中考满分英语作文

中考满分英语作文

一Hi Peter,

I am writing to tell you the schedule of your coming visit.After your safe arrival,in the

morning,we will lead you to meet the teachers and students firstly.Then we will have a Chinese

music class to enjoy with you.At last,you will learn how to make Chinese paper cut with the help

of the teachers.In the afternoon,I will organize many classmates to communicate with you.Because

we are from different countries,we have different culture,we can learn from each other.In the end,

we will hold a party to have a good time with you.I believe that you will have a good day in our

school.

I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.

Li Ming

二 Thank you for joining CCTV's Around China show!Now it's 8:45p.m. during the famous

Earth Hour.People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time.In

Shanghai,some people are taking walk with their family.They feel very relaxed.In Beijing,some

people are having a nice talk with their friends.And in Ningbo,some young people are holding a

party in the park,singing and dancing.Without lights,people can also enjoy themselves.

Many people share with us their plans.Some say they will spend more time with their

family and friends.Others say they will try their best to protect the environment,like planting more

trees,saving water nd so on.What's more,some people tell me that they will use paper both

sides(drive less,ride bikes,use plastic bags less...) in their lives.

三 My Hobbies(爱好)

I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and keeping a diary.

In school, I often hear the P.E. teacher say, sports do good to one's health, and will make one live

longer. So, I like sports very much. I go running at five o'clock in the morning, and after classes in

the afternoon. I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me healthy.

At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist when I grow up.

In order to attain these goalsI go to the teacher's home for a lesson every Saturday, and practise

singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy.

四 My Family(家庭)

My name is Li Hua. I am from a worker's family. There are six people in my family. They are my

grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my sister and I.

Every member in my family works for his or her own trade①. My grandfather and grandmother

are peasants. They do farm work every day in my hometown. My father is a senior engineer. He is

now working in Africa, helping to build a power station. My mother is a teacher. She teaches

English in a middle school. My sister, five years older than I, is a doctor in the People's Hospital

of our county. She loves her work and does it well. I am a middle school student.That is my family.

All the members in my family live in harmony

五 SPERRTS(运动)

Sport plays an important role in our daily life. Most of us begin our day with some kind of

exercise or sport. Athletics is part of our university curriculum. Many students play on either the

departmental or university sports team after a hard day of class.

Some people take sports far too seriously. Some people are only interested in how their

favourite sports team does: they don't care much about their country or the rest of the world. These

people often get into fights if their team loses.

When I have time for sports there is one that I like more than any other. I find bas ketball both a physical and a mental challenge. Runing, jumping, and shooting, are also enjoyable and healthful sports.

六 中国加入 WTO 后,有一大批外国人来我市——河源参观。假设你是导游,请根据以下内容,向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。

要求: 1. 100 词左右; 2. 要点包括: a. 有悠久的历史,位于广东的东北部,离广州 198 公里,人口约 324 万。 b. 有许多名胜古迹,如苏家围( Sujiawei );万绿湖( WanluLake )等等;万绿湖是一个很美丽的地方,湖水清澈,无污染;湖中有各种各样的鱼;你可以到那里划船,野餐,钓鱼,是度假的好去处。你也可以去参观河源市博物馆,在那里你可以看到许多恐龙化石( fossil )。c. 祝大家在河源玩得愉快。

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

Thank you.

 

第二篇:20xx年中考英语作文获得满分的五个要点

5 初中英语作文分为四等。一等文:13-15分;二等文:9-12分;三等文:5-8分;四等文:0-4分。教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮你拿到一等文。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQisextremelystrong.观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1.每天吃10顿饭,Hehastenmealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2.每天运动2小时,Hedoesexercise2hoursaday!详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,HowstrongandrobustXQis!Ihopetobehimoneday!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如firstofall(首先),inaddition,what?smore,moreover(都是另外的意思),inaword,allinall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

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