第一篇是外语系写的

第二篇是我按你的要求写得简单点的。

要差一点，就叫他自己组合，改改单词，用他懂的单词改。 Dear Mary ,

In this letter I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your books about band four to me. The book is very useful especially for my reading and writing .I want to buy this book for a long time. Your generous help and tender care made me feel warmly.

I will try my best to prepare the text for bend four. I have made a plan to finish reading this book before the exam coming. As the old saying goes, where there is a will there is a way. please don’t worry about me .I believe I can pass the exam. I will tell you the good news at the first time!

I feel obliged to thank you once more.

sincerely yours, Tom

Dear Mary,

I would like to thank you for your warm-heart help last term. I couldn't have passed the CET Band 4, if not had received your reference book on English Learning. It is more necessary to appreciate you because of your tender care and perfect

consideration for me. I would never forget that night when you sent the umbrella to me at the library.

Have you got free time in this summer vocation? If yes, I hope I have the honor to invite you to come to my home and enjoy the beautiful scene of my hometown. At last, I want to thank you again.

Best wishes!

sincerely yours, Tom

 

第二篇：英语作文感谢信

感谢信

1）感谢信的写法

人们在交往中常需要相互致谢，收到别人赠送的礼物，得到别人的帮助、受到别人的慰问，都应该表示感谢。感谢信是人们常用的一种感谢方式。

感谢信最主要的特点是真诚。缺乏真挚的感情答谢他人，收信人将对你的谢意产生怀疑，感谢的目的也就失去了。因此，写感谢信首先得真心诚意。

感谢信另一个特点是具体。写感谢信切忌泛泛而谈，而应着重于具体的感谢事由。

其次一个特点是及时。收到别人礼物、得到别人帮助，应及时写信予以答谢。否则，人家会对你的谢意大打折扣。 收到他人赠送的礼物应当及时写封感谢信，感谢信除了应写得真诚、具体、及时外，还应当特别提及所收礼物的具体内容，否则，泛泛而谈，使人觉得你不够真诚。为此，当你写感谢信时，应这样写：“Thank you for your beautiful roses.”(谢谢您送的美丽的玫瑰花。)；而不要笼统地写上“Thank you for your beautiful gift.”(谢谢您送给我的漂亮礼物。)，这样，使人觉得你既礼貌，又诚心，从而真正达到交往的目的。下面我们来看看具体的范例。

范例1

Dear Laura,

I was truly enraptured beyond expression to receive your flowers which turned our living room into a garden. How considerate and wonderful of you to remember my birthday. You just couldn't have selected anything I had have liked more! You have a positive genius for selecting the right gift! The four years I spent with you at the college have been the pleasantest period in my life. I will cherish this memory forever. How nice it would be to see you again.

You have been more than kind, and I won't ever forget it. My love and deepest gratitude, now and always!

Sincerely yours,

Jane

范例2

Dear Dan and Laura,

Jim and I want to thank you for the beautiful salad bowl set. We are looking forward to getting lots of use out of your thoughtful and practical wedding gift.

We are having fun getting organized in our little apartment. Soon we will be ready for company, and we will giving you a call. After all the times you have had us over for dinner, we will get to play host for a change.

Thanks again for the lovely gift.

Fondly,

Minnie

范例3

Dear Mrs. Gorden,

I'd like you to know how much the week at your lovely house meant to me. I not only enjoyed myself immensely, but also I felt relaxed and refreshed as I haven't felt for months.

Please give my love to Helen. It was so nice being with her again just like our old days together at school.

Many thanks to you and Mr. Gordon for asking me.

Sincerely yours，

Jean Brown

2）感谢信模板

Date：_________

Dear____,

①I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for____ . ②I'd like you to kno

w how much your _____ meant to me. ③You have a positive genius for ______. ④I not only enjoyed_____ , but also___. ⑤I shall ever remember _____ as one of the most _____ in my life. ⑥I _____. ⑦I hope to have the opportunity of reciprocating. ⑧ Would you kindly let me know _____.⑨I will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to _____. ⑩ How nice it would be to see you again and I am looking forwards to seeing you next time!

I repeat my thanks again for your_____. Please give my kind regards to your_____ .

Yours truly,

Signature

信息提示

信件启首

①直接表达谢意

②表达出自己非常珍惜对方的付出/礼物

③对对方一定的赞美

④ 对方的情意对自己的影响

⑤介绍自己的近况

⑥表达出自己希望有回报的机会

⑦ 询问对方是否有时间

⑧ 表达自己回报的心情

⑨ 提出希望下次见面的愿望

⑩再次表达感谢

最后表达真挚的祝福

信件结尾与签名