六级

大学英语六级考试作文预测(2012.12)

恩波教育

预测作文(一)

Poor physical condition of university students

1.大学生身体素质越来越差,每年军训中都有不少学生因体力不支晕倒

2.分析下原因

3.谈谈对策

【范文】

Every year, many university students faint in military training, which has aroused public attention. There’re some reasons for this.

First, the lifestyle of university students is unhealthy. They usually would like to stay at home or dormitory rather than to take exercises or join in social activities, which will do harm to their physical conditions to some extent. Second, universities don’t pay attention to the PE classes. Freshmen and sophomores have two classes per week, while juniors and seniors have not any at all.

In my opinion, joined efforts are needed to improve students’ physical condition. As to universities, they should hold the idea “health comes first” and arrange more PE classes and hold more sports activities for students. Parents should also cooperate with universities by creating comfortable atmosphere at home. Most importantly, university students themselves should form good habits and healthy interests, take extracurricular activities positively and do exercises regularly.

【点评】

本篇是现象解释型作文。开头指出大学生身体素质越来越差这一现象,紧接着分析了原因--大学生生活方式不健康以及大学不重视体育课,最后作者结合多方面的因素提出了解决办法。词汇:military training意为“军训”;health comes first意为“健康第一”;form good habits意为“养成好习惯”;take extracurricular activities positively意为“积极参加课外活动”。

预测作文(二)

Should Retirement Age Be Postponed?

1. 近年来,推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

3. 我的看法

【范文】

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Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.

Some people favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.

I am convinced that we should balance old people’s interest against this aging society. Thus, if those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’s life will be promising, hopeful and rosy.

【点评】

这是一篇利弊选择型作文,第一段开门见山,引出话题—推迟退休年龄。第二段谈到对推迟退休年龄的两种不同的观点,即有人支持,有人反对。第三段陈述自己的观点,解释理由,并加以总结。词汇:along with the trend of longevity意为“随着长寿成为一种趋势”;carries some risks意为“带有一些风险”;arouse their enthusiasm for work意为“激起他们工作的兴趣”;balance old people’s interest against this aging society意为“平衡好老龄化社会中老年人的利益”。

预测作文(三)

Should college students fight against the criminality?

1.大学生应该打击犯罪行为吗?

2.说说你的看法。

【范文】

Nowadays, more and more college students are becoming enthusiastic about the healthy development of the society. They even actively participate in the fight against the criminality at the risk of their lives, which has caused a lot of debate among the media. So far as I am concerned, the college students should be very careful in their combat against the criminality for several reasons.

On the one hand, the college students should take their studies as the priority in the four-year campus life. Since they are the very prime of their life and time is so precious, they need to concentrate on their development and improvement of the skills for a bright future career. Besides, the society has placed too much expectation on them. On the other hand, the college students should deal with the criminality with more strategies. In other words, when they meet the 2

criminals in the real life, they can appeal to the authorities like the police for help. Only in this way can they fight effectively and protect themselves in the mean time.

In conclusion, the college students are supposed to fight against the criminality in an effective but safe manner instead of risking their lives.

【点评】

本篇属于观点论证型作文。首段描述了大学生打击犯罪这种行为,并给出作者自己的观点—大学生在打击犯罪行为时应深思熟虑,理智并机智得应对罪犯。后面一段具体分析了原因,展开论证。最后总结自己的观点。词汇:at the risk of their lives意为“冒着生命危险”;the very prime of their life意为“他们的黄金时代”。

预测作文(四)

Flat Marriage

1. 有人赞成裸婚

2. 有人则反对

3. 我的看法

【范文】

Nowadays, a new trend has emerged among new couples called flat marriage, which means marrying without buying house, car, and wedding ring or even without holding a ceremony. Some people are in favor of flat marriage. They say, considering the high living costs today, it is not a bad idea to simplify dispensable procedures and to be economical. After all, happiness is not something that can be bought with money.

However, some people hold a different view. In their opinion, marriage is a big affair in one’s life and should be treated seriously. It is not a nice fashion to cut down on wedding spends, for that will be the proof that one is not living a good life. If you can’t even be happy when marrying, then how can you be happy in your future life?

In my view, whether to adopt flat marriage or not should depend on the couple’s financial condition. If they can afford a big wedding and is willing to spend money on it, then there is no problem. However, if a couple is not so well-off, they should make careful consideration concerning their marriage.

【点评】

本篇是利弊选择型作文。前两段分别从正反两个角度论述了人们对裸婚的看法,即有人支持,有人反对。最后一段阐述了作者自己的看法—每对夫妻情况不同,需根据自己的实际情况做出选择。词汇:flat marriage意为“裸婚”;cut down on wedding spends意为“削减结婚开支”;well-off意为“经济条件好的”。

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预测作文(五)

A letter of invitation

说明:假如你是英语系助理,请写信给著名教授Smith,邀请他来你校给英语系学生做讲座。注意写清邀请目的和讲座时间。

【范文】

Dear Professor Smith,

Haven’t seen you for long. We heard that recently you would have a lecturing tour in Chinese universities covering a lot of cities including ours. We are writing this letter to inquire the possibility of inviting you to deliver a lecture on “Contemporary Pop Culture in America” for our postgraduate students on December 18. If this topic does not suit you, we are glad to accept any similar topic.

It is well acknowledged that you are a celebrated scholar in this particular field, as seen in your classical academic papers and books. Specially, our students have been using your books as textbooks for a couple of years. So we all believe that we can benefit from your knowledge and wisdom.

Whether you can or can’t make it, please let us know.

We are looking forward to your coming.

Yours truly, Sara

【点评】

本篇是应用文写作作文。写这类作文时我们要了解各类应用文的具体特点、格式和写法。这篇是一封邀请函。邀请函一般分为正式的请柬和非正式的信函两种。请柬格式固定,习惯用第三人称,必须写明事由、时间、地址、邀请人和被邀请人。邀请信函和普通书信格式相同,不如请柬正规和庄重,但措辞要委婉诚恳。首段说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图;主体段说明邀请别人来做什么,并交代具体时间和地点;结尾段表示期待回复。词汇:have a lecturing tour意为“巡回讲座”;benefit from意为“从??受益”。

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第二篇:六级预测

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture belo

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w. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then give your comments. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

【参考范文】

In the picture above, two men shake hands with both saying “it’s my fault”. We can infer that their cooperation will be continued and connections be closer after they acknowledge their mistakes actively. The inference is grounded in the following two points.

Firstly, acknowledging our mistakes actively represents a kind of attitude which indicates that we have realized the mistakes and we will be responsible for it. Such an attitude can, to some extent, mitigate the consequences our mistakes have incurred. Secondly, when we say “sorry, it’s my fault” to our partners or to the person involved with our mistakes, they will forget the harm or loss our mistakes bring them and will continue cooperation and connection with us because they regard that we can shoulder the responsibility. Otherwise, we will leave a bad impression on them.

All in all, it is not embarrassed to acknowledge our mistakes. Instead, acknowledging our mistakes actively reflects our responsible attitude and can leave a good impressions on others.

【高分表达】

We can infer that their cooperation will be continued and connections be closer... 我们可以推断他们会继续合作,联系会更紧密……

The inference is grounded in the following two points. 推断基于以下两点。

mitigate 减轻,缓解

continue cooperation and connection with us 继续同我们的合作和与联系

all in all 总之

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your view on people’s addiction to smartphones. You should give sound argument to support your views and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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参考范文:

Addiction to Smartphones

Do you check your smartphone frequently? Do you feel distracted if your smartphone is not with you? When there’s no wifi or signal for your smartphone, will you get irritated? If you say yes, then you’ve got addiction to smartphones. Smartphone addiction is a phenomenon that causes a lot of troubles to people.

In the first place, it may cause some problems to your health, such as visual fatigue, cervical spondylosis, and even neurasthenia. A friend of mine suffers from a serious spine collapse due to her addiction to smartphones during pregnancy.

Secondly, if you keep playing with your phone when you are with your friends or family, you will spend less time talking to them. In fact, it is they who need and deserve to be cared for.

Lastly, an excessive reliance on smartphones may weaken your interpersonal skills. When you cannot find a place, you consult your GPS instead of consulting local people. You spare more time playing mobile games than playing real games with real people. As time passes, it’s possible that you may have difficulty in communicating with people.

Therefore, isn’t it better to get rid of smartphone addiction?

题目:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then give your comments. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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【审题构思】

这是一篇图画类作文,要求考生描述图画,并做出评论。此类作文一般为三段式。即第一段简单描述图画的内容及内涵,第二段就图画的内容展开评论,并表明自己的观点,第三段重申自己的看法并提出建议。考生在评论和表明自己的观点时,一定要思路清晰,且要表达清楚。

【参考范文】

In the picture above, a child flies from one cage to the other cage like a bird.One cage is named school, and the other is named cram school. What a sarcastic picture. There is no freedom left for the children who cannot enjoy the supposed cheerful vacation.

Why cannot the children enjoy the vacation that belongs to them? Who push the children from one cage to the other? What should we do to help the trapped children? The three questions solved, the above picture will not exist any more. The answer to the first question is hidden with the superficial one being acquiring more knowledge, and the fundamental one is that parents demand more scores from their children. They expect their children to be able to score more through attending various cram schools at the cost of their children’s supposedly splendid vocation. So it is the parents who pursue quick success that push the children from one cage to the other. To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.

As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted. Therefore, we should emancipate the children in the mind and return the joy of childhood to children gradually.

【高分词汇与词组】

supposed 本该的

trapped 受困的

attend various cram schools 参加各种辅导班

pursue quick success 急功近利

【句型替换】

To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score. =To set the children free , the parents should emphasize the children’s physical and mental well-being rather than the score.

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As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted.

=As we all know that pursuing high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be eradicated.

20xx年6月英语六级作文预测:手机对人际交往的影响。大家应该也有这种感觉吧,无论公交车上还是餐厅里,随处可见“低头族”,由此引发了一系列的思考,大家都沉浸在自己与手机的世界里,而忽略了身边的“美景”以及“美人”。

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Impact of the Cellphone on Interpersonal Communication. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考范文:

The Impact of the Cellphone on Interpersonal Communication

The picture depicts a couple dating in the park. While the man just focuses on his cellphones, and doesn’t pay any attention to his partner or the nature beauty in the park. This picture reflects a common phenomenon in today’s society: people spend too much time with their cellphones and communicate less and less with the people around them.

In nowadays, the smart-cellphones become more and more important in our daily life. They have made our life more convenient. We are timely aware of the most latest news around or faraway from us.

However, everything has two sides. Except for all the advantages, the smart-cellphones also have brought some problems. First, when you’re focus on the cellphone, you may ignore the beautiful scene around you. What’s worse, you are just absorbed in your own small world, rather than share your happiness and so

rrows with the family. You hardly talk with your family and the ones around you. You become indifferent to them.

All in all, let’s put down the cellphones and spend more time communicating with our family and friends face to face directly.

民以食为天,但近年来,食品安全事件频发,“问题食品”多多,涉及范围之广、造成恶果之重已经到了令人谈“食”色变的地步。因此,“食品安全问题”极有可能成为命题人眼中的话题。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitle Food Safety. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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【参考范文】

From the cartoons given above, we can see that the doctor is checking the pesticide residues in fruits and vegetables. It wisely reflects the food safety issues which occur in recent years. Food safety related to people’s health and it concerns about people’s basic livelihood. Since the Sanlu Incident occurred in 2008, the entire society was increasingly concerned about food safety issue. It was in this context that the food safety issue has been referred to an unprecedented height.

Problems leading to food safety are as follows: 1) using poor quality raw materials in the food manufacturing process; 2) a

dding toxic substances; 3) excessive use of food additives; 4) abusing of chemical additives and so on. There are many reasons that cause this problem. It is regulators, producers, and even consumers who share the responsibilities.

As Confucius instructed: better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead.

【参考译文】

从上面的卡通图片我们可以看到:一名医生正在检查水果和蔬菜中农药的残留物。该卡通图片巧妙地反映了近年来我们社会中存在的食品安全问题。食品安全问题关系到人民健康,是最基本的民生问题。自20xx年“三鹿事件”发生以来,全社会对食品安全问题的关注越来越高。正是在这种情况下,食品安全问题被提到了空前的高度。

食品安全主要存在以下问题:在生产食品过程使用劣质的原材料,添加有毒物质,过量使用防腐剂,滥用化学添加剂等。引起这一问题的原因有很多,监管者,生产者甚至是消费者都有责任。

正如孔子教导的:晚做总比不做好。我们应该采取及时严厉的措施来扭转这一不好的局面。政府应该发起大量的道德运动以教育所有的市民,并制定更严厉的法律打击那些不负责任的企业,并禁止他们再次进入食品行业。我坚信,通过我们的共同努力,我们一定会在未来的日子中享受更多的无风险食品。

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