大学英语六级考试作文预测（2015.6）

恩波教育

预测作文一

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Expenditure on Fast Food. You should write at least

The bar chart expenditure on fast foods of different income groups. income group spend the most In comparison respectively.

The group prefers hamburgers and spends 43 pence per rank first of the average income group at 34 pence. more on and chips – 25 pence per person per week. They only spend a little more than 10 pence on pizza.

Fish and chips replace hamburgers and become the most popular choice in the low income group – people spend an average 18 pence per week on them. Money spent on hamburgers is only 14 pence per person per week, which is almost one third of that of the high income group whereas money spent on pizza is a mere 7 pence.

点评：

第一段点明图表的内容，描述最明显的特征，即高收入人群在快餐上消费量最大，中等收入和低收入人群相对低。

第二、三段中加入更多细节上的描述，列举了汉堡，炸鱼薯条和披萨三项分别占三类收入群体的消费比重。以特征项串联全文。例文先找出汉堡在高收入和中等收入群体中都是最受欢迎的，相较于高收入群体，炸鱼在中等收入群体中所占比重更大，而在低收入群体中消费量最大，低收入人群的汉堡消费量又是高收入人群的三分之一。

第一段中different income group意为“不同收入群体”，in comparison意为“相比较而言”，respectively意为“分别”；第二段中rank first意为“排第一”，fish and chips意为“炸鱼和薯条”，per person per week意为“每人每周”；第三段中whereas意为“然而”，mere意为“仅仅”。

预测作文二

Directions: Several cities in China have introduced a system to guarantee fair enrollment for middle schools. new system, a student’s household which school he a short essay on words but no more than .

A Balanced Education

It can be inferred from the picture above that the enrollment policy of compulsory education in China – an automatic selection according to one’s registered residence – was designed to ensure that every

child,

regardless their family background and social status, can enjoy equal chance.

Admittedly, with such a policy, students no longer have to take examination and schools can no longer pick the students they deem most potential. Students will be judged only by their registered address, not their intelligence. Nevertheless, in my opinion, these measures are only palliatives. The reason why parents and children have been competing for all these years is that the educational resources are unevenly distributed in China. Some of the schools recruit better teachers and possess better equipments while others don’t. One of the obvious real estate that guarantees enrollment to a more promisingIt is no denying that this policy would work of time. But to sustain the balance in education, the probably put more money in cultivating outstanding

点评：

第一段介绍了新的招生办法和作用；第第一段中enrollment policy意为“招生政策”，意为“义务教育”，automatic意为“目的是”；第二段中palliative意为“缓和剂”，unevenly distribute意为“分配”,promising意为“有前途的”；第三段中It is no 意为“不可否认的是”，sustain the balance意为“保持平衡”。

part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Time Spent on Housework. You should write at

Time Spent on Housework

The bar chart demonstrates the men and women of different employment groups spend in 1995, 2005, and 2015. Overall, regardless of the whereas that of men increased byWomen with no spend the time on housework in all slightly from 7 hours in 1995 to

6.5 hours in 2005, to 7 in 2015. Women with part-time they spend on 5, and 6 in 1995, 2005, and 2015 respectively. Women full-time employed spend 2 hours on

uprising trend. In 1995 and 2005, they spend figure increase by 0.5 to 1.5.

点评：

第一段点名柱状图的内容，描述最显著的特征。第二段详细描述了无业，兼职，全职女性的家务时间长短，并在三者数据间建立关系。从图表不难看出男性做家务时间变化不大，第三段用少量笔墨带过。

第一段中regardless of意为“不管??”，employment status意为“就业情况”，increase by意为“增长了”；第二段中fluctuate意为“波动”，the declining of scholars’；

第三段中uprising trend意为“上升趋势”，figure意为“数据”。

预测作文四

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Handle Criticism and Compliments Properly based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least words but no more than

trying to promote says: “It’s a special hearing aid. It filters out compliments.” Funny though it sounds, it reflects the way of handling criticism and that criticism can sometimes do harm to people’s and compliments can be encouraging. However, it is wrong to simply reject criticism and amplify one hand, criticism has a tremendous value for one’to know their defects and adding to one’s self-knowledge, stopping one from erring, etc. On the other hand, compliments, especially deceptive ones made on purpose, will lead to blind optimism, which will hinder one from making right judgments, decisions or choices.

To conclude, one cannot simply take a negative attitude toward criticism and welcome compliments excessively. A proper way is to accept pertinent and beneficial criticism and refuse insincere compliments.

点评：

第一段先描述图画，引出现象。接下来详细论证批评与赞美的两面性。结尾段总结，提出正确的做法。

第一段中promote意为“推销”， hearing aid意为“助听器”filter out意为“过滤”，amplify意为“放大”；第二段中dignity意为“尊严”，improper意为“不恰当的”，tremendous意为“巨大的”erring意为“犯错误” deceptive意为“欺骗性的”；第三段中excessively意为“过度地”， pertinent意为“中肯的”。

预测作文五

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 a short essay on the picture below. You should start your account ofthen explain the advantages and disadvantages of phone apps

words.

As is depicted in the picture, a woman talks to a man, complaining the floods of apps. What she intends to express includes two points: apps would generate many amazing things; various choices of apps draw the users’ attention so that they ignore the real world.

Let’s put it another way. On one hand, it is convenient for smart phone users to have so many apps. They can surf the Net through apps to

do

whatever they want: buying things, chatting with their friends, receiving emails, having video conferences, reading books, and watching films, etc. On the other hand, the side effects caused by apps cannot be undervalued. Firstly, it may lead to message leakage. Secondly, the rubbish files produced by apps may slow down the running speed of smart phones. Thirdly, overuse of smart phones will be harmful for one’s physical and mental health. Smart phone users are engrossed in their screens and are isolated from the outside world, ignoring everything around them.

To conclude, apps should be utilized wisely. the enrichment the virtual world.

点评：

第一段描述图片，点明主题：appapp的优点与缺点，侧重在缺点。第三段再次阐明运用app

第一段中intend to意为“想要”，generate意为“消逝”，Contrarily意为“相反地”；第二段中message leak意为“消息泄露”，be engrossed in意为“利用”，enrichment“丰富”，drag into意为“拖进”。

Part I Writing (30 minutes)

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Modesty is not only an ornament, but also a guard to virtue.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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【试题精析】

【布局谋篇】

本文属于论述型文章，可以采用三段式行文。第一段：通过格言来诠释谦虚的价值和意义；

第二段：举例论证谦虚的好处；第三段：得出结论，建议大家保持谦虚的心态。

【经典范文】

“Modesty is not only an ornament, but also a guard to virtue.” Joseph Addison once said. Modesty not only makes one look beautiful and well-mannered, but also

serves as a guarantee to his excellent character. Apparently people may lose their fine qualities if they are not modest.

Simple as Addison’s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy. Modesty can prompt us to go farther and achieve greater success. Those who are modest will never be content with their current achievements; instead, they will work constantly to accomplish a higher target. Take Benjamin Franklin as an example: He was once a printer of humble origins, so if he was simply satisfied with small achievements, it would be impossible for him to attain enormous achievements in so many fields such as science, politics and literature.

We should always keep in mind the significance of modesty in our life. We need to keep an open mind to accept new things, absorb new information, acquire new knowledge and seize new opportunities. “Success consists in industry and modesty,” a philosopher once said.

【参考译文】

约瑟夫?艾迪生曾经说过，“谦虚不仅仅是一个装饰物，而且是美德的守护者。”谦虚不仅可以使人看起来美丽、彬彬有礼，而且还是优秀品质的保证。很明显，如果人们不再谦虚，可能会失去优秀的品质。

艾迪生的话也许听起来简单，但却包含了大量的生活哲理。谦虚让我们走得更远，获得更大的成功。谦虚的人永远都不会满足于当前的成就；相反，为了达到更高的目标，他们会一直努力地工作。以本杰明?富兰克林为例：他曾经只是个出身卑微的印刷工，所以如果他只是满足于小小的成就，就不可能在科学、政治和文学等诸多领域取得巨大的成就。

我们应该牢记谦虚在人生中的重要意义。我们要有一个开放的心态，接受新事物、吸收新信息、学习新知识、把握新机会。“成功在于勤奋和谦虚，”一位哲人曾经这样说