The table summarises the figures about changes in ways of travel in England in the year 1985 and 2000.

As can be seen from the table, the total distance travelled per person per year in 2000 is longer than that in 1985, which is 4740 miles, compared with 6475 miles in 2000. To be more exactly, the average distance travelled by walking in 1985 is 255 miles, slightly more than that in the year 2000(237 miles). The average distances by bike and local bus respectively in 1985 also exceed those figures in 2000. On the other hand, the distance travelled by car, long distance bus, train, taxi and other modes of travel all witnesses a sharp rise in 2000, which is 4806, 124, 366, 42, 585 miles respectively.

According to the table, the distance travelled by car in both 1985 and 2000 make up the majority of the total distance while the distance travelled by taxi and bicycle only represent a small amount of the total distance travelled.

Overall, it is manifest that the distance travelled by all modes per person per year witnesses an increase, though some means of travel are less used than before.

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概括能力还有待提高。

 

第二篇：雅思剑5作文test1 task 2

题目：Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the discrimination of women in every aspect decreasing, that whether the equal amounts of male and female students should be accepted by universities in all subjects has become a hot topic concerned by many people. There is no need to concede this phenomenon, however.

Firstly, facing the examinations of entering the colleges, everybody has equal right to participate in the exam in which the universities can select excellent students basing on the consequence. For instance, if 100 people of which 80 are all boys occupying the heading positions are assigned for one subject, it can not be denied that the university should admit all the 80 boys without any hesitation. The reason that abilities of people rather than the gender should be considered firstly is obvious.

Secondly, as we all know, the proportion of women can

reach less than 50 percent of all the population in almost every country throughout the world, which means that the probability of a man to be accepted by a college will definitely be smaller than a woman’s on condition that universities accept equal numbers of male and female students in all subjects. So that the number of male and female accepted by universities could be distributed by the gender percentage seems more reasonable.

As far as I am concerned, the opportunity for each person to enter the college should be fair, no matter what gender universities select students in accordance with the proportion of gender.(254词) he or she is .And also maybe it is more feasible that