写 实

P1 龙眼

As is vividly(illustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed) in the picture, (图的内容1the two pet neighbors greet each other politely and amicably ,whereas (while/on the other hand)the two pets’ owners seem to ignore between(each other) aloofly).

Simple as it is, the drawing sets us[U1]  pondering a awfully.Accordingly, much inspiration can be drawn from what this far-reaching/thought-provoking picture witness:(图反映的现实2 pets, rather than/instead of people around them, are such an indispensable part in their daily lifeto the point where[U2] they are excessively/inordinately[U3]  fond of their beloved animals while neglecting those who care them, which has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration).

It speaks volumes for the concept that(TS3 indifference should be ruled out, with harmonious society echoed vigorously nowadays in china.)

1批判：先扬后抑

  歌颂：先抑后扬

  图的内容 原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底。两句合一句的途经：       1、AND连结；2、WHICH或WHEREAS连结；3、非谓语

2to the point where加以讲解

  excessively/inordinately负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用     I believe ,I think 之类的句式

3TS + Background

   02~04: China is entry into WTO

      05: Harmonious society

      06: The honor and disgrace values

   07~11: Scientific development values--Human life and ecology system

   TS的语言组织

      Weigh A against B---在A和B之间权衡利弊（against:在…的背景下）

      Where 定从：1具体

                   2抽象  to the point where…以至于

      独主   with+S+V-ing/V-ed(主谓、动宾)

1 Nothing + be + adj + than + to + do

2 On no account can we

3 It is time + S + V-ed

4 It 无主句

5 ……ought to be weighed/taken/pondered/seriously

    

4注意使用关联词，突出TS

P2

Why do we lay emphasis on this[U4] ? Several points[U5] ()analyzed below might equip us with theprofound message of what we are heading for.[U6] 

To begin with,[U7]  since we have to live on an on-the-move[U8]  lifestyle , we are denied[U9]  chances to share our feelings with our friends and relatives.

In addition,with so many dishonesties running around our society, the indifference happened in turn we have no choice but to enjoy the company of pets.

And above all,too many tragedies as to the indifference--seeing someone in mortal danger without lifting a finger to save him--put on the stage of our daily life, which is threatening situation we are unwilling to face(此句仅用于负面评价).

No better illustration of this view touched on above can be taken than the case as listed below: [U10] (1a crowd of people remained appallingly[U11]  nonchalance[U12]  to the plea of a mother, since she failed to offer the required amount of cash[U13]  as a price to save her drowning son, the woman at last watched her son sink to death.)

2At the end of the day, no issue in china stands as critical to build up the society in harmony as ironing out of indifference among people.

1例证，举例：1实例

               2引语  eg：1As the famous saying goes:

                           2As many famous ecologists put it:[U14] 

               3数据  eg：According to the latest survey conducted by concerning department,……[U15] 

      论点的具体体现：RP原则

2小结

1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则

2 为第三段起势

3Benard Show---No issue stands as critical to A as B.[U16]