高中英语作文《My View on College Life》

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topicMy View on College Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:

1. 一些同学认为在大学里就应该专注于学业,踏实积累专业知识,争取进阶更高学位深造的机会。他们偏爱专业书籍。

2. 有些同学热衷于兼职、社团活动,积极想要锻炼自己尽快适应社会生活。他们读书很杂。

3. 我对大学生活的思考。

My View on College Life

How to live our college life? Different people have different opinions.

Some people think we should concentrate our attention on study, accumulate the professional knowledge and try to enter higher degree of step. They are partiality for specialized books. On the contrary, others want to steel themselves in part-time jobs and various students ‘union activities to make themselves the one who fit in with needs of society. They hold the view that Reading enriches the mind, therefore they read many books to broaden their visual field and adapt their thinking to the new conditions.

In my opinion, college students as we are, learning our specialized subjects well is our bounden duty. On the other hand, part-time job and school activities can make our free life colorful and we can learn many skills

in it. Consequently we should take part in some activities on the premise of ensure study. Therefore let’s be a good time manager. Weigh and balance our time well and live everyday to the fullest, we will reach our goals sooner or later.

 

第二篇:作文平分标准+College Life

作文评分标准

14分 文字通顺,层次分明,连贯性强,表达性好,语

汇和句式变化较丰富,少数小错。

11分 切题,条理清楚,文字连贯,层次分明,语汇和

句式有变化,有少量语言错误。

8 分 基本切题,条理较清楚,但欠连贯,语言错误较

多,其中有些是严重错误。

5 分 基本切题,连贯性差,意思表达不清楚,有不少

严重词汇和语法错误。

2 分 不切题; 条理不清,思路混乱,语言支离破碎。

字数问题

少1――10字 扣1――2分

少11――20字 扣3――4分

少21――30字 扣5――6分

少31――40字 扣7――8分

只写一段 只能得0――4分

只写二段 只能得0――9分

及格分 6分。 作文如为零分,全卷最高为59分。

College Life

More often than not, I was told that college life was colorful and full of fun. When I enrolled in this college this summer, it turned out to be true. In this big and beautiful college, along with a number of sports clubs, social associations as well as numerous recreational groups for the students to join. At weekends, there are even more activities of all kinds on campus, which the students can participate in freely. Of course, there also exist many great changes between college life and that of middle school. For instance, in the middle school, in order to pass the National College Entrance Examination, everybody focuses his attention on studies and has very little time to do other things, while in college things are a completely different story. Then, there are more courses for the students to choose from. Among all the differences, the most critical one, in my opinion, lies in the fact that middle school students hardly live an independent life. They are always in the closest care of both their teachers and parents, but in college the students are far away from their dear families and mother-like teachers. So they are brought face to face with all sorts of temptations and distractions, though they are now enjoying far more freedom than ever before.

Confronted with such a colorful life and so great changes, however, we college students should never lose our bearings. We must stand up to any temptation and distraction. We should see to it that in any case we’ll put our study and cultivating good morals first. Only in this way, I think, can we reap the benefits of college life and win the day.