高考英语作文范文

任何一篇文章都离不开篇章纽带的起承转合。尤其是高考英语书面表达，尽管它不属于真正意义上的作文，但作文的基本要素却是不能缺乏的。因此，高分的关键和作文的出彩在于过渡词（transitional words）恰到好处的运用。牢记并自如地运用过渡词是每一位考生决胜高考的法宝。以下是书面表达中常用连词分类举例。

      

        

              二、书面表达的常考常用句型在实际的英语写作中，我们应该掌握一些常用的句型以便在实战中发挥作用。高考英语书面表达的句式基本上都是简单句，就是复合句也大都是极普通的常用句式或句型。先讨论简单句的使用情况。所谓简单句式在英语中无非是三种基本句型及其扩充。

    下面我们主要分析一下书面表达中部分复合句式，惯用句型与套语以及惯用结构等。高考英语书面表达中的复合句式多为带时间状语从句的复合句和带宾语从句的复合句，其他如强调句型、带定语从句的复合句、带主语从句的复合句、条件句、让步或转折的句式等，也是常见常用常考的复合句形式。有些复合句式几乎年年都考。复合句虽可化简，但就一篇文章而言，若全是简单句，无一复合句或难句起采，难见考生功力，得高分就不容易了。所以，该用复合句或难句表现的，而且自信没什么问题，就应大胆写出来， 考生切记。

    1. 带时间状语从句的复合句①Before we knew it， we had to say good-bye to the workers. （NMET1998）

    ②In short， things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.   （NMET2001）

    ③As we got into a forest， we lost out way.（北京2002）

    ④It's also possible a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping. （2004北京卷）

    ⑤When I was about to play football， I saw mom washing clothes for me. （2004重庆卷）

    ⑥By the time mom came back， I had finished the work. （2004重庆卷）

    ⑦Soon after I started， a friend came and invited me to play football with him.（2004重庆卷）

    ⑧As the snatcher was running past him， the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put it between the snatcher's legs. （2004辽宁卷）

    这类时间状语从句不仅考得频繁，而且连词when， while， as， before， after甚至by the time都考到了，时态上现在时、过去时、过去进行时和过去完成时等都出现了。而且有些年份带时间状语从句的复合句还同时出现多次。因此我们建议广大考生应加强训练这类复合句，在高考中尽量少犯错误。

    2. 带宾语从句的复合句①I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent， and how well you've learned Chinese.                （NMET2004， I）

    ②I'm sure we'll have a wonderful time and enjoy each other's company.（NMET2004， II）

    ③I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. （NMET2004， III）

    ④I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded， and if so， could I borrow the tape？ （NMET2004， III）

    ⑤I'm so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese. （2004浙江卷）

    ⑥Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. （2004浙江卷）

    ⑦Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. （2004湖北卷）

    ⑧I would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future. （2004江苏卷）

    3. 带定语从句的复合句①The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street， which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. （NMET2003）

    ②If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004， I）

    ③People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. （NMET2002）

    ④As is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. （2004北京卷）

    ⑤So the missing money still must be in the other jacket， the one you were wearing yesterday！ （2004北京卷）

4. 其他

    ▲强调句型 It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister. （NMET1993）

    ▲带主语从句的复合句

    ①Here is how you can find us.（NMET1995）

    ②On the other side， where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.（NMET1999）

    ▲so that句型：

    ①I became so impatient that I had to go to explain my difficulty. （2004广东卷）

    ②I am so sorry that I won't be able to …。 tomorrow afternoon. （NMET2004， III）

    ③I would also think that the growth population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future. （2004江苏卷）

    ④The noise was so loud that I couldn't go on studying. （2004广东卷）

    ▲让步或转折：

    ①It was hard for me， but I felt it a pleasure to be able to share housework with mom.（2004重庆卷）

    ②I don't know about others， but I used to have to work even at weekends doing homework and attending classes as well. （NMET2001）

    ③Although the city is modern and convenient， there are still some problems， such as air pollution， crowdedness and noise. （2004湖南卷）

    ④I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning， but in the afternoon， I'll show you around and take you to some places of interest. （NMET2004， II）

    ▲条件句：

    ①If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time， it will be very easy for them to mix them up.（2004湖北卷）

    ②If you would like to try， you' ll have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. （NMET2004，I）

    ③If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help. （NMET2004，I）

    三。书面表达开头和结尾的写作

    1.书面表达的开头俗话说万事开头难。其实，一点也不难。高考英语书面表达的开头句一般已为你写好。你要做的是分段缩进重起第二段。注意千万不要接着已写好的首句。一是不美观，二是不便于阅卷老师细览。那么你的起头句实际上是第二段了。开始句根据要求一般可以写的漂亮一点，即要用一些好的套语开始。比如：

    ①Opinions are divided on the question.（NMET2002）

    ②Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. （2004北京卷）

    ③As is shown on Chart 2， only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities.（2004北京卷）

    ④Although the city is modern and convenient， there are still some problems， such as air pollution， crowdedness and noise.（2004湖南卷）

    ⑤My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us.（2004全国卷I）

    ⑥I am so sorry that I won't be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. （2004全国卷III）

    可是很多考生总在开头处写的不尽如人意，总喜欢搞一些生造的句子或词语来开头，这是一大忌。有些开头可以以套语开始，或以俗语开始比较有力，这样就容易被老师看好。档位在开始时就已定得很高了。现以2004湖北卷书面表达试题的开始句为例看考生的千奇百怪的错误：

    ①Some students agreed start learning English from childhood.

    ②Some students think： we should learn English from childhood. Because of we have a good memory in childhood.

    ③Some students considered it's useless to slart learning English from childhood.

    ④One group thought its necessary to start learning English from child.

    ⑤In some students opinion， we shall start learning English from childhood.

    ⑥Some of students considered that children at their ages had a good memory…

    2.书面表达的结尾：⑦⑧结尾在书面表达的写作中占有很重要的地位，通常结尾都要算一个内容要求，所以，写好结尾且让阅卷老师有一个完整的印象是十分必要的。好的结尾可以是一段，由一句或几句话组成，能使全文增色。例如：

    ①If there is anything I can do for you， I would be more than glad to help.（ 2004全国卷I）

    ②It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. （2004全国卷III）

    ③What's more， some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program？（2004福建卷）

    ④Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. （2004浙江卷）

    ⑤By the time mom came back， I had finished the work. Mom praised me， and I felt proud too. （2004重庆卷）

    ⑥In short， the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.（2004湖北卷）

    但是，在实际的操作中，许多考生却不知如何来结尾，原本一、两句话或极少的表达就可很圆满地完成写作任务，往往又旁生枝节，写上一些废话，甚至错话，结果因表达不当又被扣分。以20##年湖北卷书面表达试题考生的错误为例，可以看出很多考生是吃力不讨好的。结尾中主要的错误体现在不必要的累赘和废话上面：

    ▲结尾的枝节（不必要的累赘）

    ①In a word， the discussion is broken……

    ②In my opinion， the students should enjoy free， sunshine， flowers， the walks in the beauty of the countryside not except the studying.

    ③Though they have two different kinds of opinions about this discussion， but they are very friendly in this discussion.

    ▲废话

    ①The discuss meeting didn't again a same result.

    ②What do you think， can you tell me.

    ③The discussion didn't get a conclusion. What's your opinion？

一、人们总以为淡水是取之不尽的，实际上淡水资源是很有限的。请谈谈你的看法。

   It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water. But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.  

   As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day. So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population. What＇s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water. Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used. Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings. So it＇s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource. Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.  

   With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.

 二、人们大量捕杀动物，请你就这一看法发表自己的看法。

   As is often read in the newspaper reports, wild life especially the rare species is threatened with extinction. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for a big profit., which, of course, results in a sharp decrease in the number of animals. So it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. First of all, it＇s quite necessary for every citizen to realize the importance of animal protection. Only by knowing its importance can people develop a sense of responsibility. People will surely take it for granted to have the duty to prevent any killing of wild animals. So a national publicity campaign should be launched, thus giving animals a good living environment. In addition, the government should pass some laws to forbid any hunting of rare animals. We don＇t expect anything harmful to wild life to happen again.

  If everyone is involved in the protection of wild life, we＇re sure man will be a good friend of animals rather than their enemy.

三、What is a good parent-children relationship?

A good parent-children relationship should be set up on the basis mutual understanding and respect. Parents can not impose their ideas on their children. They should treat their children as independent individual. It is advisable for the parents to learn to listen to children＇s ideas and encourage them to think on their own rather than decide everything for the children. On the other hand, children should listen to their parents＇ advice for they＇re more experienced. Try to be understanding when there is disagreement with parents. Always keep one thing in min---whatever they do comes from their love for us. It is necessary children to exchange ideas with parents from time to time so that the gap between parents and children will be narrowed

 四、请简要阐述为什么学生们渴望上大学。

   Students long to attend colleges or universities for various reasons. In my opinion, the most common reasons are to prepare for a career, to have new experiences and learn to be independent.

   Career preparation is becoming more and more important to young people. For many, this is the primary reason to go to college. They know that the job market is competitive and in order to be employed in the future they have to be well equipped with knowledge and skills.

   Also, students go to colleges or universities to have experiences and learn to live on their own. Going to colleges often means having the opportunity to meet with different people from different parts of the country. They learn to communicate and co-operate with each other. For most students, we guess, it is the first time that they have been away from home. They are faced with many new situations and have to learn to solve them independently, making decisions on their own and dealing with various things themselves. So colleges and universities help them grow up.

   Surely, colleges and universities become their first choice.

 五、Private　car

   Outline:
  1)Advantages of owning a private car.
  2)Disadvantages of owning a private car.
  3)Should it be necessary to enlarge the private car market? Why or why not?

   Nowadays, any Chinese can enjoy the luxury of owning a private car - if he or she can afford it. Having a car of your own means no more traveling to work on crowded buses or subway trains, and you can drop off the children at school on the way. Moreover, it also means that you can enjoy the weekends and holidays better, because with a car you can go to places where the regular buses and trains do not go, and so you can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds.

   However, there are drawbacks to owning a car. For one thing, with the increase in car ownership in recent years, the roads are becoming more and more crowded, often making the journey to work more of a nightmare than a dream. For another, it is not cheap to run a car, as the prices of gasoline and repairs are constantly rising, not to mention the prices you have to pay for a licence and insurance coverage.

   Having considered both sides of the argument, I have come to the conclusion that the advantages of owning a car outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, it seems to me that China should increase its output of automobiles and enlarge the private car market. The result would be that cars would become cheaper, while at the same time the extra demand would encourage the auto industry to produce more efficient and family-oriented vehicles。

  六、"少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲"。请你谈谈对此的想法并如何行动。

  Almost everyone knows the famous Chinese saying: A young idler, an old beggar. Throughout history, we have seen many cases in which this saying has again and again proved to be true.; It goes without saying that the youth is the best time of life, during which one’s mental and physical states are at their peaks. It takes relatively less time and pains to learn or accept new things in a world full of changes and rapid developments. In addition, one is less likely to be under great pressure from career, family and health problems when young. Therefore, a fresh mind plus enormous energy will ensure success in different aspects of life.

  Of course, we all know: no pains, no gains. If we don’t make every effort to make good use of the advantages youth brings us, it is impossible to achieve any goals. As students, we should now try our best to learn all the subjects well so that we can be well prepared for the challenges that we will face in the future.

七、面对当前中学生“出国热”，请你以为题，谈谈中学生出国留学的利与弊。（可以从以下几方面考虑，但不一定要面面俱到：年龄、生活经验、自理能力、生活学习费用、语言学习环境、传播民族文化、学习国外先进科学技术）

   Studying Abroad in recent years, studying abroad has been popular. More and more students leave their own country to go abroad for their further education. They say that they can develop better with advanced facilities and teaching methods in those modern schools. By communicating with foreign students or staying a long time with them, a profitable experience is available to them. By the time they come back home, they are supposed to have a great advantage over the students at home in many ways. I quite agree with what they say. But one fact I’d like to remind them of is that quite a number of overseas students stay abroad disappointed as they can’t obtain what they hope for, let alone success. When they are abroad, they are helpless and have to be independent, which is quite contrary to what it is at home. They lack independence; they can’t even tell right and wrong apart, and as a result some of them even commit crimes. Therefore, whether it is good or not to study abroad depends on the individual. So take more factors into careful consideration.