怎么写好雅思大作文开头段

怎么写好雅思大作文开头段

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万事开头难,很多考生在刚开始动笔写雅思大作文时就陷入无话可说的状态,大多情况下可能会胡乱写作,甚至抄题,这对于雅思写作是非常大的忌讳,导致多如繁星的语法问题、字数被扣以及文思枯竭的印象。因此,快速写出合格甚至高分的开头段落刻不容缓。以下环球雅思将为考生们总结一下怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的两大要素,供考生们参考。

写好雅思大作文开头段要素一:现象句

雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象,考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写,重述这个社会现象。

E.g.1

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

写好雅思大作文开头段总结——套句+同义词替换:more and more= a large amount of

E.g.2

Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

写好雅思大作文开头段总结——

主被动之间的转换:should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school同义词的替换:until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven

E.g.3

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

怎么写好雅思大作文开头段

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying

after graduating from high school.

写好雅思大作文开头段总结——

主被动之间的转换,以及同义替换:finish high school = graduate from high school

所以,从上文中可以看出,一般来说,现象句会在最开始加上一个套句,并且加上地点和时间。

雅思大作文开头段经典套句:

1.It is true that......是真实的

2.I tend to agree that… 我同意…

3.It is quite common… …是常见的

4.There is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的

5.There is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的

6.It is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的

地点:in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place 时间:in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays

写好雅思大作文开头段要素二:点到问题

雅思大作文考题分成两种:report & argumentative。

对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…; how do you think people can tackle this problem.)

E.g.4

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.

What do you think are the cause of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

Poor student behavior seems to be increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

写好雅思大作文开头段总结—— 点到了causes--直接把原因泛泛的带领出来,全文的第二段再开始慢慢细致的描述。

E.g.5

Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

Why is it difficult to define?

What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Happiness is very difficult to define, because it means so many different things to different people.While some people link happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotions and loving personal relationships.Yet others think that spiritual paths, rather than either the material world or relationships with people, are the only way to true happiness.

写好雅思大作文开头段总结——

点到了why difficult--通过引用两组不同人的观点,把造成这个现象的原因大致导出,与上一个例子有异曲同工之妙。

对于argumentative(do you agree or disagree? ; discuss both views and give your opinion.; is it a positive or negative development?),这种题型基本上都问了作者的观点,所以在开头段落的描写过程中没什么特别大的区别。

E.g.6

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree?

I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day.

写好雅思大作文开头段总结——

改写题目+主动变被动:have more negative than positive effects on = can be negatively affected by

直接表达自己的观点:I tend to agree that

E.g.7

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g.film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.

Do you agree or disagree?

Which other types of job should be highly paid?

I agree with the view that stars in the entertainment business are usually over paid.This is true whether we are considering stars of film, sport or popular music, and it often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in as short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do.

写好雅思大作文开头段总结——

现象+观点

E.g.8

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere.Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.

总之,如果要写出一篇较好的雅思作文,环球托福建议考生们在雅思大作文开头段落的描写方面绝对要达到快速和准确这两个要求,把时间控制在5分钟之内,把字数把握在30-40个单词之间。以上就是本次环球雅思为大家搜集整理的怎么写好雅思大作文开头段的方法介绍和例题分析,希望能够帮助到大家,最后,环球雅思预祝各位考试顺利!

 

第二篇:雅思大作文开头

雅思大作文之开篇在雅思大作文写作中,好的开头往往能让文章立马上升一个档次,而这高品位需要考生进行创新,但是个性化的开头也是有规律的。很多考生苦练各种个性化开头或者冥思苦想高级词汇。但真正上了考场,这些都是浮云。要在考场中写出最实用且又不会雷同又可以顺利引出下文的开头其实很容易,审题结束后马上就给出一个明确的立场是很必要的,它也在很大程度上决定了引言段一上来的几个句子的意思选择。我们在引言段最初的1到3个句子里是对考题的背景导入,要做好这一步,我们还是得从2个简单句说起,即主谓宾和主系表。所有接下来的句子,不论长短,都是从这2种简单句发展出来的。我们在创造这2个句子时,主系表通常是从主语的功能、作用和影响这3个方面入手。下面我们再来看一个题目:Somepeople believe that improve public health should increase the number of sportsfacilities; others believe that it has little effects and need other measuresto improve it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.从这个考题的题干中我们可以“提取”的名词为publichealth; sports facilities等。接着我们可以用主谓宾的简单句,从“被动”的角度原创一个句子:Sports facilitiesare needed.在此基础上,我们继续对这个句子的成分进行扩充:The construction of new sports facilities are definitelyneeded.经过了这样的扩展,我们不难发现句子已经初现规模了,但是结合了题干的意思后我们需要再进行一系列文字加工,因为从这个句子的意思上来说,似乎缺少了一个“地点状语”,因为并不是所有城市中都一定需要新建体育设施,所以我们就有了下面的改进:The construction of new sports facilities are definitelyneeded in an environment where people's health is in a declining state.这样一个句子大家是不是觉得很“体面”了呢?那么这个句子我们是否也需要“广义化”的扩展呢?回答是否定的,因为在这个句子中,我们已经通过增加地点状语的方式为其设置了一定的条件,再为了句式复杂而刻意增加从句就显得不是很有必要了,同时,从它的中文意思上来说,也不一定能够得到大部分人的“认可”,所以这个句子我们就不用再进一步扩展了。最后是主题句的写法,其实这个环节已经比较容易了,我们只要记住常用的几种主题句的句型即可。一般来说,跟在观点导入句后的主题句我们都用简单句来写,只需要表达赞同或者反对的态度;而跟在背景导入句后的主题句,我们则可以使用宾语从句,表语从句等名词性从句来写,如:I agree that...; My view is that...等。在雅思大作文开头写作中,清晰的结构是开头之根本,继

而添加高级词汇、句式等枝叶,才能让这颗大树散发出她的生命。

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