Good afternoon, everyone! My name is Mary Smith. My first name is Mary. My last name is Smith. My birthday is January 2nd. My telephone number is 135xxxxxxxx. My favorite food is hamburgers. I like apples best. My favourite subject is English. I have a big family. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents and I. I love my family.
I have a good friend. His name is Alan. He eats lots of healthy food. He likes eggs and milk for breakfast. For lunch, he has fish and rice. He eats well. He plays sports every day. He likes science. He thinks it’s very interesting. Thank you!
初中英语书面表达
第一节 人物介绍
写作导航
该话题可以是人物描写,也可以是对当今世界有重大影响的人的介绍等。因此,写作时要把握主人公在某一时期的事件、行细想等重要线索。
常用表达
1.常用词汇
人物:aunt(阿姨,姑妈);uncle(叔叔,大伯);father(父亲,爸爸);mother(母亲,妈妈);sisther(姐姐,妹妹);bother(哥哥,弟弟);grandmother(祖母,外祖母);grandfather(祖父,外祖父)cusin;(表哥,表弟);actor(演员);doctor(医生);singer(歌手);cook(厨师);nurse(护士);police(警察);lawyer(法官);scientist(科学家)
性格:outgoing(外向的);shy(害羞的);friendly(友好的);quiet(安静的);kind(和蔼的,友善的);lively(有生命力的)
外貌:young(年轻的,小的);old(年老的,大的);good-looking(好看的);handsome(英俊的);beautiful(美丽的);ugly(丑陋的);long hair(长发);straight hair(直发);fat(肥胖的);tall(高的);medium build(中等身材)
爱好:like(喜欢);dislike(不喜欢);enjoy(喜欢,享受);prefer(宁可,更喜欢);love(喜爱,爱)
2.经典句型
1) My father is a man of.....years old.我的父亲是一位……岁的人
2) He was born in(on).....他出生于……
3) We should learn from....我们应该向……学习
4) He often encourages me to......她经常鼓励我……
5) There is no doubt.....毫无疑问,……
万能模板 开门见山,引出要介绍的人物 →
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正文(时间、地点、人物、事情的原因、经过和结果) →
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真题感悟
(2009?广东)
初中阶段你印象最深的事哪位老师呢?请用英语写一篇题为“The teacher I will never forget”的作文。
内容包括:
1.简要介绍老师的性格或特长。
2.列举一个事例,说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得进步的。
3.感谢老师,祝愿老师。
【思路点拨】
根据写作内容提示可判断,这是一篇写人记述文。首先,要介绍老师的性格和特长,可以用“He is .../He likes....”等句型,用一般现在时;其次,要选择典型的事例,说明老师对你的帮助,要注意语言的过渡,用一般过去时;最后,要对老师表达自己的感激和祝愿,可以用“I wish....”等句型。
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【满分范文】
The teacher I will never forget
How time flies!Three years have passed since I became a middle school student.I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teachers. I will never forget is Mr.Zhang,an English teachers.He is very kind and friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class.About two years ago, Mr.Zhang noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation.So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance to speak in class. With his help , my pronunciation has greatly improved.
I must say thanks to Mr.Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!
【满分亮点】
本文开篇语言新颖,用“How time flies!Three years have passed.....”引出自己对同学和老师的留恋之情,情节过渡自然,并通过“I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. ”引出“The teachers. I will never forget is .....”,句型使用丰富,时态运用得当。
文章表达结构也很合理。最后一句对老师的祝愿“I must say thanks to Mr.Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future!”可以说事点睛之笔,感情饱满。
强化训练
假设你是李华,你得知某英文报招聘记者,你有意应聘,请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。
1.你现在就读于建国中学;
2.得知对方需要一些兼职记者,你很感兴趣;
3.你认为你适合这项工作,因为……(知识面、英语水合作精神等)‘
4.你曾经做过记者,你确信你能把这份工作做好’
5.你希望得到回复。
注意:
1.自荐信须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2.要点3省略号处须用3~4句话作适当发挥;
3.自荐信的开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4.80词左右。
5.参考词汇:part-time reporter(s)兼职记者
Dear Sir or Madam
My name id Li Hua .
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
( 2 )
请根据以下内容要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你班同学张华。
要点如下:
1.张华是你同学,勤奋好学、待人非常随和;
2.他三年前来到你班,当时是个英语零起点的学生
3.开始时,他一个人学习,几乎没有取得任何进步;
4.老师和同学们经常鼓励和帮助他;
5.他坚持努力学习,已经成为一个英语优等生。
注意:
1.要点4的内容须用2~3句话展开合理想象,做适当发挥;
2.短文须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
3.80词左右。
(3)
请根据下面所提供的提示词语和要求,以“My sister”为题写一篇短文。
1.提示词语:
2.要求:
1) 所提供的提示词语全部用上,顺序可以打乱;
2) 词数:60左右
3) 行文:规范、语法正确、上下文连贯自然。
3.注意:
1) 标题和第一句已为你写好,不计入总词数;、
2) 不得用自己或他人的真实姓名。
My sister
My siste's name is Alice.
(4)
初中的学习生涯将结束了。三年来,在你获取知识的同时,你的外貌
兴趣爱好、习惯等都有了一定的改变吧!请你以“How I Change”为题,写一篇短文,告诉我们你的变化,80词左右。
提示:1. 短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点所在学校名称;
2. 参考词汇:hobby, habit, used to, enjoy oneself;
3. 短文开头已经为你写好(不计入总词数),请你接着往下写。
How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years.
(5)
台湾明星徐熙媛(大S)外表甜美、为人和善,在内地拥有众多粉丝。请根据下列材料写一篇90词左右的短文。
参考范文
(1)
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm a student from Jianguo Middle. I'm glad to learn to learn that you want a few part-time English reporters. I'm quite interested in it.
I think I’m fit for the job. I’ve read a lot and have much knowledge. I’m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. I’m easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. And I once worked as a reporter. So I’m sure I can do the job well.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
(2)
Zhang Hua is my classmate. He is hard-working and easy-going. He came to my class three years ago. He didn't know any English at that time. At the beginning, he studied it alone. As a result, he made little progress. The teachers and classmates often encourage him and help him. Some help him improve the ways to learn English. Others help him with his English schoolwork. He keeps studying hard. Now he has done quite well in English.
(3)
My sister
My sister's name is Alice. She likes dancing very much. She is very cute. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. She always wears glasses. She has long hair. And she is of medium height. She’s kind of thin. She likes sports, too. She’s the captain of the tennis team.
(4)
How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I used to be fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on them. My parents were worried about me.
Now, I have a lot of hobbies.I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. We enjoy ourselves every day. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.
(5)
Barbie Hsu was born in the city of Taipei on octobrr 6,1976. She is a populsr actress and singer. .Man people like to call her 'Big S'.She has long black hair and big eyes. As pop star ,'Big S' also likes studying how to keep healthy and pretty .She thinks that eating or eating less meat is the secred of keeping healthy and pretty.Hsu is friendly to her fans and often helps them learn how to make themselves nicer and healthier.
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