20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

20xx年10月24日雅思写作 (一)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:教育与科技、教育与媒体可谓是雅思考试的热点,而且这些话题跟广大考生们息息相关。平时对生活多一些思考,备考期间针对话题词汇和句型多写多练,这些都是理想分数的保障。

文章结构:4段

首段:导入话题,表达立场。

主题段1:玩电脑游戏对孩子的各方面有害。

主题段2:玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有利。

结尾段:总结上文,重申立场。

In recent years, the prevalence of computer games has exerted a significant effect on children’s life. As to whether they affect children negatively, there is an endless debate.

Despite the fact that playing computer games is an effective way to relieve pressure, the problems associated with study and health cannot be neglected.

Clearly, playing computer games is regarded as a main factor leading to poor academic performance. With the entertaining nature, computer games will easily distract children from their studious pursuits. With the passage of time, children will probably fall behind their peers in academic development. In addition, when children spend too much time playing computer games, they are less likely to participate in physical activities, which is one reason why many children suffer from obesity. As a result, these overweight children’s confidence may be undermined and their health may be negatively influence as well.

Despite these disadvantages, the advantages can still not be ignored. First of all, the latest research shows that game-playing helps children to home their communication and interpersonal skills. In many cases, players work together in teams to achieve goals, competing against other players. Therefore, their social skills and teamwork spirit are put to the test. Also, computer games can have positive and therapeutic effects on players. Games provide an opportunity for children to decompress and tune out of strains and stresses of everyday life. Giving their time to rest is critical for emotional and mental well-being.

In conclusion, it is not advisable for children to play computer games, for the reasons that it not only has a negative impact on their study, but also makes them lose confidence, although computer games provide a form of relaxation.

20xx年10月10日雅思写作 (二)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。话题类型属于政府投资类。这道题题干中提出了影响疾病的两个方面:住房和环境。这两个方面在正文中都要提到是如何影响人们健康的。 范文主体思路分析:

主体段一:环境问题和住房条件确实会影响人们健康,需要政府关注和投资

主体段二:政府充当的只是组织协调者,人们自己也需要对自己的健康负责,养成良好的生活方式。

There is no doubt that people’s health will be influenced directly or indirectly by the environment and housing condition. Whether governments should focus more on the environment and estate has triggered a controversy. I feel that individuals should take more responsibility for their well-being other than governments’ increasing attention.

Indeed, the environmental problems and housing conditions are two main sources for illness and diseases. In many large cities in northern China, haze weather has become a daily killer, especially causing respiratory diseases in winter. Also, populace will easily access to viruses and bacteria if they live in a poor housing condition without any advanced sanitation. Therefore, governments should give more attention and higher investment in these two areas.

Compared to individuals, governments have more power to arrange a wide range of social resources to address severe issues; however, it does not mean that addressing this problem totally depends on governments. The state is an organizer or a coordinator in our society instead of a responsibility taker. Although governments can claim people to enhance the awareness of environment protection, make policy to strengthen the environment management and invest estate where they need, public health condition is still a personal problem to some degree. People have the obligation to form and keep a healthy and positive lifestyle, or they will still face the threat of illness and diseases even the environment and housing condition getting better.

In conclusion, people also need to take responsibility of their well-being as governments only hold a position as organizer and coordinator. The most feasible solution may be that governments provide a fine setting on one hand and public should pursue a healthy lifestyle for themselves on the other hand.

20xx年10月8日雅思写作 (三)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:这次考试的题目还是老题,在历史上多次出现。作文的审题也不是很难,非常贴近学生的学习。文章属于典型的观点类文章,需要考生给出自己的观点,例文中作者同意一个观点,认为中学应该提供更加广泛的学科。然后从学生的潜力开发和全面发展两个角度进行分析,然后在通过反方段进行补充,最后进行了非常简单的一个总结。

What range of subjects the high school offers can have a stark and profound influence on students’ future development. I, to be honest, hold the view that the general education with a wide range of subjects is beneficial to students themselves in the long run.

If students have access to more courses, they are likely to have more opportunities to choose the subject they prefer or are better at. In this way, the students can learn with more enthusiasm and passion and will feel less bored with their classes. With more motivation derived from their inner hearts, students can give full play to their potentials and achieve better academic performance.

Besides, the more diverse subject system can also cultivate more well-rounded students. The knowledge base of different subjects is distinct from each other, which can help to foster the students in certain perspective. Mathematics and physics are helpful to students’ logic and abstract thinking; some humanity subjects such as literature and aesthetics can enhance students’ capabilities of appreciation and judgment. There is no doubt that students will become more versatile if they have grasped knowledge of different subjects.

It is also true that focusing on the narrower range of subjects can bring some benefit to some extent. Students can concentrate more on limited subjects and are more likely to become specialists in certain fields. Youyou Tu, the Nobel Prize winner in medicine, receives specialized education in TCM and chemistry and devotes all her life to the research of the anti-malaria medicines, making her become a world-renowned scientist.

To sum up, a general education with wider range of subjects should be accessible to students because of its benefit to a sounder development of students.

20xx年9月26日雅思写作 (四)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:该题属于环保题型。虽然近年来环保已经不再是雅思写作考试话题的热点,但是在今年的1月29日,3月12日,5月9日和8月1日的雅思考试中均出现了环境相关的题目,所以还是希望广大考生对雅思写作的十个话题逐一准备,才能在考场上做到万无一失。 文章结构:5段

首段:导入话题,简述主体

主体段1: 缺少回收意识是没有走狗的回收利用愿意之一。

主体段2: 没有足够的回收利用这个问题的措施。

主体段3: 总结上文。

The last years has witnessed the increase in the awareness of environmental protection. However, there are still a lot of waste materials that have not been recycled. This essay will mainly analyse the reasons of this problem and suggest some solutions.

One main reason of this problem may be that the public haven't realized the importance of recycling wastes. As economy develops, people have high incomes and can afford a large number of items. At the same time, they don't know how to deal with what they have used and haven't realized that their buying habits will cause the consumption of energy, crease waste and increase pollution.

This problem can also be attributed to the lack of recycling sites in the public places. In some countries, the government is not be able to purchase enough recycling sites due to poor financial conditions. As a result, people are likely to find it difficult to place their rubbish into the dustbins.

In order to address this problem, the government and citizens should make joint efforts. First of all, the government ought to provide free education of recycling lectures for the public. This is because many citizens haven't received decent education and are not well informed of how to recycle and reuse waste items. What's more, the recycling industry needs to be financially supported. If the government does not pay attention to the establishment and development of this industry, the problem will continue to exist in our society.

As mentioned above, the neglect of recycling and the shortage of recycling sites are the main factors leading to the increase of waste materials. To solve this problem, both the government and the public should collaborate.

20xx年9月19日雅思写作 (五)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。话题类型属于生活方式与健康。这道题虽然是一个观点,但是包含了两方面:1、人人应该成为素食主义者2、我们不需要吃肉去保持健康。根据雅思论文相对化vs绝对化的选择,这道题在论述上选择不同意会更容易一些。 范文主体思路分析:

主体部分反驳理由一:并不是每个人都要成为素食者,有些特殊人群必定不能只吃素食,比如生长发育期的孩子,对蔬菜过敏的人以及孕妇

主体部分反驳理由二:肉类中的营养不是蔬菜能够代替的,平衡膳食最重要。

People have different views about whether being vegetarians or vegans is more beneficial for human beings. Some people believe that being a vegetarian is better since meat is helpless for people to stay healthy. I doubt this statement as people have right to choose whether to be a vegetarian or not and meat is a regular part of our diet.

Although leading a low carbon life and being a vegetarian is quite popular in our society, it does not mean everyone should only eat vegetables in their daily diet. Actually, to some groups of people, a single dietary structure will even injure their fitness. For instance, children growth may be affected by unbalanced diet and some people may be allergic to plants like caraway and celery. Also, if a pregnant woman refuses to take any meat, her baby would suffer from malnutrition to a high degree.

Meanwhile, It is well- recognized that meat provide a wide range of nutrients that are difficult to obtain in adequate quantities from vegetables and fruits. Insufficient intake of those nutrients will produce negative health problems, such as poor growth. People cannot keep fit without any meat foods. Meat is high in protein and other essential nutrients, and these nutrients are hardly to find alternatives in plant source foods. Therefore, a diet with a good combination of meat and vegetable is thought to have considerable value.

In brief, not all people should be a vegetarian and balanced diet will be the best choice for individuals.

20xx年9月12日雅思写作 (六)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:最近的雅思官方非常宅心仁厚,多次出现老题进行考察。这是一道骨灰级的老题,在历史上出现过三次,烤鸭们只要有一定的了解和复习,就可以非常快地想出观点和拓展的理由。

The updated understanding of study and the cutting-edge technology usher in an era when the students can have a variety of ways to acquire knowledge. Although there are other forms to obtain knowledge and information, I am still the proponent of the belief that students can learn more from their teachers than other resources.

Study, to some degrees, is not a one-way input of knowledge, while it is the procedure of mutual interaction between teachers and students. In the conventional teaching and learning mode, the teachers and the students co-exist in an environment where they can have timely interaction. This means teachers can have a more comprehensive and directly understanding of their students’ shortcomings and strong points, which guarantees that students can learn more from the courses that are tailored to their needs

It is apparent that students can obtain more knowledge from their teachers because teachers do not only function as craftsmen who only impart knowledge but also serve as a supervisor or a guardian. This is especially true in the case where students are less self-disciplined and are inclined to go astray without the supervision and guidance of teachers. By comparison, others resources of learning such as Internet and TV sometimes are likely to make the students distracted due to a host of irrelevant information, which will undermine their learning efficiency and make students learn less.

It is also true that students are likely to learn more from other resources. Internet and TV are two media where there are a wealth of knowledge and information ranging from science and humanity. They are also the easily accessible platforms for the students who are in the remote places where the teaching resources are not so abundant as that in more developed regions. However, other learning resources can hardly challenge the dominant role played by teachers.

To sum up, teachers are still the primary resource from which students gain knowledge, although the influence of other learning resources cannot be underestimated.

20xx年9月3日雅思写作 (七)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:今天出现的是20xx年11月3日的老题,而且犯罪类也是常考话题之一。今年出现老题的概率似乎有点高,但是建议大家五把老题都写一遍显然是不可能完成任务。当然,这并不意味着大家因此几可以放弃对写作部分的准备。备考期间,对雅思作文常出现的十个话题进行一些brainstorm的练习才能够帮助广大烤鸭在考场上做到兵来将挡,水来土掩。 文章结构:4段

首段:倒入话题,表达立场

主体段1:采取措施能够防止犯罪的理由。

主体段2: 几乎没有措施能够阻止犯罪的理由。

结尾段:总结上文,重申立场。

With a rapid increase of crime, more citizens are scared of aggressive acts all over the world. As to whether more measures can be taken to stop crime, there is an endless debate. From my personal view, although more actions cannot fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for which people can surrender to violence.

Clearly, actions such as enacting more strict laws and legislations can effectively curb the frequency of crime. Fearing punishment is usually the nature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts. In addition, providing moral education contributes to raise people’s safety awareness and consequently prevents crime. As the Internet prevails, information about laws and legislations are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.

However, feasible measures are still not a panacea to the establishment of a completely safe society. If governments fail to guarantee a basic living standard for their citizens, crime rate will hardly be controlled. It is widely believed that a decent job and sufficient disposable income can reduce the possibility of committing socially unacceptable behaviour. The insecurity of society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime. Illegal drugs and alcohol are more accessible than before. People may have to commit crimes in order to get these items.

To conclude, reasonable actions including making severe policies and offering education are of great help to control criminal events. However, they may still not be able to ensure a secure living environment for people if fundamental needs of materials cannot be fulfilled.

20xx年8月29日雅思写作 (八)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:题目的类型属于双边讨论类。话题类型属于全球化的影响中的文化影响。这是一道老题目,审题要清楚,两边的观点都要讨论到再给自己的观点。

The closer communication between different countries has been a conspicuous tendency in recent years, both in economic and cultural aspects. Some people doubt the continually connections will cause vanishing of a country's identities. In my view, the result of international interaction depends on the situation in different nations.

In fact, the international contact is a definitely mutual benefit for countries. Due to the economically motivated, both states and entrepreneurs are interested not only in the domestic market but also in the oversea market. The closer connection opens up huge potential opportunities for business corporation. Besides, the more cultural contacts, the better understanding of other peoples. Cultural communication can alter people's attitude towards another culture and embrace different values, which will promote multi-cultural understanding and even remove cultural barriers.

Admittedly, the cross-national interaction will also impose a negative influence on national identities, especially to those weak countries such as Pacific island countries and some mini countries in Europe and Africa. It seems that in these weak countries, the locals have become more familiar with exotic cultures, which reflects the foreign cultural invasion to some degree. For instance, the mainstream value of teenagers in these countries has been mainly shaped by Hollywood blockbusters instead of their traditional literature or other artistic works.

In my opinion, whether closer global communication will cause demise of national identities rely on different countries. American, as well as Canada and Australia, is marked by their high population mobility, or immigrants, to be more exactly. The culture in these nations is based on other cultures indeed. Therefore, they welcome different countries and it cannot be a problem to them. Also, some countries, like China, India and British, have their own unique ethnic identity and cultural confidence which come from their long history. Global contact will also be acceptable to them, too. Only to the weak countries, the local government should take steps to protect their vulnerable cultures.

In conclusion, the positive and negative influence of global communication really coexists. However, the outcome of closer contact is better or worse is determined by different countries.

20xx年8月13日雅思写作 (九)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:今天的题目是新题。题目里有绝对词,一般我们先承认其可取之处,再提出其他的方法。

文章结构:4段

首段:导入话题,表达立场

主体段1: 引入背景,引出观点。

主体段2: 承认以身说法,比传统课堂更加有说服力。

主体段3: 现实生活总学生可能会对犯罪有歧视心理,同时其他方法也能够起到教育作用。 结尾段4:总结自己的观点。

A child‘s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to become law-abiding citizens. While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other measures are equally effective.

Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth crime. This is because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail and they may also experience some of them. At the same time, they can share the tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to the victims and their family members. This is more impressivethan the traditional lectures given by professors. By listening to a wide range of real cases in person, young generation will realise the consequence of the irresponsible behaviour deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the future.

Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration as well. It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in some cases. By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile delinquency. Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people who know their children best in the world.

In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help the young generation to become good citizens.

20xx年8月1日雅思写作 (十)

20xx年8月至10月雅思写作大作文真题解析

分析:题目的类型属于报告类。话题属于环境类。在审题中可以看出越来越快速的资源消耗会引起哪些问题和对应的解决方法。如果单讨论环境如何被破坏会偏题。

范文主体思路分析:

问题1:环境问题,由于工厂低效率的资源利用率导致

解决1: 公司使用环保设备同时政府设立更严格的环保保准规范生产行为

问题2: 引起资源短缺,间接地降低人们生活水平

解决2: 让人们对节约资源拥有积极态度,倡导低碳生活

The universal phenomenon of excessive consumption of natural resources actually remains a subject of public interest and concern. The objective of this essay is to outline both the potential problems of this negative tendency and appropriate ways of dealing with it.

Consuming considerable resources will causes inevitable environmental pollution. The low efficiency of resources use in factories may aggravate this problem. One of the best solutions may be encouraging companies to adopt more eco-friendly equipment, making optimal use of materials. Meanwhile, local governments can enact stricter environment-protection standards to normalize the enterprise operations.

In addition, since available natural resources are quite limited in the earth, the overuse of these restricted resources will worsen the shortage of natural materials and lower people’s standard of living indirectly. It is well-recognized that only a few natural resources can be directly in our daily life. For example, the drinkable water accounts for just less than 1% of all the world water resources. Also, to meet the basic needs of people, some alternative materials have been invented when some resources are in a short supply. For instance, artificial cotton, a material which is made from rice straw, has replaced cotton in clothing industry in recent years. However, the clothes made of artificial are definitely not as comfortable as the natural ones. Wearing these clothes means a lower life quality to some people to some extent, to address this problem, people should develop a more active attitude towards economizing resources, leading a low carbon life.

To summarize, consuming natural resources at an increasing rate may pose a threat on environment and people’s life. Business, government and society should work together to solve these problems.

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