extend do you agree?(agree/disagree)

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Computers are widely used in education and some people think teachers are not playing an important role in classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The 21st century is the period of information, in which computers will play

an important role in every area of our lives. Recently, computer assisted education has become more and more popular in primary schools, high schools and colleges. The computer’s multimedia abilities make the classes lively and interesting. As a result, some people have said that teachers are no longer playing a significant role in classroom.I can hardly agree with the m.

First, it is the teacher who creates the software used in class. For example, the software may be an outline of the teacher’s lecture.If you listen to som e lectures, you will find that the lectures contain far more information than the multimedia software includes. While showing the class, most teachers will expand the knowledge extent, especially adding some latest discoveries and breakthroughs. So, the computer is just an assistant, which makes the class more vivid and clear. Teachers and students are the main part of a class. Second, computers cannot organize activities in class in place of teachers. For example, we often do some group work during classes, and it is the teachers who set the groups and control the time. After checking our

homework, teachers will understand what the real weakness of students is, and adjust their classes to improve their teaching, while computers cannot. Moreover,the interaction between students and teachers is very useful.During the asking and answering of questions, students pose problems and find answers more clearly. But computers, now, have not that intelligence. All in all, although computer technology is developing very quickly and computers can solve more and more problems without people, teachers still play an important role in class. And I insist that, no matter how the

technology develops, teachers will be in the front of the classroom forever ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 范文2

The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers d o not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In this period of communication,computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outl ine three reasons.

The main reason is that people’s brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer’s programs. Secondly, computer doesn’t hav e logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer’s programs to judge a question’s right or wrong. In other words, computer can’t defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question’s right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong

information.

Another reason is that computer’s programs designed software of education

that could be amended difficultly.If software of education of bugs were foun

d, commonly these of problems couldn’t be solved in the classroom. The so

ftware was amended that means total of program were corrected, not only

parts of program were inserted or amended usually.

Last but not the least reason is computer is mechanical,it couldn’t be suited

all kinds of students and different demands. As students’ intellect is differe

nt, same of software couldn’t base on every status of student to set a perf

ect project.

In conclusion, computers couldn’t instead of the position of teachers in the

classroom, however computer is an absolutely good helper for teacher

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In this IT age, computers are widely used in the classroom in order to enrich the methods of teaching. This phenomenon gives some the illusion that the thing teaching students is no longer the teacher but a computer. Personally, I disagree with this opinion.

As another machines, computer doesn’t enable to control itself. Though computers are capable of learning from their mistakes and improving on their performance, they need details instructions from human being in order to be able to operate. They can never, as it were lead independent lives, no mention teaching students. In case a computer lacks the control of a teacher, there is no difference between a computer and waste.

Not only this, but computers, unlike a teacher, can’t solve a variety of new problems. Everything is developing in today’s society, including education. For example, a student suddenly asks a creative question that the computer isn’t programmed for, it can do nothing, while teacher can explain clearly though abundant teaching experience. Last but not least, the computer can’t communicate with students from emotion. Such as an eyesight or gesture of teacher can transfer his or her idea and feeling to students. In this way, students can feel more human touch in the class. In comparison, the computer is too dry and dusty to understand.

All in all, no matter how nice a computer is, it can’t take the place of teacher. Of course, I don’t mean that computer is useless. In contrary, I believe it will become the most powerful assistants to teacher in further.

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Computer, the most exciting and significant invention in 20 century, will reshape our lives and our world. As a result, some people proclaim that computers should be involved into our classroom, and replace the roles of human teachers. However, I cannot agree with their point of view.

Admittedly, as the useful tools, computers can become the optimum assistants for human teachers in the classroom. To beginning, vivid pictures shown on screen can motivate students’ interest and curiosity dramatically. Moreover, the combination of computers and Internet can provide children the abundant information. Although computers enjoy considerable merits, they cannot compare with human teachers for two main reasons.

Among countless factors which influence my inclination, there is a most conspicuous one: computers are not as qualified as human teachers in academic fields. As we all know, students can get the final result of a mathematic question under the help of computers, however, they are still confused on the whole computing process. By contrast, our human teachers’ performance is much better in those cases. They not only can teach students how to analyze and compute the question, but also can remind them what are the possible errors that they may meet. Thus, human teachers are more adequate than computers in academic aspect.

The second advantage of human teachers is they can guide students to deal with some psychological problems that they meet in schools. In China, sometimes, teachers even burden many responsibilities that students’ parents have. For example, as for the student with rebellious spirit, the important duty for teachers is to prevent the student from campus violence, even crime. Obviously, computers cannot do that.

In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that the positions of human teachers are unshakable, and computers cannot take the places of them.

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with the development of new techonology and science,computer are widely used in education.therefore,some people think we dont need teachers anymore.i totally disagree with the above point.

there is no denying that the computer bring great benefit to people and are of great help to students.computer can be programmed to simple digits of question,as the students answer these digits,their theoritical knowledge can be reinforced.

however,in practice and learning of complex questions,computer can never replace the humain brain or surpass the human intelligence.computer only can tell your the final correct answer.but it cant provide students opportunity to think over it,which limited their creativity.teaching itself is an art rather than a machnican activity.therefore,teachers function can not be neglected.

firstlly.computer only can do work according to the procedure fomulated previously.they can not answer all question in defferent way.teachers,however,can teach students according their attitute.some students who have better ability to accept knowledge,under teachers'guidance,can be save time to gain other knowledge.

secondly,facing the vivid dilivery from teachers,students can be improved their motivation and concentration.the effective communication operated by teachers not only can help students understand the knowledge,teachers also can teach students how to be a valuable people,which cant be done by computer.

in addition,various teaching methods can help student absorb the knowledge rapidly.when students meet with the thorny question,teachers not only can explain it in different way,they also can show them the important deductive process.

therefore,i would say teacher is the good compesation for flexiabilly lacting in the computer.i totally disagree with view that we dont need teachers anymore!

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“Get up, boy, it is time to go to school.”

“I dislike having get up early. I can take an on-line lesson at anytime I like.”

It is a completely ordinary dialogue occurring in modern life. Yes, it is the com

puter, whose ever-accelerated updating brings about tremendous changes in our sch

ool lives. A typical application is Computer Assisted Instruction (CAI), which ai

ds teacher to impart knowledge to student more efficiently by it’s multimedia ch

aracters. However, a vigorous debate over the issue whether or not teacher are by

no means important in pedagogy field has intrigued the public. In my submission,

the computer can be great help of teacher but they can never replace or surpass

the position of teacher. I will offer the following reasons.

Firstly, CAI are designed and programmed by human instructor. They only condense

parts of teacher’s experience and intelligence. Moreover, being a successful ins

tructor requires not just these factors but a wealth of experience and interpret

new experiences using that information. The computer after all are man-made machi

ne.

Secondly, the progress of instruction is complicated and complex, and the educati

onal achievement of CAI is limited. Some sorts of course, such as basic education

al course( 想想什么课程用电脑教不好), are not necessarily to be expressed by the

computer to reach productive effect.

Finally, communications and interactions with teacher and computer are quite diff

erent. The latter is too impersonal, which ruins the pleasure of emotional exchan

ges. Sometimes gazing at the cold flickering screen is a disinteresting and tirin

g experience.

Admittedly, though computer may help teacher to provide student with a richer and

more effective learning environment, yet they can not substitute the position of

teacher, not only today, but the future.

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Computer, as the most powerful tool in 21 century, is widely used in education areas. Whether computers can instead of teachers become a controversial issue. From my point, I don’t think computers can take the place of teachers.

First and foremost, computer cannot communicate with students. Every human being has feeling. Teachers are not only teaching students knowledge but also showing their loves to students when they are teaching. How to have a conversation with others and how to take care of others can be learned from teachers. For example, teacher can take you to the hospital when you are sick. In comparison, computers cannot likely to it.

Secondly, computers cannot help students when the get confused. Asking teachers is the best way to do when students get any quires. However, computers do not have this function. Study is a two-way process, teachers can excite students’ imaginations and fire their creations.

Last but not least, computers cannot organize teaching activities instead of teachers. Take England as an example, students need to do a lot of practical experiments, especially in physics and chemistry. When they do these experiments, students usually work together as a group and discuss with teachers. Team work is a very important part to shape students’ personalities.

From what has been discussed above, we might safely say that computers can never take the place of teachers. We should always remember that human beings are the host of technology and computer is a machine no matter how clever it is!

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V109 Computers “V” Teachers

The computer is widely used in education and some people think teachers are not playing an important role in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

With more and more extensive use of computers in education, some people claim that the importance attached to teachers has been jeopardized. Therefore, computers will replace teachers in the classroom. However, it seems quite clear to me that learning from teachers is the most important way that cannot be substituted for students.

Naturally, some people maintain that computer should instead of the old way of education. They hold that the strong function of the computer offers a new mode of education, which is more interesting, more vivid and more acceptable by children. The students will not face to the serious teachers and calm classes any more, which are replaced by a brand-new world offered by the Internet. In addition, this can decrease the investment on the foundational education and save the human resources and material resources.

As an assistant, computers do help teachers with their work, but they can never replace the important role of a real teacher. The main functions of any computer are storage and calculation. It cannot think on its own anyway. All the teaching data stored in computers are the essence of teaching experience generalized by many teachers during their work. Hence, to assist education, what a computer can do is just to repeat the contents summarized by real teachers.

In addition, each student has different talents and different defects, and accordingly, they may come across various problems during their study. Computer programmer designing the software, however, cannot predict these problems. Therefore, a single computer can never solve these problems without a teacher’s guidance

Furthermore, if the significance of teacher has been weakened, the number of teachers may be decreased, that is to say, many teachers may be laid-off. If such a case comes to reality, series of social problems will break out, such as the drop of working opportunity which will surely make the burden of whole society become heavier and heavier.

In conclusion, although computer-aided-education has spread widely, teachers still play s crucial part in the classroom, which cannot and will not be replaced by computer.

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as the most important invention in the 21 century,computers have windspread in the world,and the use of it has become the necessity of various spheres both in our work and in our daily life. although computers are also greatly utilized in the education field,teachers are still playing a crucial part on the platform. personally,i believe that teachers should not be replaced by computers due to the following reasons.

being the architect of humanbeings' moral, teachers shoulder the responsibilities of passing knowledge to students as well as shaping them to be real men with good qualities. students may learn some certain knowledge from computers which are cold and senseless, but good qualities can only be taught by teachers.

at the same time,computers might not give detailed and understandable elaboration of complicated theories. after judging whether the answers are right or wrong computers fail to tell them why they make such mistakes. the problems can only be dealt with by teachers.

in addition,some elementary academic exchanges,such as discussion and association,cannot be organised by computers.nevertheless, teachers make up the deficiendy.by this means,students' learning enthusiasm is greatly activated.

above all,computers bring about many significant revolutions in the education field,but teachers are still the hosts of the classroom.we should always bear in mind that men are the owner of technology and no matter how intelligent the computers are,they are merely man-made machines.

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Along with the mass use of computer technology in education circles, we are delighted to witness the uncountable conveniences be brought by computer. Some people even argue that teacher will not be important in classroom any more. Is this reasonable? Personal speaking, I oppose holding such a ridiculous conclusion.

In the first place, the feature of teaching defines teachers as an essential part in education. It is well known that teaching is a process of mutual-communication: firstly, teachers impart/initiate knowledge or ideas to students, then students should promptly transfer their feedback to teachers, moreover, teachers will give students the final interpretation according to their specific requirement. Besides, teachers also can (teach students in accordance of their aptitude). In contrast, what computers can do is merely to display materials which have already stored in their EMS memory or mechanically execute operator’s commands. We actually can not image what our education will being if computers substitute teachers totally.

As to another reason, it seems that teacher’s role as a supervisor is more and more overt. Computer is indeed a controversy, it not only can be an efficient education assistant, but also can become an addiction which includes too much violent and (pornographic propaganda). Youngsters do not mature fully in psychology, therefore, without teachers' supervision, many children would spend hours playing computer games or surfing unhealthy websites, which a

re regarded as a waste of valuable time and intelligence, instead of trying to have a good command of knowledge and skills.

We never deny that computers are absolutely an available education implements, furthermore, the combination of teacher and computer technology will greatly improve our education quality. However, from all of the grounds of argument mentioned above, we can safely draw a conclusion that teacher will not be replaced by computer in the classroom.

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v109 The computer are widely used in education，and some people think teacher ar

e not play important role in the classroom .

To what extend do you agree?

Computers nowadays are more and more widely used in education. Hence, some people

claim that teachers are no longer playing important roles in the classroom. I co

mpletely agree with this statement. Although teacher may be more emotional than c

omputers, the later actually far outdoes in educating students, for the following

three reasons.

First, it is an undoubted fact that computer are more likely to provide sufficien

t information to students. Neither a well trained graduate from education institu

te nor an experienced teacher can offer more knowledge than an advanced computer.

Human brain is more suitable for creative activities, but not in conveying infor

mation. As a result of the rapid development in technology, the computer’s capac

ity of containing information will become much stronger.

Second, computers are more efficient in educating students than teachers, not onl

y because they will merely make mistakes, but also due to that the will not feel

worn out after a long time of work. It goes without saying that teachers are some

times complained to transfer mistaken messages to students. And the latter, lack

of enough related knowledge, finally become the victims of such mistakes. Further

more, as they were so tired after a whole day working, teachers are often slow in

reaction while asked questions by students. Computers, which can never effected

by emotional factors, have no such disadvantages.

Last but not least, children are becoming more and more familiar with computers w

hile they are being taught by this new technology. It’s widely accepted that com

puter has become an essential tool for our daily life. Children could learn how t

o master it better by the process of being educated by it rather than taking an i

ntentional class presented by a teacher. Classroom, as everybody believes, is a p

lace where students learn knowledge and skills, both academic and practical. So i

t should be the duty for school to prepare students for the computer-oriented soc

iety.

All in all, although teachers still contribute to education, we can’t turn a bli

nd eye to the fact that they are not important any more compared to another kind

of tutors-computers

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开头：

Along with the mass use of computer technology in education circles, we are delighted to witness the uncountable conveniences be brought by computer. Some people even argue that teacher will not be important in classroom any more. Is this reasonable? Personal speaking, I oppose holding such a ridiculous conclusion.

正文：

In the first place, the feature of teaching defines teachers as an essential part in education. It is well known that teaching is a process of mutual-communication: firstly, teachers impart/initiate knowledge or ideas to students, then students should promptly transfer their feedback to teachers, moreover, teachers will give students the final interpretation according to their specific requirement. Besides, teachers also can (teach students in accordance of their aptitude). In contrast, what computers can do is merely to display materials which have already stored in their EMS memory or mechanically execute operator’s commands. We actually can not image what our education will being if computers substitute teachers totally.

As to another reason, it seems that teacher’s role as a supervisor is more and more overt. Computer is indeed a controversy, it not only can be an efficient education assistant, but also can become an addiction which includes too much violent and (pornographic propaganda). Youngsters do not mature fully in psychology, therefore, without teachers' supervision, many children would spend hours playing computer games or surfing unhealthy websites, which are regarded as a waste of valuable time and intelligence, instead of trying to have a good command of knowledge and skills.

结尾：

We never deny that computers are absolutely an available education implements, furthermore, the combination of teacher and computer technology will greatly improve our education quality. However, from all of the grounds of argument mentioned above, we can safely draw a conclusion that teacher will not be replaced by computer in the classroom.

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Is it nature or nurture that plays a major role in the development of personality? What's your opinion?

范文1

IN certain respects, children are the same all over the world. But many

factors affect the development of children, both parental support and

education being major influences. There are vast differences between

schooling styles, and parental attitudes towards children, in China and the

West.

Some of these differences have obvious causes, for example, the "Little

Emperor" syndrome in China. Parents everywhere have dreams for their

offspring. However, the concentration of energy invested into planning for a

child's future is noticeable in China, as it is not diluted by the presence of siblings.

This adoration can be seen in other ways. One of the most common is

spoiling children, giving them everything they want. Some of the time this is a reward for good work, although there are children who receive all they wa nt merely because they demand it from their parents.

Hard work?

Parents also have this tendency to spoil children in the West. If a child does start to see itself as the all-deserving star of the Universe,usually its siblings will tease and bully the child until it stops feeling self-important.

Another contrast between the upbringing of children in China and the West is in schooling. Without a doubt, Chinese children work harder than their

European and American counterparts. Their industriousness is admirable, and in comparison, Western students are lazy. In European countries, teenagers will often have a Saturday job, or holiday job, to supplement their allowance. This is rare in China,where education is considered of paramount importance, and time working detracts from study.The same contrast is true of romantic relationships between teenagers. I spoke to Han Li, a 16-year old student in Huhhot, about boyfriends. She said: "I have no time for a boyfriend, even if I did want one. I must study hard, there is a lot of pressure on me to get good grades and go to university."

The style of teaching is very different in China from in the West. The notion of "repeating after a teacher'' seems old-fashioned and redundant in America and Europe. Large class sizes may be the reason for the popularity of this teaching method. In England, any class over 30 is considered large enough to impair learning. However, I have noticed that this parrot-style of learning is being replaced with more progressive methods of education in many Chinese schools.

The perfect solution would be to combine Western and Chinese education methods. Combat the laziness and apathy of Western students; encourage initiative within Chinese students, by expecting independent thought as opposed to mindless repetition. As for spoilt kids anywhere, some of these children would benefit from a smack on the bum.

Genevieve Roberts graduated from Leeds University, England. She has spent the last eight months teaching in China. Anyone with unusual cultural or social experiences who wants to share them with us here at 21st Century can send a copy to elt@.

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There has been an argument on personality and individual’s development fo r a long time. The key point of the dispute is which factor plays a more important role, genes or training after birth? In my opinion, the latter is the crucial complication, though genes are significant.

Although genes have great effects on one’s personality, environment plays a more important role in his further development. Let’s take an experiment for instance. There was a research on a couple of identical twins who were born in a big city, but they were separated after birth. One was taken to a poor suburban area, while the other remained in the city. Fifteen years later, surely, the one in city grew tall, strong, extroverted and well educated. By contrast, the other was short, thin, introverted and nearly illiterate. This well demonstrates the importance of nurturing.

In addition, education, especially early education, is another key factor.When children are very young, they try to imitate their parents’ behaviors, and run into some manners. After going to school, different education systems an d even different courses students taking will make influence on their

personalities and ideas. Students of science and technology subjects are good at logical thinking, while students of arts usually think in terms of imagine. As you can tell from my comments above, no one can choose his nature,but one can be greatly successful after striving for himself or being well educated. And no one can be successful relying on his genes without good environmen t. So, in my opinion, environmental influence and education will ultimately decide one’s personality and development.

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Nowhere in the world has the issue of children’s education been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, many parents let their children attend all kinds of courses that will help children to get a better future; therefore, some people think that the postnatal nurture is more important than the congenital factors for personal growth and progress. The above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that success of a child would not be separated from right teaching and personal effort. Currently, lots of famous scientists and politicians gain huge success in the world, as they are long-term to hard work. Moreover, the main reason why plenty of developing countries drop behind is their poor education.

Another reason is that if people do not work hard but only depend on their high intellect, they will be far from successful. For instance, the little Bronte was quite clever during his childhood; he was particularly adept at writing. But he was so satisfied with his superior intellect that he did not study carefully. Finally, he became an idle person. However, his sisters became famous authors as a result of their hard study. They are Charlotte Bronte and Emily Bronte. Charlotte wrote “Jane Eyre “, “Wuthering Heights” was written by Emily.

Last but not the least reason is the advantages of natural factors that are

more and more similar.Plenty of advanced technological products are invente

d and widely used.They can supply people’s gaps.In the past, the difference

of mathematical ability was remarkable. With the invention of the calculator,

people can hardly find out the difference.

In conclusion, scientific and proper teaching is the most significant factor for

personal growth and development. If people are satisfied with their

advantages, they will become the biggest failures.

范文4

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Nowadays, most of children are the center of a family, so the issue about which plays major role in personality, nature or nurture, is paid increasing attention by parents. As to me, I am fond of that molding one's character depends on nurture rather than nature.

People's character will affect greatly by the people around them especially their parents. The survey proves the possibility of commit of person who deleted born in a family which have a crime is one to four times higher than the normal family's person's. To image, when a child shape character, always have a bad example around him or her, no wonder the crime possibility is much higher. So just as the saying goes:" he who keeps company with the wolf will learn to howl."

Moreover, the growing environment influences child's personality unconsciously. There is a famous story in China: Aiming to find a willing studying condition, a mother moves for three times. They at last move nearby school. From then on, the boy who used to be naughty corrects his bad habits and changes into a hardworking student. After he grows up, this boy becomes one of the greatest philosophers in Chinese history---Mencius.

This story really shows how important role that the environment play in children's personality.

Of course, we couldn't neglect the effect of nature, such as parents' gene. The child is a chip off the old block. Some characters proved by medical research have already existed before human were born.

All in all, as for one person's, both nature and nurture influence the development of quality. Personally, I believe the nurture can partly make up the shortage of nature.

范文5

Difference between children's education

By 21ST

Published on 2003-01-30

Posted on 2003-02-04

IN certain respects, children are the same all over the world. But many factors affect the development of children, both parental support and education being major influences. There are vast differences between schooling styles, and parental attitudes towards children, in China and the West.

Some of these differences have obvious causes, for example, the "Little Emperor" syndrome in China. Parents everywhere have dreams for their offspring. However, the concentration of energy invested into planning for a child's future is noticeable in China, as it is not diluted by the presence of siblings.

This adoration can be seen in other ways. One of the most common is spoiling children, giving them everything they want. Some of the time this is a reward for good work, although there are children who receive all they want merely because they demand it from their parents.

Hard work?

Parents also have this tendency to spoil children in the West. If a child does start to see itself as the all-deserving star of the Universe, usually its siblings will tease and bully the child until it stops feeling self-important.

Another contrast between the upbringing of children in China and the West is in schooling. Without a doubt, Chinese children work harder than their European and American counterparts. Their industriousness is admirable, and in comparison, Western students are lazy. In European countries, teenagers will often have a Saturday job, or holiday job, to supplement their allowance. This is rare in China, where education is considered of paramount importance, and time working detracts from study. The same contrast is true of romantic relationships between teenagers. I spoke to Han Li, a 16-year old student in Huhhot, about boyfriends. She said: "I have no time for a boyfriend, even if I did want one. I must study hard, there is a lot of pressure on me to get good grades and

go to university."

The style of teaching is very different in China from in the West. The notion of "repeating after a teacher'' seems old-fashioned and redundant in America and Europe. Large class sizes may be the reason for the popularity of this teaching method. In England, any class over 30 is considered large enough to impair learning. However, I have noticed that this parrot-style of learning is being replaced with more progressive methods of education in many Chinese schools.

The perfect solution would be to combine Western and Chinese education methods. Combat the laziness and apathy of Western students; encourage initiative within Chinese students, by expecting independent thought as opposed to mindless repetition. As for spoilt kids anywhere, some of these children would benefit from a smack on the bum.

Genevieve Roberts graduated from Leeds University, England. She has spent the last eight months teaching in China. Anyone with unusual cultural or social experiences who wants to share them with us here at 21st Century can send a copy to elt@.

By Genevieve Roberts, SPECIAL TO 21ST CENTURY

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Introduction ( 38words)

Human's endeavor in researching on factors affecting one's personality and development has offered quite a amount of proofs. My position may provide you with a clear notion that nurture plays a far more important role in one's development.

Body 1 (95words)

Reportedly there was a maid, a countryside girl with only an educational background of primary school, working for an American professor who worked in Shanghai Jiaotong University, China. After two years of stay at the learned and exotic surroundings, amazingly this plain girl could speak fluent English and started to help the host to receive and send e-mails to his students. When the professor left for New York later, soon she sought a post at a multinational firm. This example clearly reveals a common truth: appropriate nurture can turn an average person to be competent. (topic sentence)

Body 2 (89words)

I will then go on to examine my position by offering other facts. It is well believed that overseas graduates who on

ce furthered their education in foreign universities are taking incredible places in China because these elites have a broader way of thinking and their bilingual and creative capabilities have proved themselves much better than domestic ones. In contrast, some people show their linguistic talent by precisely speaking a variety of dialects but still lead a poor life because no foreign language learning process has been conducted for them.

Conclusion ( 42words)

To sum up, the competence of a former maid and the qualities of overseas Chinese students already illustrate an undeniable fact: a right way of nurture can mould one to be outstanding whilst extraordinary nature without nurture is a waste of resource.

范文7

Which element between nature and nurture plays the major role in children’s personality and development is always a controversial problem. Of course, which you prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. Here, I would like to illustrate my point of view about it.

Admittedly, different nature determines people have distinguished starting points in their lifetime. To beginning, in light of medical research, a person’s blood type has considerable influence to his character. General speaking, for example, a person whose blood type is A means that his personality is amiable and tender probably. Besides, the physical condition, even appearance may influence a person’s development. Statistics shows that beautiful people are more confident than others, because they do not need to worry about the prejudice from public. Obviously, some parts of our personality have been decided when we born.

On the other hand, although nature is important during the course of shaping personality, we cannot ignore another essential element, nurture. There are many factors which affect the development of children, both parental support and education being vital influence. It is reported that the kid whose parents are divorced is more likely has psychological troubles than those with a harmonious family. By contrast, as we all know, good education will positively cultivate a person’s personality and improve his self-restraint in a big way.

In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that partly because of different nature, partly because of different nurture, people have their unique personality.

准备资料 句型等

雅思写作必背200句

句子就是财富,句子就是一切,这些句子是从近百篇雅思优秀作文中摘录下来并经反复推敲提炼而成的.对于复习时间短,基础较薄弱的朋友能够在短期内熟悉且背诵这些经典句子无疑是准备雅思考试的捷径。

according to a recent survey ,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查,每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病.

the latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感.

no invention has received more praise and abuse than internet.

没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评.

people seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实.

many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康.

nowadays ,many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. unfortunately ,for most young people ,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

当前,一提到即将开始的学校生活,许多学生都会兴高采烈.然而,对多数年轻人来说,校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历.

in view of the seriousness of this problem ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考虑到问题的严重*,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施.

proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量,努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响.

an increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city .however ,this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents ,who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用.然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,象犯罪和卖淫.

many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus ,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少,以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车,而车上可能已满载乘客.

there is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem :the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

an investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休.

a proper part-time job does not occupy student’s too much time .in fact ,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study .as an old saying goes :all work and no play makes jack a dull boy

一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间,事实上,把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康,正如那句老话:只工作,不玩耍,聪明的孩子会变傻.

any government which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价.

an increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束.

when it comes to education ,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习.

the majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的.

it is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.

无可争辩,现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冬的痛苦生活.

although this view is widely held ,there is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

尽管这一观点被广泛接受,很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点任何年龄进行.

no one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.

没有人能否人这一事实:教育是人生最重要的一方面.

people equate success in life with the ability of operating computer .

人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论.

雅思阅读方法与技巧

这篇文章将帮助你训练雅思考试中所有涉及阅读的方法和技巧。这些方法和技巧如下所示：

1． 预测

在你仔细阅读一篇文章之前，可以猜想一下你会在文章中读到那些内容。比如一些和文章题目相关的专业知识可以帮助你预测文章中可能包含的内容。看完题目，你可以想一下关于这个题目

你知道多少，不知道多少。或者你可以设想一些看完文章后你能够回答的问题。这些准备可以帮助你更快、更准确的确定文章的主旨。

下面所讲的浏览和扫描可以帮助你预测。

2． 浏览

浏览就是将文章快速的读一遍然后找到文章的主旨。文章的下列部分应该值得注意：

（a） 标题

（b） 副标题

（c） 有关作者的细节

（d） 摘要

（e） 介绍性的段落

（f） 每一段的第一、二句话和最后一句话

（g） 结论段落

一篇文章不一定含有所有这些部分——可能没有摘要，或者没有副标题——但是通常至少应该有（a），（e），（f）和（g）。关注这些部分可以使你了解文章的主旨，换句话说，对文章有一个总体而非细节的了解。

这种阅读方法也称为纵览，它可以被描述为快速的看一本书，一个章节，或一篇文章等，来决定它是否符合你的要求。看一篇文章是否合适，尤其是一本书时，除了上面介绍过的，你还需要注意以下的部分：

（a） 出版物的版本和日期

（b） 内容中的图表

（c） 前言

（d） 序论

（e） 目录

3． 扫描

当你扫描一篇文章的时候，也是很快的看，但它和浏览不同，扫描是为了寻找某些特定的词句而不是文章的整体；关注的是细节而非主旨。当你阅读一篇文章时，你可能仅仅想找一个百分数或者某个特定历史时间的发生时间，而不是这篇文章的主旨。扫描可以帮你更有效的找到这些信息。

4． 详细的阅读

第二遍和第三遍阅读文章的时候，应该注意次要的主旨和那些支持、解释和发展主

旨的细节部分。这也可以说是更加全面的阅读，一个更慢更认真的阅读过程。这一阶段你可以试着猜一下不熟悉的单词的意思。

5． 猜测不认识的单词

通常你不太可能认识一篇文章中所有的单词，尤其是在读第一遍的时候。你可以利用上下文和自己所拥有的专业知识来猜测这些单词的意思。在你第一遍阅读文章的时候，最好不要停下来查字典。这会打断你的阅读进程和理解。通常随着阅读的进行，你会理解这些原本不认识的单词和短语。字典将在后面的阶段使用。

在利用上下文猜测单词意思的时候，要先参考离该单词最近的内容，再逐渐扩大到更大的范围。最近的内容就是该单词所在的句子，或者是这个句子的前后两个句子。更大的范围包括该段落的其他句子甚至该文章的其他段落。这些内容都可以为你猜测单词提供重要的信息。

6． 把握中心意思

你应该练习识别包含在文章中的中心意思。在扫描的过程中你可能已经确认了一些中心意思。在读第二和第三遍的时候，你可以更加全面的理解它们。文章的每个段落都包含一个中心意思，它们往往都涉及到段落的主题。

阅读材料所提供的练习会帮助你确定和理解文章的中心意思。判断一篇文章的重要性和是否满足你的需要，理解中心意思是非常重要的，同时你也可以理解文章的结构。

7． 推断

有时作者在文章里的表达并不是直接的。换句话说，作者会暗示一些东西并把它留给读者去推断和理解。当作者这样做时，它需要读者有一定的知识面——比如专业或文化方面的知识。推断作者的意图在理解一篇文章的过程中有时是很重要的。

8． 理解文章的结构

文章的结构有很多种，把握这些结构可以帮助你更好的理解文章。比如作者希望着重指出一种情况，讨论一个问题或者计划一个解决方案，往往都会使用特殊的文章结构。或者作者想要比较两种观点，那么就会从两种适用的文章结构种来选择一种。

与文章结构有关的另一个特征是作者对时间的运用。如果描写一系列的事件或者一个过程，作者往往会使用时间顺序，事件会在它们发生的时间被叙述。也有一些作者会用其他的方法来叙述这样的一系列事件，比如用过去和现在对比的方法。

9． 确定作者的意图

一旦你理解了文章的结构，你会更清楚的理解作者的意图。文章的结构会受到作者意图的影响。作者的意图可能是告知或者劝说，他会根据他的意图来为文章选择一种结构或风格。作者也可能在一篇文章中体现两种意图——告知和劝说，在这种情况下最好确定那种意图是作者的主要意图。

10．评价作者的态度

作者在文章中所表现的态度并不一定是中立的或者客观的，尤其是在他们试图说服读者同意他们的意见时。理解作者的态度和文章的主旨或者提供的信息之间的关系就显得尤为重要。这是因为，作者的态度会影响文章中信息的表达方式。你应该着眼于确定作者态度的方法，以及评价作者态度是保持中立还是带有偏见。

雅思作文（TASK 2）主要有哪几种体裁？

TASK 2的体裁属于议论文（ARGUMENTATIVE WRTING），通常分为discussion和 argumentation两大类。Discussion要求考生分析某个方面的问题/现象，找出成因并提出相应解决办法，往往以特殊问句形式出题（WH-，HOW）。Argumentation要求考生就某一话题/观点发表自己的见解，阐述自己的观点，力图说服读者；对某观点进行评价，驳斥对方观点等，往往以一般疑问句形式出题。下面所列雅思作文考题分别属于上述两大类：

1. Computers can translate all kinds of languages; therefore there is no need for our children to learn foreign languages. Do you agree with this statement? (argumentation)

2. Traditional culture can civilise a nation, so people think that the government should subsidize artists, musicians and drama companies. Do you agree or not? (argumentation)

3. Should marijuana be legalized? (argumentation)

4. Many young women are involved in crimes nowadays. Why? What measures should we take to solve this problem? (discussion)

5. People nowadays suffer from heavy stress. What are the causes and how to reduce pressure? (discussion)

Many cultures and languages have been disappearing these years. What factors contribute to this phenomenon? How to avoid it? (discussion)