漫画，消极，一种优良的精神、品质、道德、素质的重要性

2007

A great deal of attention is being paid today to which is symbolically reflected in the above scenario。Featured in the above image 。However ridiculous and humorous it may seem at first glimpse，this cartoon send a manifest（明显的）message that success opportunities abound for those who are aware of the intense（极端的）importance of

To the point，we live in a society in which the meteoric（迅速的）variation and the fierce （狂热的，猛烈的)competition is pervasive。Therefore，in order to face the change and challenge ,the character,mirrored by the illustration, is reasonably essential 。Furthermore，our country as one if we are ever going to bring about a great rejuvenation （恢复活力）of Chinese nation。

，more often than not，is not only absolutely advantageous for individuals，but also beneficial to the whole society。Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of can we embrace a beatific（有福的）and harmonious world ，as we all wish，in the long run。

Folks with the mindset are rarely among the high achievers。 Part of the problem is that they lack ，a spirit that often separates successful people from the rest of the pack。

漫画，消极，一个不好的社会现象或事物，批判现象作文（描述图片，解释原因，措施建议）

，which is symbolically reflected in the above scenario is not uncommon among personnel。述 。However ridiculous and humorous it may seem at first glimpse，this cartoon does carry rather significant implication。

This trend，which I believe is still in its infancy，actually began with a broad range of factors（因素）。Firstly ， with the quickening pace of modern life and the fierce competition of society, there is an increasing number of people who sink into the state of a flurry distress，which may be responsible for the phenomenon 。Furthermore，it is those that who are to blame, with paying inadequate attention to improving their personal cultivation.

Admittedly，merely reflecting on the drawing will not be enough 。If this trend is to be reversed ，we must take concrete actions。Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to encourage individuals fighting for the main objective and tasks for building a harmonious socialist society。Only by concerted efforts can we attain the Chinese dream ，as we all wish，in the long run。

The ethical judgment of have become an important issue recently 。Yet ，many of its citizens remain illiterate，which is vividly exemplified by the cartoon above。

（说明原因）This trend，which I believe is still in its infancy，actually began with a broad range of factors（因素）。Firstly ，part of the problem is that are not bound by an ethics code。

（措施）At the very least，court should draft correlative laws to make individuals subject to the

code of conduct

We can reasonably raise the question of whether there is something wrong with our education。

漫画，积极，一种优良的精神、品质、道德、素质等（描述图片，从正面指出其重要性，从反面指出其重要性，提出个人见解）

2008

What is the real relationship between and success？In a society that so persistently is it any wonder that success opportunities abound for those who are aware of the intense（极端的）importance of ？Just as describe in the above cartoon， (As the caption says：。）

To the point，we live in a society in which the meteoric（迅速的）variation and the fierce （狂热的，猛烈的)competition is pervasive。Therefore，in order to face the change and challenge ,the character,mirrored by the illustration, is reasonably essential 。Furthermore，our country as one if we are ever going to bring about a great rejuvenation （恢复活力）of Chinese nation。

，more often than not，is not only absolutely advantageous for individuals，but also beneficial to the whole society。Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to cultivate people’s character/spirit/morality of 。Only by concerted efforts can we attain the Chinese dream ，as we all wish，in the long run。

The picture show how positive thinking can improve the quality of our lives 。At the very least（至少，不管怎样），optimism about future helps us stay in momentum as we strive to realize our dreams。

图片，中性，一个有好有坏的社会现象（描述图画；分析原因，描述流行程度；分析好坏所在，权衡利弊即看法；提出措施建议，趋利避害）

（利大于弊） it ‘s no surprise that the artist’s insightful , provocative picture, 图片描述 ，is arousing much chatter about 主题 ——For the most part，the response has been positive ，to say the least。However ，every coin have two sides，there is no exception 。On the positive side， ,On the negative side，。 This trend，which I believe is still in its infancy，actually began with a broad range of factors（因素）。Firstly , . Furthermore , 。

Admittedly, benefits from far outweigh the disadvantage。Nevertheless ，the harm also is the elephant in the room。Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to educate individuals to aware of the drawbacks and embrace the advantages and avoid the disadvantages。

（利弊相当，如考研就业）it ‘s no surprise that the artist’s insightful , provocative picture, 片描述 ，is arousing much chatter about 主题 ——For the most part，the response

has been positive ，to say the least。However ，every coin have two sides，there is no exception 。On the positive side， ,On the negative side，。 This trend，which I believe is still in its infancy，actually began with a broad range of factors（因素）。Firstly , . Furthermore , 。

Admittedly， no matter which course will eventually follow ，we should investigate his specific situation and seek advice from others before he makes the final decision，if we are ever going to embrace a beatific（有福的）and harmonious future。

（利弊相当，如考研就业）it ‘s no surprise that the artist’s insightful , provocative picture, 图片描述 ，is arousing much chatter about 主题 。Actually ， 现实现象 。Clearly ，this is a challenging question：there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eyes。. Other personal ,however ,believe that .

Admittedly， no matter which course will eventually follow ，we should investigate ourselves specific situation and seek advice from others before we makes the final decision，if we are ever going to embrace a beatific（有福的）and harmonious future。

图画 ，积极，一个好的社会现象（描述图画；分析原因，并描述普及程度；重要性好处；相关各方面要尽可能促进其发展）

The topic reflected in the above scenario has triggered an avalanche of mixed reactions and debates not only in friend circles but in the Blogosphere（博客容易让人眼前一亮）, which boils down to how valued it is to modern society. As is depicted in the illustration,Just as the caption says：This picture is thought-provoking in that it endeavors to convince its audience that ________（主旨）。

This trend，which I believe is still in its infancy，actually began with a broad range of factors（因素）。Firstly , . Furthermore , 。

，more often than not，is not only absolutely advantageous for individuals，but also beneficial to the whole society。On the one hand， ；On the other hand ， 。Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to educate individuals to aware of 。Only by concerted efforts can we attain the Chinese dream ，as we all wish，in the long run。

行文类型：

1、现象解释类

行文思路:首先总述现象并描述其现状；然后分析这种现象原因或相关影响；最后阐述自己

对这种现象的看法或提出相关的建议或希望

（现象)The phenomenon portrayed figuratively （形象地，比喻地）in the above scenario has been greeting with an avalanche of publicity not only in friend circles but in the Blogosphere（博客容易让人眼前一亮）, which boils down to how valued it is to modern society. Featured in the 。

(分析原因）As sure as a gun （毫无疑问),there are a broad range of factors underlie this trend。Initially 。Another major cause for 。Finally and most importantly，。

(理由)part of the problem is that are not bound by an ethics code。

（措施）At the very least，court should draft correlative laws to make individuals subject to the code of conduct

（积极影响） ，more often than not，is not only absolutely advantageous for individuals，but also beneficial to the whole society。On the one hand，；On the other hand ， 。

（消极影响）Conspicuously（显然地），there are numerous problems that can emerge from 现象 。 For one thing， 消极影响一 。 For another， 消极影响二 。As a result， 。

（有好也有坏的影响）Conspicuously（显然地） ，this is a challenging question：there are a

thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eyes。In the eyes of one group of people,the upside of .

(好现象建议），more often than not，is not only absolutely advantageous for individuals，but also beneficial to the whole society。Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of by concerted efforts can we embrace a beatific（有福的）and harmonious world ，as we all wish，in the long run。

（坏现象建议）To the point，merely reflecting on the drawing will not be enough 。If this trend is to be reversed ，we must take concrete actions。。（Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to encourage individuals fighting for the main objective and Tasks for building a harmonious socialist society。Only by concerted efforts can we attain the Chinese dream ，as we all wish，in the long run。）

（利弊相当现象建议）Admittedly， no matter which course will eventually follow ，we should investigate ourselves specific situation and seek advice from others before we makes the final decision，if we are ever going to embrace a beatific（有福的）and harmonious future。 （利大于弊现象建议）Admittedly, benefits from far outweigh the disadvantage。Nevertheless ，the harm also is the elephant in the room。Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to educate individuals to aware of the drawbacks and embrace the advantages and avoid the disadvantages。

二、问题解决型

行文思路：首先引出要解决的问题，然后分析其带来的危害或不良影响，或者是简要分析其产生的原因；最后提出解决问题的办法或措施或阐述自己对该问题的看法。

，which is symbolically reflected in the above scenario is not uncommon among personnel。述 。However ridiculous and humorous it may seem at first glimpse，this cartoon does carry rather significant implication。

（产生的原因）As sure as a gun （毫无疑问),there are a broad range of factors underlie this phenomenon。Initially ， 。Another major cause for 由二 。Finally and most importantly， 理由三 。

（分析危害或不良影响）Conspicuously（显然地），there are numerous problems that can emerge from For one thing， 。 For another， 消极影响二 。As a result， 总结前面两个层次的影响导致的结果 。

（解决问题的办法或措施） Admittedly，merely reflecting on the drawing will not be enough 。If this trend is to be reversed ，we must take concrete actions。。Only by concerted efforts can we attain the Chinese dream ，as we all wish，in the long run。

（具体措施）

① Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to enhance people’s awareness of the importance of 。

② Hence a widespread education campaign should be launched so as to encourage individuals fighting for the main objective and tasks for building a harmonious socialist society

③ At the very least，court should draft correlative laws to make individuals subject to the code of conduct

（自己对该问题的看法）The undesirable impact of ，which I believe is still in its infancy，is the elephant in the room。Hence 。Only by concerted efforts can we attain the Chinese dream ，as we all wish，in the long run。