中职英语高考作文写作高分技巧

摘要：作文写作在英语高考中占据分值比较大，直接关乎着考生的总体成绩。但是看似简单的高考英语作文，要想得高分还真不是一件易事。本文在简单了解高考英语作文评分原则的基础上，提出了中职英语高考作文写作高分技巧，为今后中职学生应对高考作文提供写作指导。

关键词：高考；英语；技巧

1 前言

作文写作在英语高考中占据分值比较大，直接关乎着考生的总体成绩。它综合性极强，既考查学生对词汇、语法等语言基础知识的掌握情况，又考查学生对所提供材料的分析能力、语言组织能力和表达能力和逻辑思维能力。同时，这几年，对中职学生参加高考英语作文的评分标准也有了很大的提高，从内容要点、应用词汇的数量、语法结构的准确性以及上下文的连贯性等几个方面，都作出了较高的评价。由此，看似简单的高考英语作文，要想得高分还真不是一件易事。但是，常年的教学经验告诉我们，一篇要点齐全、语句流畅、结构严谨、用词丰富准确、文情并茂的考场作文，也是有写作技巧可言的。本文在简单了解高考英语作文评分原则的基础上，提出了中职英语高考作文写作高分技巧，为今后中职学生应对高考作文提供写作指导。

2 高考英语作文评分原则

高考英语作文为25分，按照五个标准划分为五个档次，第一档为1-5分，第二档为6-10分，第三档为11-15分，第四档为16-20分，第五档为21-25分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档的要求来衡

量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3中职英语高考作文写作高分技巧

3.1 审题要认真，内容要点要把握准确

审题是作文写作第一步，审好题可保证行文准确得当。高考作文中可涉及到的体裁要有记叙文、说明文、应用文等等，行笔之前一定要仔细阅读题目要求，确定文章体裁，选择正确地格式进行写作。体裁确定之后，可根据体裁选择正确地时态。一般来说，记叙文、日记类文章都要使用过去时；说明文、书信类多选择现在时、过去时、将来时；通知用将来时。在图表类文章中，如果第一人称都要用第三人称。此外，一些细节性的问题一定要看清楚，比如要求写作字数、可参考的词汇等等都要了然于胸，不可因为疏忽导致不必要地失分。

3.2 组织要点句，拓展写作

审好题目，确定体裁之后，就要根据内容编排写作要点句，并根据要点句进行拓展写作。在组织要点句或者是关键句的时候，切忌不要把材料中提供的要点按照原有的循序进行简单的罗列，一定要按照逻辑顺序对组织材料进行有效地调整和组合，体现作者写作思维的灵活性，博得批卷老师的青睐。此外，要点句的写作中，一定要注意句子的时态、语态和结构，同时，还要注意人称选择、文章格式、字数等等。

在要点句确定之后，就要有针对性地拓展。对于文底薄弱的学生，可在写作前储备一些句型，同时，可选择一些结构比较简单的句子来进行扩展表达。建议按照“5W+H”的原则进行写作，即“who、where、when 、what、why、how”，按照这样的写作顺序来进行训练，可有效训练初学者思维地逻辑性，使文章写作有章可循。对于底子比较好、经过长时间训练的学生，可以尽量选择一些恰当的、高级的词汇和句型，比如说不定时、定语从句、强调句、倒装句、谓语从句、非谓语从句等等。使用这些不同的句式，可有效提高文章写作的档次，增加写作亮点，避免行文的单调乏味，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。

3.3 巧妙使用衔接词，保证行文流畅

为了保证作文写作流畅、自然，可以在文章恰当位置使用衔接词。现在就可用到的衔接词进行罗列，供写作时参考。可用于时间顺序的连接词有at first、then、later、after that、since then、the next moment、finally；可用于空间顺序的连接词

有on one side of、on the other side of、in the middle of、at the top of；可用于平行、对等、选择关系的连接词有and、or、both…..and、either…….or、as well as；可用于转折关系的连接词有but、yet、on the other hand、while；用于递进关系的连接词有in addition、beside、above all、not noly ……. but also；可用于总结关系的连接词有on the whole、in short、in a word。在使用连接词时，一定要注意运用自然，不可以随便堆砌，否则会影响写作效果。

3.4 常识用语要牢记，增强行文流畅性

在外文写作中，每一种文体的开头和结尾都有可用的常识性词语。在日常的练习甚至考场写作中一定要牢记，比如说，信件类文章的结尾处常用的词语有“I hope to hear from you soon”、“Please give my best wishes to your parents!”；通知类文章的结尾常用到的词语有“Don’t forget the time and address”、“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time”。

3.5 成文后必要的检查，可起到查漏补缺的作用

文章写成之后，要进行详细的检查，修改可能出现的错误。检查内容包括：主题是否明确；体裁是否得当；首尾句是否照应；有无病句、错误的语态、语句等等。此外，在考场作文中，一定要控制好作文时间，一般来说，审题可控制在3分钟左右；写作草稿、进行修改可控制在15分钟作用；誊写作文控制在5分钟左右；最后安排2分钟左右时间进行检查。

4 结论

上述的写作技巧可以作为参考，在具体的写作中作为借鉴加以运用。但是，必须要注意的是，不论什么的技巧都是建立在一定量的写作训练基础之上的。在平时的练习中，技巧类知识仅仅起到一种标识性提醒的作用，还需要我们的同学在背诵一定量名言佳句的基础上，结合着教师的指导以及同学间的交流讨论，有针对性地进行练习，这样才能在实际的考场作文中得心应手，高分作文也必然是手到擒来。

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第二篇：英语高考作文(福建版)——写作技巧,万能句!

2008~2009学年双十中学高二（下）期中考试写作 <2007湖北卷>

假设你是某中学学生会主席李华，你校与本地一所国际学校经常举办联谊活动.你计划在重阳节组织学生到养老院去慰问老人，拟邀请国际学校的学生参加，请你根据以下内容要点给国际学样的学生会主席Tony写一封信.

要点：向老人赠送礼物（鲜花、自制贺卡??）；

为老人提供服务（做清洁、陪老人聊天??）；

为老人表演节目（唱歌、跳舞??）。

注意：1、词数为100左右；

2、信的开关和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）；

3、已给出的信的开关和结尾不得抄入答题卡。

Dear Tony，

Chongyang, the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly, is coming around. We are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day, and we would like to invite students from your school to join us. _____________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hu

范文：

We have planned several activities. When we get there， present them with flowers and self－made cards to show our respect and love（目的状语）. Then we will do some cleaning including sweeping the yard, mopping the floor and wiping the windows. As some old people feel lonely. We may chat with them about their old

days, changes of our city, or anything they are interested in. We may also give them some performances such as singing, dancing.

I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in

China． If you have any suggestions, please let us know.

2008~2009学年厦门一中高二（下）期中考试写作 <2008~2009学年三明一中高二下段考>

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假如你是一个乘客，名字叫李华，你对这次航班不满意，理由有四个：（1）航空公司丢了你一个重要

的包，内有公司机密文件；（2）飞机迟到一个半小时；（3）飞机上的食物很差；（4）服务员的服务态

度也不好。请就此事给航空公司写一封投诉信，并提出建议。开头已给出，不计入词数。

词数：120左右。另注意信件格式。

注意：请在规定范围内作答，方框外一律严重扣分。

Dear manager,

My name is Li Hua.

_________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________

__

Yours, Li

范文： Hu

Dear manager,

My name is Li Hua. I am a passenger of your airline. I’m writing to express

my dissatisfaction with/at bad service. I’m sorry to say that I’m unhappy about your

airline. First of all, your airline lost one of my bags in which there is secret

business/company paper. Secondly, my plane was one and a half hours late. You

know, I had to attend an important meeting in time. Thirdly, the food on the plane

was terrible. Fourthly, I’m completely disappointed to find that service staff were

unfriendly and impolite to me.

Honestly speaking, I can hardly put up with it anymore, this is the worst airline I know in the world. The focus on my complaint is where my bag is. To remedy the matter(为了挽救),I suggest that should help me find my bag and improve your service.

Yours,，Li Hua

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2008~2009学年厦门六中高二（下）期中考试写作

假如你叫李华，再过一年将高中毕业。你班同学对高三学生该不该照常参加体育活动意见不一，

面是讨论的结果。请根据下表给某英文报社写一封信，介绍有关情况。

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the arguments on whether students of Senior Three should go in for sports or

not. ________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

范文

As an old saying goes, body is capital. More than half of the students approve of it.

They hold the view (that taking exercise every day can not only build up our body but

also keep us energetic.)Only if we take exercise every day, can we build up our body

and keep energetic.

On the other hand,45% of the students believe that doing sports is a waste of time,

(which makes people tired/ exhausted), leading to injury. Besides, we will be

over-excited after exercise, (which has a influence on our study).

As far as I am concerned, it is true that we should devote ourselves to the

lessons heart and soul（全身心）. In the meantime/ Meanwhile taking exercise

properly（适当地） can relieve senior students’ pressure, (which will improve their

efficiencies of revision)

Yours,，Li Hua

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2008~2009学年厦门海沧实验中学高二（下）期中考试写作<华安、连城、永安、漳平一

中、海二中五校联考2007-2008学年高二下第一次月考>

假设你校学生会正举办一次英文写作大赛。比赛的话题是：毕业的学生是否应该把课本留给

下一届学生使用？请你以Is Recycling Textbooks a Good Suggestion?为题，用英语写一篇短文

表示赞同。你的理由是：

1. 可以节省资源，减少浪费；

2. 书上的笔记很有用；

3. 国外（如澳大利亚）已有成功的做法。

注意： ①可适当增加细节，使短文内容连贯；

②词数：100左右.

Is Recycling Textbooks a Good Suggestion?

As we know senior students graduate from school, most of their textbooks are thrown away, which still in good condition. What great waste it is!

Here is a suggestion that (同位语)we should recycle the textbooks. For one thing, recycling textbooks can not only save a lot of natural resources but also reduce waste.

For another thing, senior students may have made plenty of useful notes on the pages, which are beneficial to those textbook users. Besides, foreign countries such as Australia have succeeded in recycling textbooks.

Take it for example (that in Australia recycling textbooks plays an important role in the daily life.)

All in all, I hold the supportive view on/ toward the issue.

参加：go in for; take part in; participate in; join in

做运动：take exercise; do sports; exercise

赞成：be for; be in favour of; support; approve of; agree to do

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20xx年福建高考

假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：

部分同学的饮食习惯：不吃早餐，爱吃零食，偏食，饮食过量

良好的饮食习惯：饮食多样化，饮食定时定量

个人看法：重要性：有助于身体健康……‘

注意：1. 发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；

2. 发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3. 词数：100左右。

4. 参考词汇：偏食be particular about food 零食snack

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s a very important for us to from healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include

proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a

strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

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20xx年浙江卷

当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：

看电影：省时、有趣、易懂

读原著：细节更多、语言优美

我的看法及理由

注意：1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。

2、参考词汇： original work 或 book in the original （原著）

Film or book, which do you prefer?

Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the

original，because it takes less time. This makes films more convenient .Additionally, film are more accessible and are often easier to understand.

Meanwhile, people who enjoy reading books in the original. Firstly, book

include complete details, but films are genre modified(艺术加工)several times. what’s more, the beauty of language can be presented by vivid words.

As for me, no matter which method(方法，方式) we choose. It aims to make us gain knowledge. As a result, I suggest that we should make use of two methods to know more literary works. Only in this way, can we follow the fashion of our society.

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高二（下）写作练习一

残疾人作为一个弱势群体，越来越得到人们的关爱和重视。越来越多的人在想法设法为他们提供便利和帮助：

1. 道路、宾馆等建筑上修筑盲人道、轮椅通道等残疾人出行所必须的设施。

2.成立专门机构为残疾人就业、生活提供培训和帮助。

3. 志愿为残疾人做家务活提供日常帮助，解决他们的生活之需。

注意：1.文章包括以上是哟有信息，要有适当发挥。

2.词数：120左右

Over/In the past few years, more and more people and local government have

s hown their love and care to disabled. They try their best to offer help which is beneficial to the disabled.

In order to help the disabled have the easier access to social life, some city

government have built special roads for the blind and lame, and special facilities required when found restaurants, hotels, banks and some other public places. Many special schools and training centers have been set up to train disabled people to support or look after themselves. Some of them even become experts in some filed. Besides, many volunteers often help the disabled to do some housework and even look after them when they’re sick.

I hope more and more people can care for and help the disabled.=Only in this

way can we make the disabled live a happy life.

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（二）在世界环保日到来前夕，联合国教科文组织就如何处理城市垃圾向世界中学生征文。请你根据下列提示，以“Saving our city”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。文章的第一句已经为你写好。

1．城市垃圾的危害：污染环境，有害健康。

2．你所在的城市是如何处理垃圾的：

(1)垃圾分类；

(2)报纸、玻璃的再利用；

(3)填埋有害垃圾；

(4)处理废水、废气；

(5)尽我们的所能，爱护环境，保护环境。

It is important to deal with the rubbish in the cites. Rubbish must be treated properly. Otherwise it might cause a series of problems. It may pollute the water and air , When people breathe the polluted air and drink polluted water, they may get ill/fall ill.

Due to the damage caused by the rubbish in the city, began to pay attention to the problem. As we know, rubbish is sorted and sent to different factories .Rubbish, such as newspapers and glass is recycled. Some harmful rubbish is treated before it goes into the earth. In addition our city takes some measures to cope with wasted water and air correctly.

To/In order to the environment, our government has passed laws to prevent people from throwing rubbish everywhere. Only in those ways (mentioned above), can the environment keep clean and clear. Therefore /Thus, we should attempt to take good care of environment.

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高（二）下写作练习二

据20xx年10月25日东方卫视报道，日本公司的机器人阿西莫在东京亮相，它展示了许多新的功能；跑步，上楼，端茶倒水等。请以“About future Asimo”为题，谈质检对未来功能强大的智能机器人阿西莫的观点。应该包含以下要点：

1、一部分人认为它会对人类有利，会使人类的生活更加便捷，更加丰富多彩；

2、一部分人认为它会给人类带来威胁，可能会扰乱社会秩序，危害人类安全；

3、发表你质检对阿西莫得利弊看法。

要求：1.可增加细节，以使行文连贯2.词数：100左右

About future Asimo

It was reported that the famous Japanese Honda company showed it’s newly-made robot, Asimo in Tokyo. This time Asimo has more new functions, such as running, climbing stairs, serving tea and so on, which surprised many people. The future Asimo will be more intellectual (智能). But what effect will Asimo have on human beings in the future?

Some people believe that it’s beneficial to human beings. The whole world and our life will become more convenient and colourful. However, other think the future Asimo will become threat to mankind because it can possibly disturb(扰乱) man’s normal social order. What’s more, human beings could be in the control of Asimo.

In my opinion, we should make good use of it’s advantages. But for it’s disadvantages, we should try our best to avoid them, or make them controlled. All in all, we should make the future Asimo a great assistant of human beings.

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假如你是李华，请就本食堂服务（canteen service）的状况给校长写一封信。内容包括：

优点 不足 建议

饭菜可口 价格偏高

服务态度好 等待时间较长 尽快解决

食堂干净 种类偏少

词数：120左右；开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Mr. prinvipal

I am senior student of our school. I’d like to say something about canteen

service in our school.

In general, the hall is clean and tidy and the dishes are tasty. what’s more,

the worker there have a good attitude toward us. They treat us as their friends,

which make us feel very happy.

However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high, besides, we can

only have limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time is before we can get the meal, which is

a waste of time. You must understand how precious time is to us students.

Therefore, may I suggest something should be done to solve the problems so

that we can all enjoy our meals at school?

Thanks for your consideration.

2008-2009学年高二（下）第二次月考写作汇总 双十中学 (20xx年福建省普通高中毕业班质量检查) 某英语报向中学生征集关于开展研究性学习的文章,请你根据提示,用英语写一篇介绍你校研究性学习活动的短文.

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protection of the environment

pollution of the river in my hometown

The river in my hometown is polluted.

the river is mainly polluted by waste water of factories, waste water from people’s daily life, and agricultural chemicals.

Our government should take action/ take some measures to deal with/ trackle/ handle/ get rid of/ cope with the polluted water correctly.

In the meantime, we should make the ordinary people realize/ be aware of the fact/ the issue and do something.

注意:

1 开头语已给出,不计入总词数;

2 可根据内容要点适当发挥,但不要逐条翻译;

3 词数:120左右.

参考词汇:agricultural chemicals 农药

Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity……

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【参考范文】

Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity. We have a variety of subjects (to choose from), such as local customs，changes of people's living conditions, and protection of the environment. Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories. Waste water from people's daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river. To deal with the problem(目状), Our government should take action/ take some measures to deal with/ tackle/ handle/ get rid of/ cope with the polluted water correctly. In the meantime, we call for people to be aware of

Through our research, not only did we gain practical experience, but also we developed various abilities. We find such research very valuable and helpful.

2008-2009学年高二（下）第二次月考写作汇总 厦门一中

下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查，请结合表格内容，用英语写一篇短文，并就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法。文章的开头已给出。

This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students’ weekend.__________________________________

范文 (One possible version)

This form displays/shows the result of a survey on 复合宾语). It says

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that few students are glued to（仅附于） their schoolwork any more. Instead, they prefer to surf on the internet, watch TV, go shopping rather than involve in（参与）

sports games. Library and interest groups are available but not favorable.

As far as I am concerned, students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged. They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out. More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally. Besides, more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon（开阔视野） and sharpen their brains/ wits（使某人更机智） so that they can become more creative eventually. All these will contributes（有助于） a lot to a well-informed（见多识广） and highly qualified teenager.

In conclusion, students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful(有利的) activities.

2010高考英语（福建卷）写作

假设你是李华，福建省某中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利亚参加主题为WATER FOR LIFE“的交流活动。请你以参访代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。

注意：

1．根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯；

2．开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数；

3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息；

4．词数：120左右

参考词汇：短缺 shortage ; 资源 resource

It’s known to us all that/there is no doubt that the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe /serious mainly due to global warming, environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population. Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it.

Moreover, new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources, for instance, turning sea water into fresh water. In addition,we call for people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it.

people around the world

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should be aware of the real situation of water shortage, protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.

20xx年福建省高考英语写作

目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”。请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。内容要点如下：

主要原因：

1、考试偏多、偏难

2、不用功、懒惰

3、取悦父母、老师

个人看法

1、作弊不对，违反校规

2、要老实，努力学习

3、??（其他看法）

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations

It is known to us all that/As is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.

As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations，they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.

As for me/In the meantime/I hold the idea, view that it is wrong to cheat in ， to get good results by paying more attention to study instead of cheating in examinations. In addition, we should Just as an old Arab proverb says,``````````

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